Mar 20, 2024
The first story is just dumb, it starts off cute the MC who loves to run and the ML who loves to read, they become close and the ML ends up running for fun in order to run with the MC, however instead of being honest about their feelings especially after the kiss they act like nothing, so what does the ML do, he starts going after the MC's girlfriends and love interests because he doesn't want anyone else to have him so he screws his girlfriends, love interests and toys with them just to keep the MC "to himself or untouched" somehow through all
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that betrayal the MC still likes/loves the ML & keeps being "friends with him"
The second story it felt like it could have been cute and could have gave love emotions yet it didn't, it lacked a lot. We have the MC who promised to come back for the ML meanwhile they keep writing letters to each other for 12 years sharing everything about themselves except their love lives which the ML had a bunch of girlfriends even though he was supposedly in love with the MC...what..?? How does that even make sense, and they were all mostly older than him, supposedly one was in college while he was still in high school...how is that okay, grooming if anything yet the ML was nonchalant about it and the friends said something about he would just date them because they asked. Um what happened to "love feelings"
The author sucks at writing love stories and making the reader feel like "aww love" or at least to see us see how they loved each other.
Reviewer’s Rating: 4
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