Jan 12, 2009
Story; 7
Four chapters, and an extra. The four chapters are about an overprotective father that won't let his daughter date men. The daughter is 17, and already has a serious relationship for a half year and wants her father to know and accept it. Boy isn't accepted > boy wants to be acknowledged > father is dj > boy wants to win dj contest > voíla, there you have an extraordinary story. I'd advise you not to read the extra though. It doesn't look like a follow up on characters from the first four chapters.
Art; 6
Mediocre. Many personages look like they want to look cool...
Character;
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6
Not great, but not too bad either. I wouldn't say 'it is very realistic' but then again, this story is too short for real characters.
Enjoyment; 8
I really like the story. It really is something else!
Overall; 7 when you're looking for a short story this is a nice one to read!
Reviewer’s Rating: 7
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