Apr 27, 2024
Ch14+15: Unironic 2/10. I dropped this after these chapters. I tried. This is a crime. I most probably won't be reading any of Satomi U's works ever again. This isn't even close to what the first chapters indicated or what Satomi U is known for- this is a disgusting wish fulfilment NTR (not bait) disrespectful fetish porn manga with disgustingly stupid and offensive adult female MC writing and some of the most vile revolting sickening writing overall I had to witness in a while. This went past bait. This is embarrassing. Get the bag Satomi U, even if you betray the one-shot and long time
...
readers. More power to you.
Old:
Man, as sad as it is to say and while I would LOVE to consider myself a massively huge Satomi U fan, this is a common Satomi U L.
Perfect one-shots and incredible first few chapters but the most boring, predictable, run-off-the-mill cop out writing in every. single. work. Is is tradition by now. Bait the age gap romance and spicy relationships to not do anything with them for the next 60 chapters.. apart from the seldom bait panel every now and then.
This one? The exact same. The one-shot was a straight 10/10. A novel idea that was used maybe 2 times before. A clear-cut introduction and showing of what is to come. Great, charming characters.
And it is over. The second chapter of the serialization and I call RIP. It was a good run. EVERYTHING was changed. The whole setting. All dynamics. Everything. The idea? Not novel. It is the most generic setting only that the changed dynamic makes it uncomfortable almost instantly. It went from "let me work with you!" to "let me sell you to horny creeps!" Cute and spicy, yeah..
It keeps going in that direction. Chapter 3 was plain disgusting and uncalled for. Who is this woman? Get her away from him. And why is he acting like some Yakuza mastermind used to getting girls into gravure..? It is SO F WEIRD.
Reading along up to chapter 9 and I ask myself "What is the endgame? Why is this all even happening? He had a reason in the one-shot and it was so good. How the f did we end up here?". This is a whole different genre than the one-shot and I get that- I also get that stuff like that happens but how is it so much worse? It has 10% the substance. It is uncomfortable. All reasoning is stupid. All characters are weird.
This serialization is an epic fail. Unlucky.
Reviewer’s Rating: 4
What did you think of this review?
Nice
0
Love it
0
Funny
0
Confusing
0
Well-written
0
Creative
0Show all
.png)
