Shiro Gal to Kuro Gal no Yuuwaku

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One of the better gyaru mangas. Focuses on normal day scenarios in school, not too ecchi and Kuro gal is really cute. Even though it seems like the otaku boy would be a love interest at first, this is definitely a yuri manga.

The phasing is equivalent of a gag manga, which means that the characters and the story stay a bit shallow personality-wise. A couple of unnecessary characters are introduced in the end but their chapters are really short. Art style is good with minor perspective flaws. Readable in a day.
This is no Kuragehime but it brought a smile to my face.

This manga is about two high school girls who act sexual towards each other in order to seduce an otaku guy in their class. Clearly it was written by a man to fuel his fetishisation of sapphic relationships. Granted, one of the girls does have a real crush on the other but it seems to still be used to pleasure the man. Theres literally no redeeming qualities about this manga. If youre a yuri fan, this is a horrible read and NOT worth your time.

Each chapter is extremely short, usually just about 10 pages. So its a quick read thankfully.

The art is so basic ... theres nothing new or interesting about it.

The characters are one dimensional, you dont get character development because each chapter is just both girls acting sexual for the man.

Theres basically no storyline, each chapter consists of two girls being placed in sexual situations while they act gay towards each other and the male drooling over them. Nothing ever changes, its the same boring story every single chapter.

I do not think this is bad, but it is disappointingly average. The issue with the manga is that it never moves past its initial premise - that being the two gyarus are friends and one of the gyarus flirts with the otaku and the otaku redirects that energy to the other gyaru. Yes, pretty much every chapter is a repeat of this exact scenario with very extremely minor differences.

The narrative is exactly as advertised, but there is some expectation with that something moves forward, or that there are twists here and there. You aren't missing much if you read the last chapter right ... after the first. This is essentially equivalent to a student getting handed a grading rubric for their assignment and doing the bare minimum to meet all the demands for a "C". It's a shame because Shiraishi-sensei is a good artist, and the premise they started with was a decent one, but I've seen manga with synopses much worse that end up being many times more interesting.

I can see Shiraishi-sensei's next manga being much better if he works with a more competent editor and writes another manga with more volumes in mind.