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Oct 9, 2015 12:18 PM
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| SABER: THE KNIGHT OF THE SWORD Full Name: Emperor Charlemagne, the King of Paladins Appearance: http://img3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20130807201104/typemoon-fanon/images/b/b1/Charlemagne.jpg Aliases: Charles the Great, Son of Pepin the Short, King of the Franks, King of the Lombards, First Holy Roman Emperor, Paladin Zero, King of Paladins, King of Joy, and the Genderbender “Charlotte the Great” Gender: Female Sexuality: Bisexual Age: 22 Height: 155 cm Weight: 44 kg Hair: Blonde Eyes: Green Nationality: Caucasian (French Mix) Religion: Christian (Latin Catholic) Color Scheme: Sterling Silver, Azure Lapis, and Gold Theme Song: “Kings and Queens” -30 Seconds to Mars Alternate Classes: Rider, Lancer, Berserker, Ruler, Saver Alignment: Neutral Good (Alter: Neutral Evil) Likes: Children, Learning, and Respect Dislikes: Treason, Liars, and Fratricide Master: Hiro Tohsaka, "bastard" son and love child of Shirou Emiya and Rin Tohsaka, a seven year old boy who scarcely understands whats going on and has barely began training in his mother's magecraft (Jewels). Wish: She wishes to have a mortal body and to retire as a King and to live as a civilian and die a simple death. Before she died of pleurisy, she made sure she had an heir and may have some unrealized hopes and dreams of uniting all of Europe under her banner... but now looking back at her mark on history, she is content with the good she did and she is remembered fondly by most of the world. So for her part, she wishes to live her life as a woman and civilian in this modern world. Her “heirs” weren’t even her real children, but bastards her “wives” had and as she served as their “father” (after her death the Holy Church tried to erase her from history and made every portrait or sculpture of her as a manly man with a beard and such). She won't admit or say she regrets her choices as a King and Emperor... but she made a few bad ones, and does not desire to rule again. Personality: “For courage mixed with prudence is not foolish, and moderation betters recklessness.” -Stanza CXXXI, line 1724, Song of Roland -Trait: Leader- First one into battle, and the last to leave. A King that serves and commands her armies from the front lines with her peers flanking her as they charge into battle -Trait: Charismatic- Her mere presence both in court and on the battlefield, invokes smiles and feelings of optimism; one could say she is an incarnation of “Joy” itself -Trait: Merciful- she was one to pity first, and ask questions later. But she is the once bitten twice-shy type; there are no second chances with her. -Trait: Venerable- A Holy Knight, but not preachy… just a set moral compass. She is a devout, but not a zealot per se as she only does what she believes to be “right” in the eyes of God. -Trait: Paladin- She is one with the ideals of a knight’s honor and chivalry, that is tempered by the humanity of one who is a conqueror of both lands and hearts, with the novelty of one who carries the spirit of a hero who is unafraid of the consequences of their world changing decisions; such are the qualities that make one a Paladin such as Charlemagne herself and her Court of Peers. My Legend: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Charlemagne Catalyst: Ancient tattered remains of a once crimson, but now sun-bleached and aged French "Oriflamme" banner. Recovered from an undiscovered treasury beneath a crumbling castle from the Hundred Years War in England. It was found without the lance that bore it, and was found by Shirou Emiya seeking Noble Phantasms (like Caladbolg II) for his Reality Marble whilst his travels as Counter Guardian EMIYA. Falsely thought by Rin Tohsaka to be part of EMIYA's cloak and catalyst Weaponry: Her Holy Sword, Joyeuse Tactics: Her well-crafted and ornate holy sword, Joyeuse is her primary weapon and suited for direct combat with its own special features and abilities. Her other Phantasm is her Oriflamme, a Reality Marble that creates a World in her favor that increases her Parameters while weakening her enemies's. Noble Phantasms: 1.) Joyeuse- The Sword of Immeasurable Joy Rank: A+ Type: Anti-Unit (Anti-Fortress) Range: 800 meter arc Max Targets: 100 Description: Charlemagne and her blade as described in the Song of Roland was: "He was wearing his fine white coat of mail and his helmet with gold-studded stones; by his side hung Joyeuse, and never was there a sword to match it; its color changed thirty times a day." As the sword is based upon and similar in legend to other “Holy Swords of Light” as it preceded the swords Calibrand (Uther), Caliburn (Artoria), and Clarent (Mordred); but followed after the swords Gram (Sigurd/Sigmund), and Balmung (Siegfried). Therefore it is considered a “Holy Sword of Light” and capable of accomplishing similar feats of power in nature. The blade can be used as a practical weapon and a “sharp tool” that periodically changes its colors when its special effect isn’t invoked, making it difficult to conceal its true name and her identity. To circumvent this, she keeps it in her scabbard until it is absolutely necessary to draw it. Once drawn, its silvery blade refracts light projecting a rainbow in the air as would light passing through water vapor would or a prism... both beautiful and deadly in nature. But when she declares the name of her weapon (“Oh Joyeuse, sing your praise!”) the light changes from a simple refraction, and begins to peal out an irridsecent techincolor-esque flurry of stars that surges her enemies in a dazzling rainbow of death and holy light. Its unique in its “rainbow colored” half circle arcs appear as opposed to the traditional “holy white light” normally associated with other similar Holy Swords. Thus having a curious side-effect of a “rainbow-like” aura when using a Skill such as Prana Burst. Note also that, as an additional side effect it also seems to somehow to even cause her enemies to smile as they fight her. Thus being true to its nature that it is a “Sword of Immeasurable Joy”. This may in fact also have some attributes associated with Artoria’s later Holy Sword “Excalibur” and its radiance that seems to have an uplifting effect on others, however Fairy hands crafted Excalibur. Whereas Joyeuse may have been forged by the seemingly immortal Wayland the Smith (who is credited for several other Holy Swords as well). http://img4.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20131105104558/avalon-kingdom/images/d/d9/Galatine.jpg 2.) Oriflamme Montjoie- The King's Heart is a Matter of France Rank: A+ Type: Anti-Army Range: 1600 meter radius Max Targets: 600 Description: The Oriflamme Montjoie (Translates to “My Joy” aka Charlemagne’s War Cry) is a scarlet and golden Oriflamme, battle flag standard, on a gilded Lance (Possibly a Holy Lance?). It was the ultimate symbol of War in medieval and early France but was later replaced by the more “friendly” blue standard with the “Fleur-de-Lis” after the Hundred Years War. Meaning the “Oriflamme” was used in practice for approximately 653 years, and has seen hundreds of battles. When the Oriflamme made its appearance on the battlefield, it meant the opposing army was toe be shown no quarter or mercy whatsoever. It was no longer a negotiation or small-scale battle, but an all out extermination campaign. Charlemagne’s campaigns were the first to use it, thus it has the strongest ties to her. The Oriflamme’s “memories” are also “her” memories. Thus this allows her to produce a Reality Marble (aka an “Innate Bounded Field”) crafted from the conglomerate of over 600 years worth of memories of death on the battlefield. The Reality Marble’s landscape is a field of brilliant scarlet grass growing out of a heavily mixed soil saturated with long since decomposed skeletons and aged weapons/armor strewn about. Most of which are also poking out of the Earth not unlike gravestones or markers for their equally ancient owners that fell in battle. The sky above is a tumultuous grey/black nimbostratus clouds with patches of a pea-green sky peeking between. Within this Reality Marble, Charlemagne reigns supreme with all her Parameters and Skills increasing by one Full Rank. Meanwhile, her enemies Rankings (Parameters and Skills) are decreased by one Full Rank while trapped in her Marble with her. They cannot escape her so long as the Marble persists, meaning she has to die or cancel the Marble herself. But due to the high Prana costs to maintain this Marble, in combination with her "Weak Constitution", she uses it sparingly on smaller groups of enemies. She also highly selective on what enemies are considered "worthy" of using such a Phantasm on, meaning only those she absolutely feels must die no matter what. Ergo those who deserve no mercy or quarter. This Innate Bounded Field is not a manifestation of the "Joy" she was known for... but the seeting hatred and disgust hidden beneath it. http://img543.imageshack.us/img543/3035/oriflammestdenis.jpg Class Skills: Magic Resistance- B (She’s a Saber class by her very nature, and from an era of Magic) Riding- B (She’s a Saber and it's a suitable Knight’s/Paladin’s Skill) Personal Skills: 1.) Instinct- B (Obviously inherent and natural as she is the basis for Artoria, a primitive yet favorable disposition for a warrior befitting herself) 2.) Weak Constitution- E (At the end of her life, Charlemagne died of pleurisy which greatly weakened her body’s constitution. Despite her astonishing and seemingly absurd wish, this effect remains upon her Soul as a “regret” for not completing her desire of uniting all of Europe under her banner within her lifetime. It’s similar in nature to Okita Suji’s version and Nero’s Migraine Skill. She consumes slightly heavier amounts of Prana in battles as a fight progresses in order to keep at her peak longer, otherwise she “runs out of breath” and “gets tired” more quickly, but she does not struggle to maintain her physcial form) 3.) Imperial Privilege- B (Brings about effectively B Rank Military Tactics, Charisma, Eternal Arms Mastership, Prana Burst, Bravery, Clairvoyance, Baptism Rite, and Protection of the Faith Skills only; as she is and was an Emperor not unlike Nero Claudius. However, she defines herself as a “Holy Knight of God” rather than a “Wondrous Artist of Rome” thus limiting or changing potential Skills to the aforementioned list. Note she can only hold one of these Skills at a time, and must exchange them as she needs them) Parameters/Stats: STRENGTH- B+ ENDURANCE- B+ AGILITY- B+ MAGIC- C+ LUCK- C+ NOBLE PHANTASM- A+ Author’s Note: Charlemagne has always been a favorite of mine from history, it was natural that he be made into a Saber and even more natural to genderbend him into ”Charlotte” and to have her resemble one of Type-Moon’s flagship "Saber Clones" and be just like Artoria, Mordred, Nero, and Okita Suji are. The creation of the Phantasm for “Joyeuse” was equally as obvious and inspired by other “Holy Swords of Light” in the franchise, but crafting the Oriflamme was more fun and inspired by Joan of Arc’s (Ruler’s) flag Phantasm and various Reality Marbles. Its effects would be quite different and have had an offensive effect if summoned as a Lancer via Holy Lance (Spear of Destiny?). Oriflamme would’ve summoned her 12 Paladins if a Rider, and I might’ve thrown in her Horse Tencendur (Warhorse of Strife?) as well. Ruler class would only change some Skills and up some her Stat Ranks. If summoned under Berserker class, it would’ve painted her more so as a “Tyrant” or “Genocidal Mass Murderer” for her efforts against the Saracens and Muslims (Possibly her Alter form as well?). Basically Charlemagne was designed to be the ultimate mix of female Heroes (Sabers/Ruler) in Type-Moon. |
Gibz0maticNov 23, 2015 6:24 PM
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Oct 9, 2015 12:20 PM
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| LANCER: THE KNIGHT OF THE SPEAR True Name: St. Longinus, The Centurion of Golgotha Appearance: http://s478.photobucket.com/user/ianimekiss/media/anime%20guy/sword.jpg.html Aliases: Longinus, The Centurion according to Luke and Matthew, The Unnamed Saint, The First Saint, The First Warrior Saint, The First Military Saint, The Saint of the Spear, The Saint of the Lance, The Patron Saint of Mantua, The Patron Saint of Military Attire Gender: Male Sexuality: Heterosexual Age: 25 Height: 170 cm Weight: 68 kg Hair: Glossy Black Eyes: Dark Blue Nationality: Caucasian (Roman/Greek) Religion: Christian (Unknown Variant) Color Scheme: Bright White, Azure Blue, Silvery Grey Theme Song: “I Will Not Bow” –Breaking Benjamin Alternate Classes: Rider, Berserker, Assassin, Ruler, Saver Alignment: Lawful Good (Alter: Lawful Evil) Likes: Adventures, Travelling, and Kindess Dislikes: Liars, Tyrants, and Pagans Master: Martin Hortensia, Son of Caren Hortensia, Grandson of Kirei Kotomine, and an Executor of the Burial Agency (Vampire/Demon Hunter) and presiding over the Sixth Grail War on Orders from the Holy Church. Specializes in Black Keys and using his Shroud of St. Longinus which (surprisingly) gives him A Rank Magic Resistance, he does not carry his mother's additional "skills". His father is a descendent supposedly of the Sanson House in France... but he has never met the man. Wish: He wishes to live again, but no longer as a soldier. He wishes to live his life as a monk would... like he did centuries ago. He tires of carrying the duties of a fighter, and would rather retire as a preacher and teacher instead. He thinks he can do alot of good for the people of the world if he could share the word of God... as he personally witnessed his Miracles. Personality: “Now when the centurion, and they that were with him, watching Jesus, saw the earthquake, and those things that were done, they feared greatly, saying, Truly this was the Son of God" -Matthew 27:54 -Trait: Chivalrous- By the book and code of a true Knight before the term "Knight" was coined, he is and was a gentleman to the ladies and a nightmare to his enemies. He is a man of honor and respect, stain either of his or your own and he will rain Hell down upon you. -Trait: Religious- More devoted than most, but not truly as feverous as others. He is a man of God, but he is also a reasonable man. His faith guides him, but it does not truly rule him as many Crusaders and Knights before and after his time. -Trait: Kind- Chivalry is the definition of 'politeness', but Longinus is genuine in his kindness and offers true courtesy as opposed to the pantomime that other less than stellar Knights may perform. He is particularly so to those he can sympathize or empathize with, even to repentant enemies. -Trait: Perceptive- He may be Kind and Chivalrous, but he isn't a fool. Spending a lifetime dealing with men both good and evil, amongst both Kings and Common folk have left an impression of what 'truth' really is... having the Blood of Christ in you eye helps too. -Trait: Forward- Exceptionally honest, and willing to share almost anything personal about himself. The man is like an open book that reads itself out loud. Legend: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Saint_Longinus Catalyst: The Statue of St. Longinus, the one that resides in St. Peter's Basilica in Rome, however his Shroud was present and in use by his Master at the time of his summoning. Weaponry: His Holy Lance(s); "The Spears of Destiny" Tactics: Uses the “Holy Lances” typically, but switches between them on the fly as when needed. Enjoys using multiple Lances and confusing then overpowering his enemies with the aid of his "Pure Eyes". Noble Phantasms: 1.) The Spears of Destiny- The False Holy Lances of the Centurion Rank: B++ Type: Anti-Unit (Anti-Divine) Range: 1-5 meters (thrown 400 meters) Max Targets: 200 Description: The Spear of Destiny, a seemingly once simple lance wielded by a "blind' Centurion watching Christ being crucified on Golgotha. This spear was blessed and baptized in the Blood of Christ as this Centurion pierced his side... but "this" spear is not "that" spear. "That" spear has long since disappeared amongst the rifts and sands of time, a lost Noble Phantasm of unknown quality or ability. "This" Noble Phantasm is a recreation of that spear, as many spearheads have appeared across Eastern Europe, Western Europe, and the Middle East. As such there are FIVE most well renowned spears that were claimed to be "The Holy Lance", "The True Longinus", or "The Spear of Destiny". Which has resulted in these FIVE "false" ones. They all look slightly different in their appearances, but they are all variants of the Roman "Hasta" style spear, as Longinus before being promoted to Centurion was in the Hastati unit in the Legion. As such they are designed for being thrusted at a target, but due to Longinus's training and strength they can be used as thrown weapons as well. They all retain the same abilities to a certain degree. In fact one could say they are all copies of each other, just as much as they are copies of the "true" one. They all are spears capable of doing greater damage towards beings considered "Divine" in nature, but are otherwise simply FIVE spears he can summon all at once if desired and used versatility in a myriad of ways. He can wield a single spear, dual wield, rapid fire several, cage an enemy in them, the possibilities are limited to his imagination and situation at hand. The FIVE spears are named: ROME, VIENNA, ECHMIADZIN, ANTIOCH, and KRAKOW. He summons each on by name and they either spawn in his hands or up to five meters away from himself to protect himself or others, or for a ranged attack. They may not the greatest of Holy Lances... but they earn the right to be called ones, yet they are still quite pale imitations next to the TRUE Spear of Destiny. http://img07.deviantart.net/e3d2/i/2004/356/e/b/spears_by_wen_m.jpg Class Skills: 1.) Magic Resistance- A (From an era of Magic still, he was trained to fight Mages though he never directly confronted them in battle... perhaps its a holdover from the "purifying" effects from the Blood of Christ?) 2.) Battle Continuation- A (This is a Skill only “sometimes” applies as a Class Skill for Lancers, he carries it due to surviving being tortured by a Pagan Governor in a Cappadocia. It only took being beheaded to finally kill him.) Personal Skills: 1.) Saint- A (He is recognized as such, thus gains “automatic HP recovery” in relation to supposedly the Blood of Christ touching him and "purifying" his eyes, curing his "blindness". Plus being able to speak after being tortured by having his teeth removed and his tongue cut out.) 2.) Eyes of Purity- A (Due to the Blood of Christ touching his eyes and curing his "blindness", he could see more than he ever thought possible... his eyes allow him to see now the true nature of things, and can be considered a combination of "Discernment of the Poor", "Clairvoyance", and "Revelation" skills. Thus it is impossible to lie or deceive him on and off the battlefield. They are also known as "Pure Eyes") 3.) Soul of a Martyr- A (As a recognized saint and martyr for Christianity, his faith is evident in high level mental resistance) Parameters/Stats: STRENGTH- B ENDURANCE- B AGILITY- A MAGIC- B+ LUCK- B+ NOBLE PHANTASM- B Author’s Note: I REALLY wanted a Saint for a Servant, as there has been a lacking of really awesome ones in the Type-Moon (Joan, Martha, and George) nasuverse. I was looking at Margaret, Maurice, and Longinus for the longest time… and finally settled on Longinus. I know that Type-Moon has their own version of a Spear of Destiny, but they have yet to reveal to many details about it. Thus I made my own better version that probably (and hopefully) scarcely resembles theirs! If summoned as a Berserker, it would've been blind zealotry that would have fueled his madness. Rider could've and would’ve "ridden" a horse or something... kinda lame huh? Ruler would be about the same if not stronger, Saver too, I think earns the right to achieve that class due to his Sainthood status and world recognition. |
Gibz0maticDec 25, 2015 10:27 PM
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Oct 9, 2015 12:21 PM
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| ARCHER: THE KNIGHT OF THE BOW Full Name: Bushi Tomoe Gozen, The Samurai Juggernaut Appearance: http://img4.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20110331212804/l5r/images/5/50/Shiba_Tsukimi_6.jpg Aliases: Commander of Minamoto Yoshinaka’s Forces, Concubine of Minamoto Yoshinaka, Trophy Wife of Wada Yoshimori, Buddhist Nun of Echizen, She of the Strong Armor and Oversized Sword and Mighty Bow, an a One Woman Army Gender: Female Sexuality: Heterosexual Age: 19 Height: 150 cm Weight: 45 kg Hair: Black Eyes: Dark Brown Nationality: Japanese (Asian) Religion: Buddhist (served as a Nun) Color Scheme: Crimson Red, Black, and Pearl White Theme Song: “Devotion” -Hurts Alternate Classes: Saber, Rider, Berserker, Lancer, Caster Alignment: Neutral Good (Alter: Neutral Evil) Likes: Combat, Theater, and Festivals Dislikes: Loneliness, Fear, Imprisonment Master: Zouken Matou, Patron and Founder of the Matou/Makiri House and creator of The Greater Grail and Servant Summoning system of the Heavens Feel Ritual. Specializes in his Worm Familiars and his Immortality derived from them. Wish: To go back and try again, she laments the deaths of her liege lord and lover Minamoto Yoshinaka and her later husband Wada Yoshimori. She loved them both in their own way, and she regrets hiding and retreating to a life in a nunnery after their deaths… she wants to go back and try again. She wants to change the way history played out. Ever the loyal soldier and wife. Personality: “Tomoe was especially beautiful, with white skin, long hair, and charming features. She was also a remarkably strong archer, and as a swordswoman she was a warrior worth a thousand, ready to confront a demon or a god, mounted or on foot. She handled unbroken horses with superb skill; she rode unscathed down perilous descents. Whenever a battle was imminent, Yoshinaka sent her out as his first captain, equipped with strong armor, an oversized sword, and a mighty bow; and she performed more deeds of valor than any of his other warriors”. -The Tale of the Heike -Trait: Honest- Not afraid to say what’s on her mind, regardless of consequences. It’s better to ask for forgiveness rather than permission, a pretty straightforward lifestyle -Trait: Feminist- Women are equal to men, and gender roles are a joke to her. A woman can be warrior, just as a man can be one who stays with the family. -Trait: Proud: She has pride... but she is not arrogant or cocky, she’s confident in almost every aspect of her being as a Wife and a Warrior. -Trait: Compassionate- She is not a woman without her sensitive side, she knows when its time to take up arms or to hold someone in hers. -Trait: Bushido- Follows a similar code to Chivalry, and an equivalent of a Knight. She is worthy of being treated as such, anything less is an insult. My Legend: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tomoe_Gozen Catalyst: An ancient Tsuba, a Katana'a crossguard, it carries markings making it part of the Yoshinaka clan. It’s not heavily adorned or gaudy, its compact and practical... yet it seems somewhat effininate. It is currently in the private reserves of the Matou family. Weaponry: Bow(s), Swords, and Helmet Tactics: Her primary weapon is her Japanese-style Bow (Yumi) which fires traditional arrows, which transforms into one of her Phantasms (The Mighty Bow) when needed. Both versions of which are very practical for long range and sniping combat well suited for an Archer. She also carries however a Zanbato (Horseslaying Sword) and a Tachi (Proto-Katana) in to battle on her left hip for personal close range combat as well. When necessary she may put on her Kabuto (helmet) in order to preserve herself or to use her other Phantasm. Noble Phantasms: 1.) Kabuto no Oni- The Onna-Bugeisha Fortress Rank: A++ Type: Barrier Range: Self Max Targets: Self Description: Tomoe was described as being remarkably strong (supposedly tore men’s heads off with her bare-hands) and worth over thousand men in battle. As such, her famous strength has been reborn as her “Kabuto”. The “Fortress” is a tank-like A++ Ranked Barrier that can be unequipped and reequipped when needed by putting her HELMET (Kabuto). While in her “Kabuto”, Tomoe is enveloped in a Bounded Area and a Barrier. This makes her Strength and Endurance Stats increase to A++ Rank, but her Agility is reduced to C Rank leaving her much slower than normal, but not completely immobile. Meaning she can still fight in a practical combat, but dodging or running away is much harder to do (not that she needs to). Other bonus effects of the Armor also include that as she is wearing essentially her own Bounded Area and is incapable of being removed from the spot from an outside force. The Armor itself is essentially impenetrable via a Barrier that redirects all incoming missile or melee attacks at 45-degree angles off the surface through changes in the laws of “cause and effect” (though she cannot control where they redirect to). However, this may be circumvented by Anti-Barrier or Anti-Noble Phantasm attacks that are a higher Rank than itself. Traditional Prana usage is incapable of fueling this Phantasm for a long period of time, so instead whilst being worn it draws upon Mana from nature from beneath Tomoe's feet. Thus it cannot be sustained midair whilst free falling for too long or while jumping/leaping. It also serves as a practical way of hiding her identity, you'd never know it was a woman, as her armor does not reveal her body shape (ergo it functions like real armor, not as fan service). http://ih1.redbubble.net/image.73455647.8906/sticker,375x360.u16.png 2.) Ballistae no Yumi- The Mighty Bow of Tomoe Gozen Rank: A Type: Anti-Army Range: 3200 meters Max Targets: 800 Description: Traditionally the art of using the bow in Japanese philosophy followed these three phases: Tōteki, the arrow hits the target, Kanteki, the arrow pierces the target, Zaiteki, the arrow exits the target. This Phantasm can only be used while wearing her “Kabuto”. When she charges up this attack via reciting these three phrases and while wearing said Armor, her traditional Yumi trans-mutates into a miniature Ballistae and fires bolts of pure energy as large as her. Aforementioned Phantasm (Oni no Kabuto) allows her to convert the Mana it absorbed into raw magic to be fired and to help her to not feel the recoil of the blast as this phantasm fires the “bolt” at mach speed, which results in catastrophic damage… bringing forth the claims of wielding a ‘mighty bow’. http://img2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20140727223523/finalfantasy/images/2/27/Starseeker-bow-ffxiii2.png Class Skills: 1.) Independent Action- B (Archer skill, high due to solo work as a warrior as she defied her husband's order several times... to the benefit of herself and their army) 2.) Magic Resistance- C (From an era of Magic still, but dealt with more warriors than mages) Personal Skills: 1.) Eye of the Mind (False)- B (A talented disciplined warrior, she is one who learns and adapts to the battle at hand, thus making her practical fighter and combatant in combination with her own well trained prowess on the field. Prior knowledge combined with instincts of sorts result in this skill) 2.) Bravery- A (She was a Captain that always lead her armies from the front, while her husband served as a tactician from the back. She was always the tip of the spear in any battle, even when order to retreat she still pushed forward. Serves additionally as a rank up in up melee damage and high Mental Resistance) 3.) Clairvoyance- B (A natural necessity for an Archer, she was quite talented and precise with her archery due to years of training, experience, and a natural disposition for it) Parameters/Stats: STRENGTH- C+ ENDURANCE- B+ AGILITY- B+ MAGIC- C+ LUCK- C+ NOBLE PHANTASM- A Author’s Note: There is a severe shortage of beautiful female Servants in the Type-Moon nasuverse that are straight-up badass warriors (unlike Medusa and Medea) that are not Genderbends of men (Sabers), and there is a shortage of Japanese heroes as well (only Kojirou Sasaki and EMIYA from F/SN). So Tomoe Gozen fit the bill perfectly, as she naturally could fit several classes. I so happened to have chosen Archer because I wanted to create a tank-like hero with a heavy cannon attack. Mission Accomplished I dare say. If she were summoned as a Saber however, her “Oversized Sword” would have become some sort of Phantasm that may have resembled Kojirou’s Tsubame Gaeshi via Second True Magic Phenomenon. Rider would’ve been tricky, no ideas officially for a mount but she was talented equestrian in life. Berserker would’ve been funny to see, some versions of the legend say that when she collected heads that they were removed with her bare hands. As a Lancer, she would’ve wielded a naginita despite her not having one in her legend. But rather she’d have one as being a symbol of “feminism”. |
Gibz0maticDec 17, 2015 12:37 PM
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Oct 9, 2015 12:22 PM
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| RIDER: THE MOUNTED KNIGHT Full Name: Lord Koschei the Deathless, The Tsar of Bones Appearance: http://i34.servimg.com/u/f34/17/44/50/26/youdec10.jpg Aliases: Kaschie, Kaschey, Koshchiy, Kosciej and Kostej; he of a Yellow Heart and Black Blood, the Lich Prototype, the Final Boss Template, the Dead Apostle Archetype, and the Master of Death itself Gender: Male Sexuality: Demisexual Age: 28 (Age when he created the Seals) Height: 170 cm Weight: 60 kg Hair: Silver Eyes: Black Nationality: Russian & Germanic (Mix) Religion: Christian (Eastern Orthodox) Color Scheme: Silver Grey, Black, and Burgundy Theme Song: “Falling Inside the Black”- Skillet Alternate Classes: Saber, Assassin, Berserker, Caster, Avenger Alignment: Lawful Neutral (Alter: Chaotic Neutral) Likes: Magic, Immortality, and Lady Marya Morevena Dislikes: Insults, Death, and Prince Ivan the Fool Master: Illyasviel von Einzbern II, an amnesiac "soulless" clone of the previous Illya made from her Umbillical Cord as "spare parts". She is rather apathetic and more quiet than the original, but more and more "memories" come to her as time goes on and Rider becomes a pseudo-father figure to her. She specializes, like her "mother" and predescessor in Alchemic manuipulation of Noble Metals and Healing magecraft. Wish: His wish is to take Marya as his bride once more and for the two of them to never die. There literally is no end to his desire for her… but deep down he truly does love Marya in a very strange way. After all it wasn’t his fault he was sealed: her many generation German Mage (Morevena) Family of Alchemists (studying the Mind) were unwilling to allow her to marry his lesser Russian third generation Mage family (studying Souls), despite him achieving a form of immortality magic due a combination of a Geis and a Bounded Area on his own Soul. Thus when they tried to run away together the first time, they sealed him away within their dungeon for many months/years and erased her almost her entire memory of him (as the Alchemists in the family were skilled with memory partition and manipulation) with Ivan from a family of foolish Mages became her new suitor. Fortunately, Ivan revived him with Water (his natural affinity) and restored his Prana. The legend we all know picks up from there. Personality: "Death is a very dull, dreary affair, and my advice to you is to have nothing whatsoever to do with it"- W. Somerset Maugham -Trait: Pride- Strong willed and will take shit from no one, especially if someone makes a remark regarding his Marya and his love for her -Trait: Love- A strong belief and respect for love and all that it entails whether its romantic, familial, or platonic… he especially enjoys using it to his advantage when dealing with others -Trait: Obsessive- He doesn’t have many personal vices, save his obsession with Marya -Trait: Coward- He feared death, so he cheated it and bound his soul to the earth -Trait: Crafty- A manipulative and clever mage, who enjoys exploiting all available resources My Legend: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Koschei Catalyst: An ancient Russian sword (Kladenets?) with a black bloodstain along the blade, it was found in the Einzbern treasury and the Morevena clan are now believed to be a progenitor of their clan. Originally the sword itself was supposed to be the catalyst to summon Prince Ivan the Fool as a Rider class Servant, but the ritual reacted to the magically potent and cursed blood on it instead thus summoning Koschei the Deathless as one, a Rider, instead. Weaponry: His sword (referred to as Kladenets), his Morevena chains, and his White Stallion Tactics: He uses his sword in tandem with his Mystic Eyes of Death Perception while holding down his enemies with his Morevena chains or he enjoys using a combination of his chains and his Stallion to overrun and overpower his enemies http://img.4plebs.org/boards/tg/image/1394/17/1394174253747.jpg Noble Phantasms: 1.) The Concealed Needle- The Secret Seal of the Deathless Rank: E Type: Anti-Self Range: 1 Max Targets: 1 Description: According to Legend, Koschei sealed away his Soul in order to remain immortal. The Seven Seals are called: The Mystic Oak, The Golden Chest, The Crippled Hare, The Flightless Duck, The Hidden Egg, The Concealed Needle. The Seals allow him to have [EX] Ranked ENDURANCE and have make almost completely immortal so to speak. However, the foolish “Hero” Ivan destroyed them all and killed him, thus as a Noble Phantasm a much “weaker” version has been recreated of this Seal. The Seals take the form of a decorative Golden jewelry box with oak leaves, rabbits, and ducks all around it. Inside the box is an ornamental Russian “Faberge” Egg, and within this lovely Egg is the Needle that houses his Soul. If this Needle is destroyed, he will be rendered Mortal and his ENDURANCE becomes C Ranked. This Phantasm is usually either carefully hidden away by Koschei, or is kept on his person, or is in the possession of his Master. 2.) The Morevena- The Chains of Love That Bind Us Rank: B+ Type: Anti-Unit (Anti-Thaumaturgy) Range: 100 meters Max Targets: 10 Description: A brilliant but torturous invention not crafted by Koschei, but rather a weapon created by the Morevena family that has fused with him and has become an extension of his being. They are the very same chains that imprisoned him ages ago beneath Marya’s home, until Ivan freed him by giving him water to help restore his Prana. They have been repurposed by him and named after Marya as they are a “gift” from her and the Morevena family. Koschei can use these in an almost tentacle like manner to trap and drain Prana from targets such as civilians, Masters, and Servants. The more Prana, Mana, or Magic Power the target has; the more they are bound and hindered by the chains and the more damage they deal. Thus why they were the perfect trap to seal Koschei away in Marya’s dungeon. Targets with A Rank Magic or higher have all their other Stats (excluding Luck) reduced to E, targets with a degree B Rank Magic are reduced to E+ Rank Stats, a degree of C Rank Magic has E++ Rank Stats, and anything lower than that is unaffected stat wise... but it is still a sturdy chain. If the chains are damaged or destroyed, they can be regenerated and recreated almost instantaneously. That is, assuming so long as there is one link surviving the onslaught.These chains can be summoned from under his cloak/sleeves or may spawn from beneath the ground or from walls, but not in “open spaces” or “out of the air”. They can be summoned and commanded via the incantation “Morevena”. Different effects and movements can be controlled with his mind and hand motions. 3.) Svetovid- The Relentless White Stallion Rank: B+ Type: Anti-Army Range: 1600 meters Max Targets: 50 Description: Named after the Russian Chief God who often took the form of a White Stallion quite often, and earned from his dealings with his rival, friend, and in some versions his sister Baba Yaga. Svetovid by his very nature was a “magic horse”, he was both intelligent and loyal to his master Koschei. He was even capable of nonverbally communicating to Koschei in full sentient and comprehensive thoughts. Svetovid, like all the horses that Baba Yaga bred, was incredible fast. In fact they were fast enough to give steeds such as Pegasi and Unicorns a run for their money (pun intended). The speed however was not achieved in the traditional manner, Baba Yaga specially bred the Horses with their own unique and almost human-like Magic Circuits that allow themselves apply Reinforcement Alchemy to their own body to achieve heightened levels of physical perfection and prowess. Koschei theorizes and believes that Baba Yaga may have somehow fused her original Horses with Humans somehow… he wouldn’t put it past her to do so. Svetotoid was already the greatest Stallion that Baba Yaga ever bred, and as Noble Phantasm this is underlined by increasing Koschei’s AGILITY to [EX] while he is Riding him, and when charging/overrunning his enemies it is not unlike being mowed down by a bullet train or some sort of freight train or locomotive: Non responsive brakes, nearly invincible body, and a wide turn radius. http://www.paintingsilove.com/uploads/9/9229/white-horse.jpg Class Skills: 1.) Riding- A (Capable of acquiring and taming Baba Yaga’s Wild and Magical Horses, and can skillfully use modern vehicles as well) 2.) Magic Resistance- C (Was both an Immortal Warrior and a Skilled Mage in life, but has no formal means of countering magic save being able to "survive" any blow) Personal Skills: 1.) Eye for Art- C (Can recognize "true beauty" and “true love”, it also aids when confronted with Phantasms for identification of an Epic Spirit. Ties in with his sometimes dramatic side to him.) 2.) Mystic Eyes of Death Perception- A (Allows him to slice his enemies to pieces by cutting along their “Death-Lines” via his Sword, he used this Skill when he killed Prince Ivan the Fool during their third encounter. This mutation in his eyes has aided him and his family in studying Souls and Death itself.) 3.) Magecraft- B (Orthodox Thaumaturgy, as his family was still pretty "young" as far mage families go, he didn't have a complex specialization or complete Magic Crest. But he does have an Elemental Affinity for Water/Ice magic and creating strange and unique combinations of Geis and Bounded Areas like his "Concealed Needle".) Parameters/Stats: STRENGTH- B ENDURANCE- [EX] AGILITY- B MAGIC- A LUCK- C NOBLE PHANTASM- E Author’s Note: Koschei has had more rewrites than I care to remember or describe, this the poor undead bad boy has been on and off the drawing bored more so than any other Servant I've created. But in the end I’m quite proud of the way he turned out. My goal was to create a villain-esque Heroic Spirit others could pity once they got to know him and be sad to see him eventually die. Assassin class would’ve suited skill wise even though he has nothing to do with Hassan I Sabbah, and he’s halfway through the door to being a Berserker. He also has the making of being an Angra Mainyu, thus an Avenger. |
Gibz0maticDec 6, 2015 7:26 AM
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Oct 9, 2015 12:23 PM
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| BERSERKER: THE MAD WARRIOR Full Name: King Beowulf, the Great Berserker King Aliases: King of the Geats and Danes, King of the Barbarians, The Golden Berserker, King of Berserkers, King of Broken Phantasms, King of the White North, The Bear King, The Aged Berserker; The Slayer of Monsters, Sea Serpents, Ogres, Grendel, Demons, Grendel's Mother, Divine Beasts, and the Golden Dragon Appearance: http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v252/SodaGuy/Golden_Armor_Knight_by_mlappas.png Gender: Male Sexuality: Asexual Age: 70 Height: 220 cm Weight: 290 kg Hair: Aged White Eyes: Tarnished Grey Nationality: Caucasian (Scandinavian Mix) Religion: Agnostic (mix of Christianity and Pagan practices and beliefs) Color Scheme: Tarnished Gold, Pearlescent White, and Ash Grey Theme Song: “Swedish Pagans” –Sabaton Alternate Classes: Saber, Archer, Caster, Rider, Ruler Alignment: Lawful Mad (Alter: Lawful Reckless) Likes: Mead, Glory, and Honor Dislikes: Cowards, Liars, and Empty Mugs Master: Luviagelita Edelfelt, The first Edelfelt in over a century to participate in a Grail War (Last time it was the 3rd Grail War) and she is the rival of Rin Tohsaka and has had longstanding one sided crush on Shirou Emiya... she doesn't not know of the existance of Hiro nor of Shirou's "death" at the time of the 6th Grail War. Uses Jewels and Gandr magecraft like Rin Tohsaka. Wish: None so to speak as he lived a long and fruitful life as one of the strongest and imposing of Kings of his era. He is an old man, and wishes to die by his sword once more in the Grail War… just to add one last stanza and line to the Epic of Beowulf. Personality: "The old man's mouth was silent, spoke/ No more, had said as much as it could;/ He would sleep in the fire, soon. His soul/ Left his flesh, flew to glory." -pg. 110, Epic of Beowulf -Trait: Courageous- Always looking for a new challenge, and old warrior seeking the one last adventure -Trait: Aged- As a Servant he was summoned as his 70 year old self as that was when he defeated his toughest of foes… and was still in peak physical condition despite his unfortunate death afterwards -Trait: Wise- If/When his Madness Enhancement isn’t in effect, he truly is a wise Man and wise King. -Trait: Barbarian- A savage Scandinavian warrior, a man among men, but tads to be a bit both jolly and grim... gallows humor so to speak -Trait: Heavy Drinker- MEAD!!! But in all seriousness, he isn't/wasn't a drunk. But rather a man full of mirth and life, who loved to drink with his companions and regail in tales of their/his exploits and adventures. My Legend: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Beowulf Catalyst: An ancient golden drinking (mead) horn that resembles a Dragon, believed to be the same horn stolen by the Thief from the Golden Dragon in the Epic. The fire that made up Beowulf’s funeral pyre didn’t melt it down; instead it became the regalia of his friend Wiglaf’s family and eventually was passed down into modern times (into the hands of the Edelfelt family). Weaponry: Nægling and Raw/Brute Strength Tactics: The magic sword that is neither holy nor demonic, Nægling, which is designed to destroy Phantasms. He will fight with his bare hands if necessary… even at the age of 70 his physique and willpower is still at its peak. He is a true Berserker at his core, even if it weren’t his class. Noble Phantasms: 1.) Nægling- The Funeral Pyre of Crystalized Mysteries Rank: A++ Type: Anti-Unit (Anti-Noble Phantasm) Range: 3 meter radius Max Targets: 1 Description: Nægling was the blade “awarded” to Beowulf upon returning from the battle with Grendel’s Mother. He carried with him the neglected and cursed blade (Hrunting), Grendel's remains (The Arm), and this mysterious and ancient magical sword that he used to finish of Grendel and slay Grendel’s Mother that he found in their Lair, and is believed to be a sword crafted for a Giant's hands (unclear if for Jotunn or Nephilim ones) and etched along its hilt with ancient Runes (Rune magecraft) telling the story of how the earth had been cleansed with water in ancient times (the great flood). He presented this blade to King Hrothgar, but was asked to keep it by him. What was omitted from the legend was that he renamed it "Nægling" as it had served him well... so instead of three swords in the legend, there are only two in truth. This very same blade served him well through out his life (the next 50 som years), until it was later used in slaying Dracawyrm the Golden Dragon, the battle that Beowulf finally perished in after it broke in half. The sword itself unlike most magical swords of Epic Spirits, it is neither a “Holy” one that represents their ideals or a “Demonic” one that represents their monstrosities. Instead one could say that this blade represents Beowulf’s long and fruitful life as a Hero, that even at the age of 70 he can still slay a Dragon, Dracawyrm, and live just long enough to claim its Hoard before dying from his wounds. It’s a weapon that is the life of a “Man”, nothing more and nothing less. As weapon on its own, its heavy two-handed nature, sharpness, and strength of Damascan steel can almost outstrip and outfight any blade. In fact, the blade itself is almost as long as he is tall. Also as a bonus of sorts for slaying a Dragon, Dracawyrm, it gains additional damage towards Dragon-kind as well. The special ability and trump card of this Phantasm is to “destroy/break” Noble Phantasms that are “physical” (such as a weapon, armor, or a beast) that are C Rank or lower with ease. Due to the effects of Madness Enhancement, this may come closer to B Rank instead if his enemies have Luck Rank lower than C. Such is how he finished off Grendel and slew its Mother in the end of their confrontation. However, a candle burns the brightest before it goes out… to activate the “true” effect of this Noble Phantasm, Beowulf must break the sword upon an enemy’s armor, skin, hide, barrier, weapon, and etcetera to activate it. By permanently "breaking" the blade on the target, its explosive nature via its Runes is strong enough to rend a [EX] Rank or possible higher defense and kill the target, as this was the effect it had on the Dracawyrm the Golden Dragon in legend. The backlash from such an attack may possibly kill Beowulf in the process if he isn’t careful as it is tied in with his own lifeforce, so this is a last resort Phantasmal effect to be used only in the most dire of circumstances. http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/020/1/6/Two_Handed_Sword_by_Avenegerc47.jpg 2.) Regal Golden Attire: The Bounty and Regalia of Northern Kings Rank: C++ Type: Anti-Unit Range: 1 Max Targets: 1 Description: Upon defeating Grendel’s Mother, Beowulf was awarded golden armor etched with ancient Runes (Magecraft) by King Hrothgar from his own treasury. According to legend “no enemy’s clasp could crush him in it” whilst wearing it, in fact the helmet itself is said to have “resisted every sword”. Meaning as far as a Phantasm goes, it allows him resist attacks from enemies B Rank in STRENGTH and immune to regular attacks lower that. However the armor provides no additional Magic Resistance, nor does it protect him from special effects from Noble Phantasms. Thus it is purely physical and melee resistant, so it serves as a "highly practical armor" rather than a "magical one". Class Skills: 1.) Madness Enhancement- A (True Berserker both in Class and birthright, to him “madness’ isn’t the absence of one’s humanity. But in truth, it’s rather the purest manifestation of it. As in his eyes, a true warrior and human is born to fight, win, survive, and fight again.) Personal Skills: 1.) Rune Magic- E (Was well educated and trained in life in the use of Rune Magic and was capable in using the 18 Runes in a versatile manner. However, consequently due to his nature being summoned under the Berserker class this Skill has been diminished from its traditional B Rank and can only be used to activate his Noble Phantasms) 2.) Eternal Arms Mastership- A (In life, Beowulf was trained in archery, swordsmanship, unarmed combat, and various other martial skills in combination with his practical experience. Thus even under the effects of Madness Enhancement, he is still can outmatch almost any opponent in technique and prowess.) 3.) Eye of the Mind (True)- A (Wisdom of 70 years of life put to good use on and off the battlefield, but due to be being a Berserker class it almost can be treated as a high level Instinct Skill when in combat. His “wisdom” so to speak, seems to either be unspoken, lost due to Madness Enhancement, or ignored by his Master.) Parameters/Stats: STRENGTH- A ENDURANCE- A AGILITY- A MAGIC- C LUCK- C NOBLE PHANTASM- C Author’s Note: Beowulf is the ultimate form of what it means to be a man who serves neither Gods nor Demons… but a man of the people and a King at heart. Hollywood butchered his story with that CG piece of shit, and Type-Moon has neglected his awesomeness (and has made mentions to the sword and Noble Phantasm "Hrunting"). So I made him as he was meant to be! His Phantasms were inspired by his consistent breakages of swords, shields, and armor in his story. The fact that he is summoned as his 70 year old self; I think was a stroke of brilliance. He was still at his peak and he had just slain a Dragon, it would be an insult to summon him as his younger self. If summoned as a Saber, would’ve made his Sword Phantasm even stronger (if that was possible) with high Magic Resistance. According to the legend, he was trained in archery and bowmanship, so Archer class would've been applicable too. Caster would’ve focused on Rune Magecraft usage more, while Rider would be tricky… perhaps summon his war party and ship? He has the prerequisites to be a Ruler class due to being a King and to due to having no real wish so to speak |
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Oct 9, 2015 12:24 PM
#6
| CASTER: THE MAGUS True Name: Queen Lamia, The Cursed Seeress of Libya Aliases: Daughter of Hecate, Daughter of King Belus, Descendent of Poseidon, Mistress of Zeus, Bane of Hera, Foster Mother of the Monsters Scylla and Akheilos, Foster Mother of Syballa Herophile, and Origin of the Many Empusa, Daemon, Mormo, Drakaina, Succubi, and Vampire legends Appearance: https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/736x/82/69/4d/82694d43fdd4d93a41e4114af783c24a.jpg Gender: Female Sexuality: Bisexual Height: 150 cm (Monster form 10 meters) Weight: 50 kg (Monster form 400 kg) Hair Color: Raven Black Eye Color: Blood Red Nationality: Libyan (African Mix) Religion: Greco-Roman Pagan Color Scheme: Darker then Black, Pale White, Purple/Gold Mix Theme Song: “Demons” –Imagine Dragons Alternate Classes: Berserker, Assassin, Lancer, Rider, Avenger Alignment: Neutral Evil (Alter: Neutral Good) Likes: Children, Sunlight, and Music Dislikes: Hera, Child Molesters/Killers, and Herself Master: Damascus Kimera, an Alchemist of the Atlas group specializing in recreating Phantasmal Beasts. He claims that he wants to recreate and environment similar to the "Age of Gods" in order to bring balance to the World (between Gaia and Alaya), what he doesn't reveal is that he wants to use the Prana collected by his Beasts in tandem with the Grail to make himself a God (Divine Spirit). His magecraft is air elemental based, and excels at using lightning with a bit of creepy Zeus-envy tossed in. Wish: She wants her son back, she has learned to live with her curse and can control her monstrous nature due to Zeus eventually alleviating her curse somewhat by allowing her to remove her eyes. She may hate Hera, but her love for her children exceeds her hate… all she wants to do his hold him in her arms once more and tell them how sorry she is for what she did to him, and to be their loving mother once more. Personality: “So rainbow-sided, touch'd with miseries, She seem'd, at once, some penanced lady elf, Some demon's mistress, or the demon's self.”- John Keats (on the Lamia) -Trait: Maternal- In her humanoid form, she is a kind and gentlewoman to children. She could almost be a physical manifestation of Hera herself, though such a description would only incur Lamia's wrath and vengeful nature. -Trait: Vengeful- If so much as insult her or harm those under her protection, she will flay your hide and consume your flesh. She is monster concealed within smokescreen of human flesh, and you’d best not forget it. -Trait: Blind- When in her humanoid form, she is completely and utterly blind as her eyes have been removed. However due to her magic via Divine Words, she is able to “sense” shape and scent of others via her hearing, taste, and smell. -Trait: Afraid- She may put on airs being a confident and regal woman, but in truth she fears herself. Despite her lack of eyes alleviating her monstrous form and the intensity of the memory, she still harbors a lessened desire to hunt, kill, and gorge herself on small children. She doesn’t want to however, as the absolutely idea of it repulses and pains her humanity. -Trait: Regal- Despite being an infamous child eating monster, many forget that she was a regal Queen of Libya who ruled during time fairly and justly. She still retains the air of leader despite her now more withdrawn and private nature. My Legend: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lamia Catalyst: A fossilized human-size snakeskin from an unknown species, believed to be her's from ancient times and recovered from a previously concealed grotto in Libya near the northern shoreline on the Medditeranean Sea. It was discovered and recovered by the Mages Association for their own use and research purposes, and purchased/stolen/acquired by the Kimera family in Atlas. Weapons: When in her humanoid form, she traditionally carries her Staff of Hecate and wields magic. As a Monster she relies on her heightened Stats using her claws and fangs. http://vignette4.wikia.nocookie.net/fireemblem/images/8/89/Torch_Staff_(Artwork).png/revision/latest?cb=20130624144110 Tactics: She is a hunter by nature, but she prefers to draw her prey to her rather than pursue it. She is more than adept with True Magic as she is demigod from the Age of Gods, but she is fully capable of completely shedding her humanity and becoming a true monster to eliminate her enemies. Noble Phantasms: 1.) Crystalized Eyes- The Enigma of a Sybil; The Stigma of the Curse Rank: C Type: Anti-Self/Anti-Unit Range: Self Max Targets: Self Description: Long before Hera’s Curse, Lamia was the beloved Queen of Libya and the equally beloved demigod daughter of the late King Belus (a son of Poseidon) and Hecate the Goddess of Magic. With such a rich pedigree of both royalty and divinity, it was natural she gifted in some unique magic; ergo she was born with the gift of prophecy and foresight. Thus allowed her to rule her kingdom peacefully and wonderfully, as she could foresee any strife ahead for her people and do whatever she could to prevent any tragedies. But… her sight did not forewarn of Zeus’s attention and what came after. She eventually received attention of Zeus himself. As such, he “blessed” her with a beautiful baby son who was a demigod himself, a son (who as all children of Zeus) who more than likely carried a great destiny. Much like later demigods such as Hercules, Perseus, and Iskander. A destiny unfulfilled by Hera’s jealous and spiteful rage, as she cursed the young Queen and Mother with a monstrous snake-like form and infused an insatiable appetite for young children… of which Hera took great pleasure in unleashing her on Lamia’s own first. As a result, she consumed her own son all the while wanting to stop but unable to. This pushed her over the edge into madness, and as an additional curse in the name of Hera’s spite she was unable to ever close her eyes again… with image of her ingesting her screaming son’s entrails forever burned into them. Then Zeus with his “oh so infinite kindness and boundless wisdom” granted her with a new gift: to remove her eyes. With her gift of prophecy now seemingly "useless" due to the madness that possesses her for the murder and eating of her own children, the removal of her own eyes almost complete erases the “visual” of the memory. But the memory, though dulled, remains; even with her eyes removed she retains the memory of the death of her son. But the madness and her monstrous form are removed, leaving her as a blind yet still powerful mage with a human body. The eyes when removed resemble eccentric red orbs and are kept in a silk bag, when they’re reinserted into her sockets she takes on her monstrous (snake/dragon) form, goes insane from the refreshed memory, and regains her hunger for young flesh. Her High Speed Divine Words and Divinity Skills are reduced to E Rank, with the exception of Evaporation of Sanity which is increased to A Rank, Dragon Witch however remains unchanged. All her Parameters are increased to A Rank, and her second Noble Phantasm activates. http://i.ebayimg.com/00/s/MTIwMFgxNjAw/z/eRIAAOxyOMdS3Ye9/$_35.JPG 2.) Draconian Hide: The Monstrous Form of The Libyan Queen Rank: [EX] Type: Anti-Unit Range: Self Max Targets: Self Description: When Lamia has replaced the Eyes within her head, she takes on her monstrous form. Which reduces her Divinity and High-Speed Divine Words to E Rank but increases her Evaporation of Sanity Skill and all her Stats to A rank, Dragon Witch does not change from C Rank. In addition to her monstrous form is an additional ability; it is unknown if this is in response to Hera’s curse, her being an offspring of Hecate, or a combination thereof. But her hide whilst in monstrous form allows her [EX] Ranked Magic Resistance thus an almost immunity to all forms of known magic. Her Draconian Hide almost becomes almost impenetrable to almost all weapons save A Rank or higher Noble Phantasms, as she was never slain in legend... she died alone in some damp and loathsome cave far from humanity with a mortal and human body. Thus this makes her a true Monster to be reckoned with; with her only weak point being her eyes. If one were to destroy her eyes, she would return to her mortal humanoid form. Note that also due to her being of a somewhat cursed Draconian, Dragon-kind, nature she is also naturally weak against “Dragon-slaying” weapons. Also note that even though she is Dragon-kind in nature, she lacked any kind of "breath" in her legend. In truth, its because no one ever really confronted her in battle; her breath is a form of super heated scalding water that can boil the flesh off a man's body. This may in fact be a reflection of her paternal ancestor and relation to Poseidon, God of the Sea. http://img1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20120813040637/finalfantasy/images/0/07/Lamia_FFXI_Art_2.jpg Class Skills: 1.) Territory Creation- B (Better referred to as a “Lair” rather than a “Workshop” for her projects and preparations.) 2.) Item Construction- B (Was skilled in creation in some potions and poisons before Hera’s curse, but she specialized in more practical magic rather than artifacts or items.) Personal Skills: 1.) Evaporation of Sanity- E (Even with her eyes removed, she still retains a bit of her madness and cannibalistic tendencies. Though they are subdued, as she finds the idea of eating children repugnant herself. She in truth hates herself... almost as much as she hates Hera. In battle this may serve akin to the "Instinct" skill and gives some Mental Resistance) 2.) Divinity- C (As a demigod with an exceptional pedigree, and despite being a monster, she still retains of a decent divine quality. Though normally it would be closer to a high B Rank pending A Rank due to a Demigod father and a full God mother.) 3.) High-Speed Divine Words- [EX] (When she isn’t using either of her Noble Phantasms, her unparalleled skill with magic is due to being Hecate’s daughter is unmatched, thus making her a top tiered mage even during the Age of Gods. Though she prefers using fire or fire-related magicks and spells, as the "Torch" is a symbol of Hecate's power. However, it's more of a personal choice rather than a limitation, as she is capable of a variety of magicks and spells of a variety of disciplines) 4.) Dragon Witch- C (As she was a foster mother to many Monsters and Beasts, she gained some skill in controlling and directing even Dragons in battle... including controlling and directing herself to some degree) Parameters/Stats: STRENGTH- D ENDURANCE- D+ AGILITY- C MAGIC- A+++ LUCK- D+ NOBLE PHANTASM- C Author’s Note: Believe it or not, I originally conceived Lamia as an Assassin class due to her predatory nature. I simply designed her as nothing more than a one-dimensional huntress and simple demon. This was later revised as a possible Berserker before settling down into the Caster class, with a focus on her humanity being swallowed up by Hera’s curse and her attempts to fight it. The result was a strong willed but emotionally scarred woman that qualifies as a true Heroic and Epic Spirit. I’m quite proud of the end result, as she stands as an equal amongst the other Servants she was summoned with in this Grail War if not superior in her background at least. |
Gibz0maticDec 6, 2015 7:24 AM
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Oct 9, 2015 12:25 PM
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| ASSASSIN: THE SILENT KILLER True Name: Hassan of the Mirror, One of the "Erased" Hassan-I-Sabbah Appearance: http://hdwpics.com/images/0A4223B9AC64/Skull-Mask-Girl.jpg Aliases: Bloody Mary, Queen Mary of Scots, Bell Tower Witch, Wicked Stepmother, Queen of Hearts, Mirrorwalker, Mirror Hassan, Mirror Spirit, Mirror Demon, and a True Assassin Gender: Female Sexuality: Homosexual (Lesbian) Age: 19 Height: 155 cm Weight: 45 kg Hair: Raven Black Eyes: Red Nationality: Arabic/Persian (mix) Religion: Islamic Hassan Color Scheme: Midnight Black, Crimson Red, and an Off-White Cream Theme Song: “Iron” -Woodkid Alternate Classes: Berserker, Caster, Archer, Saber, Avenger Alignment: Lawful Evil (Alter: Lawful Good) Likes: Blood, Dancing, and Sleeping Dislikes: Lies, Pain, and The name “Bloody Mary” Master: Count St. Germain, an "unranked" self-made Dead Apostle and former Alchemist, Artist/Artisan, Composer/Musician, Politician, Philosopher, Bureaucrat, Mathematician, Freemason, Scientist, Inventor, and formally/formerly a Mage of the Sea of Estray... who desires to reach the Origin/Root. He loves humanity and embraces all of our flaws while seeking to master and pefect everything we succeed at, he sees himself as the weird father figure over humanity and as a lesser god... who dines upon his subjects. Quite a dramatic figure who wields a variety of magicks with no specializations. Wish: She wishes for people to remember her what she truly was, not a monster or demon deformed by the wild imaginations of others… but as beautiful young and talented woman of her Order. Though, her name and deeds were struck from her Order's ledger and records when they learned of her homosexuality... in fact it was they who killed her because of this "sin". Personality: "And so she asked: Mirror, mirror, on the wall... who is the fairest of them all?" -Princess Snow White, Brothers Grimm -Trait: Reserved- She doesn’t speak unless spoken to first normally, unless she has to announce her presence to communicate -Trait: Honest- She doesn’t like to, if not incapable, of lying to others (especially her Master) -Trait: Serene- Despite being a professional Murderer and an Assassin, she retains an air of serenity and kindness -Trait: Loyal- Fiercely loyal to her Master, Assassins don’t break contracts in any form -Trait: Fierce- Despite her silent demeanor, her lethality and bloodlust is immeasurable My Legend: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hassan-i_Sabbah Catalyst: Ancient Persian mirror with a bloodstain on the front, it was stolen from a museum by unknown assailants with unknown motives and some how ended up in the hands of one of the mage families to summon her. Weaponry: Nearby Mirrors and her limited number of Dirks Tactics: As long as there is a Mirror or mirrored surface nearby, she will always have an advantage. She is also equipped with Dirks like most True Assassins, but she isn’t as proficient as some of them. Note that she is left handed, so opponents may find it awkward to fight her directly. Noble Phantasms: 1.) Zabaniya- Delusional Mirrorwalker Rank: A Type: Anti-Unit Range: Self Max Targets: Self Description: Bloody Mary despite all the rumors, legends, stories, myths, and folktales… actually extends back to middle east as a Hassan-I-Sabbah. To become a Hassan, one must achieve a “miracle” that others can recognize as a technique. The techniques have not been passed down in history like regular Noble Phantasms, but instead because the Assassins themselves are a famous anecdote. Due to being the abilities that have established them as Assassins by virtue of being placed as the “Old Man of the Mountain”, the superhuman abilities they had in life are sublimated as their Noble Phantasms. In “Bloody Mary’s” case, she achieved the ability to walk through Mirrors and travel/flit between them. This alone not only allowed her to earn the title, but also had lasting effects upon the world. As she was the first and truly only entity to ever truly fuse with the Mirror. This was achieved through the Hassan's skills and training that allow Self-Modification, which allows them to create these "miracles". Her's was the result of applying self-mutilation involving over 1000 cuts and insertions throughout her body. Inserted within the cuts were small slivers of mirrored glass with various unknown enchantments... this allows her to pass through the Mirrors. Consequently, even after her apparent “death” she achieved a Wraith-like status that allowed her essence to be summoned anywhere in the world via a Mirror. For her Zabaniya has given her a pseudo-immortality and has permamently bound her to the "Mirror World" she passes through. Thus she has had many appearances in history, myths, legends, and folklore through out the World as some form of entity summoned in a Mirror. She has earned equally as many names and titles, but Bloody Mary seems to be the most famous in the modern era. Her “Mirrorwalk”, is the ability to silently and freely flit between Mirrors or any semi-reflective surface such as a still pond or a polished surface. This allows “Bloody Mary” to carefully stalk and observe her prey before initiating an attack. Not only can “Bloody Mary” flit between Mirrors, she can leave the mirrors and enter the “real world” as well. Her preferred form of attack is more or less a “hit and run tactic” as she is limited in direct combat due to her nature as a Assassin class and lower default Stats. Class Skills: 1.) Presence Concealment- A+++ (True Assassin, true mastership, bonus due to her affinity for Mirrors. Even when visible and right in front of enemy Servants, they can "see" her but cannot "sense" her like they can other Servants. Perhaps another holdover from being an entity that's one with the Mirror and whose Soul is linhering within it still? ) Personal Skills: 1.) Innocent Monster- A (Result of generations of the deformation of her identity as ”Bloody Mary” and other such Mirror entities/spirits, her appearance may alter slightly in the eyes of those who behold her in both the Mirror and Real Worlds) 2.) Disengage- A (A Skill most befitting a True Assassin, as an Assassin should always know when to run away. While in the Mirror world she is untouchable and her healing rate is increased and her status effects are reset to original conditions.) 3.) Self-Modification- C (Most Hassan had to undertake some sort of Modification to create their own Zabaniya, her's was the morbidly traumatic insertion of hundreds of small fragments of glass beneath her skin that react with mirrors make her able to "transmutate" her body and "pass through" them, thus becoming the being she is today...) Parameters/Stats: STRENGTH- C ENDURANCE- C AGILITY- A+ MAGIC- C LUCK- A+++ NOBLE PHANTASM- A Author’s Note: I really, really, really wanted Bloody Mary as an Assassin class Servant to be honest, but all Assassins summoned in the Holy Grail War are “suppose” to be Hassan I Sabbah. So naturally all I did was stuff Bloody Mary into a Hassan I Sabbah blender and mixed well… I’m generally quite please with the resulting Zabaniya (iconic to True Assassins) Noble Phantasm and the Personal Skills at her disposal. She has qualifications to be a Berserker, Caster, or Archer as well… because why the hell not? Berserker for being a “monster”, Caster for being a “Witch”, Archer due to the possibility of developing “ranged combat” skills, Saber for sword/knife play (would’ve ranked up all base stats as well). |
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Oct 9, 2015 12:25 PM
#8
| AVENGER: THE SPIRIT OF VENGEANCE True Name: Deity Angra Mainyu, All the World's Evils Appearance: EMIYA- http://vignette4.wikia.nocookie.net/typemoon/images/9/9f/ArcherEMIYAGOStage2.png/revision/latest?cb=20150802004535 ; AVENGER- http://gallery1.anivide.com/_full/92872_1395393101.jpg Aliases: Counter Guardian EMIYA, The Holy Grail, The Persian God of Darkness Gender: Male Sexuality: Unknown Age: 29 (EMIYA's age) Height: 187 cm Weight: 78 kg Hair: White Eyes: Black Nationality: Japanese (EMIYA's body) Religion: None Color Scheme: Void Black, Blood Red, Bleached White Theme Song: "The Sound of Silence" - Paul Simon and Art Garfunkel Alternate Classes: Archer, Saber, Berserker, Assassin, Caster Alignment: All The World's Evil (Alter: Sword) Likes: Void, Darkness, and Silence Dislikes: Humans, EMIYA, and Family Master: There is no "Master", AM fused with the corpse of Counter Guardian EMIYA (who died savinf Rin and Hiro during the course of this War). Thus creating a new and improved Avenger that technically is a "demiservant" in nature and does retain "some" of EMIYA's abilities... but UBW has been lost due to "their" Origin now being "All The World's Evil" instead of "Sword" Wish: To be reborn and to complete the Heaven's Feel Ritual... as to purge the World og humanity with Mud he creates and brings forth from the Grail... he is the Final Antagonist Personality: “The only thing necessary for the triumph of evil is for good men to do nothing." -Edmund Burke -Trait: Apathetic- Literally gives zero fucks about anyone and anythinunless it directly affects him and his own survival and rebirth. -Trait: Sarcastic- Everything he says and does carries some form of bitter irony and inherent cruelty... he seems to almost enjoy the suffering of others. -Trait: Vengeful- He scorns and hates humanity with a strange taste of bitterness with every cutting word and action he performs. -Trait: Dark- His Soul is like the void... its maddening to stare into it. -Trait: Amnesiac- Occasionally has lapses of EMIYA's memory... perhaps a bit of him remains? Legend: http://typemoon.wikia.com/wiki/Avenger_(Fate/hollow_ataraxia) Catalyst: The death of Counter Guardian EMIYA was the necessary catalyst to create a container/vessel to host AM, as neither Ilya 2.0 nor Sakura Matou were "willing" to be is host. But the empty corpse of such a powerful being... was perfect. Weaponry: Tawrich and Zarich are AM's go to weapons... but due to his vessel's abilities, he can create unlimited copies of them via magecraft Tactics: Noble Phantasms: 1.) Verg Avesta: False Copy of Inscribed Creation Rank: E Type: Anti-Unit Range: 100 meters Max Targets: 1 Description: http://typemoon.wikia.com/wiki/Verg_Avesta Class Skills: 1.) Madness Enhancement- E (Originally AM was summoned during the Third Grail War in the place of Berserker, as such he carries some Madness Enhancement... not that it does him any good, but it does tie into some of his amneisa pretty well) 2.) Magic Resistance- E (A Skill gained from wearing EMIYA as his host in a sort of "demiservant" like form, much weakened due to AM's nature) Personal Skills: 1.) Magecraft- E (EMIYA's magic... weakened by AM's nature) 2.) Eye of the Mind (True)- [EX] (Holdover from EMIYA... but improved by the knowledge of AM) 3.) All The World's Evils- [EX] (Allows him to corrupt and darken Servants, and have accellerated healing as well) (http://typemoon.wikia.com/wiki/Avenger_(Fate/hollow_ataraxia)#All_the_World.27s_Evils) Parameters/Stats: STRENGTH- C ENDURANCE- C AGILITY- C MAGIC- E LUCK- E NOBLE PHANTASM- E Author’s Note: The one and only true Avenger, Angra Mainyu reborn and better than ever... wearing the corpse as a demiservant of one of the fandom's most precious and favorite characters from the series across all canons and fanons... once this fanfic is released and people see what I have done to their precious EMIYA, they will either be clammering for the next chapter or shunning me/it like the plague and cry in their showers. Though I may list alternate classes for this chara... they are only there because its EMIYA's body, Angra Mainyu couldn't properly fit in any of those. |
Gibz0maticOct 19, 2015 3:31 PM
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Oct 9, 2015 12:26 PM
#9
| SAVER: THE SPIRIT OF SALVATION True Name: Master Enoch, The Angel "Metatron" Appearance- http://orig03.deviantart.net/2c8f/f/2011/224/2/e/kid_britannia_angel_by_silentseven-d46asrx.png Aliases: Descendent of Adam and Seth, Ancestor of Noah, Ancestor of David and Solomon, Ancestor of Jesus, The last to know the ancient and lost tongue of the Angels Gender: Male Sexuality: Aromantic Age: 365 (Before he Ascended) Height: 5 ft Weight: 150 lb (including wings) Hair: White Eyes: Grey Nationality: Unknown Religion: Ancient Hebrew Color Scheme: White, Grey, and Silver Theme Song: "Angel of Darkness" -Alex Christenson Alternate Classes: Caster, Saber, Archer, Lancer, Berserker Alignment: Lawful Good (Alter: Lawful Evil) Likes: God, Love, and Good Food Dislikes: Liars, Sinners, False Gods Master: Sakura Matou, who makes a surprising reappearance to the Grail War towards the end of it commanding one of the most powerful Servants one can imagine. Even though she was technically the Master of Rider in the previous Grail War, the Grail seemingly has found it necessary to reinvite her to "play" again. Her magecraft consists of her Cursed Boundary Layer and command of the Fifth Imaginary Element. Wish: Personality: “Sit and write all the souls of mankind, however many of them are born, and the places prepared for them to eternity; for all souls are prepared to eternity, before the formation of the world." -Enoch, The Books of Enoch -Trait: Ancient- Despite looking like a child, he is a very old man... his youthful appearance is a result of ascending into an Angel form -Trait: Cold- Very calculating and methodical; everything he does is weighed on scale between good and evil, light and dark, order and chaos. -Trait: Reserved- A quiet man who keeps his judgement saved until it is absolutely necessary to speak... he does not rashly decide who shall live and who shall die blindly -Trait: Devout- He frequently asks the Lord for guidance and aid in his decision... but his prayers often seemingly go unanswered -Trait: Ironic- Whenever he makes a decree or judgement... he enjoys subtle irony and coincidences in punishments and revelations Legend: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Enoch_(ancestor_of_Noah) Catalyst: After leaving the Matou household, Sakura joined a Christian convent thinking perhaps that religious salvation could help the darkness in her heart... it did so to speak when Command Seals and Saver appeared before her during on of her prayers. Her "prayer" served as enough of a Catalyst to summon Enoch as a Saver. Weaponry: No weapons, he fights speaking Enochian and his last resort and judgement as "Metatron" Tactics: Prefers to stand at a range and didact and preach with both love and anguish, very authoritarian and unyielding, he is not a physical combatant by any means but he does possess incredible physique. Noble Phantasms: 1.) Metatron- The Aetherial Ascension of an Angel Rank: E to [EX] Type: Anti-Populace Range: 4000 mile radius Max Targets: Unknown Description: Though Enoch resembles an Angel with wings and all... that is NOT his true form by any means. The Angel in his most purest form resembles a Divine Construct made of Light and Ether theoretically capable erasing almost all of known creation, but it does NOT target forces of Gaia... its power is designed to target those who are of Alaya. During the era of Enoch, Alaya was a much weaker force and was more in balance with Gaia, but still as an Angel and a descendent of Adam he is and was dually responsible for guiding mankind on to the right path... even unfortunately by force if necessary. Though back then he conciously decided to NEVER use this Phantasm, as it was never needed. However post the death of his descended Solomon, The King of Magic, Alaya's presence and force began to steadily grow in power even as they drifted from their Origin and the decline of Magic began... not that he could directly notice or do anything about it anymore as he had become Metatron and had completely ascended at this time The stronger the presence of Alaya in the World... the more powerful this Phantasm is, meaning during the present era it is easily at its most powerful state and form as a weapon against other Servants and Masters. The more "human" the individual is in his eyes, the more they are affected by this Phantasm. Ergo; the more of a "sinner" they are in his eyes, the more the can be affected and harmed by this Phantasm. https://higherdensity.files.wordpress.com/2014/07/aa-metatron.jpg Class Skills: 1.) Charisma- E (As one of the most ancient founders of Judaic values, he inherently carries a level of Charisma, however he was no "leader" and is less famous and considered Apochryphic by many Churches, including the Catholic Church which is easily the most influnetial of them. Thus recieves a heavy Rank Down in this Skill to the point of being a solitary loner if not unpopular at least) 2.) Counter Hero- A (As Angel Ascended from Man, he can Rank Down all "Good" Alignment Heroes by 3 Ranks) Personal Skills: 1.) Enochian Words- [EX] (The language of Angels and the words used by Adam to name everything in the World, as such these words are the "True Name" of everything and can be used to manipulate and command them) 2.) Zealotry- [EX] (As one who was once a Man and then ascended to Angel form... not so much as a heavily influenced mental state as much as its a overall change in character) 3.) Knowledge of Respect and Harmony- [EX] (His Enochian Words cannot be understood as due to him being the last Human to either speak or hear them, so they cannot be replicated by anyone) 4.) Divinity- A+++ (As an Angel recognized by many, he retains an extraordinary high level of Divinity and has resulted in some warping of his personality... he almost doesn't even count as a Heroic Spirit anymore at this point if it were any higher) Parameters/Stats: STRENGTH- C ENDURANCE- A AGILITY- A MAGIC- [EX] LUCK- C NOBLE PHANTASM- A+++ Author’s Note: I've always wnat to try and incorporate an Angel into Type-Moon and the nasuverse... I mean we have "Demons", "Saints", "Holy Noble Phantasms", and the "Holy Church", might as well have "Angels". I chose Metatron due to the fact he has supposed Origins in being a Mortal man once, this qualifies as a Heroic Spirit from Alaya. He also does qualify "technically" under otehr classses, but lets be honest only a Saver class could fit an Angel of his calibur. |
Gibz0maticOct 16, 2015 7:27 PM
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Oct 9, 2015 12:27 PM
#10
| RULER: THE STANDARD-BEARER True Name: Captain Augustina De Aragon, The Spanish Joan of Arc Appearance: http://vignette3.wikia.nocookie.net/typemoon/images/2/2c/Rinextra.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20121118162851 Aliases: Agustina Raimunda María Saragossa Domènech, Captain Augustina, Maiden of Zaragosa, Widow of Joan Roca Vila-Seca, Mother of the late 7 yr old Eugenio, and The Most Pissed Off Mom You'll Ever Meet Gender: Female Sexuality: Heterosexual Age: 22 Height: 160 cm Weight: 50 kg Hair: Blonde Eyes: Blue Nationality: Caucasian (Castillian Spanish) Religion: Catholic Christian Color Scheme: Scarlet, Midnight Blue, and Gold Theme Song: "21 Guns" -Green Day Alternate Classes: Saber, Archer, Rider, Berserker, Assassin Alignment: Chaotic Good (Alter: Chaotic Evil) Likes: Children, Guns, and Bad Jokes Dislikes: French... anything to do with the French Master: Rin Tohsaka, surprised? So was she, something in the Grail (not Angra Mainyu) allowed her to summon a Servant halfway through the War after the death of EMIYA and the near death of her son Hiro Tohsaka. Wish: To have a good time kicking ass and taking names, she was summoned in response to the wish of Rin Tohsaka "To save the life of her son". Augustina believes they may be related due to looking similar in Personality: “Mothers are all slightly insane.” -J.D. Salinger, The Catcher in the Rye -Trait: Seductive- The city of Zaragoza stood many days against the French forces, but it was only a matter of time before the city fell. When it dead, Augustina was in her home with her son hiding... French soldiers dragged them out of the closet and murdered her son and attempted to rape her. Fortunately their commander seeing her and admiring her beauty stopped the rape before it happened and offered to marry her... she seduced him and escaped out the window with only a kiss. -Trait: Family- Believes Rin to be a distant relative due to similar appearances... may be plausible due to the western magics the Tohsaka family uses. However the Tohsaka family uses German Magic not Spanish... so there may be something more to it. She was very motherly too, loves kids. Her son Eugenio was everything to her... he was 7 when French soldiers murdered him right in front of her. -Trait: Romantic- She really gets into romances, her own or anyone else's are fair game... she loves love and enjoys seeing and helping others fall in it. -Trait: Violent- She enjoys explosions and gratuitous violence, its a "healthy" release for stress and the like... violence is how she got over the death of her first husband and her young son. Remember the French commander mentioned earlier? Yeah, she became that man's personal thorn in his side. -Trait: Trustworthy- She is a woman of her word, speak to her and she'll speak of it to no one else. Her word is her bond. Legend: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Agustina_de_Arag%C3%B3n Catalyst: Rin's love for her son in combination with the death of EMIYA was enough for a spontaneous summoning even without the presence of a circle... unorthodox and very obscure and broken magic for summoning a broken and overpowered class Weaponry: Besides her saber she was issued as a Captain during the war, she has forfeited most of her outdated rifles and pistols for modern/contempary ones that suit her tastes better Tactics: Prefers to overwhelm her enemies with superior firepower and rage... but if that doesn't work, then she switches to stealth and tactical warfare Noble Phantasms: 1.) Zaragoza Cannon- The Fiery Breath of a Vengeful Woman Rank: B+ Type: Anti-Army Range: 800 meters Max Targets: 800 Description: The famous scene in Zaragoza during the War of Spanish Independence against France, where when the French Soldiers blew away part of the city's walls and killing many of the city's defenders and scattering the rest in fear. Augustina was there delivering lunch to her husband and offering apples and the like to several of the other soldiers when it happened... she watched her husband die right in front of her. In her rage and furym whilst the rest of the male soldier fled for their lives... she took the cannon which miraculously survived the destruction, and fired it point blank at the French Soldier as they attempted to pour into the city. Thus she mustered the Spanish Soldiers with her bravery... and turned the tide of the battle. This Phantasm is and was her banner, one of the two defining moments of her legend and story (the other being the death of her son). This event is the "banner" that the Spanish carried with them for the rest of the war... the image of a lone civilian woman taking on the French without fear or trepidation. This is the Phantasm that makes her qualified as a Ruler class Servant. Simply put, the effects of this Noble Phantasm are limited to a huge ass summoned by her drawing her Saber and pointing it at a Target. Before her, a recreation of the cannon (plus a few modifications based upon her modern "Innovation") is materialized out of pure Prana and fueled by it... after 10 seconds of charging a the field before her is engulfed by raw explosive energy capable of leveling an army. It is a simple... yet intimidating weapon, and practical for almost any situation that requires something to be destroyed in a violent and explosive manner. http://img-cache.cdn.gaiaonline.com/44fb92025a0bb315c640894063d77b66/http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o113/HeadBangerCh1ck/Anime%20Girls/wow.jpg Class Skills: 1.) God's Resolution- B (A default skill for all Ruler class Servants, she carries ONE Command Seal for each Servant participating in the Grail War. It would've been higher, but due to her nature as a spirit this is ranked down and due the broken system of the Sixth War) 2.) True Name Discernment- B (Another default skill of the Ruler class, that suits Augustina quote well due to her military expertise and espionage) 3.) Magic Resistance- D (Low ranked due to not being from an era of Magic, but carries the skill due to her Ruler class) Personal Skills: 1.) Double Summon (Gunner)- A (In her life, she was one of the few Heroic Spirits to properly handle firearms yet was not defined by them. Thus she gains the rare Double Summon skill in tandem with being a "Gunner". In addition, the use and effectiveness of any guns she picks up will be increased marginally.) 2.) Subversive Activities- D (In life she was an experienced sabotuer and well versed in guerilla warfare, traditionally this Skill for her would be higher... but her Ruler class forces it to be lowered) 3.) Revelation- A (Almost instinctive and resourceful on the field, she had no training on the Cannon in Zaragoza... but did not hesitate to use it. Ties in rather well in he use of modern weaponry and equipment and adaptability in battle) Parameters/Stats: STRENGTH- B ENDURANCE- B AGILITY- B MAGIC- C+ LUCK- C+ NOBLE PHANTASM- B+ Author’s Note: Woohoo! Gotta love modernized Servant! Not since Berserker (Lancelot) from Fate/Zero has there been a Servant who loves guns as much as this girl, plus she fits Ruler SO WELL because of her "metaphorical banner". She'd fit almost any other class pretty good... but I like her the most as a Ruler. |
Gibz0maticOct 16, 2015 7:30 PM
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Oct 9, 2015 12:27 PM
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| SHIELDER: THE MASTER OF DEFENSE True Name: Brother Emeth, The Golem of Prague Appearance: http://i121.photobucket.com/albums/o213/vangrue/art/Golem-concept_zpsc29b0450.jpg Aliases: Brother Josef, Brother Yossele, Meth, Rabbi Loew's "Pet", The Golem that Loves and Thinks, The Golem that grew a Soul Gender: Male(?) Sexuality: Pansexual(?) Age: Unknown Height: 8 ft (starting base) Weight: 4000 lb (starting base) Hair: None Eyes: Blue Nationality: Golem Religion: Unknown Color Scheme: Muddy Black, Ethereal Blue, Darkened Steel Theme Song: "Grenade" -Bruno Mars Alternate Classes: Berserker, Assassin, Caster, Ruler, Avenger Alignment: True Neutral (Alter: None) Likes: Love, Life, and Reading Dislikes: Rabbi Loew, Liars, and Bullies Master: Lord El Melloi II, a man who "cheated" his way into the 6th Grail War via knowledge acquired from the deepest recesses of the Clock Tower's Library and finding/using whatever methods he could to help Rin Tohsaka and her son survive. Wish: He wants to be human, made of flesh and all... he already has the Soul of one, he wishes to have the full package as one as well. He currently cannot be killed easily due to his clay body, nor can the Emeth be changed to Meth as that does not work on a spiritual body that he has as a Servant... frankly speaking, one could also say he wishes to live and die as a Human. Personality: “And... and I'm... I'm real. I'm a real boy!" -Pinnochio, 1940 -Trait: Philosopher- After only a few days of living and becoming conciously aware of his Soul, did he truly grow one as a person. Thus how he became a Heroic Spirit in essense. His philosophy on life and existance is very akin to an old wise man's words of sorts. -Trait: Martyr- He feels his life's purpose is to help protect the weak and the innocent, but he isn't too big of a fan of Rabbi Loew and how terrible he is to Emeth. But he doesn't do much to protect himself or rebel against the Rabbi. -Trait: Passive- Generally passive and kind to those who directly target and hurt him, but those who target the weak and innocent will he rain hell down upon -Trait: Neutral- He does not see "good" or "evil" only those to "protect" and those to "destroy" -Trait: Theologist- Though created through Kabbalistic practices under Orthodox Jewish beliefs, he does not claim the Judeo-Christain God. But rather he is experimenting and enjoys studying other religions and contemplating his own existance. Legend: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Golem#The_classic_narrative:_The_Golem_of_Prague Catalyst: An old Hebrew terra-cotta bowl made of clay conveniently found by El Melloi II down in the older parts of the Library looking for information regarding the Heaven’s Feel Ritual and discovering information on how to “force himself” into the War even though there are already at least 7 Masters and other references regarding “other classes” for Servants and using the information to his advantage to summon Emeth as a Shielder. Weaponry: His own fists and towering size empowered by excess Prana Tactics: Protect the innocent, smash all enemies. Noble Phantasms: 1.) Giant Growth- Void of Prana Rank: [EX] Type: Barrier Range: Self Max Targets: 1 Description: As a Golem, he was created from the five elements (fire, air, water, earth, and ether) and as such not only has he gained an immunity to these things… he can absorb a seemingling infinite amount of them cause his body to physically grow in size and noticeably increase Strength and Endurance Parameters in response (Obviously also thus increasing his Magic Parameter from E Rank upwards). Theoretically he can grow powerful enough to destroy a God (True Ancestor Vampire, Divine Spirit or Divine Beast), but continuous use of his “strength” in battle causes him to burn through the Prana and will cause him to shrink again unless refueled by his Master or attack by his enemies's magic or Noble Phantasms. This Phantasm is often used as the reason he was “killed” in his legend, ergo because he kept on absorbing more and more Prana… but was unable to release it in a healthy manner. This is only partially true, as he can convert the Prana and "release" into the air as somewhat harmless ether as a form of exhaust. Thus this is lie/excuse crafted by Rabbi Loew, as the Rabbi could no longer properly control the Golem as he had began to grow a Soul and question their God and orthodox doctrines. Thus they treated him like a pet that bit its Master, and put him down like one. All because he wanted to be Human. Therefore the Grail War is the perfect medium to both burn through the “fuel” he receives efficiently and live his life to the fullest with his Soul. Note that it is this Phantasm combined with his nature as a [EX] Ranked Martyr that makes him the perfect fit for the esoteric “Shielder” class. Class Skills: 1.) Magic Resistance- [EX] (Rendered as such due to his Giant Growth Noble Phantasm) 2.) Riding- E (Class requirement, had no use or skill in his life for this... he's too heavy for it even now. But when he reaches a large enough size, his Master can ride on his shoulders. So one could say he uses the "reverse" of the traditional Skill) Personal Skills: 1.) Soul of the Martyr- [EX] (Part of his "human" nature was to be one who sacrifices himself for others, to an extant beyond what "normal human" standards would be. He is 100% immune to Mental Interference and his personality regarding his Martyr nature cannot be changed or altered) 2.) Monstrous Strength- A (As he becomes more and more enraged in a fight and the more and more Prana he asborbs, the more "monstrous" in sheer size and strength he becomes) 3.) Natural Body- A (As he was made of river clay as a base, shaped by water, heated by fire, cooled by water, and animated by ether... his body was built to perfection since "birth". Hence a Rank up in Strength at all times) Parameters/Stats: STRENGTH- A ENDURANCE- A AGILITY- A MAGIC- E LUCK- E NOBLE PHANTASM- [EX] Author’s Note: Another stroke of brilliance by me inspired by Enkidu from Fate/Strange Fake and Mephistopheles from Fate/Grand Order, an artificial being made a Heroic Spirit by having a Soul... he could fit any of the aforementioned classes (though I originally designed him ages ago as a Berserker), but strangely Shielder to me suits him very well as a "Living Shield" for the Jews in Prague during his era. I'm quite pleased by the end result. [/spoiler] |
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