Feb 9, 2024
I feel sorry that so many people abandoned Vanitas because of the shipper that, regardless of vanoè and vanijeanne, in true to the charm of mochizuki Jun is that she wants to write as she wishes and don't care about the flow of people around you Even though people disagreed about the destruction of their ships, Which is a shame. The trend of readers wanting to push Vanitas to be bl, forgetting what is most important is the core plot, such as the existence of the Vanitas series.
Character relationships are not just romantic as lovers/special people.
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But there are also stories of friendship and family , Including problems with characters that cause toxic relationships between other characters.
Many elements incorporate the atmospheric theme at Mochizuki Jun tried to create that world. It looks very beautiful But I'm very disappointed. If Mochizuki chooses to push the plot or cut out characters like Jeanne, because from my point of view, the relationship vanoè and vanijeanne are both important and help develop Vanitas in a different perspective, I hope the story will be expanded especially vanijeanne+ domijeanne+noejeanne and other characters.
I think other characters have potential for character development like Amelia and Nox, but Mochizuki's problem is that the character roles are not evenly distributed. (There's a problem since the old story. I wanted the main characters like Vanitas and Noé to be lessened. Focus on the roles of other characters)
At present it's okay to focus on other stories like Domi and Vanitas and the teacher, but evenly balancing the chapters and crossing stories still seems strange. Overall I still enjoyed it but I hope Mochizuki finds a way to fix this one day.
More : Don't get me wrong because I adore vanijeanne and domijeanne and love art. including her story But I accept that the distribution of the script and the explanation of the problems the characters had were not clear. Just got good in Noe's episode. (Second half of the story)
I don't know if Mochizuki really saw the problem. that vanijeanne and vanoe's relationship goes beyond just one cannon And the relationship is more like a polyship or 3p. In other words, Vanitas seems to have two husbands like Jeanne and Noe. When they write it as a single canon, it's strange. And I think 3p blood drinking between vanitasxjeannexnoe It's sexier than someone being on top or bottom (I mean mxm,mxf, I think it would be better if the relationships were written together as both male and female relationships, making the main characters have a more sexual relationship. Husband and wife together + go out via polyship)
Reviewer’s Rating: 8
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