amazingly written, not too fast- but not slow-paced either.
i really loved the way they portrayed the characters, and
that it's not your typical 'no feelings attached' yaoi. it's
super cute, and even the smaller characters play a part
in the story line. i would love a part two for this one!
something that's very common in alpha/beta/omega
stories is that everything goes super fast, or things are
with no feelings attached. however, they did this very
differently, but still in a way that doesn't feel like you're
waiting forever! you could tell that both of the main
characters were holding back for each other, and wanting
to make sure that the other was good for
especially the kid was cute, she's just so tiny but protects
him like she's not even his kid. so sweet, really. <3