Oct 1, 2022
At first look, this seemed like a promising short (just 5 volumes) tale, unfortunately everything lacks depth. The characters, the world around them, and the plot they find themselves in; everything is as shallow as a puddle from a light drizzle. One might think it might be because of the short length, but it is definitely not because of that. It is the feeble storytelling just trying to agglomerate some ideas from current fantasy manga trends. The initial chapters give an impression that it might be a slow-life kind of story with magic, but everything goes downhill once the drama and the adventure are set
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The most interesting point of this manga is the item crafting. Despite being a great idea to center a fable, it just isn't able to carry the story by itself. The idea of gathering, trading, and stocking materials in a fantasy setting to create magical items is very appealing. Unfortunately it is put aside after the initial chapters, only appearing here and there later. What we get instead is a dull romance of a couple and their unimaginative quest to help each other. The relationship between the two main characters is incredibly dry and lacks any sense of weightiness. Since they barely have personalities, it is no wonder their relationship has any profundity. The author could have explored the age gap or the race difference, but since the society around them is almost non-existent, it is a non-issue. There is barely any world building since the whole manga centers around Magritte's (main female protagonist) surroundings and the dungeon. They might go to some other places, but there is no attempt to flesh out either the world or the characters inhabiting it.
After the author gives up the attempt to center the story around item crafting and focuses on the adventure of trying to save Yura (main male protagonist), the manga displays shockingly bland action scenes that lack any vibrancy. Action is clearly not the author's forte, therefore it baffles me that so much of the manga is used to expose this weak point.
If you are a fan of the fantasy or romance genre, there isn't much here. You can definitely find much better literature and comics that deal with the same ideas offered here, but with much more depth. This should have been just an iyashikei in a fantasy setting set to the theme of item crafting. Sometimes less is more.
Reviewer’s Rating: 4
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