Jun 9, 2023
I'm kind of disappointed in this story, because I wanted to like it. I'm not saying its bad, but I wish it did just a bit more. The action and humor is good, but because it's only five chapters, there really isn't much to do with it. While I did like the chemistry between Gokuu and Touya took time to develop, there wasn't nearly enough intimate moments with them together. It was very interesting to use the Chinese mythology (and mix a little Japanese mythology as well), and have a mystical peach that The Monkey King bit transform into a beautiful baby boy after falling
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from Heaven. I was happy to see Touya being raised to two responsible and loving parents. And I understand that him looking so much like a girl, made most guys want to claim him as their prize - but of course, Touya had the strength to handle himself.
I would have liked to see a bit more of Gokuu training Touya on how to master his strength; unknowingly transforming Touya into his perfect soulmate. And it be cool if they'd went on some adventures filled with excitement and romance. It could have also happened at the final chapters where Gokuu and Touya helped Genjou travel safely to India; along with their other companions (Shaoshuu and Cho Hakkai). Though Gokuu's little monkey companion, Touchi, was also pretty adorable. They could have also elaborated a bit more on how Touya always smelled like peaches (especially whenever he'd sweat); and the scenes with the bike mark on his buttocks were fun to look at - Gokuu should have kissed it more often. Another thing is if it was done in color - while the art style along is beautiful, I notice how beautiful the color does for them.
Like I said, I would have liked if it was a bit longer, if it was colored, and it had a bit more intimate moments between the two main characters. Also, while it wasn't completely censored, it was maybe "semi". I don't know if other people will like it, but I suppose they should at least give it a chance.
Reviewer’s Rating: 5
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