Art: Was very well done I like how clothes, hair,and accessories were drawn really exact, and was very detail to even small things.
Character: To me the lead girl character seemed to be a push-over, and was a person who didn't know what she wanted. Because of her traits I feel that it allows readers to feel more like she's real. I think that the led girl in the story acted similar to how average girls act. The main guy to me was the regular "I own her" type of a guy, that is the jerk/tough guy..etc.
Enjoyment: I have to say I enjoyed the funny moments, and the smut in the story, and also the progress that the characters made throughout the story.
