Elixir of the Sun

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Overall it's a fine story but not really worth reading unless it's for timepass .

The concept was not bad and the plot but the plot holes are so many and only attention gaining part is the smut every few panels and the pretty art .

The ending is very nonsense and rushed I don't if it's just translation error but the empress baby was first a girl but it then turns out to be a boy and the baby was a very side charchter ignored they got name and gender wrong each chapter timeline didn't make sense and they even added the parent get jealous ... of the child and tbh that's just a very infuriating and sad thing to add in story they added child in story but it was like some bg character they would bring up 1 panel as of they remembered it once in a while , also the child somehow the person he falls in love with after growing up was shown as a boy before but later turns out to be a girl so the gender changing is not really making sense maybe it's translation error and they wanted to add their love story they did a little bit it was rushed and not properly done .

There's a lot of angst and smut and those are in many episodes, little bit is fine but not each chapter also each time a important topic comes up romace scenes come up next tbh wouldn't have read the story if it didn't have such beautiful art and really wanted the fl take revenge .

They added side stories but they were basically part of main story so yeah very dragged on and confusing ending even the start was little story and then smut very slow progress in story and more smut then story .