Feb 11, 2019
Story: The first few chapters follow 1 off stories that let us get to know Kaname before we dive into any form of actual plot. We are given his motivations and quirks, as well as an understanding of his overall mannerisms. The story the really picks up and helps flesh out Kaname's character as well as developing 1 other key figure.
Art: The art is rarely jaw dropping but it is far from bad. When it needs to hit home it really does and the facial features certainly never disappoint. just don't expect any detailed backgrounds, not that they are needed.
characters: We are given 2 characters
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with some kind of development to them, the first being of course Kaname, and the other being "Ossan"(name unknown). As this is the story of Kaname, most of the time not spent on lewd scenes, is spent on developing his character. over time we get to learn more about his circumstances and thoughts about himself, as well as getting to see him slowly becoming more accepting of who he is. "Ossan" Doesn't get much development aside from being set up as the typical nice guy. He comes off as a typical self insert character which isn't uncommon in porn, but the little development he does get is nice and i would hope for more, as a lot of the fun in a story, comes from how the different characters bounce off each other, in terms of personality.
Enjoyment: Enjoyed it very much ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Overall: A fantastic story that is miles ahead of most other Doujinshi in terms of story telling and getting you invested in the characters. Can definitely recommend
Reviewer’s Rating: 10
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