Feb 22, 2024
The art is very beautiful but that is it, the storyline could have had potential if there wasn't so much dubcon/rape as well as actual communication FROM BOTH the MC & the ML.
TW - Dub con between the MC & ML the ML gives an aphrodisiac liquor to the MC and has sex on their wedding night so rape/dubcon, attempted gang rape which honestly it looked like the MC got penetrated but it wasn't mentioned so I chose to see it as it wasn't for my sanity, however I should have listened to my gut feeling and dropped it but instead I kept reading it
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hoping it would get good because the art was so pretty but nope it just gets more drama, no communication, SA from the MC's brother and then later on the MC gets thrown by the MC's brother into a room full of girls who are prostitutes' and start sexually assaulting him however rape didn't happen since a customer got into an altercation with another prostitutes' and then manhandled the MC and grabbed her butt,, I dropped it after that. It was just way too much.
In terms of the story the ML basically always knew the MC was a man (the brother) and he plotted the whole thing from the start just so he could marry him since he knew his father wouldn't approve of his relationship with another man, but instead of the ML trying to talk and getting to know the MC he just forced him and his sister into the whole predicament and then instead of coming clean on their wedding night he acted like he kept thinking the MC was his twin sister Lala and kept calling him "Lala" the MC ends up falling for the ML but instead of actually talking to the ML and trying to get to know him and have a conversation he plots to participate in the sibilings duel where they get to pick who keeps "HIM as the PRIZE" and he chooses the ML's brother JUST SO HE COULD ASK HIM MORE ABOUT THE MC and get to know more about the ML which makes the MC think he hated him that much and that he had sex with his brother so that makes the MC end up forcing him to have sex with him again "JUST" to make sure that he didn't actually have sex with his brother. Which the MC isn't actual innocent in this he chose to go with the MC's brother KNOWING the MC's brother tried to force himself on him and rape him outside in the laundry area. LIKE WHAT THE HECK IS THIS WRITING! NOT to mention the MC's dad sold him and his sister to the ML's merchant family and the whole village the MC & his sister are from also supported that decision and begged him to stay with the ML and live as his wife. Oh and it gets better when the MC realizes he loves the ML the MC's dad confronts him and tell the MC he better step aside and allow him to bring in another wife so the ML could have kids and continue his legacy AND EVEN THOUGH the ML doesn't want another "wife" the stupid MC agrees and says "YES" then tries to force the ML & the new chick to get closer EVEN THOUGH AGAIN the ML keeps rejecting the "New wife" then the MC finds out about how the ML planned the whole ordeal to marry him (the MC) HE runs away to find his sister who ran away from her lover after finding out the truth and this is where the MC once again gets harassed (it looked like the kid wanted to force himself on the MC I scrolled through that chapter) and that is where she (HE but in the story everyone thinks the MC is a she except for the ML, ML's brother & MCs family) runs into the MC's brother who tosses him to get raped by a bunch of prostitutes but was interrupted. That was the last straw, before dropping it.
This story is just horribly written and could have went a whole different direction without all the horrible drama, misunderstandings and dubcon/rape. The only good thing about this manga is it's art which is why I gave it a 2 instead of a 1.
Reviewer’s Rating: 2
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