Okay, minna, we're having new contest!
This time it will be on writing a fanfiction about Sasuke and Itachi.
It can be any genre you want (including yaoi) so go on and write something ^^
Post your story here and if you win you can have:
1st Place:
Special card + All Limited Edition that have passed
2nd Place:
Special card + Two Limited Editions
3rd Place:
Special Card + One Limited Edition
going to add the special card later ^^
Of course the member can choose which Limited Edition they want ^^
Rules:
- to be at least 600 words
- have to include both Sasuke and Itachi, of course :D
When the Entering is closed the members will judge the stories that have entered and choose the winers~
rave_ash said: can we start writing now? or wait till the contest start?
It has already started. I'm waiting for the stories xD
You can post your story here (in a spoiler tab) and then the members will decide which one is the best ^^ So give you best!
YamiValentine said: Does it have to have an ending or could it just be like a 'Part One' thing? :)
I think it's easier to be with end... everyone will want to know it :D
So make sure it have one ^^
Okay I'll try my best but I can't promise anything, normally my fanfics are seperated into parts coz they get too long xP but if I don't get one done for this contest then I'll try again if there's another XD
YamiValentine said: Does it have to have an ending or could it just be like a 'Part One' thing? :)
I think it's easier to be with end... everyone will want to know it :D
So make sure it have one ^^
Okay I'll try my best but I can't promise anything, normally my fanfics are seperated into parts coz they get too long xP but if I don't get one done for this contest then I'll try again if there's another XD
Okay.. if you have such problem(like me :D) you can post the first part of your story ^^
I … hated Itachi.
My revenge was my reason to live. Now that he is gone, what do I do? What have I done all this time? Why do I feel empty? Why does my heart ache? Why am I not happy? Was that not what I wanted?
I felt so happy when I was fighting with Itachi. I felt equal to him – the genius of the Uchiha clan.
My heart leaped and danced as my brother could not escape my attacks. And yet at the last moment before his death, he smiled. His lifeless body fell and I couldn’t help but smile back for my wish was finally granted. Exhaustion took over and I collapsed on the cold ground waiting until my consciousness slipped away. The rain drops falling on us mixed with my blood and I didn’t notice as one single tear escaped my right eye. “Nii-san!” I yelled. It took me almost a minute to realise where I was. It was my precious home in Konoha and I was back as seven-year-old Sasuke. I jumped on my brother’s neck and almost knocked him over. He pushed me aside making a disgusted sound. This made me scowl but then he smiled and my face lit up again.
“What is it, Sasuke?” His voice was low, barely above a whisper. The love he felt for me was radiating from him and I wanted to hug him tightly and never let him go. He was my precious brother. If this was a dream, I didn’t want to wake up. If this was what death was like, then I wouldn’t mind dying.
“I want to play!” I grinned. He stood up and started walking away. He waved for me to come.
I ran to him even though I knew what he was going to do. I knew perfectly well and I wanted him to do it. It made me feel safe, loved and somehow special to him.
But as I was running the image of my brother started fading away.
“Nii-san!” I yelled. His hand reached out to poke my forehead but he disappeared just before doing it. And he was smiling again. Once again, I lost my brother.
“Some other time…Sasuke.” I heard him say. I looked around frantically but he was nowhere to be seen.
I woke up sweating and panting heavily in a dark room. The only light came from a flickering candle next to the door that Karin,one of the members of Eagle, was holding.
“What do you want?” I almost hissed.
“I heard you talk in your sleep so I came to check on you.” She said. “Is something bothering you?”
“None of your business. Go away.” If she didn’t leave in the next twenty seconds I would have tried to strangle her. Luckily, she did.
Her echoing footsteps gradually became less and less loud and I was finally alone with my thoughts.
My reason to live is still not gone. My revenge is not over. Itachi may be dead but now I knew who was my real enemy. I was an avenger and I would destroy Konoha. I would bring them hell, as they did to my brother. Naruto, Sakura, Kakashi… it doesn’t matter who will try to stop me. I will kill them if I have to. I keep wondering if that is the right choice. Itachi would have died sooner or later but he kept himself alive in order to die in front of me and make me ‘a hero’. Wasn’t I ruining that? I didn’t care.
‘It’s all for my brother’ was the pathetic excuse I used to convince myself that I was doing the right thing. But was I really?
My eyes started closing again and I lay on the bed waiting for sleep to come again. That question could wait. Right now, I wanted to see my brother again. The brother I hated and yet loved more than anything.
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Itachi and Sasuke are brothers of the Uchiha Clan one of the most powerful clans of the Village Hidden between Leaves who in childhood they lived with parents. But one day when returning home Sasuke found everyone's dead except Itachi, which told him why he did these things and that to reach the same level he must kill his best friend and become a vigilante. From that moment desired vengeance grew at every step, every minute, every second growing , poisoning his soul and ambition him to become stronger. For two years he worked ceaselessly to achieve purpose and fate took care to re-meet them. They established to resolve the problems in Konoha, at secret sanctuary of the Uchiha family. After a long battle Sasuke defeats Itachi . But Sasuke learn that Itachi was actually forced by circumstances to kill his whole clan. Uchiha clan wanted to reach the leadership Village Hidden among Leaves and so would have caused a Third Shinobi War. Itachi hatred whole heartedly war, and the village leadership ordered to stop the outbreak of the war by killing his entire family. Itachi had taken a very hard decision : the village or own family… And chose to sacrifice his clan and eventually even his life for the sake of Konoha. The only thing that could not do was to kill his brother. Itachi wanted that Sasuke to live and become stronger, so he gave him a purpose: “If you hate me if you want to kill me, then you need to become more powerful ...".He hear all the truth about Itachi from Madara Uchiha ( Founder of Uchiha clan, who helped Itachi to kill all the clan ). Sasuke truly regrets his brother's death . Seeing him crushed by pain, with eyes still mourned, wet with tears to flow without stopping them and slowly grinding of memories, then Uchiha Madara decides to tell him about existence the son of Itachi.
- A son ... Itachi has a son?
- Yes …
- Since when ? where ? with who ? ... speaks.
- Everything happened in one of the missions , almost two years , not passing so much over the tragedy that befall your family and he met a ninja-medic , Yuzuru .
- Yuzuru… how she look ?… Itachi was very picky with girls…
- Although Itachi is not regret the decision that it took ... this not meant is not hurt him , and Yuzuru is a woman as a creature of legends , what was attracted, like any man, and fell into temptation… with idiom as of angels, with long black hair parted on the forehead in two broad strands that are lost somewhere towards the neck, leaving to see a piece of ear . With two eyes a deep vivid blue which were adorned with long lashes and when it descends cast a shadow over the pink of cheek and that is perfectly interweaved with straight and delicate nose and regular mouth whose lips parted gracefully disclosed some teeth blanch as milk. And when wearing dress can be seen feebly, thin body like a whip, highlighting the hidden lines of the thighs ,the hips, the breasts, small shoulders as a child…off is fucking beautiful and powerful enough for a woman.
- And the kid?
- The child ... is identical to Itachi.
- I want to see, where is?
- Are the Village Hidden in Sound.
The next day had started off and within a few days arrived at destination . Surroundings looked like a bleakness . The silence was broken only by their mere presence , of profundity respiration . At one point he stopped in front of a house.
- Here is … to heard harsh and metallic voice of his Madara in that silence…
Insistent on researching the place then with a feeling bad , open the door and a kunai is thrown at them with a higher speed than usual. Sasuke stopped him.
- I see you have not changed a bit, I always get the same warm , said ironically Madara.
- Since I retired , I made more enemies than friends so I must take care, answered it.
Her gaze is directed towards Sasuke, meanwhile.
- So you must be Sasuke who killed Orichimaru and on…(Sigh in deep chest like crazy tendencies to stifle the rebel blood) Itachi.
- Yes .
- And what are you doing here? ask Yuzuru.
- I want the boy under my wing, answered Sasuke.
A laughter disturbing the atmosphere what to bedding in room . Throw it to Sasuke that the wrapped in smile, with her blue eyes seemed to say “ You kidding, don't you … “ . Then she measure from top to bottom with interest seems enhance and see how well resemble with her dear Itachi.
- You are crazy, how can you believe that I will leave my son in the hands of criminal who killed his father, your own brother. You are a miserable ! ... You really want to take me all I have …He is all I have left from Itachi ... murderer!
- Calm down woman !... this is not what I want…I felt really sorry that I killed him… I learned the truth too late ... too late !...
- And you think I care what you have learned… however he is no longer here and that hurt me , my son is only alleviation ... and you want to take him at me ...for what? ... Don't tell me ... you want to get revenge and will use the boy will be bigger , or you just want to continue tradition Uchiha clan ( how to use Sharingan ).
- Yes ... I'm sure he will forgive me ... and he will wants to avenge his father .
- No ... and I can not afford this ... You think I don't want revenge ... but I can't do that I promise I will not do, and my son also.
- A promise ...
- Yes a promise… in the last night when we were together he told me “ you know I did terrible thingsI was saw obilgat to kill all the Uchiha clan, and I did… but with one exception ... Sasuke, my younger brother I could not kill… When I saw the face full of fear, tormented by terrible show , with the freeze tears in the eyes burning , made me remember an accident why should not I act in cold blood… then he was smaller, and I also, I had a great folly and mine rebuked me very hard, actually eaten even beat and I crying in my room. At one point Sasuke came and looked at me one minute how I crying and he began to cry too. So , all at once . It was the first time when someone a complained to me. It breaks my heart, nothing else . And until he saw me smiling and trying to make him smile ... he not stopped crying… sometimes I miss that time… I wanted that to become strong, and for that I had to motivate him ... I said that to become a strong need to kill me ... and now I feel the time is coming ... Yuzuru , I want to promise me that you and my son will not dirty hands with blood to avenge me… Please promise me << Ok Iatchi , I promise, replied that the half-heartedly and with tears in their eyes>> In case in that I die you need to know I died happy … <<Happy ... what are you talking about Itachi >> I say happy ... because I will not be kill by whoever , but a Uchiha… and I say happy too because I know you… Yuzuru love you, you're the only woman who hug me with so much love in you arms so I can forget by everybody and everything <<And I love you, only with you and via you , I know what means dearness, love, dedication to the supreme moment when you know that becoming a woman >>... “These were the last words that we told them...the next morning he leaving me alone… I found that over one week was killed ... and today you come to me to take and my boy… pitiable ! cried with tears in eyes Yuzuru.
After several long moments in which the quietude was awfully painful is hear again Yuzuru voice.
- I want you to go ... and will not ever see again ,but before you leave I want to say you something … hmm besides love brother that he always wore, Itachi gift to you something that took me… revenge, sweet revenge.
They two had left she alone without even seeing the boy, all that had been possible to discovery was the name ... Yuu.
- Madara I want to get into Akatsuki and to burn the Konoha until bedrock… only village leaders forced Itachi to take this decision and I will get my revenge for that and for my entire family… and about the boy as soon as it grows, it will only come to me wanting what I want ... more power.
And all the time they are in the Akatsuki, Sasuke won a Magenkyo Eternal Sharingan, becoming even stronger. It seems like everything happened as foretold Sasuke… what happened after that…is secret
Sasuke travelled 5 years alone searching for Itachi
After his long search he finds Itachi in a big medieval castle .
Itachi waits Sasuke with a kunai in his right hand
Sasuke enters in the room where is Itachi
Sasuke:-Itachi! now you are dead after you killed the whole clan
Itachi:-hmm
Sasuke:-Whats wrong Itachi ,are you afraid now ?
Itach:-hahaha !
Itachi throws the kunai to the roof.The roof explodes and falls on Sasuke but Sasuke appears in Itachi's back and cuts his hand
Itachi runs to the rooftop on the stairs and sasuke is behind him running
Sasuke:-Itachi you bastard!!!
Itach:-Come little brother ,come !
When they arrived on the rooftop Itachi turns back to Sasuke.Sasuke charges a Chidori and runs to Itachi
Itachi uses the fire brath,Sasuke jumps to the left but his right arm is burned
Sasuke:-Aaaaagh!!!!!!!! bastard!
Itachi:-hahahahah!
Itachi throws 20 kunais to Sasuke
Sasuke is hited by them in the hands and in his leg.He is now on the floor .
Itachi goes to him and takes his left eye brutally
Sasuke:-AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaagh!!!!!!!
Itachi-now i have it hahaha
And then Sasuke wakes up and saws that he haves his eye and his arms
Itachi stands in his face and says
Itachi-Brother now your chackra is over
Sasuke:No Itachi no you are the that doesn't have his chackra
Itach:Haaa???
Sasuke transforms in the cursed demon
Sasuke-Now i have enough chackra to beat you !
Sasuke runs to Itachi and puts his claw on his eye wrests his eye
Sasuke-HAahahahahahhhahah!!!!!
Itachi-Brother nooo ,don't do that to my eyes
Sasuke-Ok
Sasuke takes his katana and cuts itachis left hand ,he prepares to stab him in his heart
Sasuke:Any last wish?
Itachi:Yes ,dieeeeeeeeeee!!!!
Itachi stabs Sasuke's heart with the kunai
Sasuke falls on the floor death
''In Itachi's mind:
Now that i'm the last Uchiha ,wait Madara still lives ,now without my hand and my eye i can't beat him ,blame you Sasuke ''
Itachi goes to Sasuke's body and starts cryng
Itachi-Brother please forgive me
Sasuke:Itach...
Itachi:Sasuke say something
Sasuke:Itach...i forg...hate you
With his last power Sasuke stabs Itachi's other eye and after he dies
Itachi is desperate and falls down
''In Itachi's mind
No no what will happen now ,what will i do without my Sharingan ,without my vision ,i will die eated by crows,i have no chackra .
This thing happened just because i respected that order to kill my clan
Sasuke is not guilty ,i am .
He is just a victim of my stupidity ,
i was infatuated by the power and now i'm blind
I wish i could tell Sasuke i'm sorry
''
Itachi takes the kunai that stabed sasuke's heart and stab his hearth
Itachi:-Brother i hope i will find you there where i will go !
RulenneClarissa said: Ah, I really want to join...but... stupid writer's block! why does it have to be this week? T.T
Relax ^^ It will be open till we collect enough stories. So you can post it whenever you can. If the entering is closed you can send it to me PM and I'll add it ^^
We don't have a deadline anyway so have your time writing~