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Jul 10, 2016 11:47 PM
#101
@frogoten: Hello friend, you character looks good :) But slight modification: 1. Need to specify which mob to join. 2. Scheme and mob war ability needs to be repaired. 3. Use the format as given. 4. Mob war ability needs to be ability that damage person physically. I give an example below, but you can change it if you want. 5. Use the BBCODE below as template . Suggestion: Abilities:Disguise maser. Description of your ability when used in the SCHEME / RP Play Story Line: Disguise maser: He can infiltrate other gangs and get info from person having lower charisma than Jimmy. Description of your ability when used in the MOB WAR: Disguise maser: Dodge half of the incoming attack and damage them 4 HP (the enemy's HP is deducted by 4 when its Shino's next turn) Suggestion: [b]Abilities:[/b]Disguise maser. [b]Description of your ability when used in the SCHEME / RP Play Story Line: [/b] [b]Disguise maser: [/b]He can infiltrate other gangs and get info from person having lower charisma than Jimmy. [b]Description of your ability when used in the MOB WAR:[/b] [b]Disguise maser: [/b] Dodge half of the incoming attack and damage them 4 HP (the enemy's HP is deducted by 4 when its Shino's next turn) |
Jul 11, 2016 4:04 PM
#102
Work in progress. Currently working on the bio. Oh, and (not) sorry for the long bio. Name: Natasha Elizaveta Irina Smirnov-Milyukov, nickname “Natasha”, alias "Rusalka" Age: 22 Gender: Female Personality: "The unrivalled beauty of spring, the lulling voice of summer, the seductive charm of autumn, and the unforgiving cold of winter - she is the perfect assassin, I tell you." As a professional "cleanup artist", Rusalka is a logical thinker inside and a seductive charmer outside. She openly displays a natural attraction to those of a higher status or charm than her, and disregards those lower than her. Lady Luck also favors her a lot. Rusalka's mind is hardwired to remain calm in (almost) any situation, allowing her to think with perfect clarity. Well, was. Current Mobster Rank: Rank 5: Caporegime Current Charisma Points: 120 Abilities: Webweaver, also known as the "Arts of the Spider", is an assassin’s art of speechcraft and combat developed and refined to perfection by Natasha herself. Description of your ability when used in the SCHEME / RP Play Story Line: Webweaver's Bite is a method used to declare authority and control over a situation. Mostly used as a method of intimidation, Webweaver's Grasp is used more often during times of heated debate, physical bouts, and general unrest. Webweaver's Venom is the name of a drink which Natasha herself made the recipe for. This barmix has the perfect amount and balance between sweetness, sourness, and spice, leading many to believe that the Venom is the panacea - the holy grail - of mixology. Natasha can concoct this drink everytime she has access to a bar. When served to a character (NPCs included), the drink increases his/her opinion of Natasha, possibly ending fights involving Natasha. Webweaver's Call is a collection of card tricks, butterfly knife flairs, and sleights-of-hand that Natasha learned and perfected. These illusions and plays could be used to pickpocket (steal something from) an unaware character, divert attention, or just for entertainment and show. Can also be used on NPCs. Natasha can do tricks with a wide variety of items, including but not limited to cards, coins, small objects, accessories, kitchen condiments, and bottles. Webweaver's Gaze allows Natasha to persuade and/or seduce another character to give up information. Can be used on both genders, but is more effective when used on males. Can also be used on NPCs. Webweaver's Grasp gives Natasha the ability to "lock" certain pieces of information, essentially making a High Society member forget about it. This technique has not been perfected, and only allows at most three crucial pieces of information. These may be in the form of words, sentences, whole events, or specifics (e.g. addresses, dates and times, etc.). Forgotten information can only be remembered by canceling this ability or if the person acquires the exact same information again through other means (e.g. word-of-mouth, printed media, etc.). Description of your ability when used in the MOB WAR: Webweaver’s Bite allows Natasha to deal damage to a single enemy equal to the average action points of everyone involved in the battle (decimals are rounded up). Webweaver's Venom has two effects. When used on Natasha or on an ally, it gives him/her the "Panacea" buff, healing him/her for 100% of his/her action points every turn for three turns. When used on an enemy, it applies the "Marked For Death" debuff which damages him/her for four turns. During the first turn, the debuff deals 1 damage, with each succeeding turn increasing the damage by 1 (at the fourth turn, 4 damage is dealt). Once the duration ends, the enemy will be immune from this skill for the next two turns. Webweaver's Call increases the action points of all of Natasha's allies by 50% for their next two turns (decimals are rounded up). If an ally has the "Panacea" buff, it instead increases his/her action points by 75%. Webweaver's Gaze doubles Natasha's action points for her next turn. Webweaver's Grasp locks an enemy's ability, preventing him/her from using it for his/her next two turns. If the enemy has the "Marked For Death" debuff, Natasha can instead choose to deal 8HP damage to the enemy. Weapons of Choice: Natasha uses three weapons:
The push dagger is tucked neatly inside her vest, while the butterfly knife is hidden in a case disguised as a container for glasses. The 29 has a holster attached to the right side of the belt. Mob to join: Natasha is the leader of the High Society. Character biography: A grunting office worker removed himself from his station and walked his way to the restroom. He washed his face, took out his handkerchief, and wiped himself dry. “What do you think?” he said. “Of what?” a voice replied, coming from inside one of the cubicles. “The upcoming dance event of sorts. I heard our boss will attend.” “Ah, the 'Prom of the Filthy Rich' or whatwasit, right?” came the reply as he opened the door and stepped out of the cubicle. He then washed his hands and wiped it clean with his own handkerchief. “Yeah, yeah, but I don't think that's the name. Never thought the boss was that rich, actually.” “Lucky him. And here we are sitting with all these debts and low salaries.” “Not to mention the endless amount of shit the higher-ups throw at us,” the other man laughed. “They throw at me. You’re the boss’s right-hand man. You don't get as much shit as me.” This chatter was cut off however when a visitor approached the pair. “This is Ascension Enterprises, right?” asked the lady. “Yes, it indeed is. What’s your business here, if I might ask?” “I’m here to talk to someone named… umm… G. Manfredo?” “Geeman Freudo? I don’t think there is anyone here named like that…” “No, dumbass,” the other office worker replied. “It’s G. Manfredo. Manfredo, the boss.” At that moment, a speaker called out two names. “Marcus Hernandez, Emmanuel Bedford. Report to your stations.” “Oh, I see. Well, just ask the receptionist - the lady in green over there - about the details then. Looks like we need to go,” said Marcus with a smile as the two of them walked past the lady. The woman then took out a small piece of paper and wrote the names, before exiting the building. A seemingly endless line of tuxedo-wearing men and gown-adorned women walked down the velvet carpet and into a certain manor, one built for and only for the elite. "House of Gold", as they call it - hallways, curtains, and even tables lined with shimmer and glitter for but the most fitting of guests. Multimillionaire businessmen, superstars, and a mix of both have been invited to and are here for the "Autumn's Dance", a ball to be held in the finest location in all of Europe. Natasha exited her '72 antique model, and made her way to the red carpet leading to building's lobby. She dropped her keys on the valet-in-waiting, giving the clean-shaven man a word of advice. "Don't scratch it," she said, before being escorted through the entrance. The man nodded, and proceeded to take over the car's driver seat. She was then greeted by another valet, holding a record book flipped open. "Your pass, madam?" "Here you go," replied Natasha as she brought out a black card with golden edges and handed it to the man wearing a red vest. "And here, ma'am. Name and signature." Natasha wrote down the name "Rusalka Smirnov" and quite the elegant signature, one that is most fitting for someone (pretending to be a member) of the high society. The valet then stepped out of the carpet, and the doors opened. Security guards were stationed at every nook and cranny of the manor, making her job harder than it already was. With a sigh, Natasha discretely flicked a small lever, disguised as a zipper, on her satchel, resulting in static being emitted from small speakers planted inside her ears. //Cough if you get a clear copy of my voice, Rusalka.// Natasha coughed, as if clearing her throat. //Noted. Your target is Giovanni Manfredo, head of the Ascension Enterprises. You are also tasked to eliminate secondary targets, given the opportunity. I take it you already knew this, yes?// Silence followed, coming from Natasha's end. //Follow the plan, Rusalka. We have the whole thing set up. All you need to do is to pick up and pick off. Are we in the clear?// "Fine evening," Natasha replied, looking at one of the numerous guards. The man in the black tuxedo then bowed his head in gentlemanly respect. //Very well. Weave the web.// The transmission was cut off, signaling the end of the briefing and the beginning of what was to become the birth of the most notorious pair in modern times. Natasha went to the bar counter situated near the entrance, her long blue gown following her steps. She took a seat at one of the seven bar stools and asked for a glass of cherry amaretto. "Comin' right up," replied the bartender, quickly seizing, squeezing, and shaking all the ingredients, whipping up a cherry amaretto within a minute's time. The tender then prettied up the drink, adding a lemon garnish and a few other aesthetics to the mix, before placing the glass in front of the lady. "Thank you," Natasha replied, winking at the man, before standing up and leaving the minibar, placing a few thousand-pound bills in the counter as tip. "Now then, first door down this corridor. There we go," she silently uttered. She then went inside the ladies' washroom and went inside the third cubicle. A change of clothes greeted her entrance, and hidden within the folds of cloth was her first weapon. "A fresh set of perfume-smelling clothes, and a push dagger. Not bad, though I'd prefer something a little flashier," she commented before changing attire, ditching her long gown and satchel for a bartender's get-up. Natasha then went back to the bar, crossing paths with the male bartender from earlier. "Phase one complete," they said to each other, as the man handed the tips over to her and left for the washrooms. "Sorry for the wait," the new bartender - Natasha - said, preparing a few glasses and metal shakers. "What will your drinks be?" "Just some whiskey, and a Caesar's for the lady in red over there," a middle-aged businessman replied, pointing his finger at a woman wearing a short crimson dress not far away from the bar counter. With a few quick motions, Natasha seized, squeezed, and shook all the components for the two drinks with as much finesse as a world-class bartender. After all, efficiency is Natasha's trademark. "Here you go, sir. A glass of whiskey," she said, raising her free hand slightly. A young man serving as a waiter approached her, silver tray in hand. "To the lady in red," she whispered to the waiter's ear, motioning her hand to the direction of the woman of choice. "Say that the man sends his regards." The clean-shaven man nodded, and made his way to the guests. Natasha, however, was restless. That man... He was the valet, wasn't he, she thought to herself, keeping note of the valet-turned-waiter's facial features. Her focus was removed, however, by a man in a white tuxedo who sat in the bar stool in front of her. "A glass of amaretto, please. A sweet one," the man said, keeping his gaze focused on one of the many women entering the lobby. The word 'amaretto' came out of his mouth with strong and stern 'o's and 'e's, and rolling 'r's. "Ah, comin' right up." Natasha quickly fixed her sleeve and went to work, grabbing the ingredients and crafting a fine glass of cherry amaretto. She then impaled a (unusually) large olive on a toothpick, and garnished the drink with a slice of lemon and a small umbrella, reminiscent of summer's heat. "Here you go. Glass is a bit full, but it will do," said Natasha, handing the glass over to the man. The man, still looking at the female guests-of-honor, reached for the glass and went for a quick sip. The heavy olive, however, fell out of the glass and landed square on the guest's pure white tux, staining the jacket with cherry red. "Bloody hell!” exclaimed the man, placing the glass back to the countertop and reaching for his handkerchief. "I don't even have a change of clothes," he said with an expression of shock and disbelief. "I'm so sorry, sir," replied Natasha, bringing her face close to the man. He looked up and stared at her bottle-green eyes, to which Natasha responded with a soft gaze of her own. He was lost to her eyes. Natasha made one swift motion and grabbed the man's pen which rested snugly in his breast pocket. "Ah, ne-nevermind, nevermind. It was my fault," replied the man after a few seconds of silence. "The stain's minor. Don't worry about that. I'll just finish this hand-crafted amaretto of yours, if I may." "If you say so, then please, go on," said Natasha as she reached for the wineglass's stem, purposefully not letting the man see her other arm. The man reached for the glass as well, causing him to accidentally and carelessly touch her soft fingers. He immediately retracted his hand, and Natasha gave the glass to him. Two pairs of men and women then made their way to the stairside bar and ordered drinks of their own. The seductive mood was destroyed, so to speak. The bartender from earlier then returned and whispered a few words to the girl. "We've set it up. I'll be taking these," he said as he reached for the thin and transparent wires arched over her ear. He pulled on these wires, removing the small speaker planted inside. She looked at the man in the white tuxedo as she walked away. He was clearly jealous of the bartender, who got so close to her. The two made eye contact, and she winked her vividly-tinted green eyes. The man materialized a smile of sensual glee. "Two martinis, a bourbon, and mild champagne," she said as she left the bar. The bartender replied with a stern nod as he smiled. Natasha quickly walked into the ladies' washroom and started changing attire once more. She removed her contact lenses and replaced the bottle green tint with those of a hazel tinge. Her waist-length auburn wig was also replaced with a wig of slightly shorter length and dirty blonde color. She then tied it up neatly with a few hairpins, resulting in the hair dressed up as fitting perfectly in a formal event. Her clothes were undone, and in its place, Natasha wore a black ladies' tuxedo and pants she removed from the fresh corpse lying inside the third cubicle. She clipped an identification card to its breast pocket, bearing the name "Alexandra Worth" and the title "Head of Security". She then fastened a pistol holster and a taser in her belt before locking the silenced sidearm in place. In front of the mirror, she cleared her throat and stood firmly. "Alex Worth, head of security," she said repeatedly as she perfected her false British accent. After eight trials, she put on the intercom snugly on her ear, badge in her pocket, left the scene and made her way to the lobby's west wing. The doors of the west wing stood wide, each side guarded by a man in black, further justifying the fact that security for an entire gathering of silver spoons is no joke. No easy access. And yet, Natasha, a hitman, walks bearing the false identity of "security head". "Any suspicious identities so far?" Natasha asked one of the guards, giving the man her taser. "None have been reported yet, Chief Worth," the guard replied. "Two hundred and thirty one guests are present as well." "Double-check that data. There seems to be more than two hundred and fifty here. No room for uninvited guests," replied Natasha, before turning towards the other guard. "And you, scan the perimeter for me. First floor up." The other guard answered with a "Yes, yes" like some easygoing fellow. "I need a reply." "On it." "Good." Natasha then proceeded to move to the ballroom, the prime attraction of the manor. The ballroom could be described as "set in glittering gold" - claret floor carpet giving surface to the gold-and-marble tables, the marble chairs, and the gold tableware. A large kitchen could be accessed by entering a large hardwood door, leading to the west wing's far end. Beside it is a smaller, though still large archway which grants people access to a spacious unisex bathroom of wood, marble, jade, and stone - once again fitting for only the richest. "Alex Worth, head of security," said Natasha - Alex - to the head waiter as she presented her badge. "I'll need you for a minute." "Marcus Hernandez, standing in currently as head waiter. As you wish, Madame," the Hispanic replied as he followed Alex. The two went to the washroom and proceeded to talk. "Are there any problems with the security?" asked Alex, locking the bathroom door. "Yes, one of the fellows seem to be out-of-place, if not downright unusual. We've been receiving quite the amount of questions and complaints regarding him." "Aside from him, are there any problems?" "Not much. Some of the floor and kitchen crew have been missing though. I'd like to know where they currently are," the head of the floor crew replied. "Give me a minute then." She then turned around and spoke to the small mic attached to her tuxedo collar. "Worth here, head of security." //Can hear you perfectly, miss.// "I'd like to request you guys to do a sweep through the ground floor for any kitchen or floor crew. Some are missing." Natasha received a moment of silence, followed by nothing but static. //Didn't quite catch that. Please repeat.// Putting her hands on her waist, Natasha repeated the request. //Got it. Mobilizing twelve men.// Alex then turned around and looked the head waiter in the eye. "You heard them. They'll be finding your men soon enough." "Ah, such good news. I'll be- Blood trickled down the marble-lined floor as the head waiter struggled to breathe with the presence of a gaping wound in his chest. Alex wiped her push dagger clean of the red fluid with the man's necktie before putting it back in her belt. The man fell down as soon as the tie was let go. "Never trust a stranger, Marcus Hernandez. But then again, I'm currently not a stranger, am I?" "You're not, I believe," a voice from behind Natasha said, opening the door with a spare key, a huge briefcase in hand. "At least to those in your web." "So? Have you taken care of the security cameras yet?" "Job's done. All I did was send sparks flying to the hard drives, and the system fries itself. This is Marcus Hernandez, right-hand man of the primary target, right?" he replied, giving the taser back to Natasha. "I suppose you've met the man as well?" "Yes. I stained his clothes back at the bar. Awkward with women, it seems." "Some speed seduction should do the trick then," the man said while fitting the waiter's corpse inside the briefcase. He then sprayed the bloodstains with a canister of liquid, causing the blood to boil and evaporate, leaving no visible trace behind. "You are seducing him, right?" "Yes, I am. He fell in love with my green eyes." "Sucker for green eyes then? I'm a blue eyes lover myself. And by the way, you could drop the accent." "Yeah, yeah. Enough with the chitchat. Everything set up?" "We've got one man by the fuse, one near the escape vehicle, among others. And here's the final mask you'll be sporting." The man then plucked two keys from the ring. One was labeled "Dressing Room" and had a wooden keyhead, while the other was a plain black key. "You know what to do", he said as he handed the keys over. "Thanks, Sinclair." With these words, Natasha opened the doors, and the two exited the room. Natasha removed her wig and contact lenses, exposing her true face - shoulder-length pale blonde hair, paired with cold pale blue eyes. She then wore a simple long-cut gown, painted in iridescent blue. Sinclair carried Alex Worth's clothes and the two parted ways. The clicks of Natasha's remarkably high-heeled sandals were muffled by the House of Gold's carpet, which covered the entirety of the manor. She made her way back to the dining hall, where most of the few hundred guests stood. "Good evening," she said repeatedly, glancing back and forth at the many renowned guests, men and women alike. They replied with either a simple "good evening to you," a curt bow or nod, or an offer to join them in their tables. Being a man (a woman, actually) of quick but careful action, Natasha declined all the offers for drinks. "The cherry stain should still be in his clothes..." She climbed up the grand staircase which served as the dining hall's in an effort to get a bird's-eye view of the hall, but her eyes met those of a few bachelors. The men all looked alike, the only difference visible lying on their hairstyles. "Good evening, fine miss," the first of the three men said. "You seem to be alone." "Are you perhaps lost, Madame?" said the second bachelor. "Shall we guide you to your destination? We know our way around these parts. No, actually, more like the whole floor plan," continued the third man. "Ah, I could certainly use some help," Natasha replied. Normally, she would just brush off hot-blooded young men looking for someone to hit on, but considering the valuable piece of information the men held, they'd work well as pawns. "Well then, how about you join me for a quick chat?" she added, sporting her seductive gaze and coquettish smile. Natasha gestured, and the three men followed the lady and descended the stairs. "Garcon, a table, please," she ordered, and the waiter led them to a table of four near the velvet-lined walls. "Take a seat, milady," the first of the man quickly said, pulling back a seat as if mimicking common fairytale gentleman manners. Natasha complied, and sat down. The three pawns also took their seats shortly afterward. "So then, what are your names?" she asked, looking at the men. "I'm Anton Dominico, and these men are Arvin and- The man sitting in front of Natasha quickly stopped Anton's words, imparting some words of his own. "I am Arman Dominico. Pleasure to meet you." Arman stretched his arm and offered a handshake. Natasha smiled at the man, accepting the offer. The man gently pulled her hand and kissed its back, causing Natasha to express intrigue towards the trio. "Why, you certainly are advantageous," she said. "Triplets, I assume?" "We are indeed," Arman laughed. "And yes, we are triplets. Born under a lucky star, I believe." After a brief pause, Arman continued. "And you, miss? What's your name?" "Natasha Elizaveta Irina Smirnov-Milyukov," she answered in her addictively beautiful Russian accent. "Quite a long name, right? I prefer to be called Natasha though," she added with a smile. "My, that's a long name. Befitting for you though, for some reason," said Anton. The other two boys expressed their agreement. "So, Lady Natasha, what- "Please," Natasha cut off the boy's sentence. "Drop the 'lady'." "A-Ah, very well." Arvin cleared his throat and started again on his sentence. "So... Natasha... What is it that you need our help with?" "I'm finding someone I met earlier. He's a man, standing at a little less than six feet tall, and wears a white tuxedo with a red stain. It was a cherry drink's stain, if I remember correctly." "And who is this man? Do you like him?" the three men expressed their interest. "Just a man. I prefer younger men after all," Natasha answered, staring directly at the young Arman's eyes. "He dropped this pen of his, and it looks priceless, so I might as well return it. Wouldn't you agree?" "Ah. Leave such a task to us then. We'll find him for you in no time. But first..." Anton took out his phone. The others followed as well. "Your number, mademoiselle?" Natasha let ought a short laugh, and punched in her phone number. "You really are advantageous." "We are indeed. Now then, shall we go?" "Let's go then," she answered. The four then made their way up the second floor of the mansion. The second floor was just as extravagant as the first - gray fur carpets lining the floor, priceless artworks decorating the walls, and, as expected, guards in both sides of the hallway, the number easily amounting thirty, if not more. "So, how are we going to find the man?" "He's wearing white with a red stain, about six feet tall, and has his hair tied up in a bun. Can't miss him." "Well, I think it'd be best if we split up then? Two on the second floor, and two on the topmost." "I'll accompany Natasha then," Anton quickly responded, gently placing his hand on Natasha's shoulder. "Now, shall we make haste? We'll check the second floor." "Quick on the uptake as always, eh?" Natasha commented. "The early bird catches the worm, and the early man catches the finest lady," he winked. "Now I'm curious as to why such a man as you is still single," Natasha replied with a smile. With those words, the pair walked towards the west wing's corridor, where faint echoes of the noise from the dining hall reached their ears. They asked the station guards and maintenance crew for clues regarding the man's whereabouts, but their efforts bore no fruit. "Give me a second," Anton said as he reached for his phone. He dialed Arvin, and the two had a conversation while the pair was walking. "Arvin, have you found him?" he said in an accent traced by a hint of Hispanic lineage. "Have not. Seems to be a ghost, that guy." Anton sighed. "Must be on the other side." "Probably. We're getting to it." "Gotcha." He ended the call, and fixed his eyes on Natasha. "That's half the floor. Shall we go check the other half?" "I may need to take a break. These high heels are killing me. Not used to them," she answered as she walked past Anton, stopping in front of one of the many rooms in the wing. "Let's sit down for a while then," Anton replied as they entered. This particular room - bearing the name "231" - was built to mimic a lounge, the furniture being made of dark wood, carpets dyed a deep red-purple, and a stone fireplace to fit the theme. "Ooo. Sexy." "It is, isn't it," Anton remarked. "Well, feel free to take a seat there." "Thanks. You know your way around here, and that certainly helps." "Well, we're actually the owners of this manor," he replied, taking off his coat and placing it above the coffee table. "I put in more funds than the other two though," he winked again in a (feeble) attempt to impress Natasha. The girl replied with a gentle smile of her own. "Well, this is surely a nice mansion you have here." "Yes, it is. We're actually planning to have the garden near the entrance transformed into a pond, to give off that... 'sophisticated' but 'serene' feel." "I can picture that." Natasha took off her sandals and placed them atop the coffee table as well. "What's the exact purpose of this mansion? A party-place for the filthy rich?" "Nothing like that in the beginning. It was actually supposed to be our house, the three of us. Pa moved us to Spain just weeks before finishing construction. Well, better to turn this place into a lively gathering for the upper class than letting it gather dust and mold. Last week was actually the first time I saw this place, fully-furnished and all. And boy was I happy. Arvin and Arman were too." "Oh. And you guys don't have girls yet?" "None at the moment. We're pretty picky, and we didn't like ninety percent of the girls we saw." "How about me then?" Natasha leaned towards Anton. "Am I part of that ten percent?" Anton moved back in reflex, his heart racing as the girl's white-blue eyes pierced him. "I'd say you're the best of the ten percent I've met." "I'm flattered," she replied, straightening her posture. She then looked around the room, searching for any objects that might interest her. Her eyes finally met a bottle of fine red wine. Natasha smirked in delight. She got up and walked towards the bottle, grabbing it by the neck and preparing three glasses as Anton cleared and cleaned the coffee table. "Oh wow. Will you look at this beauty," Natasha remarked. "A double-magnum bottle of fine Blanc 1947. Just where does your money come from, that you managed to get hold of such a spectacular work of art?" "It got listed in an auction. You could say I took advantage once again." "And for how much? I'm assuming around forty grand?" "Higher, actually," Anton replied. "Around fifty." "And what is such an expensive bottle of liquor doing here, lying in this table?" "A few of my acquaintances came over. I decided I'd give them a sip of one of the rarer drinks." "I won't do that for an acquaintance," Natasha laughed. "They won't even get a taste of any cheap vodka in my collection. Well, not like I collect cheap liquor." "Now, that's surprising. You have a bar?" "No, I just collect rarities as my hobby. I do have the skill of a bartender though," she replied, handing over a glass to Anton. The man thanked Natasha and took a sip of the drink. "That's post-war wine for you. Such exquisite flavor." "Does it?" Natasha took a sip of her own. "You're right. It tastes great. Worth the weight in gold." "So... Are we still going back to finding that man of yours?" "Probably. I'm still immersing myself in this drink. Do you know what ichor is?" "The blood of the gods, is it?" "Yes. That divine fluid said to course through the veins of the deities themselves. Don't you think ichor is wine in its purest form?" "I agree that wine is the most... divine liquid of them all, so you may be right about that," Anton laughed, following Natasha's own gentle chuckle. A series of knocks followed the pair's laugh, to which Anton responded with a "Come in." The man entered, sporting tinted avaitor shades and a black-and-white tuxedo attire, the same uniform worn by the many, many security personnel present in the manor. "Miss Milyukov? You said you needed help with finding a man?" "Yes, I do indeed. Have you found someone matching the descriptions?" "We seem to have, miss. Someone from the other side of the floor," he answered as he closed the door and walked towards the pair. "And you are?" "Anton Dominico, one of the owners of this manor," Anton replied, standing up and offering the man a handshake. The guard accepted the handshake and pulled Anton towards him rather violently, to which the former responded with silent shock. The man then drew out his pistol and pointed the barrel at Anton's abdomen. A singular muffled, silenced sound of pistol fire followed. Anton gasped for air as he coughed up blood, limping and dying mere moments later. "Better if the target openly identifies himself. Makes it easier for both parties," the man said, looking at Natasha before putting the lifeless body down. "Oh? I never thought he was one of your targets. And here I was just starting to extract information from him too..." The man took of his shades, revealing his sharp-shaped eyes, each of which bearing a different color - one a distinctly faint whitish blue, the other nut brown. "Don't worry. At least what I said was true. Your target's been spotted roaming the east wing," he said as he wiped the pistol's barrel clean of Anton's blood with a handkerchief. "That's quite the pistol, Sergei," Natasha commented, gazing at the pistol with an interested look. "Smith&Wesson?" "Mmm-hmm. It's called 'The Governor'. Fires shotgun shells instead of the usual bullets. Quite the dirty tool, if you ask me. And what's that you're drinking?" "Oooh. It's a Blanc '47. Post-war wine, I think. Guy says he bought it for fifty grand," Natasha replied, handing the third glass over to Sergei. "Taste it. It's full of flavor." "Is it now?" In one huge gulp, Sergei downed the wine, ending his 'taste test' with a refreshing "ahhh". "I must say, this is good. Mind if I have more?" "I do. Save the refreshments for a better time." She pried off the wineglass from his large, callous hands, and placed it above the coffee table. "So? East wing, second floor?" "Yes, exactly. Now, if you'll excuse me, I'll be hunting down the rest of my targets. Seems to be brothers, my victims." "Two more, then?" "Yes, two more. Arman and Arvin." Natasha laughed for a while, to which Sergei responded with a curious look. "Anything funny?" "Well, I've actually met all three of them. They're at the third floor, searching for my target. Also, nice move, having Sinclair tell me the room number. He was all like 'Two-hundred and thirty-one guests are present as well'," she replied, following it with another laugh. "Gotcha. Here's to our success then." "Yes, to our success." As Sergei held the doorknob in his right hand, Natasha reached for his left. The man looked at the woman, sporting another curious look. "What is it?" "Don't tell me you're leaving me with the body." "Oh, right. Almost forgot. Close call," he said, quickly dragging the corpse across the room and placing it under the sofa. "Quite the clumsy move, but it will do. Well then, I'll be off." Sergei exited the room, his pistol safely tucked in his belt. Natasha then put on her high heels and walked out the room, giving the double-magnum bottle of wine one last look. "I'm sure we'll meet again, ichor," she said, exiting Room 231. Natasha quickly headed towards the eastern wing, where she spotted a familiar face - the face of a hot-blooded hopeless romantic in his mid-20's - the face of her target. Now then, the question is how I could get close to him. Well, good thing I have this in hand. Taking out her pen (well, it's actually his pen), Natasha walked towards the man, who was then moving at a brisk pace. "Ah, excuse me, excuse me, sir," she called out, but to no effect. "Sir, sir, excuse me." The man proceeded to ascend the staircase leading to the third floor, leaving Natasha behind. Natasha quickly followed, almost tripping a number of times. "Sir. Sir! Excuse me, sir." The man continued his brisk walk. Natasha was left with no choice. "Sir Manfredo?" Sir Manfredo turned around, tracing the source of the voice. His attention was caught by Natasha's raising her hand, to which he responded by turning around and walking towards her. "May I... help you?" he said, trying hid best to maintain eye contact. "I may be mistaken, sir, but is this pen yours?" The man in the white tux quickly noticed his pen in Natasha's hand. He then searched for the pen in his breast pocket, confirming its absence and that the pen was indeed his. "Oh, I... uh- I believe so." "Oh, thank goodness. I almost forgot to give this to you. It seems you left this when you left the bar near the entrance." "Oh, have I? I must be thinking about a lot of things back then." "Things like?" "Probably how so much of the female guests are beautiful," he laughed. "May I know the name of my savior?" "It's Natasha. Natasha Milyukov." "Miss Natasha... Giovanni Manfredo, uh... head of Ascension Enterprises, one of the leading names on the field of nanotechnology. May I invite you for ummm... a drink, Miss Natasha?" he said, stuttering and pausing a number of times (probably due to his weakness to women). "I accept your invitation, monsieur." "Please, Miss Natasha, come in." Taking off her high heels, Natasha walked into Giovanni's room. It was a (surprisingly) simple room, fitting for two guests or so. A king-size bed stood elegantly as the humble space's centerpiece, and only some parts of the room were lined with gold and glitter. A minibar could also be seen from one corner of the room, sporting only a few bottles, and no more than ten glasses. Quite a refreshing sight, if anything else. "This is quite... nice," Natasha commented, walking towards the bar and grabbing a bottle. She noticed a few details which didn't fit the picture, most unusual being the presence of a used wineglass carelessly left sitting above the bar counter. "It is... It is indeed. Even I was shocked at how different the individual rooms looked. In comparison to say, the hall... this is quite an impressive sight in its own." "No, I meant the bar, but what you said is true as well," Natasha laughed. She popped open the bottle of champagne and filled two glasses of the drink. "I know there's no reason for celebration, but here you go." "Why, uh... thank you." Natasha sat down on the bed, gesturing Giovanni to sit beside her. The man complied, making sure to leave a distance between him and her. "Oh? Quite the shy one, aren't you, Giovanni?" she said as she leaned towards the man, closing the gap between them. She then took a sip of the champagne. "I'm, ummm... not used to talking to women." "Are you now? That's charming." "Charming? Aha..." With a coquettish smirk, Natasha pushed Giovanni, lying him down on the bed. Natasha went on top and started to remove her gown. "O-Oh, what- "Exactly what you thought, Giovanni. I figured I'd take away a bit of your shame. Now then, shall we begin?" Peeling off the top part of her dress, Natasha closed in on the still-shocked Giovanni, her firm breasts covered only by her lingerie pressing against his tuxedo. "Shall. We. Begin?" she repeated. "I don't know what's happening, but I think I like this," he replied, finally exposing a smile, his face beet red. "Oh, you will like this. I know I will." Natasha undid the buttons on Giovanni's tuxedo, stopping at the fifth button. She then parted the clothes, revealing his chest. "Quite the body you have here, Mr. Manfredo. Impressive." With a quick swipe, Natasha reached for the push dagger clipped to a makeshift holster tied around her right leg and pointed it at the man's chest, its sharp tip touching his skin. "Checkmate, head of Ascension Enterprises. Quite a price you have above your head." "Wha- "Multiple conflicts with several underground organizations has led someone to hire me to bring you down, Giovanni. You could say this is consequence equal to the crime. And your time is due," she replied, pushing the man's abdomen down with her other hand. "I didn't do anything wrong!" "Emmanuel Bedford says otherwise." "Bedford?" "If I recall correctly, he was the right-hand man of your right-hand man, Marcus Hernandez, who has now sadly passed away due to unknown causes." "Marcus, de- You killed him?" Giovanni's pants and gasps of air gradually went louder as both of them spoke. "Who knows. Well, at least I am here to kill you. Memento mori, Sir Giovanni Manfredo." At that moment, the doors to the bathroom opened, and a man wearing nothing walked out, bottle of wine in hand. His other hand held a towel, which he used to cover his privates. Both Natasha and Giovanni were undoubtedly shocked - after all, seeing such a lunatic prancing around in nothing but a towel is nothing close to common. "E- The man slowly closed in on Natasha and Giovanni, not uttering a single word. This moment of silence lasted for almost half a minute, ending with the unknown lunatic standing just an inch away from the edge of the bed. "Manfredo, right? Giovanni Manfredo?" "A-Ah, ye- The man then forcefully slammed the bottle, smashing it to shards as the leftover wine splashed on the bed and on Giovanni, whose now-broken face clashed against the bottle. Natasha jumped backward in surprise. Giovanni just laid there, still breathing, but not uttering any sound. The unknown man then pulled out a gun from his towel, making it appear as if he was grabbing... something. He pointed the Smith & Wesson .500 at Giovanni, delivering a loud finishing blow. The gunshot's noise was especially loud and echoed throughout the room. "O-Oh wow..." Natasha couldn't believe what she just saw. A random naked man, smashing a bottle at and then shooting Giovanni? Who in their right mind would believe that? "Nice... shot," she added, clenching her push dagger tightly as the man approached him. "Nice tits," the naked man replied, handing over to Natasha the bottleneck. He then walked back in the bathroom, staying inside for a good two minutes before once again walking out, fully clothed. Natasha remained silent the whole time, her mind still processing what happened. "Well then, I'll be going now. See you," he said before jumping off the balcony and plummeting three floors down. "What just... happened...?" Security entered the room, their eyes meeting quite an unexplainable sight - a dead man, shot in the head, lying in a bed splashed with wine and glass, and a woman on top of him, half-naked and holding a bottleneck. "Ma'am, please come with us." "So? Still don't remember anything?" Why... How did... What just happened? "Well, missy, if you won't talk, you can't walk. Let me repeat myself." The old fat policeman cleared his throat and took a small whiff of his cigarette before proceeding. "The alleged murder of Giovanni Manfredo. Do you know anything, missy?" Natasha looked at the man in uniform, her confusion waned, though still present. "I, uh... There was a man in there. I was Sir Giovanni's partner for the night, but then this, how do I put it... strange naked man came out of the bathroom with a wine bottle in his hand. Then he just... smashed the bottle." "Then, why weren't you able to do anything?" he laughed. "Well, I think anyone would be shocked." "How do you explain this then?" The policeman reached for a portfolio underneath his table and took out a picture from inside it. The image showed Giovanni's face, shards of glass still planted on his skin, and a gunshot wound leaving its mark on his skull. "This. Don't tell me the guy has a pistol as well...?" "He had one, actually. A 500." "Such a powerful gun, in the hands of some lunatic? Are you fucking messing with the police?" the policeman replied. "True story, man. It ain't my problem if you don't believe it," Natasha shrugged. "Now, listen here, you. If you had told the truth from the very start, then we might have been over here. You might even be taking your rest by now." Natasha clicked her tongue in irritation. "Ugh... What am I going to do with you..." "Chief, I've returned," another voice said as the doors of the interrogation room opened. A skinhead entered, dressed in a clean black uniform, as opposed to the chunky policeman's sickening blue tinge. "The boys said they need you there." "Oh, do they now? Fucking hell. Keep an eye over this missy. We ain't done here." The doors closed, marking the fat man's exit. The man in black sat in front of Natasha and leaned over the table, looking to his side a few times before saying his words. "Fancy seeing you here, Rusalka. I guess something went wrong?" "Target confirmed dead, and yet I messed up my exit. Fuck." "Well, the first part is all that matters. Both targets down. And I heard Sergei's targets were all eliminated as well, and he said he has his own story to tell. But I'm more interested in hearing yours first. So? What happened?" "A lot of things," Natasha sighed. "Look, can't you just free me now? The black key should be somewhere inside my satchel." "Sure thing, missy." He walked towards a plastic chair, where Natasha's bag sat neatly. Surely enough, a small black key was placed inside. "In case of emergency. Man, the Society sure is prepared," he commented, unlocking Natasha's handcuffs. "They are. It can get pretty scary at times." "Even though it's scary, it's handy. I mean, if it weren't for them, you'd be rotting in jail by now." "You're forgetting something wrong, Danny. If it weren't for them, I wouldn't be in any of this mess. I wouldn't even have this job." "Is it weird if I can picture you in my head, poor, homeless, and selling your body for a living?" "No, it's not. I'm pretty sure I'd be exactly like that if I wasn't taken in." "A poor and homeless Natasha? I'd pay to see that. Well, anyway, here's your boring excuse of a satchel, and here's the key to the lockers. Oh, and don't worry about the old man. I'm pretty sure he knows about what's going on by now." "Got it. So, where's the man in question?" "Listen here... Your job is practically over now. The yacht is yours as payment, so doing this won't be necessary. You're part of the bigshots now! You could own the streets! So why waste time on some random, naked teen?" "I'd like to settle things with him. You could say I'm thinking of him as a pretty interesting guy." "Settle things with him? Are yo- Nevermind. Fine. The man's been spotted by one of our informants just near the Marina. Near the yacht." "What's his status?" "He's riding the 72 you drove. You know, the one you used to get in." "Wait, what? There's only two sets of- Moments of silence followed, broken by the casual chatter of police over the radio. "Don't tell me... No, I couldn't be wrong. The valet. It's him. And the waiter. It's him. As well as one of the guards..." "Correct, Natasha. Intelligence identifies him as Alexei Mager, a gun-for-hire, with no affiliations. Kind of like a mercenary." "Why didn't you say sooner?" "Well, you know how notoriously slow our intelligence arrives..." Natasha sighed, and both of them exited the room, heading towards the lockers at a brisk pace. "Anything else I need to know?" she asked. "Well, the car has this huge-ass E-shaped scratch in its hood. You can't miss it." At a hurried speed, Natasha changed clothes, this time wearing her final facade - a white-and-blue police uniform. She strapped her weapon of choice - a Model 29, able to go toe-to-toe with Alexei's .500 - and exited the police station. "Well then, I'll be off," Natasha bowed. "What's with the formal attitude? You're scaring me," Danny laughed. "Well, I hope to see you soon, and congratulations on the promotion!" |
Nice--Jul 18, 2016 6:04 AM
Jul 12, 2016 1:16 AM
#103
@Nice: Very awesome bio friend :O Your character is approved as discussed :) So you can join the Luminaire Scheme anytime. The current one is finished. Though we have to think of a good entrance to your character. Since the next thing is the Mob War Training. But even in the Mob War training there will be a story in each post, like battling while talking and having events. So your character can even join directly in the middle of the training and gives some ability show off, up to you :D |
Jul 14, 2016 6:50 AM
#104
RESUBMIT. KEK Name: Nero Van 'Diablo' Vladimir [1.8 meters tall][Lean Mesomorph body-type][Tanned][Silver Hair] Picture: Age:21 Gender:Male Personality: Instinctive, to the point, and not afraid to speak his mind, Nero has learnt over the years not to hesitate. With him, what you see is what you get. There is no hesitance in what he thinks or do. Nero is mostly stoic and rarely angered, but the seriousness of his expression barely hides that fact. In battle, he merely acknowledges his foes, but when he meets an enemy of the same caliber as him, his usual stoic expression turns into an excited smile. The only time when he feels normal is when he has alot of power, be it in physical prowess or authority. Current Mobster Rank: Thug Current Charisma Points:0 Abilities: Decimating Swing. Description of your ability when used in the SCHEME / RP Play Story Line: Decimating Swing: Attacks all nearby units infront of him. Description of your ability when used in the MOB WAR: Decimating Swing: Attacks all nearby units infront of him, dealing 3 damage to all enemies hit. Weapon: Warhammer - It's called Sion (pronounced as Sai-On) Nero uses a war hammer. It is 1.9 meters in length, with the head slightly bigger than Nero's head. Mob to join: High Society Character biography Thrust into a world of manipulation and power since birth, Nero was exposed to the cruelty and ugliness of the world at a young age. He was born in a family that had debts over their heads. He lived most of his childhood running jobs and being an errand boy for several shady figures in the shadows. At the ripe age of 13, the debts accumulated by his family could no longer allow Nero to be kept by his family, and he was shoved into the shadows that once gave him his daily bread. The life of a slave was unforgiving, the cruel tortures and demands of his masters hardening his already closed heart. As he grew up, he was taught to take the lives of innocents and was given opportunities to live as a shadow's hand. It was until his family was killed in a power struggle between two opposing forces that dominated part of the city he lived, that he started craving for power. When he heard of High Society, he decided to put at an end to the shadows. With the trusty hammer he forged during his younger years, he mashed their heads cleaned. The commanding feeling he felt at that moment could not be described as anything else but happiness. He wants power,not for his body, not for his mind, but for his peace. For a long time, he had been led by power, taken by power, and given power, which paled the blood of his kin. Perhaps if he was the most powerful person to exist in all mankind, perhaps he could find the peace he had been taken from. It seemed lonely to be at the top, but at least no one would die around you. "I desire power, not for killing, not for revenge, but for the only thing that could help me feel human again." With a shaky breath, Nero left the desolate place known as 'home'. Ironically, he would miss the broken town, what with the blood, violence, morbid experiences, and he doesn't even know the name of his home. A crooked smile formed on his face, pulling the left corner of his lips and feeling the pain of the swollen muscle. The brutality of his exit from his home left his body nearly broken, although eventually he knew he'd recover in no time. 20 years of hell magically does this to a broken soul and body, even if beyond repair. The cool night air seemed to disagree with his mentality, and brushed the warm, fresh scars on his body. He hissed slightly at the stinging sensation. Nero could not stop any moment, despite the exhaustion, so with his War Hammer strapped on his back, he trudged forward. Each contraction of muscle crippled his already rapidly declining stamina. But Nero gave no thought of this, as his goal was miles away and each small centimeter mattered. As he walked, his past memories found its way to his mind. A droplet of sweat slid down Nero's face. He had to do this, or there will be no freedom, no humanity, no power left for him. The rickety walls of the small favela-esque building provided enough cover for him to cower down. With his freshly forged War Hammer in his hands, gripped and ready to swing, he contemplated on the possible ways to end the reign of his slavers. A clean mash to their heads would do. No, some of them wear armor that are too tough to be found in his area. Too risky. But he had no other choice. High Society. was far too important and promising to let go of this opportunity. There were 5 figures, all crowded around a circular wooden table. Bets of money, position, weaponry, women and children were made. Good. It would serve as a great distraction. Nero scanned his vicinity to check for any guards, then peeked over the wall.- 2 bullets. The silvery head of a loaded gun grazed past his shoulder barely, with the 2nd one penetrating deeply into his left limb calf. Nero's face contorted in discomfort, barely registering the fact that his blood was seeping from his limb. Quickly, he hid behind a wall that looked too worn out to still be upright. Nero ripped a part of his bloodied tunic and made quick work of his injury. Meanwhile whispers of his name provoked his curiosity. " That mongrel! Taking out 4 of us! Find him immediately!". So there's still 1 left alive. I thought I'd done his head in clean. Fortunately, he was hiding in a shaded area. Were it not for the dark night and shadows looming everywhere, he'd be dead by now. A figure sped past him with no hesitation, then a 2nd, then a 3rd. The last man looked like one of the bastards he crushed. The heavily bandaged head and nearly gouged out left eye confirmed it. Nero had nowhere to go now. He muttered a curse, then made to stand up before feeling the jolts of pain around his whole body. Fuck, this'll take a lot of time. Each second I waste here, the more chances I die. Nero then felt a familiar sensation that he knew all too well. No way out of this. No gun, he barely had strength left, it was a dark night, he felt the ground to be a welcoming spot of rest. Ah yes, the same feeling when he learned of his family's debt, when he faced a man with a gun on his head, when he had been taken. Absolute hopelessness and despair. But all the same, he knew he had to escape, escape to the promising land of power and control. There is nothing left of him, nothing to give and fight for, nothing to lose. All he had was the desire of feeling human again. He wanted power. A boiling sensation bubble in Nero's chest, the only other emotion he had felt other than despair and hopelessness. Nero stood up, gripping his hammer for support. Nothing will stop me. I will get my power. Nothing will stop me. I will make it. Nothing will stop me. I will feel human again. Nothing, will stop me. . Nero then took a step forward, then another. Each step caused every cell in his body to yell at him to stop. Nothing will stop me. The heavy steps of a battered, bruised and bloodied Nero called forth the attention of the 3 men. Nero stepped out of the shady area and dashed across the favela houses. Grazing bullets whizzing by and yells of an angered man tearing through the silent night sky. His left foot just stumbled across a brick. Shit. That's bound to get a nasty bruise in the next 24 hours. Another quick whizzing of a bullet grazing his left temple. How the hell do they not run out of bullets?. Nero then vaulted over a a window opening, on to a balcony without its rails, leaping onto a nearby roof and tumbling. A few sprays of hot lead missing his right side. Quickly he hopped onto a nearby ledge that led onto another roof. It was a miracle that his body was used to the weight of his hammer, else he fell and not only get a nasty shot in him, but he may well splatter his head over a sharp piece of a wooden wall or a worn out brick. Another hop away and into another small house, an idea suddenly sprang from his mind. Quickly Nero took an object that looked like a dumbbell head and threw it down the stairs, in hopes of diverting their attention toward the sound source. He then vaulted away again, but his hopes were crushed as footsteps soon followed hot on his trail. Nero's anger seemed to control him for a moment and seized his movements, stopped behind a wall. The moment he saw a figure of a man , he quickly swung his hammer right before said enemy could make a shot. The loud clunk of iron mixed together with a loud cracking of a million bones shattered filled the house and the body swiftly fell onto the ground. Wasting no time, Nero grabbed the pistol from the ground and headed down the stairs before the last two enemies could follow through. Opening the door, he suddenly found himself at the far opposite of his original destination. He quickly dashed towards another house and entered it. Climbing the stairs and leaping away again, he hopped onto another roof. The same routine continued, with him managing to kill the 2nd goon, albeit with a bullet to his right side of the torso. It was impossibly dark, but he knew his way around the whole favela, inside and outside. His breaths were already quick and rigged and found it hard to actually lift his own arm. The blood seeping through the bandage on his torso didn't help at all. And to make matters worse, he's cornered at a small warehouse. Nero's sight couldn't decide on whether to blurr or to distort from the exhaustion. The warehouse was empty, and Nero was crouched down on the ground, trying to regain what was left of his own energy. Then the unmistakable silhouette of the last enemy he had to face appeared before him, armed with a shotgun and a belt full of grenades, with one molotov hanging on the left side of the belt.. Nero heard the man snort in amusement. He could practically feel the smile on the man's face. In no less than 3 seconds, the gap between him and the man closed completely with a shotgun pointed to his face. Nero sluggishly attempted to stand, the blood loss already making it impossible to stand straight. The weapon was suddenly aimed at his chest. "You have attempted to foil the organization the first time, and this will be the last. There's no turning back now. I'd say nice try, but it'd be an insult to a slave like you." The man fired after his speech, spraying 6 bullets to his chest, narrowly missing his heart. The force of the bullets knocked Nero down, and his vision blackened. This is it.. Nero laid on the ground, finally deciding that sleep needed to catch up. To hell with waking up, he just wanted to sleep. But something kept gnawing at him. He couldn't fathom it. He only knew he felt something, something inside him. Memories suddenly came flooding into him, replaying his whole life, his experiences, his survival. No, not here. Not now. I will get....I will get power, and nothing.... Nero then stood up, purely running on emotion and adrenaline, he could no longer feel pain, he could only feel one thing, the only emotion in all his life: Anger. He shuffled slowly to the man, who seemed to be at a loss at what's happening. "Fucking hell? Know your place, and get back to sleep, you inbred peasant.". The man quickly took out a lighter from his pockets. With a spark, it quickly lit up and soon ignited the cloth of the molotov. He quickly looked up to push Nero off and throw the bottle, but stopped. Not once in his life, had he feared a look. But this man, he could not help but feel a sliver of doom running down his spine. Nero stood straight with his hammer in his hand, ready to swing at him. The moment the light of the ignited molotov cloth shone on him, his bloodied face only showed the anger. Anger and desperation of Nero Van Vladimir. Then, Nero swung with all his might whilst shouting at the top his lungs: "NOTHING! WILL STOP ME!". A clean blow delivered and met with vengeance. A blow so hard, it knocked the man's head off. A heave then a huff of breath, soon followed by a slumping of a body without a head met the ground. Nero then followed after, finally losing consciousness. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Nero slowly opened his eyes, feeling the life return to him. He found it hard to believe that he gets to open his eyes like this, after all didn't he...? He turned around, trying to find out where he was. The similar ghetto-like state of a house told him he was still in his birthplace. Nero then tried to get up, but found it impossible, his body could not and would not. Just then, a door opens and a young man that looked to be in his teens walked in with a tray. The youngster gasped at Nero's movements and ushered him to stop. "Who the hell are you, how did you find me?". Nero looked up at the teen with a deep hue of anger in his eyes. The teen seemed to be taken back and looked ready to bolt for the door. With a gulp, he quickly explained. "I...I don't know what happened. All I know is t-that the central house blew up, and a day-long fight occured. E-Everyone was killed, b-but I hid well and I wasn't found. T-then last night I heard a shout i-in the nearby warehouse. I looked outside the window and saw you kill one of the leaders. I-I thought I should treat you, a-after all, you ended their reign." Nero looked down, absorbing his story. He then looked at his body, fully covered in bandages. Nero's angered looked wore down and he wore his usual stoic expression. Without this boy's help, I'd be a goner. "Thank you. For helping me out. However, once I'm out of the bandages, I'll be heading alone to the east. Wherever you go then, don't follow me. ". The boy nodded and quickly resumed at his treating of Nero's injuries, keeping an eye on him in case he tries anything funny. The sun rays peeking through the windows invited a welcomed distraction from his caution, and he looked outside. Now that knows for sure that he would be able to get to his destination, all he needed to do was quickly heal up. He laid his head down, letting his mind wander to endless possible thoughts of him having emotions other than anger. His thoughts drifted him slowly into sleep, knowing that he would be able to start anew with himself. And for once his life, he smiled. And an unnecessary extra to show that I'm edgy as fuck. |
BobTheKekMasterJul 14, 2016 7:08 AM
Jul 16, 2016 12:03 AM
#105
Name: Alexei Mager Age: 25 Gender: Male Personality: Extremely laidback and easygoing, Alexei's demeanor belies his skill. Current Mobster Rank: Rank 10 - Thug Current Charisma Points: 0 Abilities: Absolute Precision. Focus is everything! Alexei's extreme focus adds to his precision, allowing him to shoot between gaps in kevlar armor and effectively seek weak points. Description of your ability when used in the SCHEME / RP Play Story Line: Alexei’s laidback nature takes its toll on the enemy, preventing Alexei from leaking out information to those of the same rank as him, regardless the difference in the amount of charisma points. Description of your ability when used in the MOB WAR: Alexei fires into an enemy’s weak point, applying the “F#%&ed” debuff, causing the enemy to take 4 damage at the initial turn, decreasing by 1 for every succeeding turn. This debuff lasts for 4 turns. The status effect is incurable. Weapon: A Smith and Wesson .500 Magnum tucked in a holster at his left hip. Mob to join: Deciding to go wherever Natasha is, Alexei joins the High Society Character biography: "A'ight now, let's see here… Giovanni Manfredo...", was what Alexei muttered as he was reading a message written on a small piece of paper whilst walking around a small forest at the back of a huge mansion. "…send a message… mhmm…", he read as he looked around the perimeter of the mansion. Radio transmissions and stern voices filled the manor's backyard. Trucks full of food and dinnerware are messily parked with numerous busy waiters scrambling to deliver items from the trucks into the kitchen. Alexei casually climbed into the entrance of the trailer of a nearby truck and cleared his throat. "C'mon hurry it up! You there! Wine glasses inside the truck!" The sudden command caught the attention of one waiter, who had second thoughts for a split second yet followed the random command. "On it!", said the waiter, struggling to lift a box of wine glasses with his light build. "So… should I just move this over and put this box down or should I just sta-", the boy fell backwards further into the compartment. "Giovanni Manfredo. Giovanni Manfredo. Giovanni Manfredo. C'mon brain…", Alexei said under his breath as he put the unconscious lad on a sitting position. From the trailer, Alexei glanced at the manor's windows. Thick curtains adorned the windows, almost concealing the guests inside the structure. "I just need to find a Giovanni Manfredo- looking guy and I'm good to go. Focus." Alexei glanced towards a valet, wearing a red vest over a white button shirt, cleanly tucked under his black pants matched by a well-shined pair of leather shoes. The valet just finished parking a guest's car, looking at the vehicle with malicious intent before shrugging and walking off. "OH. MY. GOD. HALP! There's a knocked out guy over here! What happened to him?! Help please!", Alexei screamed just as the valet started jogging towards the manor's main entrance. Alexei's act certainly caught the valet's attention. "What happened?", the valet asked hastily. "I-I don't know, man. I just found him here and thought he was just lazing about. But I felt something was off.", Alexei said whilst feigning shock. "Let me just contact secu- GAH!", the valet fell on the ground as his last breath left his mouth. Alexei stood over the man, smoke coming out from his pistol. He stripped the man and wore his clothes. ”Ah, it’s a lil tight”, Alexei thought as he dragged the body behind the truck and into a large bush. ”Giovanni Manfredo. Giovanni Manfredo. I need to find Giovanni Manfredo.” Alexei jogged towards the manor’s main entrance and waited. He watched as the other valets received car keys from the guests and drove the cars into the parking lot behind the manor. His train of thoughts was suddenly interrupted when a beautiful young woman handed over a key for her car. “Don’t scratch it.”, the woman asked of him. Alexei, thrown off by his sudden admittance as a valet, only managed to nod. He took over the car’s seat and proceeded to drive into the parking lot.Alexei’s eye was caught by a young man – a waiter –walking towards the manor’s kitchen’s backdoor. Alexei took off his red valet vest and put it into the car’s seat. “A car, huh? I’m sure I’m gonna need this for later. But I don’t want to lose sight of it. Hmm… aha!”, Alexei took out the car keys and scratched the hood with a big letter E. “E for escape. I. Am. A. Genius!”, Alexei said. He looked at the young waiter enter the kitchen’s back door. “Another costume change, huh?”, Alexei muttered as he proceeded to follow the young waiter into the kitchen. As he entered through the door, the smell of food filled Alexei’s nose.Kitchen staff rustled around the room as flames from numerous stoves rose up and the crackling sound of food being fried added to the noise. “You there! Where you lookin’ at?! Over here dammit!”, a short man, probably a chef, shouted at Alexei. “Oi, Chef.”, Alexei meagerly replied, the noise almost drowning out his words. “What are you doing? Where the hell is your vest?! C’mon, fix yourself, you have friggin’ service to do!”, the chef exclaimed, his face turning red from the heat and anger. “Will do!”, Alexei replied. He made his way into the lavatory and washed his face, wiping the water on his face off with his handkerchief. He then proceeded to slick back his hair. “Lookin’ good, Waiter. Ha!” Alexei went back into the kitchen quickly and asked one of the waiters walking around the area. “Hey man, where do I get a spare vest? Mine’s all icky with...sauce. Yeah, some sort of sauce.” “Are you new? Oh, nevermind. Just go through that door and walk to the left until you see another door on the right side. Just find one your size. Hurry though, we need more men out.”, the waiter said, clearly exhausted. “Thanks.”, Alexei said as he went to the place the waiter told him to go to. “A’ight here it is… A vest and voila! I’m a waiter!”, Alexei told himself as he went back into the kitchen. He grabbed a cart and went into the main hall. The tablecloths and curtains were all white and glittering. Guests were scattered all over, some could be seen socializing while others are tapping away on their phones. Alexei then began pushing his cart and looked for guests that seem to be in need of refreshments or maybe a napkin. I’m a waiter and I need to act like one. Alexei pushed the cart almost aimlessly around the hall as he thought about what he needs to do. “Hmm… what do waiters around here do anyway?”, Alexei asked himself. He saw waiters carrying around trays of refreshment from the bar to the guests. As he glanced over to the bar, he saw the female bartender slightly raising her hand, signaling him to come over. Alexei grabbed a silver tray, just like the other waiters, and went over to investigate. The bartender leaned over and whispered to his ear, “To the lady in red.”. She motioned her hand to the direction of the specified guest and said: “Say that the man sends his regards.”. Alexei glanced over to the man who sent the drink, nodded his head to the bartender, and left for the lady in red. Oooh, she’s pretty., Alexei thought to himself as he approached the lady in red. “A glass of Caesar’s… for the beautiful lady in red.”, said Alexei, followed by a smile. “But I didn’t ask for any, Mr. Waiter.”, replied the lady. “It’s from-“, Alexei thought he could take advantage of the situation. “It’s from myself, Miss. I just thought you wanted a drink, as I saw everyone of your acquaintances had a drink in hand but you.” “I appreciate the thought, Mr. Waiter and I would like to take up your offer.”, the lady smiled sweetly at Alexei. Alexei smiled back at the lady and prepared to leave but the lady stopped her. “Mr. Waiter, I’ve only had a few seconds of your acquaintance and I would appreciate it very much if you could spare a few more minutes, perhaps.” “I would love to, Miss, but I have to serve a very important guest – Mister Giovanni Manfredo.”, Alexei replied. “Oh? Mister Giovanni happened to be an acquaintance of mine.”, the lady replied “Is that so? Then I am pleased to make your acquaintance, Miss - ?” “Thalia.” “Jenny?”, Alexei replied hastily. Heh, Jenny… Thalia… Jennythalia. “Excuse me?” “More importantly…Miss Thalia, I would love to spend time with you but I’m afraid I’m burdened by my current duties.” “Hmm… do you need a change of clothes, perhaps?” “If that will allow me to spend time with this beautiful lady, then yes.”, Alexei replied, followed by a smile. Alexei followed Thalia down a hall until they reached a door with a plate with the words ‘Dressing Room’. “I’ll be changing inside, Thalia.” “I’ll be waiting.” Alexei went through the door and chose from a wide array of clothes. He removed his vest andgrabbed a black overcoat. What’s the target’s name again? Oh yeah, Giovanni Manfredo. Giovanni Manfredo. Giovanni Manfredo., he thought to himself. Alexei fixed his hair and hid his put his gun under his belt, on his backside. “Ready.”, Alexei told Thalia as he went out the room. “Looking great. Ready to go?” “Sure.” Alexei followed Thalia back into the main hall to catch up with her friends. He slipped away and made his way into the restrooms. As soon as he entered, he was greeted by the sight of men wearing black tuxedos with intercoms on their ears. Security. Alexei went inside one of the stalls and waited. I just need to get one of those intercoms and I’ll be good to go. Dammit, I shouldn’t have went without a plan!, he thought to himself.He went out of the stall to find two men – security guards – taking care of business on the urinals. One of them said: “Guarding the west wing is pretty tiring. I mean, we’re just standing on the entrance for pete’s sake!” “I never thought time would pass so slowly just standin’ around” “I can’t wait for some action too.” “Well I’ll just see you later,I need to get back to my – Gfeuh!” Alexei quickly kicked one of the men towards the urinal and grabbed his gun, pointed it into the other and shot the man between the eyes. He pointed the gun at the other one and said: “Give me that intercom. I need to call my mom.”, Alexei said. “But it’s a radio!”, the guard replied. Alexei shot the man on the head. He went over and grabbed his intercom and went out the door, locking it on the way out.Recalling from the men’s conversations earlier, one of them has a post on the west wing’s entrance. Alexei stood in front of one of two pillars and noticed another guard, standing in front of the other pillar. As soon as he was about to greet the other fellow, a woman with dirty blonde-colored hair, wearing a black ladies’ tuxedo and pants swung open the door to the west wing. She had the air of a woman with authority, further proven by the name plate clipped on her breast pocket, which Alexei read: Alex Worth, Chief of Security. “Any suspicious activities so far?”, Alex asked both Alexei and the other guard, giving the other man a taser. "None have been reported yet, Chief Worth," the guard replied. "One hundred and thirty one guests are present as well." "I'll need a double-check on that one. There seems to be two hundred or more here," replied Alex Worth, before turning towards Alexei. "And you, scan the perimeter for me.” Alexei, clearly ticked off at the woman with her bossy aura, replied, “Yes, yes.” “I need a reply.”, said Alex. “On it.”, replied Alexei. “Good.” Alexei watched as Alex Worth, Head of Security, disappeared into the gathering in the ball room. “Hi.” The man ignored Alexei. Alexei, recalling Alex’s orders earlier, went around the venue to scan the perimeter. The lady in red, Thalia, was seen talking to a man. Alexei immediately recognized the man; he was the man who sent a drink to Thalia.The man was clearly flirting with Thalia though it can be easily noticed that Thalia was annoyed. Alexeiput on his sunglasses, which has been hanging on his breast pocket, and approached the pair. “Is something the matter, Miss?”, said Alexei. “No. Now may I request for you to leave us alone?”, the man said, a look of annoyance hinted on his face. “I need to hear your opinion, Miss.”, Alexei said to Thalia. “Please Mr. Security guard, I need to get back to my friends.”, Thalia replied. “I-I’m sorry, Cecilia.”, the man told Thalia. Cecilia? She didn’t tell him her name? Smart girl. The man walked away and went into the bar once again, but not before giving Alexei a threatening look. “Thank you. He kept going on about how he had 9 Porsches and12 inches.”, Thalia told Alexei. She hasn’t noticed that the security guard she is talking to is the same man that served her Caesar’s a while back. “My pleasure, Miss Jenny.” “Excuse me?” Alexei walked away and continued to scan the perimeter. He’s been in the mission for so long and yet he still haven’t found Giovanni Manfredo. Alexei was walking around in deep thought, not knowing what to do next, when his intercom received feedback. //New orders are as follows: Twelve persons reported missing. Find them and report any suspicious activity. Respond.// //On it.// Alexei went up to the second floor and walked down its halls, scanning the area for suspicious activity as dictated and of course, signs of Giovanni Manfredo. He walked around for a good while when he suddenly saw Thalia, unlocking a room. Alexei removed his sunglasses and intercom and stuffed it into his pockets. He messed his hair a bit and approached her. “Fine evening, Thalia.” Thalia was visibly upset. She definitely suffered a horrible evening ever since Alexei left her earlier. “Oh. It’s you. Where have you been?” “Thalia, what’s the matter?” “It’s been very boring without you. You just disappeared! There’s this gentleman that hit on me and I’ve been stuck with him for a while.” “C’mon don’t pout like that. Let me take you to the ballroom. We can chat there.” “Why not in my room?” “Let me meet the friends of this beautiful lady.” Thalia blushed as she nodded, agreeing to go with Alexei to the ballroom in the floor below.They walked down the hallway and into the elevator, with Thalia being led by the hand by Alexei. Both of them were silent on the way to the ballroom. Thoughts filled both of their heads. Who the hell is Giovanni Manfredo?!, is what Alexei was thinking. Thalia quickly fixed her hair and straightened out her clothes right before entering the ballroom.Alexei followed her closely as she looked for her acquaintances. “Ah. There they are.”, Thalia said as soon as she saw her friends. “Just keep calm while talking to them, okay?” “Yes.”, Alexei replied. The two walked into a group of women. Some look rather old and it could be safely concluded that Thalia was the youngest among the group. Alexei cleared his throat to get the ladies’ attention. “Fine evening, ladies.”, Thalia said. “Oh, Thalia, done fixing yourself? You were quite the mess earlier, ha ha ha.”, a lady, maybe in her fifties, replied. She was wearing a simple emerald green gown and is carrying an alligator hide handbag. Thick makeup covered her face and her nose line emphasized her large nose. “Yes I am.But please consider my feelings, at least smell what I’m thinking.” Alexei immediately called on a waiter. “Cold water please.”, Alexei said. “Here you go, sir.” “Thank you.” Thalia looked Alexei in the eyes and proceeded to talk to her friends. “Everyone this is…um.” Thalia turned toward Alexei and whispered, “Hey! You never told me your name!” Alexei took a step forward, put his left hand on his chest and bowed his head. He looked at the ladies and said, “Fine evening,ladies. I’m Angelo Apollinaire, eldest son of Ricardo Apollinaire. My Father sends his regards. |
FistingJul 17, 2016 11:19 PM
Jul 17, 2016 2:16 AM
#106
RE-SUMBIT Name: Minerva 'Braniac' Wynn Chase Picture: Age: 16 Gender: Female Personality: She's a sane person who sometimes likes killing for a living. Minerva is very clever aswell. She can also be childish, despite this she can also act classy when needed. Minerva's normally more friendlier to people she knows she can trust i.e the leader of High Society Current Mobster Rank: 10 - Thug Current Charisma Points: 0 Abilities: Parkour Description of your ability when used in the SCHEME / RP Play Story Line: Parkour: This makes her able to wall run, jump over crates/barrels easily, slide down poles and jump father then the average person. Description of your ability when used in the MOBSTER FIGHT: Parkour: The next amount of damage that she takes is halved Weapon:Throwing knives Mob to join: High Society Character biography : She grew up with her parents who where in the mafia, but they were in seperate mafia groups so they had to be very careful all the time. Her mother was in Tartarus and her father was in Luminaire. They hated being away from each other but loved each other so much they had Minerva the smartest little girl you would've ever known. In fact she even came up with a plan to help her parents. The plan lasted 10 years. Minerva doesn't tell anyone the plan she said she swore not to and still won't share it. For years she didn't participate in anything mafia related for her and her parents sake. One day her father was found dead in a river. Minerva's mother went into a deep depression and blamed Minerva because she came up with the plan. Soon the police came and killed her mother, they somehow figured out that she was in Tartarus. She decided to go to High Society and not have the same fate as her mother. |
Jul 17, 2016 2:41 AM
#107
Name: Augustine Ackles Age: 32 Gender: Male Personality: Comes off as an asshole, but he is a kind hearted guy. Because off his blindness he tends to play off as disconnected, but he will allow some in to his circle. He is an “observant” person and will pay attention to a lot of detail. Hugh is calm and collected and tends to keep to himself, quiet unless spoken to. Current Mobster Rank: Rank 10 Current Charisma Points: 0 Abilities: (Your mobster character must be good at something. Your ability must be reasonable. There are no crazy magic allowed. For instance: you can be good with guns, knife, martial arts, hypnotizing, simple magic tricks and so on) Give a "single name" for this as your ability used in mob war and scheme Description of your ability when used in the SCHEME / RP Play Story Line: (Abilities used in SCHEME cannot damage people physically. It can only affect psychologically or mentally) Description of your ability when used in the MOB WAR: (Abilities used in MOB WAR can damage people physically). SEE HERE to understand the system in MOB WAR . Please make the abilities based on the MOB WAR system such as mentioning how much the damage taken in numbers, or how quick or slow in numbers (eg: can double post in one turn when using the ability) Weapon: Mob to join: High Society Character biography: (INTRO) True Patriot Augustine was taught since he was young to be the hero. His father was in the army and implanted in to his son the ideas of a “good” soldier. Augustine grew up with this kind of thoughts since a young boy. “Be the best there is, using all senses, using your head. Because only a good soldier can use both his mind and strength to help others.”- Thomas Ackels Augustine took these words to heart, so when his father was left for another war, after war, he didn’t cry, nor did he complain. No, Augustine embraced, and he praised his army dad. So much so that if anyone spoke down about the army, he would fight them. Even after his father’s death while fight a war, he did not cry, in fact Augustine saluted his father one last time. Not a single tear was shed by him. Despite the fact that he did not cry, Augustine did lose something. Something snapped within him, he was now hungry for violence, causing nothing but trouble in his schools. The thing is, he grew a want for the war, because growing up all Ackels ever cared about was becoming the best soldier, better than his father. As he progressed in school, Augustine was known as the Jet Soldier, all he ever did was bully any non-patriots and he was top of his class, on almost all subjects. But instead of taking any offers to be rich, to be famous, to be anything else, he took to being a soldier. |
SharkDad-Jul 17, 2016 3:34 PM
Jul 17, 2016 9:01 AM
#108
@BobMcBobbeth: approved :) |
Jul 17, 2016 9:16 AM
#109
@MysticalPhoenix: approved :) @Fisting: in review.. |
Jul 17, 2016 9:56 PM
#110
@Fisting: Hello Fisting, your character overall looks very good :) The mob war is a bit OP comparing to some other abilities of other players. So here is the suggested modification: Description of your ability when used in the MOB WAR: Alexei fires into an enemy’s weak point, applying the “F#%&ed” debuff, causing the enemy to take an intensifying damage. During the first turn, the effect deals 1 damage, with each succeeding turn increasing the damage by 1 (at the fourth turn, 4 damage is dealt). Note this is similar to Natasha's ability Webweaver's Venom. |
Jul 17, 2016 11:11 PM
#111
Jul 18, 2016 12:16 AM
#112
@IITheG4merII Hey friend, we found that your ability is a bit to OP. You can change your ability to 2 turns effect instead. So here is the changes that need to be done: spirit concolidate: he uses his soul to inhance his sword making it lighter and stronger. For the next 2 turns, Any physical damage inflicted to Katagi is reduced by 3 damage, and the damage he causes to others increases by 3 damage. |
Jul 19, 2016 8:57 AM
#113
@Jesus_H_Macy: The bio looks really good. but still missing the abilities, Scheme ability and Mob War Ability :D |
Jul 21, 2016 3:36 AM
#114
FORMAT FOR CREATING AND CUSTOMIZING CHARACTER Name: Alfonz Wagner Picture: Age: 20 Gender: male Personality: outgoing, perceptive, sly, kind Current Mobster Rank: 10 - thug Current Charisma Points: 0 Abilities: the best shield user ( Reflection ) Description of your ability when used in the SCHEME / RP Play Story Line: Alfonz reflects on his stout heart, leaving him impervious against psychological and mental assault; by using this ability, Alfonz cannot be threatened into submission, or into giving information unless they're 5 charisma higher than him Description of your ability when used in the MOB WAR: reflects the damage Alfonz received from his enemy for the next turn, he himself receives the full damage, and the enemy receives the damage they inflicted to Alfonz. ex. Alfonz uses reflect ---> thug a attacks Alfonz for 5x so thug a and Alfonz receives both 5x damage each Weapon: Carbon steel folding shield Mob to join: Luminaire Character biography : Once the heir of a very powerful house, a nobility by birth, Alfonz lived his life easily and happily, but that did not last. His father was being tried for treason and his mother left for another man, yet Alfonz smiled, he hid his pain inside his heart, solemnly vowing "I will not let this happen again, I will protect those I deem worthy, though my house and title had left me, one thing still remains in my heart....my noblesse oblige." He left his broken down home in sorrow, training under a very powerful master in the way of the sword, Kenjiro Arata the strongest swordsman there is, yet Alfonz was very bad, his strikes were not connecting at all, he trained and trained but to no avail. One day, his master summoned him and said "Alfonz, you have trained hard, yet without results." Alfonz, mortified by this, replied "I'm sorry master, I will train harder." "no, it's okay, the sword is not for you Alfonz, the way you moves, the way you strike , and the shape of your mind, spirit, is not for the sword." "then how can I protect the ones that I care about if I don't know how to fight ?" "you already know how to fight, but it was misplaced, you never have any connection to the way of the sword." "then what shall I use master ?" "think about it yourself, the answer is in your heart." Alfonz kept thinking about it day and night not taking any visit to his master, until one day at the bar he frequents, a bunch of thugs came in and started to wreak havoc with their bats, as he was in deep thought, he felt danger and immediately grabbed the nearest thing near him, it was a tray. Alfonz blocked the thug's bat with the tray , and suddenly he found his answer. Effortlessly Alfonz blocked all the attacks aimed at him and returned the force of that attack to their owner. the thugs fell one by one as he made his way to the door, and as the last thug fell he went out and put the tray to the nearest table. Alfonz came to see his master, but he had already left leaving him a case of wood and a single letter. "Dear Alfonz, if you've read this letter then it seems you've found your answer, sadly I'm already on my way to continue my journey, farewell, let us meet again, my disciple. Signed Kenjiro Arata" After reading through the letter so many times thankfully, Alfonz opened the case his master gave him, and the content was a jet black folding shield and another letter. "This is the strongest shield in the world, given to me by a stranger i met in my travels, use it well." He took the shield and wore it, a perfect fit, taking the shield and letters, Alfonz went off into the night, continuing his journey to protect. Etching so many tales on his path and this one is the guardian's favorite , the particular tale that led him came across a teenage boy by the name of Glast Luminaire, and how he became one of his subordinate. it isn't the only tale Alfonz hold dear, he had so many tales, one that led him to be a leader, and one that tells of his greatness in battle, but that is for another story, because this is the tale of the guardian and the violinist. |
shubaitsuJul 21, 2016 6:02 AM
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Jul 21, 2016 4:05 AM
#115
@shubaitsu I'm not philtecturophy, so I'm sorry for disappointing you. As an admin though, I will still review your character. Alfonz reflects on his stout heart, leaving him impervious against psychological and mental assault; by using this ability, Alfonz cannot be threatened into submission, or into giving information This is overpowered in the sense that no mobster's scheme ability would be able to work against him. Make it so that the skill only works against people with 5 charisma points higher than him, and it shall be acceptable. reflects the damage Alfonz received and protects him until Reflection was ready again (4 turns ) , damage protection full, damage reflection 0.5 ( or damage protection 0.5, damage reflection 1.5 ) to the one that damages Alfonz. Now, this is the real problem. From what I see, your skill negates all damage taken by Alfonz for 4 turns, and reflecting 50% of it back to the attacker. Now, note the section in bold. You're implying that the effect of Reflection lasts until it finishes cooldown, at which point you can simply reactivate it again and be immune for another four turns. Now, even you should be able to see what's wrong with your power. You're basically making Alfonz immune from every attack and mob war skill made by every mobster in the RP. I'd suggest making it so that he can reduce the damage your character takes next turn by 50%, just like Minerva's mob war ability. Now, as for your biography, I'm not philtecturophy, but I can give you my own words as an aspiring writer myself. The story is good, typical medieval stuff. If you're planning on writing your novel in English though, you'd need a lot of work on your grammar, punctuation, and general errors (such as making all the first letters of your sentences capital). The story is not fitting to the setting of this RP club as well, seeing as you used the terms "swordsman," "knight," and other similar words. However, I'm assuming this is due to the fact that he's the main character of the medieval-themed light novel you're writing. tl;dr: Generally good story, but could use some refining. |
Jul 21, 2016 4:07 AM
#116
ty @nice for the review, i'm gonna edit my char now. |
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Jul 21, 2016 4:19 AM
#117
@nice how about now ? I made it so that he receives the damage and reflects the damage back to the user. |
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Jul 21, 2016 5:02 AM
#118
@shubaitsu: Story looks good. As you might realize, I am not a good writer myself, so your bio looks really great to me in terms of story, whereas I cannot help much about the grammar. However as Nice said, the context might need a bit refinement perhaps to fit the context of MS-rp. Perhaps look at the Map in the main club layout can help to inspire you a bit regarding to construction of the story, and to get the feeling of the setting where MS-rp takes place. Now for the Mob War ability, you might want to clearly define what does "Reflect" do numerically. Does it make Alfonz to be totally immune to the next damage he received? Perhaps elaborate it further by including a small example of how the mechanic of the ability works. Surely that might help ^_~ |
Jul 21, 2016 5:15 AM
#119
@shubaitsu Alfonz reflects on his stout heart, leaving him impervious against psychological and mental assault; by using this ability, Alfonz cannot be threatened into submission, or into giving information unless they're 6 charisma higher than him 5 charisma points higher than him, not 6. If I allowed this it would be unfair to the others, yeah? So change the value to 6. Once that's done, unless other admins have a reason to nullify this, I present you the seal of approval. |
Jul 21, 2016 5:15 AM
#120
@philtecturophy okay, done |
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Jul 21, 2016 5:17 AM
#121
@nice okay, done |
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Jul 21, 2016 5:22 AM
#122
@shubaitsu: looks good and approved ^_~ |
Jul 21, 2016 5:30 AM
#123
@philtecturophy thx, i will look for pics now |
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Jul 21, 2016 5:37 AM
#124
@shubaitsu: Then you are ready to start RP. You can directly join the RP here: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=1521423&show=100 The RP in that thread is actually over for the members in Luminaire. So you can start by just coming from the front door of the house, and Glast will open the door, Glast is now still at Sardonyx sky garden with the other mobsters. Once you finished our little Scheme RP there, you will earn Charisma Points like the other from RP-ing there ^_~ |
Aug 7, 2016 2:06 PM
#125
FORMAT FOR CREATING AND CUSTOMISING CHARACTER Name:Snow Picture: Age: 16 Gender: Male [But looks rather effeminate Personality:Quiet Current Mobster Rank: Rank 10: Thug Current Charisma Points: 0 Abilities: "Accurate sniping" Description of your ability when used in the SCHEME / RP Play Story Line: He is really good at sniping with perfect aim just over 1.3 miles away [b]Description of your ability when used in the MOB WAR: He can set up at 1.3 miles away distant to give his Family covering fire Weapon: L115A3 rifle Sniper Mob to join: Luminaire Character biography Snow has been trained by his father at the age of 6. Snow father called Ice been training him how to aim and breath properly when sniping. Snow dad got placed into Jail for life time when he was 13, He then took on contracts in order to keep alive, No one suspected the 13 year old killed so many people and at such distant either As he hit the age of 16 he entered the Mob/Mafia family of Luminaire To serve them His hair is pure white as his left eyes is white his right eye is yellow he alsp has a rather pale skin complexion. He does wear female girls tricking people purposely or not due to his effeminate features. People will notice he is a quiet male that tends to enjoy by himself where he will be reading books, Listening to classical music, Drinking herbal tea or perhaps keeping his sniping abilities up to date by being on firing range or even hunting. He do hopes one day he will able to play a violin like the boos does, And perhaps also manipulate people emotions with the music he hopes to learn in the future |
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