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Jul 20, 2012 6:46 PM
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Once again, I am sorry for the delay.
Second: There were only two entries this month. I would really like it if more people participate. It's really fun, you know?!
Normally I would write a story for at least some more competition, but I had exams until a few days ago and working on all those LEs, I didn't find the time to think about a good story.

- I only mentioned the names of the characters, not who made the story to make it as fair as I can.
- One is allowed to vote for the own story of course.
- The voting ends on the 31th July!

!!!Please write a detailed comment! You won't lose a leg doing that for the authors!!!
(things like: what parts you liked a lot, things the writers could have made better... whatever comes to your mind)

Prizes:


-The winner will receive a special member card which won't be available in the club. The characters can be chosen freely as long as it's Yaoi (can even be a normal Yaoi couple).

-Additionally for the winner + place 2 + place 3: You will receive a badge.

ArinyaAug 7, 2012 4:37 PM
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Jul 20, 2012 6:49 PM
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I might edit some small details later - currently too tired

Syo x Ren (Uta no Prince-sama)


Hibari Kyoya (KHR) x Taro Sado (MM!)
I forgot to mention, that the story isn't complete because of the word limit. shame on me!
ArinyaJul 23, 2012 3:49 AM
Jul 20, 2012 7:18 PM
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I picked story 1

both were great...

Story 1: I liked the imagery in the story, the detail gave me a vivid picture of what was happening at all times. I liked the sweet sentiments throughout the story, giving off a romantic-like touch.


Story 2: I thought this could have been a little longer and more to it. It seemed to have been cut short, but the concept was great.
jackiebanaeJul 20, 2012 9:33 PM
Jul 23, 2012 9:01 AM
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I pick the one with Syo and Ren xD
Cause I'm bias for Syo.. or Syo's my bias and so is Uta no Prince Sama xp
Jul 24, 2012 7:20 PM
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Syo x Ren (Uta no Prince-sama)
>> Nice details but I think the lack of explanation about Sho's feeling before the smut time gave an impression that one of the reason for his acceptance of Ren's love is because of the xxx and not because he love Ren before.

Hibari Kyoya (KHR) x Taro Sado (MM!)
>> Interesting idea of pairing and comedic story. The end line is pretty acceptable for a story that is forced short, though it still made a reader (me) though "Is that it?".
Jul 31, 2012 5:22 PM
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For the second story, I thought it was really interesting and I love that you were true to Taro's masochism. I would have liked to have a little more development, but I think it would be great as a longer story.
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