| I'm writing a novel at the moment and I've recently written a sex scene and I'd like some feedback on it. General background of what's happened before this scene. Eve remembers her past relationship with Azazel. Eve has been raped twice before by Azazel (when she still didn't know of their history) and is now currently dead. She's presently in her soul state. (I would go into why Azazel raped&killed her but all you need to know is that...azazel is a highly disturbed individual and is a fallen angel but who actually really loves Eve.) Thanks in advance :) https://www.dropbox.com/s/g2kdguaky9eu7by/Chp%208%20-%20%20%28sex%20scene%29.doc?dl=0 |
LilyPrimroseSep 25, 2014 5:59 AM
| The file has been removed or deleted. The quick synopsis makes it sound quite extraordinary, though. |
| lol ^_- |
| Just reading this synopsis makes me get a boner. |
| I've been here way too long... |
TheConquerer said: Just reading this synopsis makes me get a boner. I was thinking the same thing you posted in your spoiler, TC, but personally I would've been a bit more subtle. W.e works, though. I'm a tad interested as to what the story is, of course. More interested to see, however, how much it sucks or rocks, although I have a feeling it is more of the former option than of the latter. |
I stand with Freedom, no matter the cost, no matter the price. |
Error 404. But synopsis sounds nice |
| Shit, thought I was about to see an amateur porno |
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