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Jun 19, 2016 5:46 AM
#551
@Nice Basicaly, it does not add any defense to my char ( it only reduce his flesh's elasticity ) so he's still as vulnerable as anyone from any type of attack if not more vulnerable if he uses it on himself I don't recall having a localized hardening power bit i don't mind deleting anything that is related to localized ise of power The undestructible bone was a fantaisy of my part i know would never be approved ( jist say no for god's sake i don't care XD) And for the 20 liter limit i usualy show how strong my strenghening is to show how much volume i can still harden And i don't see why you say even if i don't use it it's still there ?? It's either strenghening or hardening but not both at the same time |
Jun 19, 2016 6:08 AM
#552
@Recouerr Basicaly, it does not add any defense to my char ( it only reduce his flesh's elasticity ) so he's still as vulnerable as anyone from any type of attack if not more vulnerable if he uses it on himself Then, what kind of benefit will the power provide? If you ask me, making the skin as hard as a rock is pretty much giving yourself dermal armor. I don't recall having a localized hardening power bit i don't mind deleting anything that is related to localized ise of power Have it your way. See what fits and what doesn't. I don't have a grasp on the exact benefits of your power, so I don't have insight on it at the moment. The undestructible bone was a fantaisy of my part i know would never be approved ( jist say no for god's sake i don't care XD) Very well then. Remove that aspect. And i don't see why you say even if i don't use it it's still there ?? It's either strenghening or hardening but not both at the same time I didn't say you'd use it simultaneously. I'm just pointing out that even if you don't usually activate that part of your ability, you still have that on standby, so it still needs to be modified. |
Jun 19, 2016 6:16 AM
#553
Jun 19, 2016 6:29 AM
#554
Body and object enhencening: -he can harden his skin ( it can become as tough as a rock ) -he can boost his strength using threads of particule ( about 1.5 times max ) but about 2.5 times if it is localized ( just one arm for exemple but localiziging it more than one arm won't change his strengthening also the strengthening of just one arm isn't practical since in a fight you need to use your own body so it can only be used for very specialized tasks ) -he can harden any object or make it sharper by simply touching it. He can harden anything by 2 times but his skin, which he can harden 4 times. He also has a limitation on the volume he can harden which is 20 liter or else it would weaken drastically his hardening ( it would become nul ). -if he uses stregthening about half his max he can only uses about half the max for hardening and if he uses strenghening to his max, he cannot uses hardening at all and conversly. -he needs 2posts to be able to change his stats -he can change his stats once every 10 posts. I'm seriously confused right now. Doesn't an object hardened by your ability also becomes stronger? if he uses stregthening about half his max he can only uses about half the max for hardening and if he uses strenghening to his max, he cannot uses hardening at all and conversly. I don't get the idea of this... |
Jun 19, 2016 6:35 AM
#555
@Nice Basicaly i only strenghen the hardness of the said object And the more volume i use my hardening on something the less the strenghening i apply on myself is strong as if half the max volume is used, i only have half of my strengh left. And basicaly, let's say i harden a knife, his durability will increase, allowing me to cut through materials the knifes wouldn't be able to cut otherwise thanks to the increased durability. |
RecouerrJun 19, 2016 6:39 AM
Jun 19, 2016 6:45 AM
#556
@nice I edited the power heavily.He no longer feels extreme pain,increased the durayion of his power,reduced cooldown and modified the object freezing part.Also removed the mental effect. P.S:As for the duration and cooldown,will do. |
CalmCallJun 19, 2016 6:48 AM
I don't even know what to write in here. |
Jun 19, 2016 2:13 PM
#557
@Recouerr Ah, yes. I get what you mean now. I had to get some shuteye. but about 2.5 times if it is localized A 250% boost in power is too much, even when used only in one area of the body. As I've said, 1.5x is the highest possible attribute boost for a rank F, unless it has some drawbacks. He can harden anything by 2 times but his skin, which he can harden 4 times. Please, do tell me the benefits you will get from this, especially when used on own skin. And basicaly, let's say i harden a knife, his durability will increase, allowing me to cut through materials the knifes wouldn't be able to cut otherwise thanks to the increased durability.. No, durability does not equal sharpness. A durable version of a kitchen knife does not let you cut through wood like it cuts butter - it only allows you to hit harder with the knife more times before it breaks. |
Jun 19, 2016 7:54 PM
#558
Krop-Tor said: Name : Calamity Asmodeus Age: 16 Gender: Female Power: Eye of Genesis Power Description: Allows her to open the Eye of Genesis once per battle. When it opens, it becomes a vulnerable point on her body and will stay open until he activates one of its effects. 1) Genesis Restoration: The Eye of Genesis heals all her wounds and fully restores all health and stamina. 2) Genesis Feedback: The next attack that hits her, will be reflected unto the enemy in double magnitude, regardless of the type. The damage she takes from the strike is halved. 3) Genesis Barrier: A barrier that will block any one attack, regardless of power. This also usually sends the attacker backwards from the force of the barrier breaking. 4) Genesis Thunder: The only purely offensive ability the Eye of Genesis has. She can call upon the Eye to summon a bolt of pure lightening on her enemy. Weapon: She wields a Punching Dagger in one hand, and a thorned whip in the other. She is quite skilled with both. Rank: F Club: Astronomy, Art Pic: Personality: She loves the endlessness of space, and loves to imagine just how big it must be. She loves trying to understand people through art, it is her philosophy that art is the medium in which the soul can materialize its true values in our world. She can be a bit childish and random at times. She is kind towards others, and likes those who are humble most. Masochistic most of the time but she can become quite the sadist if she fights the kind of person she despises. She calls herself Cally. Doesnt like to tell people her real name for obvious reasons. Bio: She was born into the family of Asmodeus, named so because it is believed that they are the direct descendants of the Demon Sin Lord of Lust - Asmodeus. When it was learned that she possessed the Eye of Genesis, she was given the weapons passed through the family, the Omnifang, and the Sucubus Tail. During the training sessions at the manor, a human with an ability called the Eye of Kaaos appeared and destroyed her home. She survived that day and found out through a vague reading that her ability and the Eye of Kaaos are related somehow. She transferred to Mirai High to hone her skill with the weapons she has, and to learn the full potential of the Eye of Genesis and what it has to do with the ability that destroyed her family. This still needs looked at by admins and its in the previous page so i thought i'd help make it more noticeable ^^ |
Jun 19, 2016 9:04 PM
#559
Krop-Tor said: Name : Calamity Asmodeus Age: 16 Gender: Female Power: Eye of Genesis Power Description: Allows her to open the Eye of Genesis once per battle. When it opens, it becomes a vulnerable point on her body and will stay open until he activates one of its effects. 1) Genesis Restoration: The Eye of Genesis heals all her wounds and fully restores all health and stamina. 2) Genesis Feedback: The next attack that hits her, will be reflected unto the enemy in double magnitude, regardless of the type. The damage she takes from the strike is halved. 3) Genesis Barrier: A barrier that will block any one attack, regardless of power. This also usually sends the attacker backwards from the force of the barrier breaking. 4) Genesis Thunder: The only purely offensive ability the Eye of Genesis has. She can call upon the Eye to summon a bolt of pure lightening on her enemy. Weapon: She wields a Punching Dagger in one hand, and a thorned whip in the other. She is quite skilled with both. Rank: F Club: Astronomy, Art Pic: Personality: She loves the endlessness of space, and loves to imagine just how big it must be. She loves trying to understand people through art, it is her philosophy that art is the medium in which the soul can materialize its true values in our world. She can be a bit childish and random at times. She is kind towards others, and likes those who are humble most. Masochistic most of the time but she can become quite the sadist if she fights the kind of person she despises. She calls herself Cally. Doesnt like to tell people her real name for obvious reasons. Bio: She was born into the family of Asmodeus, named so because it is believed that they are the direct descendants of the Demon Sin Lord of Lust - Asmodeus. When it was learned that she possessed the Eye of Genesis, she was given the weapons passed through the family, the Omnifang, and the Sucubus Tail. During the training sessions at the manor, a human with an ability called the Eye of Kaaos appeared and destroyed her home. She survived that day and found out through a vague reading that her ability and the Eye of Kaaos are related somehow. She transferred to Mirai High to hone her skill with the weapons she has, and to learn the full potential of the Eye of Genesis and what it has to do with the ability that destroyed her family. Your power is fine, since you can only use one of those 4 powers, once per turn. keep in mind that your one attack that you can use during the whole fight.. If that is the ability you choose to use. It can't take an opponent out in one blow. Also despite it being an electric attack. It can't paralyse. those are due to club rules.. XD With that being said, she can't be good at both those weapons, you can only choose one out of the two. |
Jun 20, 2016 4:29 AM
#560
@SakuraSweetHeart Revision Complete. She now wields a black whip. So, am I good, or is there something more I should do? |
Darth_LewdiousJun 20, 2016 7:43 PM
Jun 20, 2016 5:32 PM
#561
@nekyne Right off the bat....... Power Guidelines 1. The power is not allowed to change the enemy in any way e.g. changing emotions, causing dizziness, change thoughts, hypnosis. 2. The power is not allowed to be overpowered e.g. mind reading, causing death by touch. 3. You can't have powers that can see the past/future or read/change time in any way. 4. The power cannot go against the rules of godmodding (see here: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=1487532) 5. No teleportation 6. The power shouldn't be able to knock out the enemy with only one hit. Please reassess your character's power. |
Jun 20, 2016 5:51 PM
#562
nekyne said: Power Explanation: Aokitsu can trick peoples minds by fast motions and inking their memories like by Déjà vu or other tactics. He cannot control other peoples minds since the power was locked from the Ministry of magic for over a century. He can pass time or relax by getting some cards and playing around with the pictures on them by manipulating the ink. As he is still a rank f, he can only create dummies or small, short lasting illusions. Basically magic in general. That should tell you. |
Jun 20, 2016 6:03 PM
#563
Jun 20, 2016 6:10 PM
#564
@Nice This is the Character Creation Thread. Keep such comments out of here. :P |
Jun 20, 2016 7:48 PM
#565
@nekyne Just a heads up, this part is against the rules. nekyne said: There is an exception though, as he can hold the other characters weapon or power and use it on his own. The Rules said: 2. The power is not allowed to be overpowered e.g. mind reading, causing death by touch, copying powers, nullification of powers |
Jun 20, 2016 7:54 PM
#566
@nekyne I have my doubts about this power, but the admins are the final judges. Good luck with that. |
Jun 20, 2016 8:33 PM
#567
@nekyne First off: Club: Art, Going home, and relaxing club. (thinking about putting him in the calligraphy club but eh) A character is only allowed to join at most two clubs. can only change things into simple elements What are these simple elements? Judging from your example, I'd say steel is one? Also, wood, stone, and glass, perhaps? I think I'll need a list of these simple elements for convenience. There is an exception though, as he can hold the other characters weapon and use it on his own FOR ELEMENTS. Please explain. I kind of don't get what you mean. Does this mean that if he holds an enemy's sword made of darkness, he can use darkness? Also, a side note, but your weapons could potentially present a problem. Considering that your character holds a deck of, say, tarot cards, it'd mean that he could make 70+ razor-sharp projectiles, right? I may be wrong here though. |
Jun 20, 2016 9:43 PM
#568
@nekyne when your science teacher says basic/simple elements, what do you think of? Hey, smartass. I'd love to see a sword made out of lithium or nitrogen. GGWP with the intramolecular bonds on that one. Also, answering a question with a question? Poor response in my opinion. I love how dark matter is used as a substance. I'll consult that part of the power with the admins first, since that could be labeled as copying another power during certain situations. |
Nice--Jun 20, 2016 10:05 PM
Jun 20, 2016 10:03 PM
#569
Btw Going Home Club is just basically saying you don't have any club so having other ones besides it would not really work. |
Jun 21, 2016 4:59 AM
#570
Name: Wesley Tremble Age: 16 Gender: Male Power: Earthbending Power Explanation: Can pick up and change the form of a rock meaning that he can change it from a circular form to for example a spike and can also move the earth around enemies using it to for example trap them he can move by moving the rocks underneath him to go faster then a normal person could run and can use the earth to form a little cocoon around his feet making him able to walk up walls Cooldowns on the power Reshaping earth takes 1 post if forming a small rock, two posts if a medium-sized rock, and three if large. Has no cooldown, but is cancelled when the character is hit. Entombing enemies takes two posts to channel, and enemies must move five meters away to avoid the tomb. Two post cooldown. Small rocks travel fifteen meters while medium-sized rocks travel ten meters. Large rocks travel a maximum of five meters.. Weapon: Piece of rock which holds a lot of emotional history for him Rank: F Club: Track club Pic: http://ami.animecharactersdatabase.com/uploads/chars/5688-599559539.jpg Personality: Shy but opens up once you get to talk to him a bit more, Helpful person and tries to help people even though this will make him worse Bio: Exchange student from Holland 16 yeas old lost his dad in a car accident which also had himself in the accident this is also where the rock comes from since this rock was the rock that flew from the cars tire in front of them and flew right through the front windshield and hit his dad in the head rendering him unconsious causing the accident. Further more hes a silent student that doesnt like to fit in the group and just does his own things he is a really fast lad tho which is why hes on the track team. He stays calm in most situations but is a very loyal person which means that if they fuck with his friends this guy goes berserk he also gets really mad at a couple of other things like things involving family or hypocritical people |
R3solutionJun 24, 2016 2:50 AM
Jun 21, 2016 5:42 AM
#571
Jun 21, 2016 7:19 AM
#572
nekyne said: にもながらナイスわのなまえはナイス、ナイスわしないniceてんで;^_^A生きる上の名(・Д・)ノ ^ oh you see that? thats called JAPANESE. better not google translate it. First of all.. *that's Sorry. Couldn't resist. Impressed with your tongue? Or fingers, perhaps? It wouldn't be so nice to express or voice out opinions and/or criticisms with a foreign language, would it? The name does not define the man, nekyne. Owning the username "Nice" doesn't mean I have to be, you know. Oh, and also, I had an acquaintance of mine translate the sentence for me. Please, try to speak in Navajo code or Swahili so that I would have no idea on how to decipher it. :) Anyway, on to the review: I'd still need a list of materials that he can transform other materials into. More materials will be unlocked at higher ranks. (That you can see or feel. Happy @nice?) Oh, I'm not happy. At least not yet. :) He cannot change an object infinitely as its volume will decrease slowly A minor detail, but does this mean that once a refrigerator gets turned into a dagger, it can't be changed back into a refrigerator? |
Jun 21, 2016 9:44 PM
#573
Name: Tyrone Agoní Age: 17 Gender: Male Power: Physical Metal Bending (I have read through Chrome Elbia’s and Sayuri Takanaka’s powers of metal bending but I think this form of metal bending is different) Power Explanation: Can manipulate the shape of various types of metal (where the type of metal depends on skill) like clay and can create tools and maybe even weapons. Of course, the quality of the objects made will depend on Tyrone’s skill with bending metal, and since he had just recently obtained his power (read bio for more details), his experience with physical metal bending is low. However with this power, Tyrone must come in physical contact with the metal in order to change its shape, meaning skin-to-metal contact therefore Tyrone cannot command the metal to change shape if he were to wear gloves. Weapon: Ancient Carbon Steel Knuckles, these are high quality metal knuckles that were made by the ancestors of the Agoní family that were handed down for generations. These knuckles almost equal the hardness of diamond in the Mohs scale. These knuckles were specially made to be non-malleable; therefore, Tyrone cannot bend this metal to be anything he wanted with his current skill. (But maybe he might be able to in the future since his (technically) ancestors were able to shape it.) Rank: F Club: Boxing/Martial Arts and Robotics (I see this club is not official but am I able to join it?) Pic: Source: The Boondocks; Character: Bushido Brown (Just pretend he's 17 years old) Personality: Tyrone is more of the quiet type but is also quite adventurous and likes to explore new things. He tries his best to be kind and gentle with other people. He is mostly laid-back and relaxed and does not anger too easily. The last thing Tyrone would think of is breaking into a fight out of anger or for some other reason, unless fighting involved an event of an organized sport like boxing. If there’s one thing Tyrone loves, it has gotta be cats (just the animals, no splices with humans or other animals). Tyrone found this out after seeing a cat in the front gates of the school. He would stop whatever he was doing in order to pet and snuggle with a cat. Bio: This might be a lot of reading, so be prepared Tyrone has had no contact with his biological parents and had no memories of them. He stayed out in the wild from his infant to childhood years, living off of scraps of food and water which explains his slim figure. Around the age of seven, Tyrone was wandering around until he encountered a man named Dr. Agoní in one of his adventures. Dr. Agoní noticed Tyrone's physical status and adopted him. This was supposedly Dr. Agoní's first encounter with another human that wasn't his parents, whom have passed, since the beginning of his adventures. Dr. Agoní was an unknown scientist who wielded the powers of Metal Bending but suffered a long term, terminal illness. Fortunately for Tyrone, the illness was not contagious in any way, whether it was blood-to-blood or mucous contact. Tyrone did not attend school, but throughout the duo’s travels, Dr. Agoní educated and trained him physically and mentally, although Dr. Agoní being the crazy old middle aged man he was, Tyrone’s education and training was not up to par with actual universities and training dojos, nevertheless, Tyrone learned more fighting and survival skills. After around nine years of their travels and discoveries around the world, still without any contact with other humans, Dr. Agoní was near his last breaths. Despite all the adventures the two have made, Dr. Agoní has not made a name for himself and his family name remains unknown to the world, so he wanted to pass down the name to Tyrone. Tyrone was like a real son to Dr. Agoní and he took the honor to being Dr. Agoní’s successor. In the last couple days of Dr. Agoní’s life, he handed down the family knuckles, which were handed down for generations along with the power of metal bending. However, since Tyrone was not Dr. Agoní’s biological son, he possessed no power of metal bending, and Dr. Agoní made the last decision of his life, to transfer his powers to Tyrone through a complete blood transfusion. It was a desperate attempt by the doctor to transfer the powers of metal bending to Tyrone and the chance of success was very slim, in spite of the chances, Tyrone agreed to participate in it. The procedure has undergone and it was a painful and agonizing process For both of them since all of Dr. Agoní’s blood had to be transferred to Tyrone and Tyrone had to empty all of his blood through a metallic machine. It was the most dangerous action they’ve done since the procedure absolutely had to be quick since it involved the transfer of locations of both of the persons’ blood. Tyrone remembered the last words of Dr. Agoní and will forever keep it dear to himself. The metal bending powers handed down to Tyrone was overwhelming to him and he remained unconscious for only 5 days after the transfusion, which was pretty impressive considering it being an extreme procedure. The procedure was a success, or at least a success with survivability. After waking up and going around, getting used to his new bodily feeling, Tyrone noticed that he was only able to manipulate the shape of metal through his hands and other areas of the body like the feet and elbows, and was unable to control metal in thin air like Dr. Agoní was able to, but he was really glad that he had even a little speck of the power. Tyrone had hit his 16th birthday after a few days since the procedure. Tyrone had a duty to fulfill, and tried to follow in the footsteps of his father, Dr. Agoní. One year has passed and Tyrone explored many unknown lands, and for the first time in his and Dr. Agoní’s adventures in uncharted land, Tyrone encountered a human, around his age. This person came up to Tyrone and noticed Tyrone’s ability to change the shape of metal. Tyrone did not know this, but this person actually had the illegal power of mind manipulation and had actually attended a school, but was expelled for abusing the school rules. It was a short encounter, and before Tyrone knew it, he was at the front gates of Mirai High School. What really happened was that the person Tyrone met “persuaded” him to attend the high school with an unknown motive. Tyrone's goal now was to gain acceptance to Mirai High School for a new life since it was the only thing he could think of, because he forgot completely everything about his past. As he walked to the front doors of the school, he felt that he was forgetting something very important... like a family member, and he keeps a pair of steel knuckles dear to him, like it was the only thing in the world he cared about. All he remembers were his name, Tyrone Agoní, and the words: "Metal is the way of life, I love you, son.". Despite the fact that the mind manipulator wiped almost all of Tyrone's memory, the man gave Tyrone fluency in the English language since Tyrone and Dr. Agoní spoke in only gibberish that only the two could understand. |
TyronyJun 22, 2016 3:03 PM
Jun 22, 2016 2:26 AM
#574
Jun 22, 2016 2:44 AM
#575
@Cynado Ah, no. The 7% hp lost modifier isn't needed. We don't keep track of HP in percentage here anyway. What I meant was to indicate the materials that Razor Wind could cut through. For example, could it cut through softwood? Hardwood? Maybe it could leave scratches on stone? |
Jun 22, 2016 2:51 AM
#576
@R3solution Can manipulate earth by changing its core elements and heating it or cooling it down since hes a rank F student he cannot move the earth after its been turned into for example lava or magma Changing its core elements could mean changing simple dirt to iron, which is already a power in itself. Also, heating rocks past their melting point is pretty much overpowered. We can't have you flooding the fields with lava. I'd recommend changing the power to simple "earthbending", levitating rocks, and flinging them at enemies. If you do, write down a list of what he can do as a Rank F, with cooldowns. :) |
Jun 22, 2016 3:29 AM
#578
And my character got lost in the vortex of comments.....I cri every tiem!!! |
I don't even know what to write in here. |
Jun 22, 2016 3:34 AM
#579
Jun 22, 2016 3:58 AM
#581
Jun 22, 2016 4:21 AM
#582
Jun 22, 2016 4:22 AM
#583
Nice said: Okay thanks for the respond i quick edited my last post so if u can check it out that would be much appreciated :D@R3solution Can manipulate earth by changing its core elements and heating it or cooling it down since hes a rank F student he cannot move the earth after its been turned into for example lava or magma Changing its core elements could mean changing simple dirt to iron, which is already a power in itself. Also, heating rocks past their melting point is pretty much overpowered. We can't have you flooding the fields with lava. I'd recommend changing the power to simple "earthbending", levitating rocks, and flinging them at enemies. If you do, write down a list of what he can do as a Rank F, with cooldowns. :) |
Jun 23, 2016 6:55 PM
#584
@CalmCall Actually, we're avoiding vague descriptions here. He can freeze objects pretty fast(depends on size),but when it comes to living lifeforms it takes a lot more effort to do anything. How fast is fast? What is the fastest that he can freeze? What do you mean by 'a lot more effort'? @R3solution I'll need durations and cooldowns (in terms of posts) for all of your ability's applications. Ranges should also be added to your abilities. |
Jun 23, 2016 9:07 PM
#585
Does anybody remember this character that I posted a week ago and never got approved? Name: James Hana. Height: 6'6 feet. Weight 112 pounds. Age: 17 Gender: Male Power: Resomancer Explanation: Can control the sound waves of their own voice. Can make it louder or quieter, can turn their voice into a devastating blast. Can yell at somebody for 1 post, which stuns them for 1 post and has a cooldown of 3 posts. Other attacks are punching with augmented sound, which can cause small cuts in the opponents body. James will get more powerful eventually ( The underpoweredness is on purpose ) but they're underpowered for now because they're very new at their power. Weapon: Brass Knuckles with steel spikes on the end. Rank: F Pic: Club: Martial Arts Personality: Very shy, but when you get them mad, or if you hurt their friends (or senpai), they will destroy you. (Borderline Yandere) Bio: Their grandmother was the leading figure in their life, and gave them their brass knuckles on her death bed. Was shunned for being homosexual when they came out when they were 6, and they ran away to their friends house. Then was kicked out of the friends house and put into an orphanage. They were there for 7 years in terrible living conditions, and eventually fell in love with somebody at the orphanage. Then they confessed their love to their senpai and were rejected. Then they became secluded and starved themselves half to death. They were anorexic and exhausted for a while, before somebody from Mirai High came to the orphanage and rescued them. They got over their anorexia and depression and moved to Mirai High, and now they have a secret crush that nobody knows about. |
BlairIsBest7Jun 23, 2016 9:24 PM
Jun 23, 2016 10:26 PM
#586
Recouerr said: Name: William subaru Age: he claims to be 17 Gender: male Power: Body and object enhencening: -he can harden his skin ( it can become as tough as a rock ) -he can boost his strength using threads of particule ( about 1.5 times max ) -he can harden any object or make it sharper by simply touching it. He can harden anything by 2 times. He also has a limitation on the volume he can harden which is 20 liter or else it would weaken drastically his hardening ( it would become nul ). -if he uses stregthening about half his max he can only uses about half the max for hardening and if he uses strenghening to his max, he cannot uses hardening at all and conversly. -he needs 2posts to be able to change his stats -he can change his stats once every 10 posts. Power Explanation: he can produce subatomic particle and control them at will to bend the law of nature to his will. however he can produce only a very few of them and can only perform body and object enhencening. As time passes, more will be produced and he will be able to use it with new skill and gain major boosts for his former powers. This is principaly due to the fact that he needs to use some computing devices however before coming to this world, his was destroyed, preventing him from sustaining a fatal injury (cf end of part 2 in his bio) because those are implanted in the chest and are biocompaptible (of course).however those devices are technologies that uses the same subatomic particule to process information which can make it a sentient being due to the amount of information processed and so another self of the protagonist, which he definetly lost because of the technology in this world isn't as advanced as his. His eyes and earing are also mechanical however, due to the fact he needs some computer to use them, he ended up with a bad eyesight however he still has good hearing even though he cannot echolocate anything as he used to and just have a little above average hearing Weapon: anything is fine as long as it's practical Rank: F Club: boxing club engineering club Pic: https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/originals/be/66/0f/be660f48dd53e5f6c194c857c79ea90a.jpg 180 cm tall and 90 kg in wheight but does not look muscular because of a very thin frame while being very wellbuid. Personality: he's bright and chearful and likes to discover new things as he venture through the world and he's a fight maniac and will never turn down a proposital to fight with someone else as long as it does not endanger his life. However no matter how difficult the harship, he will always tries to find a solution, even if it costs him his life. Bio: he's from another space-time continuum which in this society, the catholic religion never appeared and scriptures of grec and roman philosopher greatly inspired the wealthiest, leading to the creation of scientific standards in order to make humanity progress as fast as possible. With those progress, man rapidly conquered the world and the population increased at an alarming rate. The primary ressources soon became a great source of conflicts and wars over ressources hapened all the time. However, one small state never took position in any wars because it controlled the population, never having more people than they could feed, and never attracting covetouseness which made it very prosperous and allowed it to increase its scientific reseach faster than any other country. However, the technologie of other countries slowly grew as well and gained in size. But the scale of the war too grew in size, making some countries realize that now, man could destroy the Earth many times over, which resulted in a common truce between those countries, however, as they saw that the other countries were still fighting over ressources and so, they were weakened, this new allied nation gave in to its insticts and started a war between those smaller nations. Twenty years before which would be known as the great world war, the most prosperous country saw his king die, which was a great shock among the citizen of this little country as the king was from the second generation of immortal and supposedly should live for millenias. But he had many descendants, but only the fitest for the position of king should be selected through a serie of tests to dertermine who it would be. After the tests were done, by the surprise of every one, the least likely to be throned since he was the youngest proved that he was the most suited and qualified to become a king. But he was also the son which the king had passed the most of his time to instruct so it made some sense for the follower of the former king and accepted him shortly after he was throned. However, this new king sort of came out of nowhere as the king was very secretive, even with his own son and only spoke to a handful. And so this new king also had a very solitary lifestyle, only learning how to become the greatest king, never having much of social interaction, exept for his childhood friend, a girl shich came often to his room and to whom he could talk freely. She was like a mental support, never allowing to break down and remain strong in the path of becoming a great ruler. As he was crowned and became a king, he soon made his childhood friend his queen and she never let him down no matter the criticism for him being so young and declaring him incompetent without knowing how much sacrifices he had done for those people. During the first attack of the allied nation, the allied nations won batlles after battles, conquering slowly but surely territories from other nations. However, a king of a greater nation, delusionned by his former power wanted to make a full scale assault on the allied nations, bug his subordinates knew ghat would lead them to their doom and instead chose to betray him at the last moment, trying to assassinate him, and then join force with the allied nations as they wanted a ruler worthy of them. But they failed in the atempt of assassinating him and this fallen king then took asylum in a litlle country which is prosperous and they could easly protect him since the new king of this country married his sister. But even though he managed to escape his death, his mind was broken as he lost his friends, his wealth and his nation. Not knowing what to do, he learned from he king of this country many things, like how to rule, how to lead his troops to victory no matter the conditions, etc... In short how to become a great ruler. But he was a ruler no more and seeing the allied nations still winning territories he then asked for help from the king which was like a friend and a mentor since they were about the same age. But the king said he could not join hands with him since his nation made a truce with the allied nations. Instead, with the newly created weapon he made which was a weapon never seen before and was considered to be the greatest, he decided to acompany him with his wife and help him to actualy make the scattered countries that were still fighting into a unique new country in order to repeal the allied nations' forces. The process was long but the damocles' sword coming from the threat of the allied nations allowed him to unite them actualy very fast as it was only a matter of year to have a power that could rival the united nations' propress. But what was unexpected was that the former king became the leader of this new nation, which would be named the world nation in the future. As time passed war ended and the world nation became the first country to unite the world into one. It was a time of peace and so, the king of the litle country came back to his country as he finished his duty, managing to form great contract with this new country which beneficed greatly both of them. However, the subordinate of the world nation were greedy, as they wanted the knowledge of this only opposing country which were far superior. And so they influenced slowly their king, which was in too good term with the king of this country to steal their knowledge or declare war against it. And so they slowly made this king become paranoid of anything telling him that he would be killed by the other king or that he would take power by using the economic advantage they had. So the king was crazed and ordered the assassination of the other king. But his sister knew of the intention of his brother to kill her husband. She tried to resonate him but nothing could be done, as he even said to his own sister to kill her husband. She actualy took this very seriously and since she could not save him or so she thought, she decided to kill him herself as she only had this right. However, when she shot him in the heart, she actualy missed him. And so, the king, as he saw who tried to kill him, became desperate and from his despear, as to flee his current situation, he used a theory he thought of many years before and created a gate to another space time continuum, fleeing his own world. when he woke up, he was in a hospital, with people of another language and culture. Even though he was desperate, he was still happy to find that his theory worked out perfectly and the he was still in a world with human being. But he couldn't talk to any of them since their language was different. However some words were familiar to him even though they were slitly different. During his stay in the hospital, a nurse helped him to learn this new language and they started to become friends, the nurse clearly saw that he was very gloomy at times. After all, he had beed betrayed by the only one he truly lovedand now he was lost, without a reason to live. At the last day of his stay, she finaly asked him what was troubling him, and as she was the first friend he made since he came to his world, he just described how he was betrayed by the one he loved and how he couldn't be able to know for what reasons, ommiting the fact that he's from another world as even himself find this very peculiar. However, after hearing his story, the nurse did not felt sorry for him, but on the contrary scolded him saying that there was no use to mourn over the past and that he sounded more like a child wanting to be consoled than an adult to her. Those words greatly affected him when he left the hospital and found there was some thruth in them, after all, even though he was over ninety years old, he never had much of a chance to interact with others, exept for his wife, he was submerged in his reseach and his duty as a king, but now that he was free from them, he felt as if he was a new born baby and knew nothing of the world, he then decided to create himself a new identity, naming himself William Subaru and then joined a school he thought was fun since he could discover many things since it gathered oddities of this new world, and what is best to explore a new world than to live with the most peculiar living beings of it ? I think it's a bit long for his bio but i hope you like the story ;) @Nice ok i edited my char tell me if anything's off |
Jun 23, 2016 10:39 PM
#587
Jun 23, 2016 10:40 PM
#588
@BlairIsBest7 Can yell at somebody for 1 post Remember that this means that your character will do nothing but shout at the enemy for one whole post. Also, remember that your character could also be affected by his own voice - after all, sound travels in all directions. If you don't have any problems, and unless other admins have a reason to nullify this, I present you the seal of approval. It is recommended that you start off by RPing in the Entrance Gate. :D @Recouerr Unless other admins have a reason to nullify this, I present you the seal of approval. It is recommended that you start off by RPing in the Entrance Gate. :D |
Jun 23, 2016 10:45 PM
#589
CalmCall said: @nice By effort I mean time and endurance. The fastest he can freeze is 0.8 seconds for a 1 mm object.A car takes him about 15 minutes and so on and so forth. As I've said, measure all of your abilities' durations and cooldowns in terms of posts, as minutes and seconds are pretty much impossible to track in an RP. It is recommended you classify freezable objects in terms of size - "Small", "Medium", and "Large", and anything in between - and put durations on them. For example: All "small" objects could be frozen immediately. All "medium" objects could be frozen after one post. All "large" objects could be frozen after three posts. All "very large" objects could be frozen after five posts. Only __ objects could be frozen at any given time, and the freezing power has a cooldown of two posts. |
Jun 23, 2016 10:48 PM
#590
Jun 24, 2016 12:20 AM
#591
Nice said: @CalmCall Actually, we're avoiding vague descriptions here. He can freeze objects pretty fast(depends on size),but when it comes to living lifeforms it takes a lot more effort to do anything. How fast is fast? What is the fastest that he can freeze? What do you mean by 'a lot more effort'? @R3solution I'll need durations and cooldowns (in terms of posts) for all of your ability's applications. Ranges should also be added to your abilities. Updated it again look at it when you can :D |
Jun 24, 2016 1:24 AM
#592
@R3solution Rock throwing is relatively simple and doesnt have a very long cooldown depending on the size of the rock thrown also the range on this ability is about medium to long range although longer ranges take up more power medium range = 20m long range = 40m, changing the shape of a piece of earth takes up 3 seconds on channeling but can be done infinitely although when hit while channeling is canceled out, entrapping enemies into a earth cocomb is a long cooldown of 3 minutes since its at range and a lot of earth moving at once. 20 meters is too far for a rock to travel, let alone 40. I suggest you change them to medium range being 10 meters and long being 15 meters). Please, please, PLEASE measure durations and cooldowns in terms of posts. I suggest the following: Reshaping earth takes 1 post if forming a small rock, two posts if a medium-sized rock, and three if large. Has no cooldown, but is cancelled when the character is hit. Entombing enemies takes two posts to channel, and enemies must move five meters away to avoid the tomb. Two post cooldown. Small rocks travel fifteen meters while medium-sized rocks travel ten meters. Large rocks travel a maximum of five meters. |
Jun 24, 2016 2:51 AM
#593
Nice said: alright ill go with those im kinda new to this so i didnt exactly know what exactly to make the cooldowns like thanks for the help :D@R3solution Rock throwing is relatively simple and doesnt have a very long cooldown depending on the size of the rock thrown also the range on this ability is about medium to long range although longer ranges take up more power medium range = 20m long range = 40m, changing the shape of a piece of earth takes up 3 seconds on channeling but can be done infinitely although when hit while channeling is canceled out, entrapping enemies into a earth cocomb is a long cooldown of 3 minutes since its at range and a lot of earth moving at once. 20 meters is too far for a rock to travel, let alone 40. I suggest you change them to medium range being 10 meters and long being 15 meters). Please, please, PLEASE measure durations and cooldowns in terms of posts. I suggest the following: Reshaping earth takes 1 post if forming a small rock, two posts if a medium-sized rock, and three if large. Has no cooldown, but is cancelled when the character is hit. Entombing enemies takes two posts to channel, and enemies must move five meters away to avoid the tomb. Two post cooldown. Small rocks travel fifteen meters while medium-sized rocks travel ten meters. Large rocks travel a maximum of five meters. |
Jun 24, 2016 2:16 PM
#594
- Name: Haruhiro Nagase - Age: 18 - Gender: Male - Power: Electric Conduction - Power Explanation: His ability allows Haruhiro to absorb electricity from the enviroment (Cellphones, TVs, any electrical device) and retain it in his body for a certain amount of time, he can only absorb and discharge said energy trough physical contact, the bigger amount of electricity he absorbs the more powerful the discharge is, but it also shortens the time he can retain the electricity in his body. Notes: -He CAN'T generate any sort of electric energy on his own. -He can only use his hands to absorb and/or discharge energy. -It's easy to notice when he's using his power due to the sparks around his arm/s. -His power is still on a primitive stage so his energy discharges can't do stuff like transfering energy from one device to another. -Possess the natural ability to attract thunders and lightning during storms, it's quite annoying actually. - Weapon: Electric Tazer (Needs to recharge after extended use.) - Rank: F - Club: Relaxation Club :p - Pic: - Personality: He's a pretty shy guy when he doesn't feel comfortable with someone or in certain situations, tries to be a nice guy with pretty much everyone, but is also extremely lazy and kind of a pervert although he tries to hide this to most of the people he knows. Tries to act cool and fails most of the time. - Bio: When at the age of 9, young Haruhiro Nagase, accidentaly touched an electrical outlet after taking a shower, was when his parents became aware of his special ability, at first they were shocked (no pun intended), then confused, then relieved, then slightly scared, but then they just decided to accept that he was just a tad different from the rest of the other kids, but they loved him despite that. He spend his childhood in an average Middle-Low(?) class family and had a pretty normal life. At an older age he was a witness at a bank that was being robbed by a man with eletcrical powers, with all the courage he could gather he decided to face the man in question. Even though his electric attacks weren't a problem to Haruhiro, he couldn't do much about the vast difference on physical strength, being beaten into a pulp just long enough for the police to arrive at the place, the man escaped but Haru was still praised for avoiding important losses for said bank, they didn't reward him though. Due to this event his parents decided to inscribe him on the renowned Mirai High for the gifted, at first he was surprised, the confused, then scared, but then with a smile on his face he decided to go on this new adventure. (Later his smile was replaced with incessant shivering and nausea, but...that's not an important detaill hehe) Let know if there's something wrong, like grammatical errors or anything like that :) |
Jun 26, 2016 1:16 AM
#595
@R3solution @CalmCall @JJJ7 T-T-T-TRIPLE APPROVAL! Unless other admins have a reason to nullify this, I present you the seal of approval. |
Jun 26, 2016 1:20 PM
#596
Nice said: Arigatou Gosaimasu ^^@R3solution @CalmCall @JJJ7 T-T-T-TRIPLE APPROVAL! Unless other admins have a reason to nullify this, I present you the seal of approval. |
Jul 1, 2016 11:29 AM
#597
Name:Luna Lewis Age: 14 Gender: Female Power: Archery Power Explanation: Using her Bow and Arrow, Luna can shoot with 1.5x Accuracy to hit a Target Weapon: Bow and Arrow Rank: F Club: Archery and Dance Pic: Personality: She is shy and sensitive and doesn't talk much to people she isn't used to... She She loves Drawing, Contemporary Dancing and also Archery.. Bio: Luna has been a shy girls since she was young. She has a older twin sister, Lily; who has no powers, and a 2 years younger brother, Liam. Her parents were kind and nice... In elementary school, she had 2 best friends called Sadie and Lizzy. They were her only friends and were very close. She could trust them with anything. When Luna was 6, her mom decided to enrol her into archery classes. On her first day of Archery, she didn't do that good. She couldn't hold a bow properly, or even use one. As time went on, she still didn't progress very far, she could shoot a bow and arrow correctly and was even able to hit some of the target. On her 13th birthday, she wished that she could be better at archery. When she practised archery the next day, she could hit all the targets. Even targets very far away... That was how she discovered her powers which kept hidden for almost a year. |
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Jul 1, 2016 2:52 PM
#598
@luna_lewis Using her Magic Bow and Arrow, Luna can shoot and hit any target in the exact spot she targeted within 1 Km.. I'm sorry, but passive abilities such as these tend to be OP. And not to mention it has an effective range of 1 kilometer... None of the abilities here have an effective range of higher than 20 meters, so you could literally stand from a safe spot 1km away and fire at your target with unparalleled accuracy. See how OP it is? The highest stat boost we could give a Rank F is 1.4-1.5x to one or two attributes. A 1.5x accuracy is no match for your 1-km killzone of an ability. We'd suggest thinking of a new ability or just putting in 1.5x accuracy and 1.5x another attribute as your power. Note however that a person with 150% higher accuracy could still miss. |
Jul 2, 2016 6:44 AM
#599
Nice said: @luna_lewis Using her Magic Bow and Arrow, Luna can shoot and hit any target in the exact spot she targeted within 1 Km.. I'm sorry, but passive abilities such as these tend to be OP. And not to mention it has an effective range of 1 kilometer... None of the abilities here have an effective range of higher than 20 meters, so you could literally stand from a safe spot 1km away and fire at your target with unparalleled accuracy. See how OP it is? The highest stat boost we could give a Rank F is 1.4-1.5x to one or two attributes. A 1.5x accuracy is no match for your 1-km killzone of an ability. We'd suggest thinking of a new ability or just putting in 1.5x accuracy and 1.5x another attribute as your power. Note however that a person with 150% higher accuracy could still miss. Okay... Sure... I could change it just like you said with a 1.5 accuracy.... |
Jul 2, 2016 6:57 AM
#600
@luna_lewis You might want to remove the 1-km range from your ability. This is completely unnecessary, as none of Mirai High's amenities are that large. Also, what do you mean by a "magic bow and arrow"? Does the weapon have a special power? According to your bio, the power was an acquired talent and not a blessing granted by a weapon, so I'm assuming the magic bow and arrow has "magical" abilities. |
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