BASICALLYIDOWRK's Profile
- Last OnlineJun 6, 2022 7:51 AM
- GenderMale
- BirthdayJun 13, 1991
- LocationNew Jersey
- JoinedNov 10, 2013
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Hello there sir/madam I'm just your average guy into anime. I like rom-coms,(like Seitokai Yakuindomo/Sora no otoshimono.), and am just a friendly guy. If you have any recommendations of anime similar to those on my list don't hold yourself back i could appreciate them. And all of you are more than welcome to have a conversation with me. And thank you for reading this.
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Anime Stats
Days: 10.1
Mean Score:
9.00
- Total Entries71
- Rewatched0
- Episodes588
Manga Stats
Days: 5.3
Mean Score:
8.56
- Total Entries44
- Reread0
- Chapters769
- Volumes105
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Character (7)
All Comments (2) Comments
I read your first review. A couple concerns:
1. Grammar. Grammar is a must for reviewing on this site. Be sure to remember to capitalize the first word in your sentences and space out your words, among other things.
2. Description. What if I were to describe a movie to you like this:
"The movie was good because it was." Would you believe me?
The fact of the matter is that if people are going to take your review seriously, you're going to have to explain yourself. Why is the animation nothing special? Why did the plot unravel at the end? What about the characters make them likable or unlikable? Explain your interests and opinions, or they'll just seem like unjustified opinions.
3. Fitting scores with description. A story that is "great" but "doesn't end well" gets a 9? Perhaps. Art is "nothing too special?" But gets a nine? I don't believe that. "The art suits the voices perfectly." PERFECTLY, and it gets a 9? No. Some of the characters "are not explained very well." 9. No. Why all the nines? Is nine the only number you can think of? With some of these descriptions, I would assume that your scores would be much lower, like in the 5-7 range. But what do I know? Your descriptions weren't there!
Basically, your grammar and description needs work. Be sure to both show and tell, as well as do it effectively. And so I say to you, sir or miss; TELL ME MORE, TELL ME MORE, TELL ME MORE!