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Mar 7, 2013 11:31 PM
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(2 years before now)

Having lived most he days with the recent news that his only family Mira left on a mission and has not returned, wanting to follow in her path to find out where she went he began his trial to become a genin for Kirigakure, originally being from Sunagakure most of the village hated him, it was at this time that Soren should have never decided to take this path...

The current jonin and leaders at the time felt they needed a way to lower the number of people they disliked in the village and so they devised a plan...
They would take all those they hated , but who wanted to become shinobi and figured those who passed would become tools and those who failed will have been disposed of being a win win situation for them. They then called out a meeting for many who wanted to become shinobi and stated that
" For the next few months we are going to have special training that will decide on future genin serving the village, those whose names are mentioned should step forward and receive their bands ( red, blue, yellow, green etc... ) the color of the bands will determine your teams and you will all be guided to the training location tomorrow"

After roughly 2 more hours of talking and reading out names "Gon , red" really big built guy who was roughly in his late teens walked up and looked like he was a physical beast he did not speak and was dead serious , "Yukito Anya, blue" a beautiful girl with white hair and light blue eyes wearing a white kimono walked up slowly then smiled at all the guys before looking to the side as if wanting to kill all of them, after that they finally read out " Tenmado Soren , yellow " ... Soren then ran up and got his band tying it around his arm, he was wearing basic village clothing which were more like rags, but at this stage it did not matter and it just happened that without Mira he could not afford to fix any of his clothes anyways.. as he was really excited at the time he slipped and fell off the stage, a few laughed while some people wanted to help but the Jonin in charge stared as if to help this outcast would be a bad idea if they valued their lives, he then accidentally bumped into (Susanna,Green team) and it was at this time that he noticed one of the most beautiful girls he had ever seen , right after the previous girl he just saw , as he just looked at her as she was standing before him. After pausing for a good long minute looking at her he realised he needed to hurry to get some free bread from the nice old man down by the river on the outskirts of the village where he stays away from everyone else...
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Mar 10, 2013 1:31 AM
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Susanna could finally make herself useful to the village, although she was starting to hate how thy treated her for not being able to use water techniques.

She didn't care what these tests were...she knew how it would end. They would try to kill her but they forgot how strong she was. These people who wanted to be genin? They would all be dead. It was best if she didn't get along with her team (green).

Some idiot bumped into her. She pays him no mind.
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Chapter 1 : Learning jutsu

So as they began in order to keep up with appearances they had to do some degree of testing and proper preparation for all those entered into this cannon fodder of a test
They grouped certain teams together so that they could save time as this was a basic learning exercises for the first day

So they called the yellow group first in order to test their affinities, handing them each their piece of paper...

Soren went and took his piece of paper as it just became wet as he then dropped it laughing a bit

He noticed that lady from earlier as she also took her paper( Susanna )
He was mesmerised by her but then he quickly got pushed out the way and told to move on to the next learning session

They discussed ninjutsu taijutsu and genjutsu, having not paid much attention Soren only took note of the ninjutsu since he was really too weak to use taijutsu and too stupid to control genjutsu...

After a while the green and yellow group were shown Sealing techniques SpaceTime jutsu, medical jutsu etc....

Soren seemed to only do well with the first three mentioned and managed to fail all the rest miserably showing not much talent for anything else...

With most of the jutsu out of the way they were finally told to get ready as he was put into the sparring ring, it was green vs yellow, winners get lunch, losers get a beating followed by hard labor....
It was the best of 10 battles as each color group had 10 shinobi each...

The first 4 battles seemed rather one sided how ever the yellow group managed a few comebacks and by decision the last battle would be decided by a luck of the draw... Team yellow and team green both with 4 points had their selected members...

Soren of the Yellow and Susanna of the Green
Without much experience he got into the enclosed small fighting area which was roughly the size of a small house...

They were told to fight in order to knock out your opponent or disable them...
Those who did not fight would be sent home, which was just a nice way of saying they would be killed which is the reason the yellow team only had 7 people left as 2 went home and 1 died by apparenly accident when slipping on a shuriken and dying

Not experienced and having not fought before he took a small little stick and took a stance and said to Susanna
" good luck and let us have a good fight ok " as he smiled at her before getting a little serious in a playful way as he had no idea what it was like to actually fight...
This fight would teach him a few things and would help him in the future when he would have to deal with a much harder fight...
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It would teach the boy only one thing...

Susanna approaches him, pretending to be friendly and offering her hand to shake, saying "Let's have a good one~"

As soon as he shakes her hand though, she moves around, pinning him by pulling his arm back and strangling him with her arm until he falls unconscious. There would be no lunch for him...
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Soren being rather naive at the time shakes Susanna's hand only to be pinned to the ground as he screams in pain, choking up as he starts losing consciousness , but wiggles around managing to turn his head somehow and bite her before losing consciousness leaving Susanna with a bite mark as he was now out of it..

With all that happened Susanna received her reward, a lunch including a roll, some wild boar stew .. and a glass of water...

Meanwhile as Soren started waking up him and the rest of the yellow group were dragged off to the losers area, where they got to see their punishment before he could even do anything we began to hear screaming as they whipped all of them repeatedly with cuts all over their backs, this continued for over 2 hours resulting in 2 deaths how ever Soren barely even conscious was still surviving.

This was not the end as his back was sore he could not even move now as he tried to get up, they called each of the winners who had finished eating to prove loyalty by beating them up even further, however those who refused to carry out the punishment well... One guy said he did not want to do that , he got tossed onto the yellow team and his former friend quickly began to beat him up...

With Susanna now standing before the boy as he looked up at her with some degree of fear as tears began building up as he sniffed , wandering what any of this had to do with becoming a shinobi.
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Susanna huffs...it looked like she had no other choice. She preps herself to start beating him, opting to use her bare hands, but for a reason...

She whispers something in his ear... "Put on a good show and start shouting..." At that, she started hitting him, but somehow managing to make it painless to him. There would also be no damage. Susanna was tired of the mist's crap and this showed through this kind gesture to him.

Her acting was flawless...was Soren's?
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He nearly stopped crying after Susanna whispered that in his ear, and just before he could accidentaly smile he got a soft punch to his face to which he screamed in pain, which was not too hard since his face was still a bit sore from earlier when she pinned him down.

Just as he was trying to get up at the command of the instructors who told him to get up, he got hit again this time in the stomach not having much to act on he decided to bite his tongue as he then spit out some blood to make it seem like he took a massive internal hit.

As she launched a kick he managed to block it a bit but still fell down since his body was sore, he did not need to do much to play along after the whipping he took earlier.

For some reason though he began to react a bit better to each attack while not really learning any taijutsu he at the very least was learning to defend himself a bit even if the blows were all held back.

The acting seemed to be going fine except for 2 moments where he missread it and ended up getting hit once with a proper knee to the face when he slipped forward breaking his nose, and on another occassion where he actually grabbed her chest to stop from falling to which she gave an instinctive right to the face which knocked some blood from his mouth.

Otherwise it went well as near the end she finished it off with an epic roundhouse kick that sent him flying which was more like a push with her leg then a proper kick, it was at this stage where he hit against one of the flag posts which broke and just barely missed falling on his head but sadly landed on his leg breaking something as he screamed.

Feeling satisfied the instructor stood before Susanna feeling like she looked familiar but then scrapped that idea as he seemed to be too low ranking to know much on the participants in this event.

He then told her it was a good job and with a smile on his face he said " you will not be joining the yellow group as several of their members were sent home and it would be bad if they did not have enough people to compete fairly ", it would appear obvious to Susanna that they planned to do this to cause distrust within the group by putting an enemy in with them leading to more problems than actual help when the real tests begin

Soren was still crying since his leg was now completely useless as the flag post still stood over his leg. The man then told her " go help him now, before he dies "

The rest of the yellow team, were not as badly beaten.. this however was mainly due to Soren not having done much training and being only 8 years old he was also the youngest in the event. The other members looked at him as if they planned to kill him off so they would have an easier time when the tests begin.

Soren just looked at Susanna as it was time for her to help him yet again, but for real rather than in the form of an act
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Susanna didn't need to be told to help him. She simply grabs his leg and the broken bone seems to fuse back together under her touch. Although it was only temporarily bonded through magnetism and he'd need actual medical care. After lifting the post off of him, she picks him up and lets him lean on her while taking him to the infirmary...

"You're an idiot..." She tells him as they walk. "They want you dead...they want us all dead."

At least she wasn't mad about him grabbing her chest. "I'm sorry about punching you like that. You didn't mean to do that."

Soren gets the feeling that Susanna is the only good person in this entire village. That feeling would be reinforced soon.

The other yellow team members are not happy about Soren's loss. They come out of the shadows, still beat up, intending on killing him.

"It's your fault we lost!" One of them shouts at Soren, trying to punch him but ended up punching the sharp end of a rather unique knife. Susanna protected him, but also disabled his teammates ability to form hand seals for a long time.

"Actually, the fault lies with me. If you have a problem, then feel free to direct your foolish hatred towards me." Susanna says coldly to the one who just got a knife through his fist. "However, I have no qualms with murdering you all right here and ripping open your stomachs to devour the entrails."

She was being very graphic here...fortunately, she wouldn't really eat their entrails...or would she? "But if you value your lives, I suggest you crawl back into your mothers womb and cry yourselves to death."

"You're bluffing! You're the same as us!" One shouts and throws a kunai knife at her. Susanna forms a handsign and the knife stops just inches from her nose, turns around, and flies right into his forehead.

"I warned you...fortunately, it didn't get deep enough to kill you." Susanna huffs and walks right passed the three of them with Soren in tow. "Now if you don't mind, I have an infirmary to reach..."
With that in mind, Susanna carried Soren to the infirmary to be treated.
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Soren gave out a small yelp as she fused the bone and his eyes were still filled with a watery build up of tears, as she lifted him up has said nothing. He did not understand completely what was going on, what she meant when she said they wanted them all dead.

However some of the team members attempting to attack Soren were stopped by Susanna which he did not expect as he watched her easily disable the one, and nearly kill the other one as if it was nothing , as Soren nearly fell with her having formed a hand sign showing that his body was still to sore to even support him.

It also became clear that Soren needed to eat as not only did he weight almost nothing, but sometime as she began heading to the infirmary she heard is stomach growl as they got there, she soon realised that there was only basic first aid here, which meant that she would have to look after him until the bone healed. However lying around on one of the tables were some pain killers, some chakra pills to replenish chakra and she read a note there saying only 1 of each per shinobi meaning that the infirmary was only meant to ease any wounds and injuries slightly so that the weak would be able to be killed off sooner and they also did not wish to waste many resources on this.

Soren eventually lost consciousness from the fact that his body was still in pain, lying on the table was some healing ointments, as she soon began to feel as the blood was now seeping through his loose shirt onto her arm and some of it onto her chest as well. His blood was soon beginning to flow and she now had to do something soon as she new that time was short as she heard some of the instructors were heading that way probably 10 minutes at most.
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Having practically no medical knowledge whatsoever...Susanna did what any sensible shinobi would do...
START SHOVING RANDOM PILLS DOWN HIS THROAT!!

Just kidding...she isn't stupid...

She takes 2 pain killers (which she usually uses to kill off her frequent migraines), andstarts with that. Ointment? That goes on the skin. Never heard of an oral ointment before. She just rubs it on everything that seems injured and duct tapes bandages to his wounds. She gets hungry and remembers that she forgot to eat lunch and so she devours the only food nearby: The half-eaten sandwich on the desk, despite there being a good refridgerator 2 steps to the right of it. Baka Susanna...

In ten minutes, she pulls in the medic who has having a nice cup of coffee. Punching him until he agrees to help out. Poor guy just wanted his coffee anywhere but his pants...
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Soren was not really conscious as she placed 2 pain killers in his mouth which she probably downed by pouring water in Soren's mouth which quickly woke him up as he was choking a bit before swallowing properly and then losing consciousness again.

She removes Soren's top and begins to rub the ointment over all the wounds which seemed to stop the bleeding and seemed to actually speed up the healing process a little bit with an occassional giggle since he was ticklish and a yelp of pain since she was still rubbing against wounds.

The bandages seemed to help but they just soaked up blood and did not seem to look right as she does not seem to be very experienced at this. She ate the sandwich , a thing that would later come to haunt her in the form of dioarrea but that was a problem that would hit her much later ...

The medic arrived who she pulled in and beat him in the face until he aggreed to help. Luckily the instructors just barely missed this as they walked passed as sweat seemed to pass from the heads of both the medic and Susanna as the medic would have been punished for being beatin up by a supposedly weak girl, and Susanna would have been punished if they found out she had used up a large amount of the medications

The medic soon started to help removing all the useless bandages, he then began to apply some medical jutsu removing some debree from the whip that had seeped into the wounds as well as carefull bandaging the leg to help keep the bone in place.

The medic then told her " this kid is lucky you were here to save him, but you might want to worry more about yourself, just to let you know , only 10 are allowed to pass, and you are not the only strong one here " The medic stood up and then said some final words , " get him back to your camp now and hide him under some blankets, if they see the treatment he got they will have him killed " as he lifted Soren and placed him carefully back in Susanna's arms as he watched her walk away the instructors returned and noticed a lot of medication missing... not knowing what had happened as she was already gone

The medic had healed his last patient and smiled saying, "A medical ninja is meant to heal all patients to the best of his ability, I am no tool" as he was then stabbed and had his body removed as his family was informed that one of the shinobi killed him in the test, they would later use this excuse to frame participants who were unwilling and have them executed for the good of the village.
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Not much to do there, Susanna just takes him back rather stealthy and covers him with a couple of blankets before heading off to her own corner of the camp.
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Several hours later Soren woke up as he pushed the blankets of not feeling as hurt as earlier and being all alone he soon realises he is surrounded by 3 of the members from earlier , one with a bandage on his head, another with a bandage on his fist , and the third one looking around to make sure that woman was not there.

The man with the bandaged head immediately jumped in to land a solid punch, having learnt a bit from the staged fight against susanna he managed to block the punch, the other guy with the hurt hand launched a kick which he also blocked. He was a bit excited but it was short lived as the guy with the bandage on his head stepped on the hurt leg as the other guy quickly blocked his screams by placing his hand on his mouth.

Not sure what was going on he bit the man who then said a few foul words while the other guy kept one foot firmly near the leg incase he needed to step on it again, however not paying attention the third guy wet his pants as he saw
that Woman "oh crap" as he fell to the ground. "let's get outta here!"
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Said woman didn't seem to be there for long, however, as she had walked into a shadow and disappeared. An illusion? No. She was travelling in the darkness. A technique her father had created and taught to her years ago.

Suddenly, Susanna comes out from one of the shadows, blocking the path they were running in. Then another...and another. They were surrounded by clones.

The real one was the scariest though. Cloaked entirely in shadow, they saw one blood red eye glaring daggers at them. In reality she just kept the other one closed.
"I should have killed you three while I had the chance. I'm sure they won't care if you die now rather than later..." She licks her lips, putting on a rather intimidating display thus far.... Soren could stop her if he wanted to...but otherwise, there'd be a lot of bloodshed that night...
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Soren was in too much of a confused state to say anything as he just sat there staring on...

The three guys felt like there was no way out so they got together and 2 performed hand seals and cast Katon: Great Fireball Jutsu in 2 directions one heading at one of the random clones and the other heading for Soren who seemed to be mesmerised by how awesome the fire looked as it was heading for him.

Meanwhile the guy with the injured arm took several explosive tags out and began throwing them at all the clones which exploded .

The instructors did not care if the people killed eachother off now, or whether they killed eachother when the tests finally began. The last remaining member of the yellow team was just sitting at the entrance to their camp drinking some tea and thinking to himself " hope that woman can get rid of those weaklings, thinking that killing someone who would slow them down is a good tactic when it is clearly obvious that he would make great bait" as he then began talking more to himself the stage was set as Susanna would now take action
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A devilish grin grows on her face as they flailed about worthlessly. Her trap was sprung. The clones do die, alright, but they felt something grabbing their legs. It was more clones using the shadows of the two who attacked. The boys were no magnetized and looked on in horror as the clones they defeated reverted into knives that were held together by a weak magnetic field. The knives are dispersed, but due to the yellow team members being magnetized, they flew right at them, turning the both of them into human pin cushions. Every square inch was covered in knives and blood, until the knives flew back to Susanna after sticking themselves into packs of ten.

How much chakra did she have? Not a whole lot more. The remaining clones pop out of the shadows and are dismissed. She pays the two now dead bodies no mind as she walks over to the third and asks "Am I going to have to kill you too?"

The boy shakes his head, to which Susanna nods and goes back to her own camp...where the bodies of her three teammates were waiting to be buried.
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He had never seen something so brutal before, some of the blood landing on him as he then vomited even though he had not even eaten much yet... as she walked away this left Soren all alone, as he was in shock and still not able to comprehend what was going on.

He crawled after Susanna slowly as he could not really put much pressure on his still injured leg, he followed her coughing a bit as he finally reached her section of the camp.

The only other surviving member did not enjoy this as it was ruining the taste of his tea so he picked up the kid and walked with him as he flailed and faught against the man as in his confusion he had no idea what was going on as the man tossed Soren towards Susanna and told her to catch , before walking back to his tea. Flying at a somewhat safe speed towards Susanna how would she react to this kid flying towards her , seemingly being tossed around as if he was a piece of paper... as he looked at her and said "watch out!"
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Simply put, Susanna moves over to the side, turns, and holds out her arms, catching Soren and then putting him down.
"You shouldn't be here..."

It's only now that Soren noticed that she wore that green headband on her upper arm rather than on her forehead.
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Soren then looked up at her, " I do not have anyone else and " looking down before asking her " can ya please show me some of that awesome stuff ya did, or some cool jutsu , that looked amazing.. "

He then remembered it and once again threw up just barely missing her before wiping his mouth again as he then said "that green headband does not mean anything anymore, ya on the yellow team now with me " smiling but not realising that under normal circumstances, trusting someone who came from another team is normally a bad idea, but he did not care about things like that yet...

He then kept hanging on her arm looking up at her beggingly expecting her to show him some cool techniques. He was eager to learn, however he was more eager to eat soon as his stomach began growling again. A few seconds later he picks up a rabbit, not realising that right now he was holding food in his hands...

Nothing could prepare him for this moment that would define the way he sees animals for the rest of his life
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"I'm afraid I can't unless you're a part of the clan, or have the magnet release.." Susanna sighs and gently shoves him off of her.

"I prefer green..." She told him, coming off as a bit antisocial.

"Is your affinity lightning or earth?"
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Soren quietly spoke up and said to Susanna " i kinda have water element , so maybe i should try this one jutsu i read up in this little note book i got "

He gave the rabbit to Susanna and was now planning to show off some skills.
He tried his best to form handseals which were a little bit off as well as his chakra being focused to his feet instead of to his hands, as he then finally shouted the technique "Suiton : Mizudan nojutsu" all that we got was a quick build up of chakra which resulted in some water exploding in his face splashing both him and Susanna with water..

He was not only embarrassed as shown by his immediate blushing after being in a state of shock , however it soon turned to disappointment as he looked down to the ground as his eyes began to build up tears, with a few sniffs here and there he looked up a bit with his head still down and said
"sorry , Susanna nesan" not realising that this was being a bit too familiar a greeting for someone he had only met the previous day.

Before he could start getting more emotional and sad , his stomach stepped in with a growl. The poor rabbit finally realised what situation it was in and gave a frightened look up at Susanna since he knew that she was a true predator unlike the currently harmless boy.

It was clear there was much he still had to learn from the basics of properly controlling his chakra to survival by rabbit.
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Susanna takes note of that and sighs. "I'll have to train you in chakra control if you want to have any chance of surviving..."

With a quick twist of the neck, the rabbits life was over. "Not much meat but dinner will soon be served." Susanna nods and prods the thing with a knife. "I need something to stew it in...get me a pot while I make a fire."
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Soren did not have time to even respond the shock of seeing the rabbit killed stopped him from crying and before he could lose consciousness from the shock he heard her tell him to find a pot and mention stew and with him being hungry he forgot about the rabbit and quickly ran around their camp finding a pot , which was actually a metal head dress that was worn by one of the previous members who had been sent home. Either way it would serve the same purpose as a pot since it was huge.

He got back to her quickly showing that while he was not very strong, he was really fast and seemed to be really tough since he was alive in the first place.
He also seemed to have recovered although it was clear his leg still hurt as he did show signs of being in pain when he ran back limping twice in his dash trying to hide it best he could.

He was hoping she would be glad and had already forgotten the disappointment of failing his jutsu attempt however as they needed to eat soon he finally handed her the pot with a smile and shouted "yay , let's eat"

Meanwhile the only other member of the yellow camp laughed a bit having another cup of tea, when did this man ever sleep, he seemed to just be living off tea , however he was part of their team which Soren began to notice as he remembered the guy tossing him earlier on. The man then went back into his tent not coming out again for now.

As it was still dark he watched Susanna as she cooked the meal
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Susanna didn't just cook the meal, she taught Soren how to make a stew from rabbit meat and various other foods like potatoes. Even how to cut up the rabbit and prepare it for cooking (that part is important.)
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watching carefully as she skillfully prepared the stew dealing with every ingredient and preparation so the Soren would be able to do it himself if he ever got hungry again, impatient he wished to eat the rabbit which was now nearly ready as he began getting a little bit impatient as drool came down his mouth, while he did not drool with an open mount he just could not hold in how hungry he was.

As he then asked her the question he had been asking every few minutes or so as if it had not become annoying the first time " Can we eat now ?" sensing that maybe it is nearly ready this time he adds in a delayed but well placed "Please" at the end as he looks to Susanna
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With a sigh, Susanna finally nods and lets him eat, preparing a single bowl just for him. She wasn't hungry. She was busy putting together a plan to get him to better control his chakra...Susanna needs to find a tall tree in the middle of a land usually shrouded in fog...fuck.
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the moment Soren got the bowl he began eating like a beast nearly finishing it all in under a second. Soon followed by a soft burp, he was really happy now that he was fed, he then noticed Susanna looking for something and pulled on her arm to ask " what are you lookin for?"

He felt this was his moment to help her with something hoping that he would not disappoint her, as he assured her with his smile. Soren felt good though he got some sleep , he got some food , he felt he was now ready for anything... Deep down he felt a little bad about the rabbit as he looked back at the pot in which the rabbit had be cooked.
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"A tree..." Susanna answers as she spots him feeling bad about the rabbit. "The rabbit died so that you could live...that's just the way this world works."

At that, she stands up and stretches but then sneezes. That water splashed on her earlier wasn't going to do wonders for her health, but regardless of that she had a tree to find.
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Soren soon pointed out rather obviously although most people would not notice it , there was a tree in the middle of their camp. He soon took Susanna's hand and lead her to the tree, he then looked up at her and said

"is this what you were looking for?"

as he then looks back at the tree wandering what was so great about a tree, also this was one of the few trees here as it seems there was mostly just fog, with half of the fog being part of the hidden mist jutsu and the other half coming naturally

Not wanting to wait much longer as he seemed to be getting impatient with what she had planned for the tree
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"Just watch me..."

Soren hears as Susanna walks stright up the tree. She doesn't climb it...she walks straight up it, and then turns to face him.

"The tree climbing technique is a simple one but it requires pretty good chakra control. In order to make it work, you have to channel chakra into your feet. Too little and you will fall off. Too much and you will be pushed off." She instructs him before leaping off of it. "Now try it for yourself..."
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Soren was a fast learner but, as he ran half way up the tree, it soon came to pass that he was not that fast a learner as he ended up flying off the tree landing on his back as he hit the ground.

"that hurt " sniffing a bit he wanted to show that he could do it he ran up again but before getting more than 2 steps up he lost grip with his feet and hit his head face first into the tree with a hard thud

He was really crying now as he kept staring at the tree, he ran up again and again and again, for the next few hours as Susanna just watched he kept running up over and over again getting splinters in his arms and even some scratches here and there but his leg was going to give way at this rate but finally after the 3rd hour had passed and the sun finally began rising he managed to walk up it, he then finally figured it out.

having been rushing it he was not really controlling his chakra as much as just chucking random amounts of chakra at his feet. Figuring out this balance of using how much you need where you need it he now understood how to walk up trees, until he looked down and slipped falling a bit to the side landing on Susanna hard, as he was over her he laughed before noticing a few figures appearing as the fog began lifting...

The figures spoke as they then said "get ready for the next test , it begins in 2 hours! "

It was at this stage that he had learnt a few things on survival and a bit on controling his chakra and defending himself, this was only the first day of what would become a long struggle for survival
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Susanna was proud of him for succeeding, although it took the whole night. Soon, the sun rose and the second test would begin. They hadn't slept but that probably wouldn't bite them in the ass, would it? Too late now...
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Chapter 2 : Hunting that which sleeps in the Fog

After the first day before even beginning the real test out of more than 1000 participants in the beginning was now down to a mere 97 showing that the earlier fight alone got rid of more than half.

It was originally planned to only elimate 55% of these expendible participants but due to many of them not having the will to kill, while others being killed of by experienced shinobi who felt less competition would prove better to them.

Out of the teams only 2 teams were still at 10 people that being the Red and Blue team who just happened to have the 20 strongest participants who had won their fight 10 – 0 in a true landslide fashion, meanwhile the smallest surviving team was team Yellow with Green having 3 as in the midst of the night the Green team was wiped out by an unknown beast…

The morning seemed like any other as the mists were thinned out to the point of not really being there. The instructors finally spoke as they then shouted
“The first test for this genin training examination” ( choosing this name to make it sound like it was not just a Bloody Mist Trial )

The instructors paused and then said “Is to survive 7 days in the Forgotten Fog” , they were then lead with their teams to their random starting locations , there did not seem to be any fog, however there was a reason this place was called the Forgotten Fog.

Soren who was feeling much better but really tired had taken a ride on Susanna’s back, he needed to rest his injured leg and recover most of his chakra which meant they were really behind. The guy who loved tea , walked alongside at roughly 2 metres away as he did not feel safe being near the girl who seemed to be a master of darkness.

They were then given a long scroll which the tea guy took and then he read it to us as he finally introduced himself.
“My name is Ji Tung Lao, just call me Ji” as he gave an elegant bow as if he was royalty.

He wore what looked like Chinese robes ( as if china existed in this world) and a hat which looked more like a large round flat metal bottle cap... , his black hair and very black eyes , seemed to give a sense of darkness to him, however he was definately strong as you could sense some degree of intensity coming off of him.

“ I do not care about you guys really , but this is a serious battle and we are at a huge disadvantage, and my chances are better if I know that in the end I only need to worry about fighting a weak kid or a shadow girl” he then coughed to instill that he was getting to the serious point

“For now we can trust each other, atleast until we get to the third test. This scroll states we must survive 1 week in that place and as proof this scroll links up with our chakra’s to prove that we do not leave the location”
He paused seeming to always run out of breath as he spoke.

“Surviving for 7 days is not the main task, our main objective is to capture a Fogling, a supposedly mythical beast, however I think we should learn more about this place before we go searching for something we know nothing about”

Soren had fallen asleep from this long explanation which did not matter as the man was mainly talking to Susanna, he then ended off with saying
“ whatever the fogling is, it is at the very least Jonin level , are you sure you can handle covering for this weakling for 7 days?” He stared at her before hinting that he was expecting either a straight forward yes, or an honest I will manage reply…

Sooner after she had given her answer the test began and they entered
"The Forgotten Fog"
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"Foglings don't exist..." Susanna dismisses as soon as he was finished. "Focus on surviving for 7 days."

She goes off with her own scroll and towards her own area. "I'm still green team so I cannot help you remember...if it's made of meat and isn't a human being, it's probably edible..."

At that, she walks alone into the fogless lost fog.
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Having left Soren behind a few moments later Fog rose from beneath them...
They had arrived and the man with the love for tea also disappeared...

All alone not completely sure what was going on Soren just sat completely still within the Fog , it did not take long for the madness to begin as all he could do was sit their and listen to things moving through the bushes and even heard a stream of water as well

Meanwhile having walked through the area as the fog appeared Susanna was also trapped within this dense fog, however her experience told her this was not really a fog and he thoughts of foglings not existing were in fact true

However the less experienced all went crazy in search of the foglings like a bunch of idiots who would believe someone saying that pigs could fly... Although that may actually be true of the earth kingdom as people said long ago the Tsuchikage was in fact a pig( the truth was he was just a short old man with a bad back)

As experienced as Susanna was she soon realised that she was surrounded as she could hear several footsteps around her, she heard the forming of handseals and knew that she had to do something about it really soon...


Meanwhile Soren still half scared to death managed to slip passed 2 people fighting apparently over a wild boar... he was scared but remembered Susanna mentioning survival being important , crying and shaking nervously he crawled as the one man kicked him in the stomach by accident while charging the other guy assuming he had just bumped into a rock as he accused the other of being a dirty shinobi laying traps before his feet.

Soren was successful as he managed to grab the now dead wildboar as he crawled struggling to carry it, he then remembered that he had been trying jutsu earlier and he attempted it. Generic Sealing Technique, he managed to seal the dead boar in the scroll , he was overjoyed at his success and wished to find Susanna but then he realised something he should have sooner. He did not learn how to release objects from the scroll so he pretty much knew he had to find someone, and hope they do not stab him in the back. The guys seemed to be quiet.

A few moments later Soren heard screams from a distance... not knowing what to do, he lost track of where the screams came from as he soon tripped and fell down a hole and lost consciousness
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What idiots... Susanna thought to herself. She could feel their every movement, whether she could see them or not. And unfortunately for them...there were shadows everywhere. With a single handsign, her own shadow extends and reaches the shinobi surrounding her, stopping them in their tracks. "Shadow bind technique."

Satisfied with their inability to move, Susanna stands and shouts to them "Who are you and why are you here? To kill me? Good luck with that. You have 2 seconds to reply before I start snapping necks."
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Soren was beginning to come to consciousness as he had fallen deep inside a hole of sorts which seemed to be a tunnel with his scroll in his hand, and no way to get back up since the fall hurt his leg again. He crawled silently through the tunnel.

meanwhile, Susanna having captured the shinobi who surrounded her noticed that she was short a person with the number of people she felt and the number of people she had bound being off by one.

she soon noticed it as she heard a voice from above
" good idea i had these idiots try and attack you first, haha " the guy was probably smiling but in this fog it was not possible to tell... however the man then got serious and said
" want to make a deal, I do not care about these guys anymore so let us team up and kill the rest of these idiots" as soon as he said that screams were heard as each of them were released from her binding , as they had now all been massacred

The man was strong however he did not come near the ground, staying out of range and not wishing to grant this woman any chances...
" you see this is a tournament meant for real shinobi, not some game for little kids to play at being a shinobi " Anyways , he tossed a scroll down which landed near by and said
" take that and join me, leave it and the next time we meet , I will kill you too "

With that the man's presence vanished and Susanna was surrounded by dead bodies, the fog got a bit less dense and it was now possible to see roughly 2 metres now, as trees and a few dead animals were lying around.


however back to where Soren was as he had crawled he had neared the end of the tunnel where he stopped quietly, as he seemed to be in what would constitute as ventilation... he looked and noticed 8 people who looked like they were praying and 1 man in the middle... he also noticed a few of the instructors there as he now quietly watched and listened from above

He may have ventured into something he should not have ever found , however only time will tell
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With a sigh, Susanna sets the scroll down for a moment, considering her options. She had taken an interest in the potential of that boy she's been helping, but perhaps that man would be a more worthy foe. With a nod to herself, she takes out a knife and runs it through the scroll. This was the best option in her mind...either she would have killed those with the potential to come and make her regret letting them live and end up fighting that man anyway...or fight him sooner rather than later and help guarantee a better future outcome. She picked the latter.

No matter when he came to kill her, she'd be ready for him. It was her time to show that her life had meaning, regardless of whether she can use water techniques or not...and not just her own life. Killing children was disgusting to her.

She keeps her magnetic aura going; allowing her to sense the comings and goings of the other participants.

To explain: Every human being has a slight magnetic field. By strengthening her own, Susanna can sense magnetic fields nearby. She does not need to see in order to know where someone is hiding.
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Soren was hiding up there knowing the fall from this tunnel ventlike area would be most certainly death. he listened as they began to speak
" Sir, the Red team has proceded to kill of most of the participants and the Blue team seams to have completely been wiped out with one of them missing "

The one instructor replied, "this is good, hopefully there will only be maybe 20 survivors that should be just about right and have the final 20 fight one on one to the death"

The other instructor then said, " we have a problem, some of them are a bit stronger than expected and it seems we have some kekkai genkai users in the group"

The third instructor who was a serious female who sounded like military
" as long as we only have 10 survivors the mission is a success"

Soren did not really understand what they were talking about, however he slipped falling and about to scream when someone grabbed him and shut his mouth. " stupid kid, you going to get us all killed " he looked behind him with his mouth still kept shut... the entire Blue team was in that tunnel as well and he only noticed now that there were more tunnels than he thought..

"I am Yukito Anya, I will not let my team die for some stupid kid"

meanwhile some wild baboons began attacking Susanna however they were really fast baboons who seemed to be avoiding her binding however this was still no threat to her but it was probably an annoyance .

The man realised she rejected his offer, he immediately made plans to take care of her, what his plans were no one knew. As it seems he left a clue as a piece of his clothing was floating in the fog, which seemed to be thinning out
as the sun seemed to be going down as it seemed like it would be time to sleep


Time seemed to pass by fast in this place , meanwhile Soren was taken hostage by the blue team as he hands were bound and his mouth taped shut as he watched them eat, and fortunately they took off the tape to give him 2 pieces of what seemed to be cooked wild birds, before they shut his mouth and unable to escape he just fell asleep...

The sun sets and a new day begins
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Sleep is for the weak...Susanna needs no sleep.

She takes it easy for the night, killing all of the baboons that dare to harass her (and eating them).
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The first day came to pass...

Soren now trapped, woke up and began to start rubbing against the wall to tear the ropes that bound ... he was rushing and just as the ropes were torn a bit loose, he freed his hands just to be pinned down as that girl had now captured him... again.

She tied his wrists up high this time so he could not rub them against anything and she then removed the tape softly and said
"Shut up or die your choice"

Not paying attention he spoke " I'm hungry"
Anya was now annoyed as her other team members were still sleeping she took some of her food and let him have a few bites.
She then said " You should really learn to shut up , you speak way too much "

She then took off his top and his pants that he had been wearing , she had to block his mouth as after blushing he could not contain himself and was about to scream...
In his underwear he was panicking but she just told him calm down... She then proceded to heal his leg with some level of medical jutsu which felt really good.

The others woke up and one guy said, "stop helping the kid, only 10 can survive we will end up killing him anyways "
Anya thought fast and said , " we will use him as a scout or as bait, rather than have us running out there ourselves"

That made sense and then they asked her " and why did you strip him down to his underwear " she formed a few hand seals then everyone new why

"Suiton: Mizudan" a burst of water splashed Soren which hurt but managed to clean him up, having not had a good bath in who knows how long she then tossed a sheet over him and said " Jiro, get him some other clothing and place a tracker on him, we are going to send him back out into the open

meanwhile above ground, Susanna having not slept for some unknown reason had to move now as she noticed her scroll changed somewhat indicating that this location never remained still, as it pointed in one direction

As she would soon find out it was really quiet as everyone was now hiding, the event scared quite a lot of them and those that were not scared knew that all the strong people were left now and were being more careful.

After some time Susanna began feeling ill from the babboons she ate, with her experience she knew not to take this lightly and that she would have to find someone to help out, without letting them know or by scaring them into helping while being careful. She then came across 2 kids playing by a stream who were also in this hellish test.

This moment was peaceful as they laughed and played , as they jumped up and down on this log they found, before Susanna could do anything she watched as the log which happened to be a river crocodile snapped both children in 2 before viciously eating them...

The blood flying into the river and some of it right into Susanna's face. It was then that she would come to notice that the crocodile was not a natural crocodile and she realised she was in a puppet masters territory. He must have been really weak though to have preyed on these children.

This test brought out the worst in people.
Susanna was then attacked and thanks to the illness brought on by the baboons she could not move as she usually does which now meant she would have to fight seriously without wasting anything, at most she could probably only use about 3 or maybe 5 techniques since she could feel the poison as it would seem was affecting her chakra. 3 shinobi appeared in masks, 1 tossed a kunai with explosives at her feet setting it off while the other 2 had already manipulated her senses with b-rank genjutsu, which meant that they were probably instructors and not participants... what business did the instructors have interfering in what was already a bad enough massacre


Soren who was allowed to change within an enclosed place with in the tunnel system carefully made his way out the fog was thinner which was ok since he could see pretty well in normal fog or mist, he only really had problems with really dense fog, he then noticed a bunch of dead baboon bones which to him he thought were the bones of dead shinobi , as he thought they were going to eat him now , as he then got ready to do what the girl instructed him to do.

Find the red team's location and mark it then return back if possible, he was most probably going to die but with the situation as it is, half the day had already passed and things were going from bad to worse
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Such an annoyance those instructors were...thinking that power had meaning to her and her fighting style. Poison? Worthless...she would deal with that on her own.

Genjutsu could not fool her magnetic field. She could tell where they were and what they were doing...including the explosive tagged kunai. They stop suddenly, turn around, and fly right into the chests of the two creating the genjutsu before exploding. If that didn't kill them, at least the illusions would dissipate.

The fog was thinner...excellent. The shadows were of much higher quality than earlier. She could easily stitch her shadow onto the remaining shinobi.
With one handsign, her shadow stretches and connects with his. "Shadow possession."

"Now that you've seen this technique...I will have to kill you. No hard feelings." Her eyes went from blue to red here. An odd trait of hers that signified that she was angry. She draws one of her special knives (which is actually ten knives magnetically stuck to each other) and throws it, prompting the instructor to do the same. Then Susanna forms a handsign, the ten knives detach from each other. His kunai cannot do that so while it hits one knife and deflects it...9 more embed themselves into his body. 3 of them strike his head (one in the forehead, one in each eye). However, he was still barely alive.

"Now then...you're going to help me get this poison out of my system...understood?"

She knew why they were interfering...she was one of the priority targets, after all. But they wanted to kill nearly all of the people in this so-called "test." There was no point in asking why.
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The instructor was nearly dead , but he was no fool, he knew what he was dealing with and she probably new as well . He laughed at her before saying, I will tell you something , if you want the antidote just gi..." The man began to choke as a Time Release Seal activated from inside his body releasing an explosion ...

Susanna knew that this meant the man was to be killed if he revealed anything , and that the poison itself was a problem... however she now needed to find some real shinobi as the longer she randomly attacks people the more she gets no where.

Soon however she heard foot steps moving really fast within the mist, she did not seem to notice that her senses were slightly off by a small margin, but with it being small she would probably not notice until it cost her atleast an arm or a leg.


Soren was now out in the open he carefully snuck around as he then saw a bunch of angry baboons, he realised immediately as they looked at him with hungry eyes as he noticed what looked like a half eaten girl. He began to throw up but after coughing a bit just before the one baboon was able to bite his head off he managed kick it in the face buying him some time to make a dash for it...

The baboons were now mad and chasing him, he was barely keeping away as he did not have the stamina to keep running from them. He ran oh so desperately , as he then saw it...
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Susanna takes a slightly labored breath...her physical health was never good to begin with. "Gi....give up?" She guessed before leaning against a nearby tree. "A very good poison...but how did they get it into the baboons?"

Unless...they weren't ordinary baboons... Soon, Susanna throws up. The poison made her nauseous. Leaving her a little too open for attack. She heard footsteps running towards her...several pairs in fact. She couldn't keep her magnetic field up so she couldn't feel who or what they were. Was this the end of Susanna? She accepts it.
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Running at high speed , Soren crashes into Susanna as the baboons all came into view as one jumped at them. Soren was scared but he noticed Susanna immediately and realised she was not her usual self as he formed the seals he tried before he knew the pressure was on.

"Suiton : Mizudan nojutsu" as the water blasted the baboon perfectly knocking it out. However he fell over as he was not able to handle the force of using the jutsu to begin with. As Susanna was still ill, she knew she had to deal with this, having been bought just a little time to regain her composure as she would need to defeat these baboons or it will not only be her death but the very child she saved as well.
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"You idiot..." Susanna laughs weakly as she stands before the baboons. "Come...I killed your friends and now I'm going to kill you too..."

She was weakened, but something about her made her seem truly terrifying. She draws her knives...all of them. All 49 of her remaining bundles. She throws them all at once with her magnet release all around her and Soren. With a single hand sign, they split up into 490 knives creating a perfect dome. "Have fun in hell....Blade Arts: Jack the Ripper."
The blades all fire at the force of a cannonball into the baboons. Shredding them into unrecognizable pieces.
Right after unleashing this though, Susanna throws up again...this time a large amount of blood is forced out of her stomach...and then she loses consciousness...
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As he watched he was amazed, but when he looked back again he watched as Susanna threw up and fell to the ground... He did not know what to do all the baboons were dead, she lost consciousness and he did not have much.

He was worrying a lot then decided to do what he could, he picked up all the kunai he could able to seal roughly 10 away before running nearly out of chakra as he then put about 10 more in his pockets from the new outfit he got.

He was not very strong so he could not carry her, he dragged Susanna across the ground as he soon heard people heading their way, he managed to find a small hidden area within some bushes.

He layed her down taking off his top and having it act as a pillow for Susanna.
He remembered that girl who captured him earlier was a medical shinobi so he knew he would have to do something.

He decided to place the tracking seal he was given and used the very last of his chakra to activate it.
He had no time to worry if an enemy traced it first or not. He just knew that he could do nothing to help and if they had any chance he needed Susanna to be awake again as she seemed to have developed a fever.

He now had chakra bordering on near nothing as he put his hands over her head. His hands were really cold and so were his feat something he seemed to be born with so he used that to help keep her fever down a bit.

He grew tired and fell asleep like this, sitting with his legs crossed as he kept his hands over her head. Nightfall came and tomorrow would bring forth change


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The Third Day

“Susanna” Soren whispered as he was still dead tired and sleepy

meanwhile Susanna began to come to as she noticed some girl busy with her hands over her as she felt some chakra moving around her chest. The girl noticed as Susanna’s eyes were opening as she said.

“ keep still, I can only lessen the poison but if you do not find a cure your heart will stop beating in about 2 or 3 days. Seems the poison sucks away at your chakra as well as straining your heart”

She began moving her hands to Susanna’s stomach as she then said

“ Not sure but , I hope you were not ever thinking of having children” It became clear the poison had maybe damaged her ability to have children if that had ever been an interest to her.

However it became clear if the poison affected her heart and her chakra it meant that she would have to rely on not using any more jutsu until she found a cure.

However she still had her experience and no shinobi would go out into the world without being resourceful. The girl finally said

“I will leave Raymond and Jin with you, Ray can use low levels of lightning chakra while Jin can use high speed taijutsu. They will try and cover you , but you may need to help keep them in check, since I can not risk all our lives on you.”

She paused for a moment before getting to the reason she was helping

“If we find a cure for you, we will need to use you, since you surviving the poison you must have a lot of chakra which could be useful. Do not keep your hopes up” she dropped a few chakra pills roughly 3 which would be enough for Susanna to maybe use at most 2 techniques incase of emergency.

“I hate this test but we have to take it, all of us from the Blue team were selected because we were poor and have no choice but to become shinobi… As you may have learnt the yellow team got all those with low levels of chakra and experience with an exception. They have that man”

Susanna remembered the man from earlier and could not believe she did not notice sooner. He was one of the instructors from the very beginning.

“ The Green team are generally strong shinobi who are hated by the village, I do not know why you are hated and I do not care, we will use you to survive this just like you will use these 2 over here to get through this, head for the Mist Tree is all I can tell you”

Susanna had 2 guys to cover for her weakness so long while she was now more conscious as the rest left.

It was time for Susanna to take action and she had to find them without wasting all her chakra and dying off.


---Susanna’s location hidden bush area surround by 2 rivers and a lake, with several shinobi roaming around the area all roughly chunin level and some at jonin level all hunting them down, she will have to use what she has and make her way to the Mist Tree ---

Meanwhile Soren had not even woken up yet, as Anya carried him a short distance before slapping him awake then shutting his mouth before he could scream.
“ we have to get to the centre where the instructors are, we will not be able to stop them but, I have a secret to tell you since you do not seem to understand what is going on”

Soren just looked at her wandering what was about to be told and what was going to happen to them. The other remaining members of the blue team then said something that Soren will remember for the rest of his life.
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Susanna laid there and listened to the medical nin. She had nothing better to do anyway.

The damage to her reproductive system would be a problem though...but that could be fixed later on. What really annoyed her was that she wouldn't be able to use her prized jutsu. Her magnet release is a filthy chakra whore to begin with and her shadow techniques are particularly greedy as well...without those she has e-ranked techniques and shadow clones. This would be most annoying.

She checks her bag for her knives and finds only enough for a single bundle; that boy must have found them and put them back in her bag. She'd have to thank him later. Perhaps it was for the best that they weren't bundled: that way she could conserve her chakra and not waste it on splitting them.

For now, the only lead she had to go on was some kind of tree...that's really helpful considering that they were in a FUCKING FOREST! Fortunately, the mist tree was marked on her scroll...how convenient!

With a sigh, she stands on wobbly legs; taking deep breaths to set her jumbled up systems back in order. "Alright...let's go." She tells her two bodyguards and heads towards this Mist Tree.
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Susanna and her 2 body guards were walking for a while until before them roughly 12 chunin level shinobi appeared with 2 jonin which began performing seals for Earth jutsu and Fire Jutsu respectfully with the other shinobi charging in a random fashion 4 to Susanna , 8 to her bodyguards.

Jin was able to take out 2 with massive punch and kick combo followed by the Leaf Whirlwind, however the other 2 managed to double team and keep him busy.

On the other hand Raymond took out his 4 in an instant as he just manipulated his lightning chakra to shock all 4 of them paralyzing them before killing them with 4 critical shuriken hits running in asking Susanna who he should go for as time was short.

Meanwhile Susanna had little time and almost no high level techniques she had to fend of 4 chunin level shinobi as well as decide who Ray should attack as there would be no way for him to stop 2 jonin level shinobi from performing a massive jutsu on his own.



Soren could not believe what they said, as he was in too much shock as Anya then told him. "This is what you risk when you follow this path, are you sure you would not rather find a way to run away and live?"

Soren spoke up finally building up some courage " I have nowhere to run away to, and not sure who to run away from "
He looks down before looking up again, "all i know is that i need to know"

Anya laughed, however they were spotted as the team got into formation 4 of them formed seals and performed their secret technique "kyojin menimienai heki" a barrier surrounded Soren and Anya making them invisible to the enemy however the enemy was going close as 3 of them ran off to distract the enemy

"Katon : Goukakyu nojutsu !!" the fire jutsu hit 2 out of 3 of them took a hit with one of them being burnt to ash and the other being mortally wounded and unable to escape while the last one made his dash as the shinobi followed him.

Soren did not understand why they sacrificed themselves so easily even after hearing their secret. Anya then said " stop spacing out, in 10 minutes they will not be able to keep this jutsu up anymore so we will have to make a run for it got that, we have roughly half a day to reach our location before they come back"

Soren then asked " how do ya know they won't comeback sooner or later?"

Anya then answered " those 3 all know how to open the 8 inner gates "

Soren asked "What are those?"

Anya was rather annoyed and just said "by opening them you get super fast and super strong, but it damages you and while he can not open more than 4 like Jin, he has 3 food pills on him. Once he takes the third pill he will die so either way believe in him and just be ready"

Why did a team who wanted to ensure all their survival choose to sacrifice a few so that an outsider may live. The truth still did not sit well with Soren...
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47 by wolfman2299 »»
Jan 27, 2014 7:53 PM

Poll: » Idea for a New System.

baxter09 - Apr 30, 2013

13 by wolfman2299 »»
Jan 27, 2014 7:50 PM

Sticky: » (!NEW!) Jutsu and Technique List (!OPEN!)

TaizenKyo - Oct 8, 2012

47 by wolfman2299 »»
Jan 27, 2014 7:43 PM
It’s time to ditch the text file.
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