Okay so to go straight to the point..
The story was quite original though it's a bit cliche. It starts as the heroine stuck with a problem that the guys need to help her since it was their fault. And the story goes on with the girl being in danger the boys being her knight and shining armor.. something like that.
The drawing was great, no complaints, though there was some parts that the drawing looked like it was not edited much.. (i don't know how to explain that. XD sarrey)
It was very interesting to read and quite enjoyable.
good one-shot. You'll most likely crave for more but *sigh* it IS a one-shot. ;)
Hope that this was helpful. :)