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Ok, this is my first review and english is not my language, sorry for any mistake!

The story itself might be good if you like drama, but I find it really bad developed. Everything seems extremely rushed, we don't have time to know the characters well, nor their stories and backgrounds, it's like the author have thrown two buddies on the pages and that's all. In my opinion, the author should have done a little bit longer story, but with better development.

*spoilers*

The two main characters known each other since literally 5 minutes and they are the love of each others life. That itself make no sense. ... The relationship between the two is rushed like anything else in this story. I did not really felt anything reading about them, because we have no sufficient time to empathize.
Same for the granny, she might be a really good character, but she was just there, and then poof, she die.

I particularly disliked the "black balloons" with the narration, especially the "it was not a cold, it was aids".
Like, seriously? It really took all the pathos away. It was like reading an elementary text book.

* end of the spoiler*

I like the message that the author want to send, of course, but a story like this should be more long and articulate, in my opinion.
The drawing are really pretty, though not my style.
I surely won't read it again, and I would not recommend it to anyone.