I thought I would give this a shot because the cover art looks nice. There's nothing special about this story. The art is decent. I would give it a 6.5/10. The characters are average looking and there's nothing special about them. I think they are poorly developed. They're flat and don't change throughout the story. The story could be better developed. I think the second chapter could've been a lot better if they added to it and made it a little longer. Everything is rushed. I get that it's a one shot but it's way too fast. The character meets someone of the opposite sex and falls in love after a few pages. Then, they have sex and it's happy ever after. The sex scenes are alright. Overall, it's not worth the read.
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