What NOT to do when writing a sequel with zombies running
A long time ago or only 7 years ago. The Pierrot company was too greedy for existence. They were known for milking franchises and having unprofessional directors.
An impressive effort was made to milk the classic action franchise with the help of a voice cast of Automatic Labor. The plan was simple and low-minded. A huge iP reach to end and they've to bring back fans and make them watch their new show forever.
What will they show them forever? It's a dumb goofy sitcom that also teaches important lessons about life.
The life lessons such
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as, Everyone is great at everything, You are successful and already at the peak of growth. Your powers grow fast without any work, if you have a crush on someone just invest your life in them, Respect yourself for being simp, be chilled and happy when your parents are off the planet. Solve everything but don't involve your elders, and most importantly 30yo lesbians can stalk 12y girls..... Cough cough..
The sitcom is now ready, but nobody will watch it if the source is not known to them. They start that sitcom's manga so they can refer to the manga as source material. They made manga a monthly thing since sitcoms should last forever.
There are not enough manga chapters in Shueisha's manga publication after the film. However, our greedy friend Pierrot started podcasting sitcoms a few months later when Shueisha has published only few manga chapter. Showing that sitcom production matters more than manga release. The manga was unnecessary but written by ... let's call him writer 1 but you can say Kodachi .
The writer number 1 has countless errors in his writing that bore you and can filled multiple reviews. So simply n shortly. He has no setup, no trust in his audience, and no rules or big narratives. Proving him a trash writer.
He wrote simply and predictably. A coping-pasted character pattern. The same journey from brat to hero as their prequel, but with a modern twist. But he doesn't want his creation to be an idiot, get beaten up, or struggle. So he self-inserts himself into the story and gives MC 400 IQ, making him a flawless brat. Random characters admire him out of nowhere and defeat extremely strong monsters like Kid Play
His original plan was for Boruto and Kawaki, two brothers who are also rivals, to defeat the Chakra God (multiverse level feat) with the power of the Brotherhood. Simple as h3ll.
During the Twitter controversy, he left after 51 chapters. Suddenly, the manga had new hope. The manga sales and storyline can be fix along with the plot holes and develop. However, Shueisha is too dumb to think about that.
They claim that the original author is returning to write this manga, bringing more zombies
Well, I'm not a fan of Kishimoto's work but his writing is unpredictable. Additionally, he lacks focus, character respect, and credibility. He can retcon anything and destroy his own wordbuilding. He creates multiple romantic relationships to create wholesomeness when none is required.
Nevertheless, fans want him to write this manga. So idk what disaster fans are looking for
Anyway, even after Kishimoto took over, it remains a complete disaster at the start. The fight was blah. The manga is making plot holes with every release of chapters. And breaking every basic writing rule,
And done, here you have it. Now you know how not to write an epic sequel.
What? You want to know about zombies and Kishimoto's writing problems?
Just counting the few biggest issues manga would take too much writing and time.
Are you Ready 3, 2, 1
Nah me neither. However, let me introduce a few of them.
Like an info dump, AI dialogues, disengaging the audience from the story, world-building that makes no sense, a horrible narrative that took seconds to create, and geography that doesn't match what characters are saying. This list might go on all day but let's talk about something else.
Boruto and Kawaki developed all their skills and obtained all the power-ups possible at the end of every arc. And even after that their powers are not just unknown, but they have entirely different power systems at the end of most of these arcs. Just how many power systemss this manga needs?
As a result, they simply create a plot hole or any stupid action and then spend 14 pages explaining it. If you skip those explanations, there are only a few chapters to read. This manga also sacrifices the plot, character development, theme, pacing, common sense, character struggle, hero's journey, and villains for power ups
They've also added a romance subplot that makes the Code and Eida simps, the The purpose of their existence and that's their entire character for the story... This writing is so terrible. I might talk for hours. There is too much amateur writing. So let's talk about Zombies.
These zombies are far worse than trash anime zombies. These are known for running around the internet and always saying "boruto is getting better" , "manga is on fire", "you boruto haters", and "you should watch boruto" . "Read manga" Like they have no idea about writing, or how horribly boruto is written.
They compare it with other animes on power scaling. Without addressing boruto's storyline, development, world building, or aspects. It's not like power scaling is a good thing in the manga. It's one of the main problems.
By calling others weak, they just wanted to prove their Boruto is better than theirs. @; and I don't think most people care about two different storylines about two different power scaling fighting each other. However, why are they comparing it? Boruto manga features time-traveling ninjas who casually walk intolerance in the multiverse.
If that's not enough, they fill plot holes themselves. Not by the writer. According to the story, Boruto defeated Momoshiki without additional information.
However, fans.... I mean zombies. Claim that Momoshiki let Boruto letter K himself because he calculated Boruto's chakra, power, blood pressure, blood type, age, and hard work. Therefore, he can use him as a vessel, but warn him multiple times about his potential and guide him multiple times. Just accept the story and stop adding your sh*t theory to make it more senseless.
Most toxic fanbase ever aka zombies.
I have to give this review. Those zombies ask me for it all day long.
Sep 30, 2022
Boruto: Naruto Next Generations
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What NOT to do when writing a sequel with zombies running
A long time ago or only 7 years ago. The Pierrot company was too greedy for existence. They were known for milking franchises and having unprofessional directors. An impressive effort was made to milk the classic action franchise with the help of a voice cast of Automatic Labor. The plan was simple and low-minded. A huge iP reach to end and they've to bring back fans and make them watch their new show forever. What will they show them forever? It's a dumb goofy sitcom that also teaches important lessons about life. The life lessons such ... 
Sep 30, 2022
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The anime and manga flaws are impossible to put in one of two reviews. I could discus them for hours, but I will keep it as short and sweet as I can.
-----Nothing to spoilers but spoilers alert---- To start, I would like to clarify that I'm neither a Boruto fanboy nor a hater of boruto. A year ago, I was trying to enjoy my Sunday with an anime and was misled by Reviewers saying there's good action, a good plot, and it gets overheated but Why can't I find any of these? 1. Anime canon, mean an episode that connects to the main storyline. However, it is ... |
