Feb 23, 2024
Is spoiler warning necessary if im talking about the first 4 chap?
art is good but the storytelling (so far) is horrendous
chapters 1-3 goes back and forth between present and past which makes it super hard to follow, especially since theres an abrupt cut at the start of chapter 3.
everything is so horribly explained but what I got was MC got reincarnated as a hybrid created by a crazy evil necromancer. Theres also a bunch of siblings? but apparently a bunch got killed and infused into MC. why? no clue. Theres also some other siblings who have hybrid powers as well, they dont seem to get
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along well, except for one who MC saved? By the time the story starts a bunch of stuff has already happened, all of which we only know from brief exposition dumps.
The hybrids were created with the sole purpose of protecting their "father" but MC just up and killed their "immortal" father before the story begins and just """"inherited"""" necromancer powers?? However, she is still the weakest among them for some reason? She says she can only run away if any of them show up? How did she kill her OP dad? How did none of her siblings stop her? What Happened between then and now?
Chapters 2-3 are just exposition and chapter 4 returns to where chapter 1 left off. ML being left alone with his holy sword in MC's house swarming with evil creatures. Of course ML is going to be hostile. Theres only 4 chapters so far, I dont see MC winning in chapter 5 but I know she will somehow. The art is good but thats the only thing going for the series. Try to see if you can follow along. I'll see if it can redeem itself
Reviewer’s Rating: 5
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