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Dec 30, 2014 11:26 AM

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greatgreenman said:
dont worry, I always wear protection b4 I mind f*ck you ;)

Take responsibility, baka!
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Dec 30, 2014 11:45 AM

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Ya know, I would buttt ive got this meeting... with some people. And I have a long business trip soo... *runs off*

Oh and I pawned off your keys to the loli kingdom
Dec 30, 2014 1:14 PM

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greatgreenman said:
Oh and I pawned off your keys to the loli kingdom

Don't worry. I got spare.
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Feb 10, 2015 6:23 PM

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Chapter 38: Relief

WIP
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Feb 11, 2015 1:23 AM

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WOOO
he's still alive!
great chapter but there seems to be a thing with male nudity around this chapter... even better
lol
great to have you back green
Feb 11, 2015 3:05 AM

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Don Salieri is back. For a while I wondered if you had another split personality experience. Is there going to be transformation sequence for you too? I wonder if you get dog ears in the process. I hope you do, result could be greatest crossover between Inuyasha, Inception, American werewolf and Mafia done so far.
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Feb 11, 2015 1:11 PM

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@Moni: You know you want my bod @w@ lol jk
@Beast: Lol that WOULD be amazing, but you'll just have to wait and see :P
Feb 11, 2015 6:26 PM

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shhh your wives mustn't know
Feb 13, 2015 10:49 PM

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He's "sort of" a pharmacist, no?

Looks like there's going to be all sorts of party going on here soon...
Mar 1, 2015 5:23 PM

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Chapter 39: When the (wedding) bell tolls

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Mar 2, 2015 4:54 AM

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I can see another personality swap coming :-P main protagonist and antagonist never been so close :-P
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Mar 2, 2015 6:18 AM
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i haven't been this giddy since echoes_guy's story got an update. gj green amazing work cant wait to see what happens next (had ot sadly skip the h-scene cause school is when i read this but i bet it was good as well)
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Mar 2, 2015 7:36 PM

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@beast: I'm going for my own M. Night Shyamalan moment :P

@130nu: Well being that the scene comprised 80% of the post, you might want to consider giving it a read :P
Mar 3, 2015 3:08 PM

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Very solid all around. If I had to gripe, it'd be about the use of asterisks for some letters. Can't bitch too much since you did a great job of switching up descriptors so...bravo =)

Now we get to see how much the writer hates the MC =P
May 18, 2015 8:43 PM

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Chapter 40: Love is like a drug

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May 19, 2015 9:21 PM

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Ah, foreshadowy goodness.
"When you have bought your own load of hooey, you know exactly what it is worth." -- Bruce Sterling
May 27, 2015 3:42 PM

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Damn, shit's getting heavy in all the right ways.

Here's to more of this soon! *raises a glass*
Jun 4, 2015 10:15 PM

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errors here and there but good stuff

now where the next chapter?

also cant help but mention that the nickname you tried to label me with failed green
Jun 5, 2015 6:19 AM

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I definitely must place a comment under the chapter once I've read otherwise I would forgot I did so.
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Nov 25, 2016 7:38 PM

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I'm going to be making some changes to this story before I post a new chapter. I'm going to repost the updated chapters as soon as I figure out the best way to approach (Don't know whether to replace the old ones or just right out delete it all and post the new revamped chapters.
Nov 25, 2016 7:40 PM

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welcome back~ :L
Nov 28, 2016 10:06 PM

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Indeed! I had been missing this story.
"When you have bought your own load of hooey, you know exactly what it is worth." -- Bruce Sterling
Dec 10, 2016 12:19 PM

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Chapters 1-7 have been reposted. Let me know what you think of the updates ^_^
Dec 14, 2016 3:37 PM

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Guess I say hi to you here. Nice to meet you, and welcome back.

As for the 7 reposted chapters. It has been over a year since I read the original story, so I can't remember it well enough to tell what has changed. I noticed quite a few missing quotes and a couple of color errors, but nothing that really distracts from reading.

As for your statements about the undead types, I would like to point out that only Zombies and Vampires are clearly stated to be mostly nocturnal. A case can be made for the Wights being nocturnal as well (they do tend to create demon realms of everlasting night), but it isn't explicitly said that they are. Also no undead species is harmed by sunlight. Even Vampires, though weakened by it, won't be harmed by it.

Also with the references to Charisse it seems that your story takes place quite a while before the "current timeline" stories (which makes sense obviously).

Finally I'm glad to see the story continued and hope to see more soon.
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Dec 14, 2016 11:10 PM

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Happy birthday
Dec 17, 2016 9:34 PM

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@Metal: When the case is not explicitly stated in either for or against, I can take the creative liberty of deciding for them lol. And if you're weakened by sunlight, wouldn't you do your best to avoid it? But otherwise good catch on the color coding, idk how that happened as I modified old text so it shouldn't have been an issue :S.

@Clar: Thanks ^_^
Dec 18, 2016 12:58 AM

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Chapters 8-14 have been updated.
Dec 20, 2016 4:44 PM

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greatgreenman said:
@Metal: When the case is not explicitly stated in either for or against, I can take the creative liberty of deciding for them lol. And if you're weakened by sunlight, wouldn't you do your best to avoid it? But otherwise good catch on the color coding, idk how that happened as I modified old text so it shouldn't have been an issue :S.


But it totally IS stated =P

(this is the official English translation)
"They possess extremely high fighting abilities, but they also have a ton of weaknesses. Under the sun's rays, their physical abilities are weakened to the degree of an ordinary human girl, and just from touching fresh water, a powerful numbing pleasure will course through their body. Additionally, they are weak to garlic, and just smelling it will diminish their reasoning abilities, and render them unable to think straight. Were one to put it in their mouth, their rationality would completely disappear, and they'd end up going wild and seeking pleasure just like the original variety of succubus. "

As long as they aren't catching on fire, exploding into dust, or sparkling in the sun, you're probably fine. =) Just don't set a precedent unless you're also going to add your own reasoning why things are a certain way--like a vampire clan/bloodline or series of them that is still actually harmed by sunlight due to a curse, corrupted demonic energy, or something.
Dec 21, 2016 7:42 AM

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@Em: Long time no see! Anyways, when I originally posted these (way back when), the description for vampires had mentioned that while sun light was not lethal, it was uncomfortable. The theory kind of extended to most undead MGs that they typically avoided sunlight in general with the exception of a few. I'm not the first to use this logic either. But I don't want to debate it, I didn't plan on updating lore while updating the plot but if it's an issue I can change the wording. I appreciate the feedback.
Dec 21, 2016 2:55 PM

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I just noticed Green's tag: the Sydokiller stalking party... What the heck? :-P
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Dec 21, 2016 4:03 PM

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MetallumOperatur said:
I just noticed Green's tag: the Sydokiller stalking party... What the heck? :-P


run whilst you can
Dec 21, 2016 5:14 PM

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Welcome back! (even though it's been a while, the way my head works it may as well have been 2 weeks ago =) )

Clarus_Nox said:
MetallumOperatur said:
I just noticed Green's tag: the Sydokiller stalking party... What the heck? :-P


run whilst you can


Yeah...sydolestation was the downfall of many a pure soul =P
Dec 22, 2016 11:10 AM

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Do not blaspheme our noble mission!
Dec 22, 2016 8:51 PM

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Chapters 15-23 have been updated
Jan 21, 2017 3:14 PM

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Chapters 24-27 have been updated
Feb 6, 2017 1:18 PM

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Read up to chapter 15 so far. Got a slight gungrave vibe from Tony and Shawn :D
Really like it so far. The flashback to his world are pretty good, giving more information on the relationship between the two. I wonder if the man from the graveyard is somehow related to shawn aswell.

Edit: Read through the rest. Awesome so far. Hope you get out of that dreamworld soon^^
Feb 12, 2017 5:23 PM

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I'm sorry the updates lately have been slow, work has ramped up a bit and it doesn't help that the chapter I'm on is one of the ones I wanted to change the most, there's a significant amount changed and I just can't get it to "feel" right just yet.
Feb 13, 2017 6:24 PM

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No worries, just take your time and hurry up :L
Feb 26, 2017 8:04 AM

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Unfortunately I will be fairly inactive until 17March. Nothing serious so don't worry, but I have no time to myself until this rotation is over. I'll be on periodically but it will be rare and sporadic.
Mar 4, 2017 1:53 PM

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Btw, a new chapter has been updated ^^
Mar 13, 2017 5:42 PM

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Another chapter has been updated
Mar 14, 2017 9:10 AM

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caught up
Mar 19, 2017 9:46 AM

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We'll be abandoning the vault soon and move all the stories back to the MG club. Since you're reworking your story, you might want to move it while your at it. Feel free to make a thread there and continue uploading the reworked chapters there.

Note that we've decided to get rid of the MSGC/MSGS division. You can use [MSG] as the tag in your title.
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Mar 24, 2017 5:10 PM

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A "new" chapter has been posted.... So what if it takes place before the last chapter I ever posted?
Mar 27, 2017 6:04 PM

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Hopefully MAL doesn't screw this up again :/ but I officially welcome back the Monster Girl Dungeon!

Monster girl dungeon: Part 1

Mar 27, 2017 6:05 PM

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Monster girl dungeon continued… *PART TWO*

Did you bring the Arachne child with you? (If not, proceed to next post)

Yes

Mar 27, 2017 6:05 PM

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Monster Girl Dungeon Continued... *Part Two*

Did you bring the Arachne child with you?

No

May 24, 2017 11:27 AM

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New chapters have been posted :)
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