| pretty siggies aah i'll try joining next month |
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more smudge practice.... |
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*u* nice smudge~ so shiny~ lighting is good also. i'd say the smudges are a little bit rough and a bit to sharp (for my liking, that is). a more soft and subtle smudge would blend in better. also, the glowy smudged bit on their right leg distracts the flow since you've indicated the flow to be going from top left to bottom right. so yeah, suddenly have that bit going upward is kinda weird... fractal/bubble C4D effects make it look messy too. perhaps try smudging it also? or create some "craters" to surround them would can be another choice. @tsudecimo honestly, there are better font choices. bikinny or astigma for example? and contouring the font doesn't make it look appealing at all, at least not with black. you should definitely play around and find some colour palettes (or check out the colour theory). for the borders, either ditch them all together or go big. and by going big, again, using a complementary colour that would match the green bg, and just make it bolder as well as getting rid of the inner white border as it makes the whole thing looks really amateur-ish. sorry if i was too harsh D: i'm a nitpicker ;; |
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| Thanks for the feedback guys! |
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tsudecimo said: Thanks for the feedback guys! Just a question. Isn't this thread supposed to be for Signature updates and not Profile updates? Not bad, for me it's just a bit too monotone. I guess that's the effect black and white has, but I somehow feel it doesn't work with too many gfx designs. |
Music is about enjoying sound~Luppi said: tsudecimo said: Thanks for the feedback guys! Just a question. Isn't this thread supposed to be for Signature updates and not Profile updates? People were posting graphics in general so I didn't think it was an issue and it was active so I wanted quick comments. |
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tsudecimo said: Luppi said: Just a question. Isn't this thread supposed to be for Signature updates and not Profile updates? People were posting graphics in general so I didn't think it was an issue and it was active so I wanted quick comments. I see, there is a designated Profile Update thread though, which is pretty active as well. |
| back to basics. :? |
Lights and text are distracting imo |
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Colorwise I thinks it's kinda nice. But I feel the character is a bit too faded out and the text is kinda hard to read. I prefer the second one though with the black bars. It gives it some sort of border. |
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 I am aware my style is quite odd, but yeah. Also, I know the text is illegible, but I don't know how to fix that without changing the colour of the font or the position. So some help with that would be welcome and so are tips & criticism~ |
| @shiawase-png I think it looks really cool and different. |
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shiawase-png said: I know the text is illegible, but I don't know how to fix that without changing the colour of the font or the position. So some help with that would be welcome and so are tips & criticism~ Maybe add a shadowy stroke to the text for contrast against the lighter parts in the background, just lightly though. (It looks like you did it somewhat for 'yagami') |
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Literally my first signature with above basic stuff. Just looking for comments. I'm also wondering if someone is kind enough to answer my questions about some tutorials via PM (they are a lot of them @_@) original image |
tsudecimoMar 9, 2016 1:19 PM
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tsudecimo said: Literally my first signature with above basic stuff. Just looking for comments. I'm also wondering if someone is kind enough to answer my questions about some tutorials via PM (they are a lot of them @_@) original image The font didn't fit and too empty in my opinion. |
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DeathBorne said: tsudecimo said: Literally my first signature with above basic stuff. Just looking for comments. I'm also wondering if someone is kind enough to answer my questions about some tutorials via PM (they are a lot of them @_@) original image The font didn't fit and too empty in my opinion. Anything about the actual image? the font was w/e to make the left side less empty, and it looks like a tree. Edit: Yeah I guess it's empty, how about the center? does it look decent? |
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| the c4d didn't go with the flow go check deviantart for tutorials |
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Free style Some variations in minimal color effects: render Background |
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| @tsudecimo both the font choice and placement are no good. I would try sticking to fonts that are less 'fancy' if i had to pick the best, I would say the last one, though there are some issues with the lighting. Some areas are much more saturated and vivid than others. Also the random two lights on the left don't quite fit. |
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shuryukan said: @tsudecimo both the font choice and placement are no good. I would try sticking to fonts that are less 'fancy' if i had to pick the best, I would say the last one, though there are some issues with the lighting. Some areas are much more saturated and vivid than others. Also the random two lights on the left don't quite fit. So the main problem with the original one is the text? or does the saturated vivid issue apply to all of them? this where adjusments layer are necessary right? I think the second is the best, because her skin look the best, and the image isn't too green like the original. Anyway thanks for the feedback always sucked at text :p |
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| @tsudecimo the saturation applies for all of them. If you look towards the top left of each sig and the areas where you used bubble (?) c4ds, the colors are way more saturated than other areas. Idk, I find the second one the worst :c, wayyy too much of an orange overlay. The first and last are the least unnaturally vivid. The third one has purple lighting on the skin, even though the sources are all green. |
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shuryukan said: @tsudecimo the saturation applies for all of them. If you look towards the top left of each sig and the areas where you used bubble (?) c4ds, the colors are way more saturated than other areas. Idk, I find the second one the worst :c, wayyy too much of an orange overlay. The first and last are the least unnaturally vivid. The third one has purple lighting on the skin, even though the sources are all green. Yeah I add the c4d at the end. Fixed it in another image with simple burn tool and lowering the saturation of the c4d alone. I actually meant the third lol. Wow you have a great eye 0_o that is a purple contrast effect thing, I can't see the purple, so that's why I thought it was the best c: Do you know some good Text tutorials btw? aside from these: http://zenron.deviantart.com/art/Typography-for-Beginners-371897847 |
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| I Just wanted to share some things I made. tell me what you think about it :) |
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| @DeathBorne That Akame picture is probably the best thing I've seen you make (name of the font of ''Akame''?). Don't like the second one. Both have low quality though, especially the second one. I think you are doing something wrong when you save or something, because most of your stuff are LQ. |
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tsudecimo said: @DeathBorne That Akame picture is probably the best thing I've seen you make (name of the font of ''Akame''?). Don't like the second one. Both have low quality though, especially the second one. I think you are doing something wrong when you save or something, because most of your stuff are LQ. I forgot the name of the font :(. I made those two last last week. Is my current sig low quality? if not then its probably the picture I used on those two or that I didn't change it to png. |
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ryukan said: @deathborne your current signature doesn't seem to be low quality, unless i'm blind. Yeah. It's probably the pictures I used that's why those two are low quality and cool set btw :). |
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| I made something random. what do you think? |
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 Any thoughts? Best signature I made so far, and it came from a coincidence xD |
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 My latest one, still don't feel like it's finished for some reason. ;-; Also first forum post on MAL post since joining at the end of 2014, wut. |
Joel_Kami-sama said: My latest one, still don't feel like it's finished for some reason. ;-; Also first forum post on MAL post since joining at the end of 2014, wut. The right side feels weird and is oversharpened. So, first time here in a looong time, I don't even remember what was the last thing I posted,    All of those have some bits that I'm not satisfied with but I don't really feel like correcting them, too lazy. |
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| A few things I made a few months ago, let me know you're opinion of em! Not sure if this is over sexualized or not soo using a spoiler button. IMO it isn't hence why it's my signature but I can change it if need be: The text on this one needs work but: This was posted as a "King of the Labs" entry on Signature Labs: Goomba: Because Spiderman: And finally what's a graphic show without a witch?: |
 I'd be happy to make a signature for people! Just send me a message! |
| Updated my DP and profile layout~ What do you guys think? |
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 I don't know how I feel about the text yet. I probably won't bother changing it. |
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| Just updated my set :) |
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Transience said: Just updated my set :) This black bar doesn't fit, feel like it doesn't belong with the rest of image, and it's shape is weirdly proportioned . Were you going for a broken effect? Great sig otherwise :) |
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tsudecimo said: yeah I was going for it. Sorta like it was cut by scissors because I didn't like the effect a torn brush produced on it.Transience said: Just updated my set :) This black bar doesn't fit, feel like it doesn't belong with the rest of image, and it's shape is weirdly proportioned . Were you going for a broken effect? Great sig otherwise :) |
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Transience said: tsudecimo said: yeah I was going for it. Sorta like it was cut by scissors because I didn't like the effect a torn brush produced on it.This black bar doesn't fit, feel like it doesn't belong with the rest of image, and it's shape is weirdly proportioned . Were you going for a broken effect? Great sig otherwise :) Oh. That makes more sense when you imagine it as a scissor cut. |
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tsudecimo said: ayy didn't notice that the bar didn't go the whole way downTransience said: yeah I was going for it. Sorta like it was cut by scissors because I didn't like the effect a torn brush produced on it. Oh. That makes more sense when you imagine it as a scissor cut. how's it now? |
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yeah looks better now.  Thoughts? |
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tsudecimo said: yeah looks better now. Thoughts? An artwork on a black blackground with a border that takes 2 seconds to make. What exactly should anyone say to that?.. except what I just said. Oh.. and it's LQ too. |
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yeah Original intention was a transparent image and the whole anchor peace sign thing being a border. But I tried it on the signature space and the edges don't look good. Isa__ said: An artwork on a black blackground with a border that takes 2 seconds to make Artwork? they are all individual pieces? not sure if this was an unintentional compliment. |
tsudecimoApr 11, 2016 11:44 AM
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tsudecimo said: Isa__ said: An artwork on a black blackground with a border that takes 2 seconds to make Artwork? they are all individual pieces? not sure if this was an unintentional compliment. I assure you, it was not. It doesn't change my question very much either. |
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| If you thought it was an artwork it means it went well together sans the black background. |
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tsudecimo said: If you thought it was an artwork it means it went well together sans the black background. Doesn't mean it looks good though. It may fit, but it looks cheap, LQ and like no effort was put into it at all. |
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Isa__ said: tsudecimo said: If you thought it was an artwork it means it went well together sans the black background. Doesn't mean it looks good though. It may fit, but it looks cheap, LQ and like no effort was put into it at all. I know the whole image is not good, it's the border consistency that I'm concerned with. Well I just wanted the concept of special borders (Like the charlie Chaplin one in DA). Why no effort tho, I didn't improve the image quality or add effects but it's not like I found a premade border and slapped the two character renders to it .-. |
tsudecimoApr 11, 2016 2:02 PM
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