Basically you get a vrmmo setting like many fantasy ones. Tho i dont want to discourage the writer but the way the story progresses is too fast. There are many things unexplained. While the story concept is not bad but things have to be explained properly. People read ln for indepth story, it shouldnt be progressed as like scriptwriting for an anime. I get the idea of many pets but of all their interaction with mc is vauge and have to me sometimes assumed.
Basically it will be enjoyed by those ppl who sometimes skip parts when they get the idea where the story will for a while stop. Hence at that point is where the writer is expected to show his/her skills. As i progressed with the story, the story started to jump more and more without explaining the details going around.
Hence i request the writer with these details for attention for a more enjoyable story.
