Aug 26, 2021
A basic, formulaic story with art that is overall usually pretty in a classic style. The couple was cute and had some good chemistry, but nothing in this story really stood out to me.
The main character's ESP / psychic powers were an interesting, unexpected draw at first, but like most things in this story, fell flat in execution.
The crimes were solved easily and didn't really add any tension to the story.
There was a creepy age difference of 9 years, with the MC being 17 and the ML being 26. I'm really not sure why the author chose to make her so young,
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as it had a very minimal effect on the story, and other than a creepy "wait until you're 18 and legal to date" (though they kiss plenty of times before that) plot, the story would basically be the same if she was a few years older, like in her early twenties.
If you're sensitive to this sort of stuff, there's a (possibly transphobic?) plot where a mtf trans woman murders two men (one of them being the doctor that did her transition surgery) who were blackmailing her because they knew her secret. There's misgendering, mentions of her being a man dressed up like a woman and that she's not a real woman. If this sounds triggering to you I recommend you don't read this.
In conclusion, this was a story that had potential but lacked in execution, leading to a lackluster story with problematic elements.
Reviewer’s Rating: 6
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