Your review of Clannad:After Story was absolutely breathtaking. I enjoyed every sentence of it and thought it was really deep and gave a profound perspective of the world of Clannad.
So just just wanted to say, thank you and wishes you a good day.
Beautiful and well-detailed review of Clannad After Story! Honestly, one of the best reviews of that show I've ever read. Here are some positives and negatives of the review so you can keep your strengths and work on your negatives for future reviews:
Positives:
+Not too long review, but not too short.
+Tons of details!
+Very expressive and professional words
+Unique reviewing style
+Looking at the positives and negatives of the show
Negatives:
-Using "I, me, my" a bit too much, try to stay away from using those in a review (I've done that before in my earlier reviews like Fullmetal Alchemist and Spice and Wolf. So even I have made that mistake.)
-Not going into a lot of depth on the weaknesses of the show
Overall, I enjoyed reading your review a ton! I can't believe that this is your first review! Mine didn't have as much detail and professional words like yours did. (I also deleted that review, so you can't really read it, if you're wondering it was a review on an anime called, "Fullmetal Alchemist: Brotherhood" I made another review of it, but I'm getting side-tracked.) I also see you like Madoka Magica! That is a great show! You have really good taste in anime! I also like your Deviantart account, really great pictures of Kotomi!
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So just just wanted to say, thank you and wishes you a good day.
Positives:
+Not too long review, but not too short.
+Tons of details!
+Very expressive and professional words
+Unique reviewing style
+Looking at the positives and negatives of the show
Negatives:
-Using "I, me, my" a bit too much, try to stay away from using those in a review (I've done that before in my earlier reviews like Fullmetal Alchemist and Spice and Wolf. So even I have made that mistake.)
-Not going into a lot of depth on the weaknesses of the show
Overall, I enjoyed reading your review a ton! I can't believe that this is your first review! Mine didn't have as much detail and professional words like yours did. (I also deleted that review, so you can't really read it, if you're wondering it was a review on an anime called, "Fullmetal Alchemist: Brotherhood" I made another review of it, but I'm getting side-tracked.) I also see you like Madoka Magica! That is a great show! You have really good taste in anime! I also like your Deviantart account, really great pictures of Kotomi!