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first of all if i was a Japanese or someone who watch old Japanese Tv shoes and drama i think you will enjoy it since most joke and scene is referenced through them ( even if you didn't watch them you can understand most joke )

i give it a 6 or 7 in Total
my reason is Ai never Loved Him at all , and even when she dated him it was because she found someone to share her hubby with , but hey they are married so who know
also the end was rushed they even bringed back his P.S power in the end ... so he can see his future which is the same that has been happening the last 96 chapter
through all the story sometimes you will see the story as a 9/10 and sometimes a 3/10

his groupe friend DX are very annoying and i hated they attitude most of the time
i liked silvia and ren more tha ai since she loke emotionless in most scene even when she was dating him and even in last chapter , which her personality in the future he see everytime is waaaaay better and she has a personality as a character

the Mc is something also annoying but i can understand his personality since most thing he did throught the story are new for him

if the last 7 chapter has been replaced by a 20 chapter and removed most of the chapter in center of the story it would have been a better option for the writer

Characters :

MC : Shown as p*ssy , afraid from unnecessary things , afraid from been compared with his brother , loved his childhood friend , couldn't confess to her until the end ( too late ) ,
he couldn't confront his brother for what he did
the mc through his days at tokyo got rejected and traumatized multiple time

kaedi :
kaedi only benefit is that she was able to cure mc problem
kaedi seem like a stupid girl ( maybe the author more stupid than her)
she isn't stable , either with her promise or for what she does , like she did lead the mc ... multiple time , even in chapter 20 she said that she will be waiting for him
also when she came to visit mc the only reason to came was to study , she even one day went directly and knocked his brother room


the big brother : a real piece of sh**t , he saw keadi every time visiting the mc and he know she is his childhood friend but he never conserned asking him about the situation
( i'm sure his big brother know that she is mc best friend and for a mature man you should at least think yeah i will ask my brother first if he have felling for her then if not i can smash )
and also he f*cked kaedi while he know the mc is in the other room , like what


author :P :
first he put the promise ( which is to go together to highschool i think )
then didn't explain the development from the point she came back to the point she started dating the brother , then he made her fuck the mc multiple time after that she told him that she will be waiting for him at home , after he went back she refused him and he didn't even confronted his brother as i said in beginning

Mc Friend :
No comment

Blonde Girl / Idol Girl :
No comment also , i can't complain much since they helped the mc a lot

2nd manager : liked his personality
1st manager : f*ck him

mc first crush in tokyo : f*ck her also hahaha .

the ending and chapters :

was rushed too much , there is even a chapter with 6 page for no reason at all

overall : story is 3.5 but just from the blonde and idol girl the story go up to 5

i really liked this one shot , i was reading first without knowing it was a oneshot which left me a little disappointed , i hope the artist turn this oneshot into a more complete story even if it's for 23 chapter story .
i liked the MC development
the Fmc also is very lovable
one thing if ever this oneshot turned to a manga i hope the artist to stay a way from the common new stereotype where some artist include Rape and Ntr stuff . thanks
overall 8
story 7
art 8
character 8
enjoyment 9
it has really a good potential for a good story