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Hey!

Thanks for the notice and the edits.

I'm still fairly new to writing for MAL and was just wondering what would I need to do if I wanted to add something completely new even after 2 editors have worked on my original synopsis. You suggested that my Mahoutsukai no Yome synopsis could do with more focus on the darker aspects of the story, so I changed the last paragraph in order to cater to that. But, I would love to have a second opinion on it!

I'll put it below in case you want to read it:

Chise is not only physically transported to the English countryside where Elias lives, but also introduced to a world where wondrous creatures such as faeries and dragons are the norm. But she soon realizes there is much to fear in her new life as there is to marvel at. And lying at the heart of it all is the question of whether she has fallen into the hands of something much darker than her own inner demons.

What do you think?

Thanks!

thaoey

I see a serious need of Planetes on your list, so you could go watch that, or you could try something from a different genre than you usually watch and go for the shorter Flying Witch. Good luck with your challenge.