Sep 2, 2021
The sex scenes are good but the story and characters are obnoxious. The pacing made my brain hurt and it doesn't focus enough on the romance, instead opting to go into the fucking quick.
I'm not one to demand slow burns but dear lord this was like a "hate to love" speedrun. It took like one chapter for the two to instantly get lovey dovey.
It would've been neat to see the two actually getting along in their new house beyond the typical "his smile is so cute" and "oh he's such a good cook", maybe if the characters were likeable or interesting I would've been easier
...
swayed.
Momoki's character constantly flip flops and he's more so used as a walking talking plot device, he switches from ignoring to loving Chikage depending on if it's time for drama or sexy times. Chikage has the awful thing going on where the seme has no personality and is nothing but personalityless slab of meat for you to project your ideal confident husbando qualities onto.
This has 2 more chapters, but I don't believe it's going to change my mind much storywise, especially since it seems to be heading to a useless love triangle drama that won't matter in the end.
Want some quick neat sex scenes? read chapter 3 and 4, ignore the rest.
Would not reccomend.
Reviewer’s Rating: 5
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