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Mar 7, 2016
Preliminary (26/? chp)
Never before have I read a story, that is so obviously the writers own wish fulfillment fantasy.

The story starts out pretty good and is actually legimitately pretty interesting. The MC has flaws, and there are both downsides and upsides to what hes going through. His character is somewhat interesting and he has reasons for his actions.

This quickly changes though and it turns into whatever mess the author was able to string together. It ends up as a sort of really short summary of what the MC did whatever which day, and what he ended up gaining. Theres nothing driving the plot and the characters development. If anything the character is dedeveloping. His character is actually managing to become less and less interesting the further you read in the story. His reasons for his actions suddenly dissapear and he goes against his own beliefs, but theres nothing said about that, and he doesn't even seem to notice himself.

The quality of the writing seems to follow the trend of bad writing somehow getting popular because people are interested in the content behind. And I can follow that, but the story quickly loses it's interesting content when the author turns it into a bland and meager plot that is driven by his own fantasies. It's clear that the author has comitted the basic mistake of inserting yourself in the protagonists role.

But even though I say all this, I would still say you should give it a read. It's solidly interesting for at least 10 chapters, and it doesn't have all that many chapters as a whole either, so it's not like you waste a lot of time by reading it.
Reviewer’s Rating: 3
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