Feb 19, 2009
This is an extremely short review for a very short one-shot. A short girl who's the manager of the schools basketball team is dating the tall and very handsome Team Captain. Everything is high and dandy until her anxieties and insecurities about their personalities and relationship take a forefront and she enlists a friend and fellow team mate to help her make her guy jealous. Drama ensues with a typical ending and definitely a nice bit of smut for the cherry on top (pun intended!).
The story was fair. I mean this a very cliched story. Girl loves
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guy, girl feels inadequate and then tries to make guy jealous and ends up having nice sex. I didn't get anything special but that it was a decent story any one could work with and dish out quickly.
The art was actually quite nice. I thought it was good and it's not too graphic, but definitely good. The characters didn't have much detail so I put them at mediocre although I loved the lead girl. She was cute...and this goes right back to the success of the drawing. The drawing was so funny in that it worked with the storyline. In some cases the lead girl was a total chibi and it was entertaining on that front.
My enjoyment was fine. I was entertained and it was a light and quick read that I think everyone could take out in a few minutes without hating it. It also had a bit of cutesy humor so that's always a good thing. So overall I had a good time.
Reviewer’s Rating: 7
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