What I offer is mainly ideas, though I also write a lot of stories for each one(you could say that i never really do a story until I have a good idea or concept, so about 75% of my ideas have stories, the rest are just concepts), a lot of my ideas are kinda just left alone. I don't have the time to really work on each.
So anyway, I'd like to let you know about this idea, before telling the story,(since the story is incomplete and has loop holes).
The main idea is about a group of assassins who carry out secret missions for a king. Their purpose is to do what the king can't in front of his people. (Ex. getting rid of certain enemies or even his own people to protect his kindom, he lets his assassins do all the(dirty) work, and he gets to keep his image thus ensuring he doesn't lose his position) Anyway, these assassins are trained by some monk who has discovered a deadly ancient art of (insert cool name for a dark art) . . . . . Obviously I haven't looked to much into this but anyway
This art grants you dark abilities in return for your soul. The more of your soul you give up, the more abilities you unlock and more powerful they become. *you dont have to read this --> (The art trains you to release your soul, when part of your soul is released, it is filled with negative energy or chi, which then can be used to preform the dark art, the this is actually an art to control your soul, but ultimately gives you these abilities. *ex. for abilities (Shadow Stars- basically throwing knifes or kunai that consist only of dark energy, which can be summoned at anytime in sacrifice for your energy. The advantage of this is that you basically have unlimited amount, this tech uses very little energy and is among the very first tech learned)
So the assassins learn to use basic dark techniques and carry out simple missions. The stronger assassins (who by the way have given up a big portion of their soul) take care of the most important missions. Little do they know that the soul has a limit. The more soul they give up, the more they lose themselfs, literally. As soon as 80% of the soul has been lost, it creates a doorway for demons. 80% means you now have to deal with a demon. Of course no one reaches this point,(until the main character and sometime in the middle of the story) either they die, or they simply wont go that far due to fear. 100% means giving up control, your demon takes over, and will do as it pleases. You are dead at this point. (I just realized, this sounds like Claymore -____-)
Please criticize mainly on if its original, or generic, or too similar to other anime/manga.
I'll see if the story is even worth mentioning, and don't worry about being harsh, I'm willing to listen and there is no problem in throwing this idea away. I'm not just saying that either.
One more thing, if you have a request for a concept or story, ask. I like to test myself, I have a lot of experience doing this,(this one is old, but one of my favorite) I hope I can be of help,
If anyone needs a visiual of this, just think, Dark Assassins creed, think dark powers, is basically what it looks like.
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