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Work in progress. Currently working on the bio.
Oh, and (not) sorry for the long bio.

Name: Natasha Elizaveta Irina Smirnov-Milyukov, nickname “Natasha”, alias "Rusalka"

Age: 22

Gender: Female

Personality: "The unrivalled beauty of spring, the lulling voice of summer, the seductive charm of autumn, and the unforgiving cold of winter - she is the perfect assassin, I tell you."

As a professional "cleanup artist", Rusalka is a logical thinker inside and a seductive charmer outside. She openly displays a natural attraction to those of a higher status or charm than her, and disregards those lower than her. Lady Luck also favors her a lot.
Rusalka's mind is hardwired to remain calm in (almost) any situation, allowing her to think with perfect clarity.

Well, was.

Current Mobster Rank: Rank 5: Caporegime

Current Charisma Points: 120

Abilities: Webweaver, also known as the "Arts of the Spider", is an assassin’s art of speechcraft and combat developed and refined to perfection by Natasha herself.
Description of your ability when used in the SCHEME / RP Play Story Line:
Webweaver's Bite is a method used to declare authority and control over a situation. Mostly used as a method of intimidation, Webweaver's Grasp is used more often during times of heated debate, physical bouts, and general unrest.
Webweaver's Venom is the name of a drink which Natasha herself made the recipe for. This barmix has the perfect amount and balance between sweetness, sourness, and spice, leading many to believe that the Venom is the panacea - the holy grail - of mixology. Natasha can concoct this drink everytime she has access to a bar.
When served to a character (NPCs included), the drink increases his/her opinion of Natasha, possibly ending fights involving Natasha.
Webweaver's Call is a collection of card tricks, butterfly knife flairs, and sleights-of-hand that Natasha learned and perfected. These illusions and plays could be used to pickpocket (steal something from) an unaware character, divert attention, or just for entertainment and show. Can also be used on NPCs.
Natasha can do tricks with a wide variety of items, including but not limited to cards, coins, small objects, accessories, kitchen condiments, and bottles.
Webweaver's Gaze allows Natasha to persuade and/or seduce another character to give up information. Can be used on both genders, but is more effective when used on males. Can also be used on NPCs.
Webweaver's Grasp gives Natasha the ability to "lock" certain pieces of information, essentially making a High Society member forget about it. This technique has not been perfected, and only allows at most three crucial pieces of information. These may be in the form of words, sentences, whole events, or specifics (e.g. addresses, dates and times, etc.).
Forgotten information can only be remembered by canceling this ability or if the person acquires the exact same information again through other means (e.g. word-of-mouth, printed media, etc.).
Description of your ability when used in the MOB WAR:
Webweaver’s Bite allows Natasha to deal damage to a single enemy equal to the average action points of everyone involved in the battle (decimals are rounded up).
Webweaver's Venom has two effects.
When used on Natasha or on an ally, it gives him/her the "Panacea" buff, healing him/her for 100% of his/her action points every turn for three turns.
When used on an enemy, it applies the "Marked For Death" debuff which damages him/her for four turns. During the first turn, the debuff deals 1 damage, with each succeeding turn increasing the damage by 1 (at the fourth turn, 4 damage is dealt). Once the duration ends, the enemy will be immune from this skill for the next two turns.
Webweaver's Call increases the action points of all of Natasha's allies by 50% for their next two turns (decimals are rounded up). If an ally has the "Panacea" buff, it instead increases his/her action points by 75%.
Webweaver's Gaze doubles Natasha's action points for her next turn.
Webweaver's Grasp locks an enemy's ability, preventing him/her from using it for his/her next two turns. If the enemy has the "Marked For Death" debuff, Natasha can instead choose to deal 8HP damage to the enemy.

Weapons of Choice: Natasha uses three weapons:
  1. a very elegantly designed customized butterfly knife, made exclusively for Natasha;
  2. a Magnum Model 29; and
  3. a push dagger as an extreme close-quarters combat weapon.

The push dagger is tucked neatly inside her vest, while the butterfly knife is hidden in a case disguised as a container for glasses. The 29 has a holster attached to the right side of the belt.




Mob to join: Natasha is the leader of the High Society.

Character biography:

A grunting office worker removed himself from his station and walked his way to the restroom. He washed his face, took out his handkerchief, and wiped himself dry.
“What do you think?” he said.
“Of what?” a voice replied, coming from inside one of the cubicles.
“The upcoming dance event of sorts. I heard our boss will attend.”
“Ah, the 'Prom of the Filthy Rich' or whatwasit, right?” came the reply as he opened the door and stepped out of the cubicle. He then washed his hands and wiped it clean with his own handkerchief.
“Yeah, yeah, but I don't think that's the name. Never thought the boss was that rich, actually.”
“Lucky him. And here we are sitting with all these debts and low salaries.”
“Not to mention the endless amount of shit the higher-ups throw at us,” the other man laughed.
“They throw at me. You’re the boss’s right-hand man. You don't get as much shit as me.”
This chatter was cut off however when a visitor approached the pair.
“This is Ascension Enterprises, right?” asked the lady.
“Yes, it indeed is. What’s your business here, if I might ask?”
“I’m here to talk to someone named… umm… G. Manfredo?”
“Geeman Freudo? I don’t think there is anyone here named like that…”
“No, dumbass,” the other office worker replied. “It’s G. Manfredo. Manfredo, the boss.”
At that moment, a speaker called out two names. “Marcus Hernandez, Emmanuel Bedford. Report to your stations.”
“Oh, I see. Well, just ask the receptionist - the lady in green over there - about the details then. Looks like we need to go,” said Marcus with a smile as the two of them walked past the lady.
The woman then took out a small piece of paper and wrote the names, before exiting the building.





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Name: Nero Van 'Diablo' Vladimir [1.8 meters tall][Lean Mesomorph body-type][Tanned][Silver Hair]

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Age:21

Gender:Male

Personality: Instinctive, to the point, and not afraid to speak his mind, Nero has learnt over the years not to hesitate. With him, what you see is what you get. There is no hesitance in what he thinks or do. Nero is mostly stoic and rarely angered, but the seriousness of his expression barely hides that fact. In battle, he merely acknowledges his foes, but when he meets an enemy of the same caliber as him, his usual stoic expression turns into an excited smile. The only time when he feels normal is when he has alot of power, be it in physical prowess or authority.

Current Mobster Rank: Thug

Current Charisma Points:0

Abilities: Decimating Swing.

Description of your ability when used in the SCHEME / RP Play Story Line:
Decimating Swing: Attacks all nearby units infront of him.

Description of your ability when used in the MOB WAR:
Decimating Swing: Attacks all nearby units infront of him, dealing 3 damage to all enemies hit.

Weapon: Warhammer - It's called Sion (pronounced as Sai-On)
Nero uses a war hammer. It is 1.9 meters in length, with the head slightly bigger than Nero's head.



Mob to join: High Society

Character biography
Thrust into a world of manipulation and power since birth, Nero was exposed to the cruelty and ugliness of the world at a young age. He was born in a family that had debts over their heads. He lived most of his childhood running jobs and being an errand boy for several shady figures in the shadows. At the ripe age of 13, the debts accumulated by his family could no longer allow Nero to be kept by his family, and he was shoved into the shadows that once gave him his daily bread. The life of a slave was unforgiving, the cruel tortures and demands of his masters hardening his already closed heart. As he grew up, he was taught to take the lives of innocents and was given opportunities to live as a shadow's hand. It was until his family was killed in a power struggle between two opposing forces that dominated part of the city he lived, that he started craving for power. When he heard of High Society, he decided to put at an end to the shadows. With the trusty hammer he forged during his younger years, he mashed their heads cleaned. The commanding feeling he felt at that moment could not be described as anything else but happiness. He wants power,not for his body, not for his mind, but for his peace. For a long time, he had been led by power, taken by power, and given power, which paled the blood of his kin. Perhaps if he was the most powerful person to exist in all mankind, perhaps he could find the peace he had been taken from. It seemed lonely to be at the top, but at least no one would die around you. "I desire power, not for killing, not for revenge, but for the only thing that could help me feel human again."


And an unnecessary extra to show that I'm edgy as fuck.
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Name: Minerva 'Braniac' Wynn Chase

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Age: 16

Gender: Female

Personality: She's a sane person who sometimes likes killing for a living. Minerva is very clever aswell. She can also be childish, despite this she can also act classy when needed. Minerva's normally more friendlier to people she knows she can trust i.e the leader of High Society

Current Mobster Rank: 10 - Thug

Current Charisma Points: 0

Abilities: Parkour
Description of your ability when used in the SCHEME / RP Play Story Line:

Parkour: This makes her able to wall run, jump over crates/barrels easily, slide down poles and jump father then the average person.

Description of your ability when used in the MOBSTER FIGHT:
Parkour: The next amount of damage that she takes is halved
Weapon:Throwing knives

Mob to join: High Society

Character biography : She grew up with her parents who where in the mafia, but they were in seperate mafia groups so they had to be very careful all the time. Her mother was in Tartarus and her father was in Luminaire. They hated being away from each other but loved each other so much they had Minerva the smartest little girl you would've ever known. In fact she even came up with a plan to help her parents. The plan lasted 10 years. Minerva doesn't tell anyone the plan she said she swore not to and still won't share it. For years she didn't participate in anything mafia related for her and her parents sake. One day her father was found dead in a river. Minerva's mother went into a deep depression and blamed Minerva because she came up with the plan. Soon the police came and killed her mother, they somehow figured out that she was in Tartarus. She decided to go to High Society and not have the same fate as her mother.




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@BobMcBobbeth: approved :)


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@MysticalPhoenix: approved :)

@Fisting: in review..


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Unless other admins have a reason to nullify this, I present you the seal of approval.
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@Jesus_H_Macy: The bio looks really good. but still missing the abilities, Scheme ability and Mob War Ability :D


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Name: Alfonz Wagner

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Age: 20

Gender: male

Personality: outgoing, perceptive, sly, kind

Current Mobster Rank: 10 - thug

Current Charisma Points: 0

Abilities: the best shield user ( Reflection )

Description of your ability when used in the SCHEME / RP Play Story Line: Alfonz reflects on his stout heart, leaving him impervious against psychological and mental assault; by using this ability, Alfonz cannot be threatened into submission, or into giving information unless they're 5 charisma higher than him

Description of your ability when used in the MOB WAR: reflects the damage Alfonz received from his enemy for the next turn, he himself receives the full damage, and the enemy receives the damage they inflicted to Alfonz. ex. Alfonz uses reflect ---> thug a attacks Alfonz for 5x so thug a and Alfonz receives both 5x damage each

Weapon: Carbon steel folding shield

Mob to join: Luminaire

Character biography : Once the heir of a very powerful house, a nobility by birth, Alfonz lived his life easily and happily, but that did not last. His father was being tried for treason and his mother left for another man, yet Alfonz smiled, he hid his pain inside his heart, solemnly vowing "I will not let this happen again, I will protect those I deem worthy, though my house and title had left me, one thing still remains in my heart....my noblesse oblige." He left his broken down home in sorrow, training under a very powerful master in the way of the sword, Kenjiro Arata the strongest swordsman there is, yet Alfonz was very bad, his strikes were not connecting at all, he trained and trained but to no avail. One day, his master summoned him and said "Alfonz, you have trained hard, yet without results."
Alfonz, mortified by this, replied "I'm sorry master, I will train harder."

"no, it's okay, the sword is not for you Alfonz, the way you moves, the way you strike , and the shape of your mind, spirit, is not for the sword."

"then how can I protect the ones that I care about if I don't know how to fight ?"

"you already know how to fight, but it was misplaced, you never have any connection to the way of the sword."

"then what shall I use master ?"

"think about it yourself, the answer is in your heart."

Alfonz kept thinking about it day and night not taking any visit to his master, until one day at the bar he frequents, a bunch of thugs came in and started to wreak havoc with their bats, as he was in deep thought, he felt danger and immediately grabbed the nearest thing near him, it was a tray. Alfonz blocked the thug's bat with the tray , and suddenly he found his answer. Effortlessly Alfonz blocked all the attacks aimed at him and returned the force of that attack to their owner. the thugs fell one by one as he made his way to the door, and as the last thug fell he went out and put the tray to the nearest table. Alfonz came to see his master, but he had already left leaving him a case of wood and a single letter.

"Dear Alfonz, if you've read this letter then it seems you've found your answer, sadly I'm already on my way to continue my journey, farewell, let us meet again, my disciple.
Signed Kenjiro Arata"

After reading through the letter so many times thankfully, Alfonz opened the case his master gave him, and the content was a jet black folding shield and another letter.

"This is the strongest shield in the world, given to me by a stranger i met in my travels, use it well."

He took the shield and wore it, a perfect fit, taking the shield and letters, Alfonz went off into the night, continuing his journey to protect. Etching so many tales on his path and this one is the guardian's favorite , the particular tale that led him came across a teenage boy by the name of Glast Luminaire, and how he became one of his subordinate. it isn't the only tale Alfonz hold dear, he had so many tales, one that led him to be a leader, and one that tells of his greatness in battle, but that is for another story, because this is the tale of the guardian and the violinist.
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I'm not philtecturophy, so I'm sorry for disappointing you. As an admin though, I will still review your character.

Alfonz reflects on his stout heart, leaving him impervious against psychological and mental assault; by using this ability, Alfonz cannot be threatened into submission, or into giving information

This is overpowered in the sense that no mobster's scheme ability would be able to work against him. Make it so that the skill only works against people with 5 charisma points higher than him, and it shall be acceptable.

reflects the damage Alfonz received and protects him until Reflection was ready again (4 turns ) , damage protection full, damage reflection 0.5 ( or damage protection 0.5, damage reflection 1.5 ) to the one that damages Alfonz.

Now, this is the real problem.
From what I see, your skill negates all damage taken by Alfonz for 4 turns, and reflecting 50% of it back to the attacker.

Now, note the section in bold. You're implying that the effect of Reflection lasts until it finishes cooldown, at which point you can simply reactivate it again and be immune for another four turns. Now, even you should be able to see what's wrong with your power. You're basically making Alfonz immune from every attack and mob war skill made by every mobster in the RP.

I'd suggest making it so that he can reduce the damage your character takes next turn by 50%, just like Minerva's mob war ability.

Now, as for your biography, I'm not philtecturophy, but I can give you my own words as an aspiring writer myself. The story is good, typical medieval stuff. If you're planning on writing your novel in English though, you'd need a lot of work on your grammar, punctuation, and general errors (such as making all the first letters of your sentences capital).

The story is not fitting to the setting of this RP club as well, seeing as you used the terms "swordsman," "knight," and other similar words. However, I'm assuming this is due to the fact that he's the main character of the medieval-themed light novel you're writing.

tl;dr: Generally good story, but could use some refining.
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ty @nice for the review, i'm gonna edit my char now.
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@nice how about now ? I made it so that he receives the damage and reflects the damage back to the user.
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Alfonz reflects on his stout heart, leaving him impervious against psychological and mental assault; by using this ability, Alfonz cannot be threatened into submission, or into giving information unless they're 6 charisma higher than him

5 charisma points higher than him, not 6. If I allowed this it would be unfair to the others, yeah? So change the value to 6.
Once that's done, unless other admins have a reason to nullify this, I present you the seal of approval.
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@philtecturophy okay, done
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@nice okay, done
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@shubaitsu: looks good and approved ^_~


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@philtecturophy thx, i will look for pics now
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@shubaitsu: Then you are ready to start RP. You can directly join the RP here: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=1521423&show=100

The RP in that thread is actually over for the members in Luminaire. So you can start by just coming from the front door of the house, and Glast will open the door, Glast is now still at Sardonyx sky garden with the other mobsters. Once you finished our little Scheme RP there, you will earn Charisma Points like the other from RP-ing there ^_~


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Name:Snow
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Age: 16
Gender: Male [But looks rather effeminate
Personality:Quiet
Current Mobster Rank: Rank 10: Thug
Current Charisma Points: 0
Abilities: "Accurate sniping"
Description of your ability when used in the SCHEME / RP Play Story Line: He is really good at sniping with perfect aim just over 1.3 miles away
[b]Description of your ability when used in the MOB WAR: He can set up at 1.3 miles away distant to give his Family covering fire
Weapon: L115A3 rifle Sniper
Mob to join: Luminaire
Character biography Snow has been trained by his father at the age of 6. Snow father called Ice been training him how to aim and breath properly when sniping. Snow dad got placed into Jail for life time when he was 13, He then took on contracts in order to keep alive, No one suspected the 13 year old killed so many people and at such distant either As he hit the age of 16 he entered the Mob/Mafia family of Luminaire To serve them
His hair is pure white as his left eyes is white his right eye is yellow he alsp has a rather pale skin complexion. He does wear female girls tricking people purposely or not due to his effeminate features. People will notice he is a quiet male that tends to enjoy by himself where he will be reading books, Listening to classical music, Drinking herbal tea or perhaps keeping his sniping abilities up to date by being on firing range or even hunting. He do hopes one day he will able to play a violin like the boos does, And perhaps also manipulate people emotions with the music he hopes to learn in the future
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