Mar 28, 2023
This work needed at least 20-30 more chapters, I'll start with that. I don't know how much time passed until the end (I think it's one and a half years?) and the story made such huge leaps it felt really forced. I can't hate it because it didn't do anything bad, it was just super rushed.
I can't make many more comments on the story. At some points a single event spanned multiple chapters and on the other side there were huge time leaps (even one in the middle of a chapter). The rom happened so fast and without any build-up (he realises Momoka has high
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affection for him and three chapters later he misses her; then they're already dating two chapters later...) and the com is basically nonexistent (no clue how it got that tag on MAL). One of the most 5/10 stories I've ever read but could be really good if it had a normal run length (50-80 chapters) and I like the concept.
The characters suffer from the story's problems. Once again they had the base to become interesting but just didn't have the time.
5/10 again.
The art is your run-of-the-mill romcom type and didn't help the story in any way. I've read at least 40 other similar manga and probably won't differentiate it from them in a few days. It's boring.
4/10
I don't really recommend this manga, not because I didn't like it but because there's literally nothing here. At least the really bad ones make you feel disgust (thanks Miyajima-sensei, you ruin my start of the week every time), I read through this with a straight poker face, no feels whatsoever.
I don't know, I guess you can read it if you have an hour to waste, otherwise I'm open to suggest about 250 other more interesting romcoms.
Reviewer’s Rating: 5
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