Aug 6, 2012
Story: 7/10
Hanahira Misaois not your typical high school girl, she is the head of the student body president and comes from a well respected family. However, her clumsy principle is out to get her and is willing to take big measures in order to obtain her. When one of the principles schemes blunders he accidently bestows Misaois to a male student, however that does not stop the principle from giving up on his desires.
The story is mainly about the relationship between a girlfriend plus her boyfriend, and keeping her safe from the principle and his twisted plots. Personally, I thought the story
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was abrubtly paced at too fast of a speed towards the end. It felt rushed and left out alot of possibilities such as the school-nurse who was very well introduced yet having nothing develop. I was also VERY dissapointed in the fact that the climax of the story, *****SPOILER: where the principle captures Misaois, because it's interval was way too short and without many scenes. It felt like a different story was pasted on top of the original and was not carried out properly.*****
Art: 8/10
The artwork: bright, non-congested, fine-lined, decently-textured, well-shaded.
The artwork was definately well done.
Character Development: 2/10
There were a total of six chracter's which the story introduced. Hanahira Misao, her boyfriend, the principle, the principle's brother, a nurse, an unknown school girl.
I thought the character development in this story was borderline dreadful. Many of the characters were poorly developed such as the school nurse, the principle's brother, the unknown girl, and I dare to say even her boyfriend. There is no character here that one will recall later after done reading. Many of the characters just changed too sudden as well such as when *****SPOILER: Hanahira Misao all of a sudden gave in to the principle's demands because of a really poorly expanded on excuse; the reason behing her boyfriend giving in to the unknown girl's lust; the poorly unexpanded reason as to why the unknown school girl had so much disdain towards Misao; The nurse's reason for having a young girl pleasuring her in a scene and from time to time swatting at the old man everyone calls the principle...*****
Overall: 6/10
Do not get your hopes up if you plan to read this story. I would not recommend it for anyone looking for a well written and thought out apologue, sorry.
Reviewer’s Rating: 5
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