Mar 13, 2024
I thought this manga would at least be decent and I wanted to give a chance by reading at least 1 volume since I like yuri, and specially the toxic ones because they can be done very well if written correctly. Waste of time.
This is probably the most corniest thing I've ever read. It's so bad written. The protagonist is good on this manga for some reason despite the fact that she kidnapped a girl younger than then and she acts very similar to the adults on the first volume.
They want to connect you to the protagonist, but it doesn't work because of the
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writing. I do not care if the protagonist is not morally good if it's executioned well. Unfortunately it is not, you can't connect with them and their problems because of the writing.
The adults are comically evil and useless, why this monologue, just to get destroyed by a girl? Doesn't even make sense when they are powerless to a middle schooler, they have more contacts than her and they can put her down easily so why they can't? All this monologue and yapping just to get nothing?
The pacing seems somewhat decent, despite the writing. But they introduce you to many characters that it doesn't seem you will see them soon, in only one or two chapters, just to try to connect to the protagonist.
The concept, in other hand, is actually great. A girl that doesn't like adults and adults treat her badly in many ways possible, her life is not great so she has to cope in many ways possible, until she finds a kid that she loves and wants to protect them like mother-daughter and trying to go to a good path together while supporting each other despite the many problems that they need to face? Great concept! But a concept needs to be well done and, unfortunately, this is not a well done one.
Probably the manga gets better? Maybe, but first impressions matter and I don't like it after reading the first volume and one chapter from the second one.
Should you read it? No. You are much better reading anything else.
Reviewer’s Rating: 3
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