The story isn't awful, i guess if you are a shojou manga fanatic and love any shoujo manga, this manga would be alright, maybe a 6 or even a 7. But as someone who has read hundreds of shoujo manga, this falls below average. It is very dull despite attempts to make it other wise. A girl who feels like throwing up every time she encounters beauty? Not amazingly unoriginal but still uncommon. However everything else is just as cliche as it could get.
The characters are unreasonable and just as tacky. Makoto especially. She is the typical naive protagonist who spends 25% of the time being some sort of clueless but kind angelic figure that everyone in the story likes, 25% of the time crying, and the other 50% stirring up unnecessary conflicts due to misunderstandings or illogical thoughts. The main dude is just as cliche, a dark haired "arrogant wild child" who is actually a sweetheart when softened by main girl. There is absolutely nothing new from the main characters to the side characters who plays a strictly extra role.
The art is below average with the proportions being just cringey, not much improvement happens throughout the manga and towards the end, they still have these weird wide pentagon faces.
So yeah to sum up, the manga is extremely dull and cliche, unless you want a very basic shoujo that doesnt even execute clicheness in an entertaining fashion, i would try looking for something else to read.
