Jun 30, 2017
Story 4/10
Interesting start, it drags you in, but that's about the only positive thing I have to say.
The hero is an annoying ass, but as usual, he has a reason why. (Not really justified in my book, but hey, that's HQ policy).
I like to say the heroine's attitude towards the hero is divided into 5 phases:
1. "Why the hell am I falling for such a jerk, but I can't resist his kisses, he's hot."
2. "He's a jerk because of sob story, So, he's a kind jerk."
3. "I want to have sex with this jerk because I love him."
4. "He will never love me,
...
so I better forget him no matter how huge of a jerk he continues to be."
5."He said he loves me despite all the s**t he put me through, so I'll just forgive him and live happily ever after. Who cares?"
My interest in the story dropped significantly when I reached the middle of it, mostly because the relationship between the main charas is bollocks; the plot was interesting in the beginning, but fell flat since you can pretty much predict what happened without reading the whole thing. Not to mention their behavior.
Characters 3/10
Didn't like the hero or the heroine. He treated heroine horribly, and while I could somewhat understand why in the start, the rest of it didn't make sense.
The heroine's behavior towards the hero is confusing. You spent with him so little time and yet you love him? Even though he only insults you then wants to have sex with you. Nah. No bueno in my book.
Art: 6/10
It was a nice art wasted on such a story.
Overall 4/10
Wouldn't recommend, but even if you read it by accident and think it can't be worse than this, well it can, I read worse stories than this one trust me. That's why I gave it 4.
Reviewer’s Rating: 4
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