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| I don't have a lot of qualifications but I liked the chapter! I think it felt a bit rushed and I would've liked to see it slowed down with some more time given to each event like the torture and the attack and the duel with the girl. Definitely keep writing though. Nothing helps you get better than writing faster than keeping up a routine and pumping out chapters. Best of luck! |
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Sevenlock said: Thanks for the feedback mate... Yea I've been getting a lot of feedback to slow down the chapters which I will do starting from the new chapters...I don't have a lot of qualifications but I liked the chapter! I think it felt a bit rushed and I would've liked to see it slowed down with some more time given to each event like the torture and the attack and the duel with the girl. Definitely keep writing though. Nothing helps you get better than writing faster than keeping up a routine and pumping out chapters. Best of luck! |
Cruelseeker1002 said: Sevenlock said: Thanks for the feedback mate... Yea I've been getting a lot of feedback to slow down the chapters which I will do starting from the new chapters...I don't have a lot of qualifications but I liked the chapter! I think it felt a bit rushed and I would've liked to see it slowed down with some more time given to each event like the torture and the attack and the duel with the girl. Definitely keep writing though. Nothing helps you get better than writing faster than keeping up a routine and pumping out chapters. Best of luck! No problem at all, mate! DM me if you want me to read any other chapters you write in the future. Oh and from writer to writer, I also wrote a webnovel myself for the MAL contest if you wouldn't mind giving it a read if you're got some time: https://www.honeyfeed.fm/novels/3701 If you enjoyed it, please give me a vote on the MAL app! |
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Sevenlock said: Cruelseeker1002 said: Thanks for the feedback mate... Yea I've been getting a lot of feedback to slow down the chapters which I will do starting from the new chapters... No problem at all, mate! DM me if you want me to read any other chapters you write in the future. Oh and from writer to writer, I also wrote a webnovel myself for the MAL contest if you wouldn't mind giving it a read if you're got some time: https://www.honeyfeed.fm/novels/3701 If you enjoyed it, please give me a vote on the MAL app! yea aight I'll read it after my french class is done... |
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