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Dec 20, 2015 2:58 PM
#251
| here yer go i'm really quite bored so i made dis, use it if yer like Name: Zyryf Qynthyd Age: (somewhere between 200 and 2000000 will do) Gender: Male Personality: bored, exhausted, lazy, unmotivated, apathetic, suicidal Enjoys: technology in the sake of increased convenience, larger weapons in the sake of swiftly apprehending opponents, doing nothing, glancing at still waters and starless nights Despises: working, actually trying, anything repetitive, ants, living APPEARANCE Hair: long black, doesn't bother to cut it... is incapable of growing any facial hair Eyes: yellow Skin: Rather pale Clothes: he only ever wears pants and refuses to wear anything else... he just doesn't really care enough Body: not overly muscular, covered in scars... as well as blades, axes, spears, any sort of weapon that can lodged in his body... he's to lazy to remove them, and it seems to be quite practical Combat: is very competent at close range, but prefers to just throw whatever weapons that are lodged in his body until his 2 two-handed axes remain (these weapons are usually the ones lodged in his lower back with the handles facing upward) then he begins to fight in close range with a large area of effect as he fights with 2 two-handed axes. EFFECTS & TRAITS - immune to any status effects (including power-ups and the sort... as well as beer, poor guy) - incapable of dying permanently - has quite large strength - will suffer from reduced strength and attack rate if against repetitive fights (hates grinding) - regenerates health at a heightened rate - will gain in strength and attack rate if he does nothing for a certain period (caps out at 1 day) - doesn't require sleep (but will gain from it as he considers it as doing nothing) BACK STORY was a knight in an old kingdom until one day he realized he was immortal, and after a while became unmotivated to continue his knighthood and decided to do nothing. But even so he constantly plays a role in many important events in history. |
Dec 20, 2015 3:10 PM
#252
JohnnyMcG said: here yer go i'm really quite bored so i made dis, use it if yer like Name: Zyryf Qynthyd Age: (somewhere between 200 and 2000000 will do) Gender: Male Personality: bored, exhausted, lazy, unmotivated, apathetic, suicidal Enjoys: technology in the sake of increased convenience, larger weapons in the sake of swiftly apprehending opponents, doing nothing, glancing at still waters and starless nights Despises: working, actually trying, anything repetitive, ants, living APPEARANCE Hair: long black, doesn't bother to cut it... is incapable of growing any facial hair Eyes: yellow Skin: Rather pale Clothes: he only ever wears pants and refuses to wear anything else... he just doesn't really care enough Body: not overly muscular, covered in scars... as well as blades, axes, spears, any sort of weapon that can lodged in his body... he's to lazy to remove them, and it seems to be quite practical Combat: is very competent at close range, but prefers to just throw whatever weapons that are lodged in his body until his 2 two-handed axes remain (these weapons are usually the ones lodged in his lower back with the handles facing upward) then he begins to fight in close range with a large area of effect as he fights with 2 two-handed axes. EFFECTS & TRAITS - immune to any status effects (including power-ups and the sort... as well as beer, poor guy) - incapable of dying permanently - has quite large strength - will suffer from reduced strength and attack rate if against repetitive fights (hates grinding) - regenerates health at a heightened rate - will gain in strength and attack rate if he does nothing for a certain period (caps out at 1 day) - doesn't require sleep (but will gain from it as he considers it as doing nothing) BACK STORY was a knight in an old kingdom until one day he realized he was immortal, and after a while became unmotivated to continue his knighthood and decided to do nothing. But even so he constantly plays a role in many important events in history. Ok thanx :) |
Dec 20, 2015 5:58 PM
#253
| So we are starting with a training arc? Also the i think the chapters could be longer imo. Fine start though. |
Dec 21, 2015 12:49 AM
#254
LORDUBERKAISER said: So we are starting with a training arc? Also the i think the chapters could be longer imo. Fine start though. Ok I will write them as big I can but sometimes you can't add other things 'cause it'll ruin the chap Just saying... :D I hope,you liked it btw... |
Dec 21, 2015 12:51 AM
#255
| Oh i did like it. Its just that i find the length of each chapter somewhat disappointing. I understand what u say though. Also are you working on that map? We'd like to see it. Thanx by the way. |
Dec 21, 2015 1:14 AM
#256
| Being unemployed is not so bad... but being broke is! so since im as bored as fuk i decided to draw out my character... and it turned out quite well so here it is as you can see on one side there's an axe, its very convenient, it doesn't break, rust, or require any maintenance and is heavy as fuk. and as you see on the other side there's a side view of the dude with them axes in his back... i just realized after i drew it that it would be a lot more convenient and cool if it was stuck in the other direction, so he can just pull forward the handles of the axes above his shoulders. he can hold all these weapons on his body as his muscles are bloody sturdy and his regenerative abilities, so its hard to stick a weapon in him and even harder to remove one (but he can do it like its nothing cause he strong as shid). oh, and feel free to kill him off. |
Dec 21, 2015 1:59 AM
#257
| Well for chapter 4, I have nothing to comment. The only thing I can say, I'm looking forward to see the next chapter because there's a cliffhanger at the end of chapter 4 xD |
Dec 21, 2015 2:02 AM
#258
JohnnyMcG said: Wow you can draw so detail inside ^^Being unemployed is not so bad... but being broke is! so since im as bored as fuk i decided to draw out my character... and it turned out quite well so here it is as you can see on one side there's an axe, its very convenient, it doesn't break, rust, or require any maintenance and is heavy as fuk. and as you see on the other side there's a side view of the dude with them axes in his back... i just realized after i drew it that it would be a lot more convenient and cool if it was stuck in the other direction, so he can just pull forward the handles of the axes above his shoulders. he can hold all these weapons on his body as his muscles are bloody sturdy and his regenerative abilities, so its hard to stick a weapon in him and even harder to remove one (but he can do it like its nothing cause he strong as shid). oh, and feel free to kill him off. |
Dec 21, 2015 2:32 AM
#259
D5rkUnl0ck3r said: Woah~ I actually was very surprised with this. You did such a great work and compared to the first chapter, this is a lot better! You're definitely making progress with this! I love it ^^-*CRITICAL UPDATE* Chapter 4! : https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11662295/4/Eyes-like-the-blood notes: the name of the wolrd is Wi. It's finally decided ^^ I'm kind of happy Shadow returned, actually! I'm a little busy currently, but I will keep an eye on this thread for updates. |
Dec 21, 2015 2:43 AM
#260
Aoizuho said: JohnnyMcG said: Wow you can draw so detail inside ^^Being unemployed is not so bad... but being broke is! so since im as bored as fuk i decided to draw out my character... and it turned out quite well so here it is as you can see on one side there's an axe, its very convenient, it doesn't break, rust, or require any maintenance and is heavy as fuk. and as you see on the other side there's a side view of the dude with them axes in his back... i just realized after i drew it that it would be a lot more convenient and cool if it was stuck in the other direction, so he can just pull forward the handles of the axes above his shoulders. he can hold all these weapons on his body as his muscles are bloody sturdy and his regenerative abilities, so its hard to stick a weapon in him and even harder to remove one (but he can do it like its nothing cause he strong as shid). oh, and feel free to kill him off. thanks, i really don't usually put as much effort in my drawings since im a 3d artist, its really quite easy to add those details on a 3d model... as well as it to change overall shape, as i usually fuk up on them proportions as i just did in this drawing... damn he too skinny in the wrong places (the stomach area down, as well as the neck)... too bad the computer i use to make 3d models just broke down... and im broke... and unemployed...*sigh* |
Dec 21, 2015 2:53 AM
#261
LORDUBERKAISER said: Oh i did like it. Its just that i find the length of each chapter somewhat disappointing. I understand what u say though. Also are you working on that map? We'd like to see it. Thanx by the way. Still working on it... Yesterday I didn't have time for both writing and drawing but today I have... I have sketched the map do you want to post it? But in flags I'm halfway there... |
Dec 21, 2015 2:54 AM
#262
JohnnyMcG said: Being unemployed is not so bad... but being broke is! so since im as bored as fuk i decided to draw out my character... and it turned out quite well so here it is as you can see on one side there's an axe, its very convenient, it doesn't break, rust, or require any maintenance and is heavy as fuk. and as you see on the other side there's a side view of the dude with them axes in his back... i just realized after i drew it that it would be a lot more convenient and cool if it was stuck in the other direction, so he can just pull forward the handles of the axes above his shoulders. he can hold all these weapons on his body as his muscles are bloody sturdy and his regenerative abilities, so its hard to stick a weapon in him and even harder to remove one (but he can do it like its nothing cause he strong as shid). oh, and feel free to kill him off. Wow you really have talent man... -_- |
Dec 21, 2015 2:56 AM
#263
Aoizuho said: Well for chapter 4, I have nothing to comment. The only thing I can say, I'm looking forward to see the next chapter because there's a cliffhanger at the end of chapter 4 xD I'm going to work on chap 5 in 3 days sry for that... I'm very busy at Christmas times... :D I'm thinking also for writing a Christmas bonus chapter Whatya say? :) |
Dec 21, 2015 2:57 AM
#264
yaoi_renee said: D5rkUnl0ck3r said: Woah~ I actually was very surprised with this. You did such a great work and compared to the first chapter, this is a lot better! You're definitely making progress with this! I love it ^^-*CRITICAL UPDATE* Chapter 4! : https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11662295/4/Eyes-like-the-blood notes: the name of the wolrd is Wi. It's finally decided ^^ I'm kind of happy Shadow returned, actually! I'm a little busy currently, but I will keep an eye on this thread for updates. Yeah I like this project very much! It started like a test or something but I see some interest and that's what makes me happy to continue it! Have a nice day ;) |
Dec 21, 2015 3:30 AM
#265
D5rkUnl0ck3r said: No prob, you shud take your tiime =)Aoizuho said: Well for chapter 4, I have nothing to comment. The only thing I can say, I'm looking forward to see the next chapter because there's a cliffhanger at the end of chapter 4 xD I'm going to work on chap 5 in 3 days sry for that... I'm very busy at Christmas times... :D I'm thinking also for writing a Christmas bonus chapter Whatya say? :) Sure for christmas bonus chapter. why not |
Dec 21, 2015 5:59 AM
#266
| so i just read through your story, was pretty interesting, had to go through the previous posts to know which characters are which XD. anyways how about i draw out shadow or imperius? heck i got nothing to do right now so I'd do both if its okay with you. just show me some of those screens or image links for how you want imperius to look like(i can't open youtube my internet is slow to the extremes) as for shadow i think i can figure out from your drawing... i think, just tell me how muscular you want him to be and whats he wearing :) |
Dec 21, 2015 6:22 AM
#267
JohnnyMcG said: so i just read through your story, was pretty interesting, had to go through the previous posts to know which characters are which XD. anyways how about i draw out shadow or imperius? heck i got nothing to do right now so I'd do both if its okay with you. just show me some of those screens or image links for how you want imperius to look like(i can't open youtube my internet is slow to the extremes) as for shadow i think i can figure out from your drawing... i think, just tell me how muscular you want him to be and whats he wearing :) Hey there! You really want to draw them? Thank you!! Shadow is very skinny and muscular because he trains unstoppably... As for Imperius, you can ask /LORDUBERKAISER because it's his character :) And I'm sry for my drawing I know I suck :( |
Dec 21, 2015 6:34 AM
#268
D5rkUnl0ck3r said: JohnnyMcG said: so i just read through your story, was pretty interesting, had to go through the previous posts to know which characters are which XD. anyways how about i draw out shadow or imperius? heck i got nothing to do right now so I'd do both if its okay with you. just show me some of those screens or image links for how you want imperius to look like(i can't open youtube my internet is slow to the extremes) as for shadow i think i can figure out from your drawing... i think, just tell me how muscular you want him to be and whats he wearing :) Hey there! You really want to draw them? Thank you!! Shadow is very skinny and muscular because he trains unstoppably... As for Imperius, you can ask /LORDUBERKAISER because it's his character :) And I'm sry for my drawing I know I suck :( No problem m8, errr and sorry but you didn't answer one of my questions :0 , im a bit confused about what he is wearing... oh and also could you recap me on his character? |
Dec 21, 2015 7:04 AM
#269
JohnnyMcG said: D5rkUnl0ck3r said: JohnnyMcG said: so i just read through your story, was pretty interesting, had to go through the previous posts to know which characters are which XD. anyways how about i draw out shadow or imperius? heck i got nothing to do right now so I'd do both if its okay with you. just show me some of those screens or image links for how you want imperius to look like(i can't open youtube my internet is slow to the extremes) as for shadow i think i can figure out from your drawing... i think, just tell me how muscular you want him to be and whats he wearing :) Hey there! You really want to draw them? Thank you!! Shadow is very skinny and muscular because he trains unstoppably... As for Imperius, you can ask /LORDUBERKAISER because it's his character :) And I'm sry for my drawing I know I suck :( No problem m8, errr and sorry but you didn't answer one of my questions :0 , im a bit confused about what he is wearing... oh and also could you recap me on his character? Well he is wearing something like this: The only difference is that it's not open in he top |
Dec 21, 2015 10:36 AM
#270
D5rkUnl0ck3r said: JohnnyMcG said: D5rkUnl0ck3r said: JohnnyMcG said: so i just read through your story, was pretty interesting, had to go through the previous posts to know which characters are which XD. anyways how about i draw out shadow or imperius? heck i got nothing to do right now so I'd do both if its okay with you. just show me some of those screens or image links for how you want imperius to look like(i can't open youtube my internet is slow to the extremes) as for shadow i think i can figure out from your drawing... i think, just tell me how muscular you want him to be and whats he wearing :) Hey there! You really want to draw them? Thank you!! Shadow is very skinny and muscular because he trains unstoppably... As for Imperius, you can ask /LORDUBERKAISER because it's his character :) And I'm sry for my drawing I know I suck :( No problem m8, errr and sorry but you didn't answer one of my questions :0 , im a bit confused about what he is wearing... oh and also could you recap me on his character? Well he is wearing something like this: The only difference is that it's not open in he top here you go, it kinda looks a bit off i must of screwed up somewhere so i'm probably gonna re draw it... so if there is anything that you think i should change please tell :) |
Dec 21, 2015 12:32 PM
#271
JohnnyMcG said: D5rkUnl0ck3r said: <br />JohnnyMcG said: D5rkUnl0ck3r said: <br />JohnnyMcG said: <br />so i just read through your story, was pretty interesting, had to go through the previous posts to know which characters are which XD. anyways how about i draw out shadow or imperius? heck i got nothing to do right now so I'd do both if its okay with you.<br /> just show me some of those screens or image links for how you want imperius to look like(i can't open youtube my internet is slow to the extremes) as for shadow i think i can figure out from your drawing... i think, just tell me how muscular you want him to be and whats he wearing :) <br /> Hey there! You really want to draw them? Thank you!! <br /> Shadow is very skinny and muscular because he trains unstoppably...<br /> As for Imperius, you can ask /LORDUBERKAISER because it's his character :)<br /> And I'm sry for my drawing I know I suck :( <br /> No problem m8, errr and sorry but you didn't answer one of my questions :0 , im a bit confused about what he is wearing... oh and also could you recap me on his character? <br /> Well he is wearing something like this:<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> The only difference is that it's not open in he top <br /> here you go, it kinda looks a bit off i must of screwed up somewhere so i'm probably gonna re draw it... so if there is anything that you think i should change please tell :)<br /> <br /> Wow -_- You draw him exactly how I wanted him! Really thank you! Can I keep the pic? |
Dec 21, 2015 6:42 PM
#272
D5rkUnl0ck3r said: JohnnyMcG said: D5rkUnl0ck3r said: JohnnyMcG said: <br />D5rkUnl0ck3r said: <br />JohnnyMcG said: <br />so i just read through your story, was pretty interesting, had to go through the previous posts to know which characters are which XD. anyways how about i draw out shadow or imperius? heck i got nothing to do right now so I'd do both if its okay with you.<br /> just show me some of those screens or image links for how you want imperius to look like(i can't open youtube my internet is slow to the extremes) as for shadow i think i can figure out from your drawing... i think, just tell me how muscular you want him to be and whats he wearing :) <br /> Hey there! You really want to draw them? Thank you!! <br /> Shadow is very skinny and muscular because he trains unstoppably...<br /> As for Imperius, you can ask /LORDUBERKAISER because it's his character :)<br /> And I'm sry for my drawing I know I suck :( <br /> No problem m8, errr and sorry but you didn't answer one of my questions :0 , im a bit confused about what he is wearing... oh and also could you recap me on his character? <br /> Well he is wearing something like this:<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> The only difference is that it's not open in he top <br /> here you go, it kinda looks a bit off i must of screwed up somewhere so i'm probably gonna re draw it... so if there is anything that you think i should change please tell :)<br /> <br /> Wow -_- You draw him exactly how I wanted him! Really thank you! Can I keep the pic? errr... really? wow i thought i screwed up... oh and go ahead, it is your character ;) |
Dec 21, 2015 11:04 PM
#273
| I approve of johnny's request. Heres what he needs: LORDUBERKAISER said: LORDUBERKAISER said: LORDUBERKAISER said: LORDUBERKAISER said: Name: Imperius Kaiser Male Longish spiky black hair Light green eye color 23 Weapon: Gauntlets and armored elephant sized horse[think raoh] height:7ft[also very bulky] light brown skin[almost pale] Abilities: Energy blasts, super durable armor, cape that's split in half that can act as combat tentacles/extra arms, martial arts, super strength, punch really fast when his arms don't look like their moving,can hurt weaker guys and hinder stronger people with an imposing aura without moving. Final final update Watch this video to get the gist of his fighting style, height, and muscularity https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t4OKhATntM4 His armor is like these: http://berserk.wikia.com/wiki/Boscogn http://www.superbwallpapers.com/games/raoh-fist-of-the-north-star-kens-rage-2-17396/ His cape should black on the outside and white on the inside. Also it should be split all the way vertically in half and each half is torn in a way to look like 5 fingers on the bottom like in my prof pic. You have liberties for his face as long as it matches his personality which is somewhere in this thread. You also have liberites for the horse as long as its elephant sized, armored, and black. For inspiration, look up raoh from hokuto no ken and hideyoshi toyotomi from sengoku basara. Also his gauntlets should be extra large(think dynasty warriors gauntlets) and eternally stained blood red from all the people he's crushed. |
OutlawedDrifterDec 21, 2015 11:08 PM
Dec 21, 2015 11:16 PM
#274
LORDUBERKAISER said: I approve of johnny's request. Heres what he needs: LORDUBERKAISER said: LORDUBERKAISER said: LORDUBERKAISER said: LORDUBERKAISER said: Name: Imperius Kaiser Male Longish spiky black hair Light green eye color 23 Weapon: Gauntlets and armored elephant sized horse[think raoh] height:7ft[also very bulky] light brown skin[almost pale] Abilities: Energy blasts, super durable armor, cape that's split in half that can act as combat tentacles/extra arms, martial arts, super strength, punch really fast when his arms don't look like their moving,can hurt weaker guys and hinder stronger people with an imposing aura without moving. Final final update Watch this video to get the gist of his fighting style, height, and muscularity https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t4OKhATntM4 His armor is like these: http://berserk.wikia.com/wiki/Boscogn http://www.superbwallpapers.com/games/raoh-fist-of-the-north-star-kens-rage-2-17396/ His cape should black on the outside and white on the inside. Also it should be split all the way vertically in half and each half is torn in a way to look like 5 fingers on the bottom like in my prof pic. You have liberties for his face as long as it matches his personality which is somewhere in this thread. You also have liberites for the horse as long as its elephant sized, armored, and black. For inspiration, look up raoh from hokuto no ken and hideyoshi toyotomi from sengoku basara. Also his gauntlets should be extra large(think dynasty warriors gauntlets) and eternally stained blood red from all the people he's crushed. wait hes 23? for some reason i thought he was older, and is there some sort of picture or something to show how muscular he is... i can't open youtube, and basically his gauntlets are like weapons meng huo's in dynasty warriors 8 xtreme legends (not empires) right? |
Dec 21, 2015 11:17 PM
#275
JohnnyMcG said: LORDUBERKAISER said: I approve of johnny's request. Heres what he needs: LORDUBERKAISER said: LORDUBERKAISER said: LORDUBERKAISER said: LORDUBERKAISER said: Name: Imperius Kaiser Male Longish spiky black hair Light green eye color 23 Weapon: Gauntlets and armored elephant sized horse[think raoh] height:7ft[also very bulky] light brown skin[almost pale] Abilities: Energy blasts, super durable armor, cape that's split in half that can act as combat tentacles/extra arms, martial arts, super strength, punch really fast when his arms don't look like their moving,can hurt weaker guys and hinder stronger people with an imposing aura without moving. Final final update Watch this video to get the gist of his fighting style, height, and muscularity https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t4OKhATntM4 His armor is like these: http://berserk.wikia.com/wiki/Boscogn http://www.superbwallpapers.com/games/raoh-fist-of-the-north-star-kens-rage-2-17396/ His cape should black on the outside and white on the inside. Also it should be split all the way vertically in half and each half is torn in a way to look like 5 fingers on the bottom like in my prof pic. You have liberties for his face as long as it matches his personality which is somewhere in this thread. You also have liberites for the horse as long as its elephant sized, armored, and black. For inspiration, look up raoh from hokuto no ken and hideyoshi toyotomi from sengoku basara. Also his gauntlets should be extra large(think dynasty warriors gauntlets) and eternally stained blood red from all the people he's crushed. wait hes 23? for some reason i thought he was older, and is there some sort of picture or something to show how muscular he is... i can't open youtube, and basically his gauntlets are like weapons meng huo's in dynasty warriors 8 xtreme legends (not empires) right? Yep. Just go on youtube and type in raoh gameplay for ken's rage. Also did my armor pic links work? |
Dec 22, 2015 12:03 PM
#276
LORDUBERKAISER said: JohnnyMcG said: LORDUBERKAISER said: I approve of johnny's request. Heres what he needs: LORDUBERKAISER said: LORDUBERKAISER said: LORDUBERKAISER said: LORDUBERKAISER said: Name: Imperius Kaiser Male Longish spiky black hair Light green eye color 23 Weapon: Gauntlets and armored elephant sized horse[think raoh] height:7ft[also very bulky] light brown skin[almost pale] Abilities: Energy blasts, super durable armor, cape that's split in half that can act as combat tentacles/extra arms, martial arts, super strength, punch really fast when his arms don't look like their moving,can hurt weaker guys and hinder stronger people with an imposing aura without moving. Final final update Watch this video to get the gist of his fighting style, height, and muscularity https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t4OKhATntM4 His armor is like these: http://berserk.wikia.com/wiki/Boscogn http://www.superbwallpapers.com/games/raoh-fist-of-the-north-star-kens-rage-2-17396/ His cape should black on the outside and white on the inside. Also it should be split all the way vertically in half and each half is torn in a way to look like 5 fingers on the bottom like in my prof pic. You have liberties for his face as long as it matches his personality which is somewhere in this thread. You also have liberites for the horse as long as its elephant sized, armored, and black. For inspiration, look up raoh from hokuto no ken and hideyoshi toyotomi from sengoku basara. Also his gauntlets should be extra large(think dynasty warriors gauntlets) and eternally stained blood red from all the people he's crushed. wait hes 23? for some reason i thought he was older, and is there some sort of picture or something to show how muscular he is... i can't open youtube, and basically his gauntlets are like weapons meng huo's in dynasty warriors 8 xtreme legends (not empires) right? Yep. Just go on youtube and type in raoh gameplay for ken's rage. Also did my armor pic links work? Here you go, this turned out quite well. oh, and sorry i couldn't do the horse... |
BobbyElBDec 22, 2015 12:06 PM
Dec 22, 2015 4:03 PM
#277
| +unlimited cookies for you. It looks great!!!! Thank you! |
Dec 23, 2015 7:15 AM
#279
| *UPDATE* I will write the next chap after Christmas The map is not ready yet but I can upload it if you want, it still needs some things to be done though... But it's already sketched so let me know if you want... :) |
D5rkUnl0ck3rJan 9, 2016 2:34 AM
Jan 9, 2016 2:36 AM
#280
| Finally! I will start writing again tommorow :) Are u still interested guys? |
Jan 9, 2016 7:11 AM
#281
| of course m8! good to see you back, for a while i thought this thread was dead. |
Jan 9, 2016 7:39 AM
#282
JohnnyMcG said: of course m8! good to see you back, for a while i thought this thread was dead. It's good to hear that :) |
Jan 10, 2016 10:24 AM
#283
| *CRITICAL UPDATE* I just finished Chapter 5...meybe the next one will late but i have some awsome ideas for the next one! xD Read it here:https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11662295/5/Eyes-like-the-blood I'm really, really sorry for the delay... |
Jan 10, 2016 12:37 PM
#284
| Also the chap 5 soundtrack... https://m.youtube.com/watch?list=PLB7E86BA3D7DF6B23&v=IHQCeR8-FoQ Listen to this beautiful melody... :) |
Jan 10, 2016 11:58 PM
#285
| Yay finally aome action! Couple nitpicks though. I dont think soldiers would say hooray. It sounds kinda childish. More like yeah! Also i dont know if you forgot about kaiser's horse but you didnt mention it. And i think personally the theme you picked is unfitting. I think something more dramatic and intense would fit more(like the theme for my char for example). Other than that keep up the good work. |
Jan 11, 2016 1:19 AM
#286
KINGUBERMENSCH said: Yay finally aome action! Couple nitpicks though. I dont think soldiers would say hooray. It sounds kinda childish. More like yeah! Also i dont know if you forgot about kaiser's horse but you didnt mention it. And i think personally the theme you picked is unfitting. I think something more dramatic and intense would fit more(like the theme for my char for example). Other than that keep up the good work. Ok my friend, I will take your advise gratefully... But the theme is seriously dramatic, really... It's actually a mix of themes... ;) |
Jan 11, 2016 9:15 AM
#287
| hooray for the new chapter. and yeah the uber man (is it okay for me to call you this) is right, i think i should be more like "all hail Imperius" or something like: A war cry of 3000 of the strongest men trembles the earth, chanting their lord's name "Imperius!". Well i guess "HURRAH!" works to (its the more manly version of hooray). I'm also glad my character hasn't shown up yet (you haven't forgot him, right?). I think he just shows up when he really needs to. So he probably would only show up in a final battle part, or just when things get really bad. Also i think he deserves to have a quite significant fighting skill (combat expertise) gap in comparison to the other characters(the characters younger than him), since he is really old and has been in many fights throughout that time he should be more skilled combat wise. and it would be cool if he initially shows up when the ice dragon passes by him and sees his power as 0, and he just goes "meh" and continues doing nothing. aaaand i'm blabbering about my own character again... nice new chapter, keep up the good work. and how big you talkin about fer the next chapter m8 ;) |
Jan 11, 2016 10:47 AM
#288
JohnnyMcG said: hooray for the new chapter. and yeah the uber man (is it okay for me to call you this) is right, i think i should be more like "all hail Imperius" or something like: A war cry of 3000 of the strongest men trembles the earth, chanting their lord's name "Imperius!". Well i guess "HURRAH!" works to (its the more manly version of hooray). I'm also glad my character hasn't shown up yet (you haven't forgot him, right?). I think he just shows up when he really needs to. So he probably would only show up in a final battle part, or just when things get really bad. Also i think he deserves to have a quite significant fighting skill (combat expertise) gap in comparison to the other characters(the characters younger than him), since he is really old and has been in many fights throughout that time he should be more skilled combat wise. and it would be cool if he initially shows up when the ice dragon passes by him and sees his power as 0, and he just goes "meh" and continues doing nothing. aaaand i'm blabbering about my own character again... nice new chapter, keep up the good work. and how big you talkin about fer the next chapter m8 ;) Of course I have not forgotten about your character m8 ;) He will not show up in this ark but he will definitely show up... I'm glad that you like it :) |
Jan 30, 2016 4:40 AM
#289
| I want to say sorry for not updating... I really really don't have time! I'm going to university this year and it's very difficult. I need to study VERY much! |
Jan 30, 2016 11:06 AM
#290
| This looks like fun...I'll try. Name: Sora "So" Yarges Age:25 Gender: Male SO: Bisexual Personality: Cheerful,Adventurer,Sly,Kind,Brave,Otaku, and humorous. Likes: Food(especially Ramen),books, Anime and manga, board games, puns. Dislikes: Bad guys, Hentai, Hangnails, Hatred , People calling things "Autistic", Altruists, gross-out humor. Eye Color: He has Heterochromia so his eye colors are Blue and Brown. Skin Color: White Nationality: USA Hair Color: Sky Blue(kinda like Gintoki's hair color) Weapon: The Gigament. The Gigament is a indestructible weapon he found when he was 21. The Gigament can transform into a Chinese Broadsword, Bow and arrow and shield. The Gigament is disguised as an amethyst necklace. The ghost of his parents made the Gigament for Sora because they pitied him and if a heartless person steals it, he/she will be cursed until its given to its rightful owner. Sora's parents know his love of anime and manga, so the Gigament can stream kissanime and kissmanga in necklace form. Appearance Hair Style: Long and almost covers his eyes. Your typical anime hair Height: 6'1 Facial Hair: None Body: Slim but a little buff looking. Clothing: Like Advent Children Cloud but red and black and without that tiger badge thing on his right shoulder... Abilities: 4th Wall awareness (he likes to reference pop culture...a lot), Enhanced Jump,Strength and Condition. Story: Sora's parents got murdered when he was 20. Depressed, he ran away to a quiet town called "Dustorn" but the adults beated him up because they thought he was a demon because of his blue hair and hetrochromia. Depressed yet again, he ran away to a forest called Ashmore. He found The Gigament in Ashmore in necklace form. Once he found out about its true power, the Gigament granted him Super strength, jump and condition(lets not forget 4th wall awareness :3) and brand new clothes because the Dustorn citizens torn his clothing . He was able to train himself to use it with unique strategies. He survived everything the forest threw at him thanks to the Gigament. All his training alone made a positive and quirky attitude grow on him. He also realized the ghost of his parents made the necklace and had a heaping wave of emotions. Sora still lives in the forest wanting a new home and new friends. |
removed-userFeb 3, 2016 4:42 AM
Jan 30, 2016 11:27 AM
#291
| Sounds fun. So making myself though. Name: Willow Robin Gender: Female Hair: Blonde pixie SO: pansexual Personality: Psychopathic, masochistic dry sarcasm spewing machine. Eye color: grey Age: 19 Weapon: Ice hockey stick Likes: Automasochism, horror novels, eroticism, gore Dislikes: Having to feign emotions and pretend to care for other people. , altruism, heroics Height: 5'5" Skin color: pale, white Body: lithe, C-cups, Clothes: generally Jean hotpants, tights and a plaid shirt. Abilities: Manipulative, persuasive, A+ ice hockey player |
WhoremoansJan 30, 2016 11:37 AM
There's a lady who's sure All that glitters is gold And she's buying a stairway to heaven When she gets there she knows If the stores are all closed With a word she can get what she came for Oh oh oh oh and she's buying a stairway to heaven |
Jan 31, 2016 4:37 AM
#292
D5rkUnl0ck3r said: I want to say sorry for not updating... I really really don't have time! I'm going to university this year and it's very difficult. I need to study VERY much! Understood m8... You don't want to end up like me. (I'm still unemployed *sigh*) And wow, we're actually getting more new characters... Wasn't expecting that. |
Jan 31, 2016 3:15 PM
#293
| Thnx for the new characters! :) This encouraged me to write sooner! I will update in some days |
Jan 31, 2016 3:16 PM
#294
JohnnyMcG said: D5rkUnl0ck3r said: I want to say sorry for not updating... I really really don't have time! I'm going to university this year and it's very difficult. I need to study VERY much! Understood m8... You don't want to end up like me. (I'm still unemployed *sigh*) And wow, we're actually getting more new characters... Wasn't expecting that. I'm sorry to hear that m8 :( And thnx for understanding my situation... |
Jan 31, 2016 3:25 PM
#295
D5rkUnl0ck3r said: Thnx for the new characters! :) This encouraged me to write sooner! I will update in some days YAAA! I'm actually quite proud of my character. Cant wait to seen what happens next and where Sora will fit in this! |
Jan 31, 2016 4:38 PM
#296
| Name: Jirou Gender: Male Hair: Short, wavy, chocolate brown Eye color: Soft chocolate brown Age: 17 Weapon: Nunchuck Height: 184.3 cm / 6' Skin color: Light honey colored, a little tan Abilities: Strength, wizardry and magic, spirit and demon summoning |
Jan 31, 2016 7:41 PM
#297
D5rkUnl0ck3r said: JohnnyMcG said: D5rkUnl0ck3r said: I want to say sorry for not updating... I really really don't have time! I'm going to university this year and it's very difficult. I need to study VERY much! Understood m8... You don't want to end up like me. (I'm still unemployed *sigh*) And wow, we're actually getting more new characters... Wasn't expecting that. I'm sorry to hear that m8 :( And thnx for understanding my situation... Take your time, real life comes 1st after all, especially college. Also with a cast of 20+ chars, dont be afraid to cut some. |
Apr 8, 2016 4:41 PM
#298
| Hey everyone, long time no see huh? (Whoever reads it I mean lol)I HAVE not forgoten the fanfic I just want sure everyone understands this. Also I have another problem...it's not only the time that I can't find but the laptop I was writing is ready to die so, in the summer I will start another new story. But it will be very different from the the other. If you want info about the new story you can message me or comment or whatever.. ;) |
Apr 8, 2016 7:03 PM
#299
D5rkUnl0ck3r said: Don't worry about it! I've been quite busy myself so I totally understand. If you need characters when you start writing a new story, please feel free to use Reiynii (without changing him) haha!Hey everyone, long time no see huh? (Whoever reads it I mean lol)I HAVE not forgoten the fanfic I just want sure everyone understands this. Also I have another problem...it's not only the time that I can't find but the laptop I was writing is ready to die so, in the summer I will start another new story. But it will be very different from the the other. If you want info about the new story you can message me or comment or whatever.. ;) Thanks anyway~ |
Apr 9, 2016 12:58 AM
#300
reiynii said: D5rkUnl0ck3r said: Don't worry about it! I've been quite busy myself so I totally understand. If you need characters when you start writing a new story, please feel free to use Reiynii (without changing him) haha!Hey everyone, long time no see huh? (Whoever reads it I mean lol)I HAVE not forgoten the fanfic I just want sure everyone understands this. Also I have another problem...it's not only the time that I can't find but the laptop I was writing is ready to die so, in the summer I will start another new story. But it will be very different from the the other. If you want info about the new story you can message me or comment or whatever.. ;) Thanks anyway~ Thank you for understanding my friend :) Well in the new story will be new characters of course, are you interested? |
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