My only incentive in watching this 30-45 frames per min. anime ( its really clunky, well i guess it is the producer side of the coin, although i find the frames to be visually acceptable in youtube standards, but then in the face of other anime?Pfft. Pity) was KitaEri.
So you stumble upon this anime by chance in MAL? Of course, you'd do! No one would be really doing stuff like advertising this anime around;the average Joe wouldn't know of this at all and most of the more inquisitive WILL end up feeling bad, and wont even bother doing the sharing.Though I ended up with writing this because I felt like writing some internet stuff.
The only focus in this review would be the contents in script,it contains no plot, as I would expect for a short series, but it is really lacking in comedy, if that is really its intention, reading the script in plain text would be really stale and it falls short. The only saving grace IMO in the comedy was the execution of the seiyuus, their articulation really gave those plain text a considerable shock value.This would be the only thing I can like in this anime and , again, the only reason for watching this anime(It helps in my reading Japanese stuff)
As for the other things that you factor in critiquing anime, I'll just omit them, I wont even bother.