Oct 29, 2020
This is an Ecchi Yaoi, and solely a Ecchi Yaoi with some bits of romance thrown in. Anyway on to the review!
Story: 3/10: I didn't really like the story. Its basically every single, "shy boy gets dominated by lustful dominate male and they fall in love" Kind of Yaoi. Theirs no real twist like some other Yaoi Series do to make it more interesting, which makes it a big bore to read through the main bulk of the non "sex" Scenes. Just to say first, this is not a hentai, it has some very suggestive scenes and positions (i.e man grabbing dick through pants,
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thrusting into each other, sloppy kissing, etc) but it doesn't really make up the bulk of the story. All the softcore sex scenes seem like little treats to keep you reading, because without them, the story would be uninteresting and boring as all hell.
The story starts off with our main character, a meek (when it comes to his past and sexual situations) man getting into a new job. His backstory is quickly explained, being that in highschool he was super short and chubby, but was also super smart, which made him a bullying target among the student council which he was also in. The highschool version of himself is SUPER cute! Its probably the best thing about this story. Continuing on, in this new job he finds out that his boss is the former president of the student council which shocks him, and the stupid shit comes in full force!
The president when he gets our main character in his personal room, advances onto him, without warning, and our main character tries to push him away. Its not shown as anything bad for some reason, even though its technically sexual assault and attempted rape which really makes me dislike this relationship. Anyway, after the dominate male makes our main character have to have sex with him because if not he will destroy the business that he is working in the relationship continues. I have no idea why we are supposed to like him. Anyway, it ends with them having sex.
The story is odd with flashbacks being thrown in at times when its only convenient and easy for the story. The sex scenes are probably the second best part which is sad, because its probably the only thing the author can write well. It's very erotic, but their's no real difference in between which makes it almost a bore to get through near the end too.
Art: 7/10: Probably one of the better parts of this. The characters, settings, objects, backrounds, etc are illustrated wonderfully. Get me, its not any Vagabond, Berserk, or One Punch Man but its still decent. The panel placements can be very mismanaged and odd. Its very hard to read at times which makes it bad, but mostly its very good.
Characters: 3/10: The characters are horrible. Our Dominate Male is very bad, like previously said is a sexual deviant who advances on our main character mutiple times without consent. He's a real asshole, and our main character is very stupid for not reporting him to the police, or getting the hell out of that job, and exposing him for he is. The president is very odd, because our Main Character remembers his character to be horrible, but the president of the Student Council defended him and openly expressed his attraction! The two other characters that are very stupid, are the two twins from the student council. They show up at his job at one point, and are mean as usual. But after a few chapters, their on his side! It makes no fucking sense!
Enjoyment: 5/10
Overall: 5/10
Reviewer’s Rating: 5
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