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Aug 25, 2015 12:40 PM
#1
Post your character's here, using one of the below templates. Please wait for approval before roleplaying. Mutant Appearance: Name: Age: Gender: Height: Weight: Personality: Ability: - Each Mutant is limited to one ability, though it may have multiple uses. Include the name and effects, as well as any weakness. External Mutations: History: Agent Appearance: Name: Age: Gender: Height: Weight: Personality: Specialty: Equipment: History: Civilian Appearance: Name: Age: Gender: Height: Weight: Personality: History: |
Aug 26, 2015 9:24 AM
#2
MUTANT Appearance: Name: Noah Vaene Age: 22 Gender: Male Height: 5'11'' Weight: 150 lb Personality: Sarcastic, bleak, rude, coarse, and pending violent… even towards other Mutants Ability: Toxicity; His sweat, saliva, mucus, blood, tears, and breath carry various toxins that corrupt and corrode most organic materials in the matter of seconds. It might be more accurate to describe his breath as a "Miasma", and his body fluids as an "Acid". This directly affects his clothing as cotton and leather can be rendered into mush rather quickly, whereas plastic based materials such as polyester are resistant to the Toxins. But due to his breath, he traditional covers his mouth/nose with a scarf, surgical mask, or his (favorite) gas mask (whenever he can find new filters or he doesn't attract too much attention). His body's constitution isn't affected by his own Toxins, and as an additional side effect he is immune to various poisons, venoms, and other toxins. It doesn't matter if they're in the air, water, or injected directly into him… they do not harm/effect him. Everything from tranquilizers to nerve agents in the air are rendered useless by the counteracting Toxins within his own body. This has helped him escape Agent clutches a myriad of times. The Toxins do not improve his combat prowess or athleticism really in any noticeable way, everything in regards to that he has learned while on the run. External Mutations: None visible, but his breath and various body fluids are tinted green/black slightly if one were to look closely. History: Noah was not from Georgia, in fact he was born in Chicago (Illinois). During his early adolescence (13) when most people would develop acne or excessive body hair, he began to exhibit a rather… negative effect around people. At first it began with people being near him developing rashes or a bad cough… but as the months passed, the rumors began. Many suggested that he may be a Mutant, but nobody had the balls to ask or do anything about it. But then, a few of his classmates attempted a "Citizen's Arrest". It did not end well for them. As a result of Noah's fear his toxicity grew to exponential heights, and a miasma poured from his lungs as his flesh dripped with an acid… they attacked him, there were at least a dozen of them. He had his ass beat as he was no fighter, but he was the only one to come out alive. The fight only last 10 minutes… and he was already a murderer. Since then he has been on the run, for years now he was wandered and hitchhiked all over the country. Avoiding the Feds whenever possible… for 9 years he has done this. Always running from Agents, fighting only when it became unavoidable. Now he is hiding in Georgia, waiting for his next move. Not as detailed as I would have liked, but Approved |
Gibz0maticAug 30, 2015 8:42 PM
Aug 27, 2015 11:37 AM
#3
MUTANT Appearance: White long hair, no facial hair. Always wears a black long coat and caries 2 full metal blades which are connected to his hands by a wire. Name: Alastair Age: 25 Gender: Male Height: 1.80 m Weight: 60kg (132 lb) Personality: Split personality *CALM: polite person happy and willing to help others *FIERCE: twisted bloodthirsty man willing to do anything to gain what he desires. Also he has an odd joy torturing others with very disturbing ways. Ability: Electrical touch - Even touching an electrical conductor spreads a very big charge through the conductor. If concentrate or grab with a lot of strength he can leave a city in complete black out. He is immune to electrocution from himself or the charges he produce. (Average charge is 1.2 Amps, max charge is 0.01 Amps for those who care) Uses: can be used in various way to kill people or escape but can also be used to start/stop the very heart of a person. Weaknesses: can't really think of anything aside the fact that he has to be careful External Mutations: Left eye is silver, and when using his power both his eyes glow white History: Born in a small town in the UK. His parents were involved in an arms deal that went wrong, his mother died while his father was tortured and imprisoned by CIA. He lived with his grandmother until the age of 18 when he left to go to Cambridge University to study Physics. His life was getting in shape when an experiment went wrong and triggered his mutation(which wasn't discovered until then) at the age of 19. From that point on he worked as a professional killed for organizations and crime syndicates. One day he was returning from a job when he stumbled upon a young beautiful lady at the train station. They started dating but one night she discovered about his secret, his mutation, and run away. Confused Alastair gave up on her not knowing that she knows his secret. At the age of 20 his whereabouts were compromised and he was captured and tortured for 2 years until one day his cousin, former CIA agent, helped him escape. He tried to solve the mystery of his betrayal, when after 3 years he came to the conclusion it was the girl he met that day at the station. After finding her he killed her in cold blood and swore to never love anybody in this life. Same as the above. Approved |
ChotgoriinAug 28, 2015 12:42 PM
Aug 28, 2015 1:41 PM
#4
Mutant Appearance: Human form: Transformed Appearance: Human form, after and before: Name: Lena Clark Age: 22 Gender: Female Height: 5'5" (163 cm) Weight: 110 lb to 170 lb (70-79 kg) Personality: Kind natured, adventurous, Lena generally likes spending time around people, instilled with military discipline, Lena is normally fairly honest, and willing to work with others. Not a stranger to violence or petty crime, shes not stupid enough to just trust everyone, seems to be primarily concerned with her safety, and trying to find some place in society for herself..though the way mutants are treated doesn't make that easy, a fact that stresses her. Ability: - Hybrid Being Lena's cellular structure has much in common with the Allosaurus of Earth's Ancient past, how this happened or came about is anyones best guess, interestingly she can keep her right arm human as she wills, but the two legs and left arm seem to only be kept normal for brief periods of time, its theorized with time she may pick up on other reptilian features and become a mixture of both beings. In terms of capabilities Lena seems to have a higher than average pain tolerance level, a limited rejuvenate factor, and is capable in her "normal" state of running up to 60 mph, with a strength compared to large ape species which are stronger than humans, her claws also can rip apart flesh and metal platting of up to an inch thickness. Surprisingly agile and silent. Should be classified as a Genetic mutation with physical traits than any mystic power. Seems to have enhanced senses of sight and smell, as well as hearing. Limited night vision. Of note in weaknesses, her body tends to get cold easily, so she has to avoid some locations, and would be susceptible to low temperatures. She also has became full on carnivore, unable to eat anything thats not meat. And large quantiles at that, while she doesn't want trouble, her diet forces her at times to come into contact with humans. External Mutations: See Appearance. While limbs can be changed to look normal, her teeth, ears and tongue cannot. History: Lena is a native of backwoods Kentucky, growing up first with rifle in hand, then later on with a baseball bat in the city slums, she had a fairly typical American life, well a poor Americans life, meaning drunk family, violence, limited to no opportunities, limited education. Enlisting in the US Armed forces at the age of 17 upon graduation, she was found to be rather camaraderie and athletic, becoming part of the US Army's Pet project of an all female commando Unit, she seen limited Action in Western Asia. At the age of 21 and upon her re-enlistment the unit was disbanded, and Lena found herself in Fort Benning GA assigned to a helicopter maintenance Crew. Being a total waste of her talents she turned to limited alcoholism and depression, until a few months later in her sleep, her legs, arms, and head felt like they were on fire, splitting apart. Looking on the next morning after passing out, she seen that was the case...she had heard rumors of mutants but now she herself had became one. Nervously she reported in to her commander, who's reaction was to have her killed at once. Lena not simply prepared to roll over and die, fought her way out, severely injuring a number of Infantrymen, smashing a Humvee, and breaking down a portion of fence, the young Sergeant fled for her life. During her trek across the state a number of live stock slaughtering charges, and multiple counts of murder on vigilantes rests on her head. Unsure of what to do she desperately tries to lay low while attempting to flee the US. APPROVED |
RedArmyShogunAug 28, 2015 5:48 PM
Aug 28, 2015 9:25 PM
#5
Mutant Appearance: Name: Taiyo Tsuki Age: 24 Gender: Male Height: 5"11' Weight: 64kg Personality: Whimsical, harsh, hostile, a little insane, likes a good laugh. He tends to make jokes at his enemies expense and he fights for no one but himself and his animals. Ability: Animal Possession: He can possess anyone of his animals, these animals follow him around and he is rarely seen without them. When he possesses them, he gains control of their whole body and can do anything they would be able to do normally, nothing more, and nothing less. He can only possess one at a time. Although, the other animals will also attack with him even if he isn’t possessing them. The animals are as follows, Leopard: Eagle: Snake: Wolf: External Mutations: As seen in the picture, he has taken on animal characteristics. History: Taiyo was born via a multi million dollar scientific advancement program. The idea was to make a human that was able to communicate with animals. While they did succeed in doing this, Taiyo was put under lots of physical strain and he underwent transformations to his body that made him half-animal. This was his mutation. The next step was to be able to make Taiyo understand an animal from its perspective, as communicating with them was quite hard, even though he understood them. So this next step resulted in Taiyo being able to posses four different animals specially bred for the program, a leopard, an eagle, a snake and a wolf. Something unprecedented happened though, Taiyo became friends with these animals. And after a mutant invasion on the lab, he broke out with them and went into the world looking for purpose. [quote]APPROVED[/quote |
ChotgoriinAug 30, 2015 10:13 AM
Aug 28, 2015 11:29 PM
#6
Might be a little OP might be fine meh up to yah Frei. Agent (* Purposely writing this out like a briefing file) Appearance: Name: Agent Seven (Risa Numatori) Age: CLASSIFIED (Chronologically Sixteen, Genetically twenty two) Gender: Female Height: 5'11" (180 cm) Weight: 160lbs (73 kg) Personality: CLASSIFIED Solo Operative or with other Project Nimbus Soldiers Recommendation from MCSA Command. Additional; Do not mix in with Civilian or 2nd line Military forces. (A bit of a loner, Risa suffers from bouts of extreme aggression and can be troublesome to command, shes a threat to ally and enemy alike. Sadistic and perverted, prone to bouts of maniacal laughter and sadism. While a borderline loose cannon, she is capable of working with other skilled soldiers, and while she prefers killing, she has been know to take in enemies alive for questioning or if a potential asset to the MCSA, knows how to keep her mouth shut however. Because of her means of being raised her interactions with civilians or civil defense units can be said to border on combative...literally and figuratively.) Specialty: CQC Equipment: Carbon protected Combat boots, MCSA Security Biometric security tag, GPS tracker (embedded), Tactical Trench coat made of nano fiber, similar to high end anti-NBCW Troops to provide protection or resistance to most elemental or chemical agents, such as flame or ice as well as acidic agents and chemical weaponry, Handcuffs. Twin Carbon Mesh short swords, specially made weapons coated in nano-powder as its termed, each blade costs one million dollars to construct, and are limited production. In short, they are harder than finest steel, sharp as industrial grade cutters, and light as aluminum. Each blade measures two feet across. History: Classified, Top Security Clearance required. Eyes Only. Twenty Years ago when the Mutants first started to appear it was a simple affair to shut them up with the scatted reportings, however as time went on and the MCSA was formed it was found normal soldiers and police weren't up to the task minus a few small elite units. So the Trinity Project was carried out to give humanity an edge. Cybernetics, Weaponry and containment, and lastly the blackest of the black projects.. Genetics. Ten years ago Candidates from the ages of four and three, were taken via various means. Selected for biometric markers, they would be Quasi-humans, a bred weaponry, not much different from the mutants they were sent to fight some would say. Most of Risa's prior history is unknown and not recorded. Her training in Project Nimbus helped her survive the selection process that was grueling and handled by Spetsnaz and Delta Force soldiers, with top marks in hand to hand combat, her skills with firearms were merely above average in the eighty percentile range, rather than the ninety the program demanded. Minus some minor infractions not much else is noted on her training record, short of hand to hand and interrogation training her skills while above the average soldier weren't remarkable in terms of the overall standing. Two Years ago Project Nimbus entered its second phase, the genetic component. Altering the DNA produced Soldiers that had limited regeneration, bones strong as steel, and muscles that allowed speeds set in the Olympics being common place. Brain Processing speed and reaction times were also vastly improved upon. However there were issues. Of the Initial Four hundred Soldiers, one hundred died in training, of the three hundred left, eighty were no longer fit for service after growth sprouts and modifications led to genetic failures. In the end, Only 220 entered Operational Use, being super soldiers what few units are operational have seen rapid use in the following two years. The units were grouped as follows, single digits being the ones that seen the most improvement and can operate alone, to triple digits that need to operate in units or support of other Nimbus Soldiers. A full reversal from her previous standing. Double Didgets can operate solo, but not to the same level of effectiveness as the top Nine, that isn't to say the Triples can't as well, but that they specialize in group actions. To top it off, mental, emotional, and in a few cases neurological instabilities have developed in most of the remaining soldiers. Project Nimbus because of these failings was sent back to the drawing board. Current data on project nimbus is an international secret, agents developed from the program should be considered Altered Humans, as in being human combat friendlies, but with no human rights. Agent Seven is being reassigned to the North American Georgia Theater to aid local MCSA forces. To the General Public they are just part of a shadowy Unit named Cerberus composed of Special forces, the local commanders seem to know the truth to varrying degrees. TL:DR Spartan without the Mjlonir, IE she can fight on the same level of most super soldiers, while not as strong as a mutant that specializes in strength she can fight most of the rest on an even footing, with the coat allowing her to close in for a limited time in the worst cases. APPROVED |
ChotgoriinAug 29, 2015 12:50 PM
Aug 29, 2015 11:33 PM
#7
Umm... Is my character going to be approved or is he going to be ignored? |
Aug 30, 2015 10:13 AM
#8
Aug 30, 2015 1:47 PM
#9
Agent Appearance: Name: Alexander Koushima Age: 26 Gender: Male Height: 186 cm Weight: 80 kg Personality: A cold, logical young man. The type of person who prefers to weigh the options and choose the best decision for a situation. He has been described as a machine by some, seemingly lacking any sort of heart or morals. He can be considered an Utilitarian, who believes that 'the ends justify the means'. He wouldn't hesitate to kill one to save ten, and doesn't flinch at condemning a man to living life as a lab rat. While he himself has nothing personal against mutants, he understands that some have to be sacrificed if they are ever going to be understood and accepted. Despite all this, Alexander can be surprisingly caring. He values the lives of those close to him, and will do all within his power to keep them safe. He considers himself a pacifist, and dislikes violence. He takes no pleasure in the act of harming another, in fact finding it rather disgusting and barbaric. Specialty: Information gather, suppression and control Equipment: A standard 10mm Glock pistol History: [REDACTED] A transfer from the CIA. Due to the nature of his work and his dealings as an information broker, the subjects background is to be [CLASSIFIED] until further notice. |
Aug 30, 2015 2:30 PM
#10
Agent Appearance: Name: “Sev”, Slade Stratton Age: Unknown. Believed twenties to thirties. Gender: Male Height: 6’3” Weight: 192 lbs. Personality: Extremely quiet to the point of it being eerie, the one known as Sev seems to only speak up when there’s a reason to, otherwise he’ll typically ignore those around him unless spoken to by someone of a higher rank. Quite professional and serious when it comes to taking and following through with orders. He only tends to disobey when it conflicts with his main directive; the elimination of mutants. His strange ethic of only halting work in order to acquire nourishment or sleep almost appears robotic… As for actual emotion, either Sev is extremely skilled at hiding such reactions or he’s as stone-faced as he looks. Specialty: Marksmanship Equipment: Ballistics mask equipped with rebreather and communications headset. Tactical combat vest. Reinforced clothing. Anzio 20mm Anti-material rifle. High-grade Armor-piercing ammunition. Incendiary Ammunition. Hollow-point Ammunition. MP7 SMG. Large metal case for carrying the Anzio. History: Information on the enigma classified as “Sev” is kept to a bare minimum. His background is null, devoid of friends, family or even acquaintances. Apparently not secluded to a branch of the United States military, however trained by the government in a project dubbed “Tempest” for the purposes of assassination and elimination of global high-priority targets. Tempest Commandos are subjected to some of the harshest training a human being can endure without using performance enhancing or growth drugs. Not holding a role in the typical military, these elites work under the government directly and are tasked with eliminating threatening targets as well as carrying out high-risk operations in quick and efficient fashions and were named “Tempests” for that very reason. Almost unheard of save for high-ranking members of the military, politicians and special organizations such as the CIA and FBI, Tempest Commandos remain as shadows to most of the world. As with the discovery of mutants and formation of the MSRA, many active Tempests are currently working in teams across the U.S. and tasked with eliminating mutants with usually extreme amounts of prejudice unless directed otherwise by the team’s handler. Though with certain individuals and situations, orders from the handlers will take a second-priority to their orders from above and their main objectives. |
EmperorsChosen01Aug 30, 2015 9:18 PM
Aug 30, 2015 3:19 PM
#11
@ Emp Approved. @ BEta, what is he, a Civie, Agent? Also his bio technically runs counter to the Lore, though not unreasonablly so... you just may want to edit what he is in the header, I'll likely leave this one to Frei. |
Aug 30, 2015 4:09 PM
#12
RedArmyShogun said: @ BEta, what is he, a Civie, Agent? Also his bio technically runs counter to the Lore, though not unreasonablly so... you just may want to edit what he is in the header, I'll likely leave this one to Frei. k will fix~ |
Aug 30, 2015 7:42 PM
#13
Mutant Appearance: Name: Conan Dillinger Age: 24 Gender: male Height: 5'10 Weight: 155 lbs Personality: Can slip into the crowd being not weird or strange at all to others. Also has a fake ID that is named John Fisher so he can hide his original ID, He is very sociable to anyone, A scoundrel to the Gov., Loves causing chaos to the MSRA. Likes to be more of a hero to his powers. A gentlemen to women, Has no fear to anyone even the best trained agents that MSRA has to offer, Hates the racism to the mutants, Believes that everyone including mutants have equal rights, Loves classic rock, Hates pop, He also likes being a dare devil to many things, Violence is one thing he doesn't mind doing. Hates fire and other high temperatures. Ability: - "A Living Weapon" The power that Conan contains is metallic element that runs through his blood streams throughout his entire body. It is also even connected to his brain so he can activate the power through his mind. This element effects Conan turning his limbs into weapon like pieces such as blades, metal claws, hammer fists, and bladed chains that are made up of a indestructible metal. These powers also effects his body in a defensive armor way too. He is immune to any punctures that is inflicted on his body but how ever there is a major negative to his mutated ability. He cannot handle any severely high temperatures. If he is effected by this, he becomes easily wore out or can make him go unconscious. Heat will effect the element store in his body which will be hard for him to activate it since metal can't really turn into solid due to high temperatures. By this state he becomes vulnerable to any punctures. External Mutations: History: Conan at a really young age was sold into the Government by his family which were abusive and greedy. The Government had a program in planning stages during the time that they had him in mind to be tested on. A program that they believe that would change warfare. They even believed that it will turn men and women into powerful beings then the finest spec ops training programs. It took at least a decade for the program to be full operational which during the time Conan was in his pre teens. Being with the government for a while. They have trained him into combat and physical shape to be well prepared for the program. Conan was one of the only test subject for this program since they have done tests on him how his body well made and doesn't have any allergies. The first couple days of the program when they injected him with the serum that is now usually found in mutants now. He had violent migraines and numbness through his body feeling like he can't really move his limbs. After the harmful side-effects, the gov. was about to abandoned the program not seeing any improvements in him about a month until one day he regain his strength and was turning his body into metallic pieces. From the start of this unnatural power, Conan wasn't really well at controlling it until being having a long experience with it. By the time Conan was matured, he was put into situations that would test his ability such as being able to cut through a tank to taking a hit from a 50. caliber bullet. When the time came that mutants where known from their presence, the Gov. became paranoid about Conan believing that he could put people lives in danger with his powers. At a point the staff in the program came to the agreeing point that it would be best to now let the world know what kind of weapon that made on a living being and to put him down. When the time came to secure Conan, He refuses to the orders and his temper became uncontrollable. That day, he made sure that anyone that was working in the federal facility who created him were likely to see the last thing they ever saw in life again was their project. He was unstoppable to the forces that the Gov. tried to throw at him. From the classified location that Conan was mostly raised up at, he goes under the radar so he can have a chance to get away from the Gov. From traveling across the nation on a run, Conan believes that Georgia at this point would be a great place to lie down low at. What could go wrong in a small town in the middle of nowhere? |
Noble8Aug 30, 2015 7:45 PM
I'll eat your ribs and your soul! I'LL EAT THEM UP! |
Sep 7, 2015 9:00 AM
#15
Appearance: Normal Transformed Name: Anastasia "Anna" Luisa Age: 24 (18 in her cover) Gender: Female Height: 1,89 (1,59 in her cover) Weight: 70 kg (40 in her cover) Personality: At first Anastasia, usually in her cover, seems nice, sweet and kind to everyone, a smiley face that believes the world can be a better place. She will try to befriend you and act all innocent to keep you close. However, she is a first class actor as all that is a facade. She is actually a genius manipulator, a double crosser, cheater and a mastermind, on short a total bitch to everyone. She is slightly sadistic and insane as she likes to play with prey before killing it. In secret, the facade is a facade as under all the dark she is actually a nice girl that just wants to be loved and protected. She is something like a tsundere to be honest. Ability: Demonic Succubus By being a master of charms, she can change her appearance to another self that doesnt look at all like a mutant, but she cant use magic at all. She uses this to hide her presence, blend in the crowd or deceive people. Speaking of magic, she can cast dark flames that she can control like a firebender, them being stronger than normal and harder to extinguish. External Mutations: ram horns, dragon-like wings and demon tail, only visible in her normal appearance History: Anastasia's history is unknown as she seemed like she came out of nowhere on day. She was born mutant from unknown reasons, but her external mutations only started to show with age. When she was little she tought the world is a nice place, where is peace and everybody loved each other no matter what, but she was proven wrong the day her mutations surfaced. She tought her parents would accept her anyway, but she was wrong as when they saw her they panicked and called the special forces to get her. At first she tought they were joking, trying to reassure with them, but when the agents barged in she realised they really betrayed her... and thats when something in her brain snapped. Scared, but also angry, she bursted into laughter and unconsciously set her surroundings ablaze with her black flames, burning the agents, house and parents as she quickly escaped, turning into another self, a human self by reflex as she was running. From then years passed, and shr grew up into her manipulative self as her view on the world changed drastically to a very dark one. Now all she wishes is to show people how much she suffered by making them suffer too, but is that really her wish?... |
LightSpark090Sep 8, 2015 9:36 PM
Sep 7, 2015 3:35 PM
#16
I've read it, but a question, are those images meant to be reversed? Ah nvm I see now, its meant to be that way, the bio is "ehh" but okay I would approve it minus the flames Also I'm ehhh with the flames, Frei, opinions? |
RedArmyShogunSep 7, 2015 3:49 PM
Sep 7, 2015 7:10 PM
#17
Civilian Appearance: Name: Donald "Donny" "Sarge" Fisher Age: 41 Gender: Male Height: 6'0 Weight: 175 lbs Personality: Wise, Calm, very protective over his people, makes peace with any mutant he meets, A instinctive responsive guy, Hates to see mutants being treated like animals, Wants to serve justice, Loves to be leader, Doesn't mind sharing his past in the military, supports the troops of the country, called by Donny from close friends also called Sarge by some mutants that have been living with him for some quite time now, and Graceful History: Donald Fisher is a Georgian raised his whole life in the state of Georgia. Nothing much happened in his childhood besides having a normal life. When he turned 18, after graduating he decides to join the marine corps. After completing basic training, he served several tours in the middle east. During his service, He had served in some bloody fights against terrorist. There was one battle he won't forget that he fought with such bravery. The mission he went on was to save POW that was being held at a secrete location. He took the pain in saving the prisoners even battle scars. One of the very noticeable ones is his eye which has an eye-patch now and cheek from taking a nasty knife fight. When the mission was complete, he was awarded with the medal of honor for saving those men's lives. At the of 38, he retired from the military to move on in life he says. This was the time when the world have already been noticed of how mutants were appearing. Donny seen what was happening and was upset how they were being exterminated. He decided to help in the fight by having a refugee for their kind. Their were some men and women he had ran into and also want to protect the mutants from any harm. Now it has been going on a year since their refugee has been created. The haven is taken in any mutants and aren't restricting any types. It is also very well protected by heavy arsenal in case of emergency. Donny is willing to do freedom and justice for the people that was once normal beings. (sorry if the personality and bio was short) |
I'll eat your ribs and your soul! I'LL EAT THEM UP! |
Sep 7, 2015 10:22 PM
#18
Well, i can choose something else instead the flames, but i need something else... |
Sep 7, 2015 10:36 PM
#19
Ehh the flames themselves arn't a big issue. "she can cast dark magic that resembles flames that she controls at will in whatever way she likes" What keeps you from making a mushroom cloud and burning the city down, or godzilla? Most of the ones up top that I had concerns about at least had range or effect limits. So nerf it a little I don't care that its fire, just that it can be controlled in any manner. Fire by nature isn't suited to that, also it can't be "magical" per-see. Also approved Noble. |
Sep 8, 2015 4:30 AM
#20
Something like a fire bender its ok? No fire storms or such |
Sep 8, 2015 2:40 PM
#21
That would be reasonable yes. With localized flame or limited range "punches" of fire. Just the whole full control anywhere, anytime sets of alarms for me. Having it died to a function or style is approvable. |
Sep 8, 2015 9:35 PM
#22
Ok, edditing it |
Sep 23, 2015 1:49 PM
#23
[spoiler]Mutant Appearance: bodyguard: he is very protective of her and also has Mutant Abilitys bodyguard History: the law family has been very close and has work under the marie family for a very long time. all the members of the family was train to become bodyguards for the marie family, when Levi turn 9 years old he was assign to become yona bodyguard. he became very close to her over the years and is very protective of her, he has very good fighting skills and his Mutant Ability is the type that allows him to switch his weapons but he can only switch when the weapon he is using is broken the name of this Ability is switch Name: yona marie her bodyguard Name is Levi law yona Age:15 Gender:girl Height:170 cm (5'7") Weight: 68 kg (150 lbs) Levi Age:19 Gender:boy Height: 188 cm Personality: she is honest and straightforward and quite around people she don't know very well and she likes observing other writing down all her observations in a notebook and she knows very little about being an ordinary 'girly girl' because she has spent most of her life being around her bodyguard Levi .and never really been around any girls She get very excited over experiencing 'normal' things for the first time, she also has a strong sense of right and wrong, and she is very protective of friends. she is also a genius but doesn't act like one at all. bodyguard Personality: he is a mischievous and loyal person and he is very protective of Yona . He has a habit of being a bully Despite being playful, he is serious whenever it comes to his job. He doesn’t let personal matters interfere with his work Ability: -regeneration power worked by having certain areas of her body being seriously injured before having that part regenerating back quickly while this is happening she will go in to a deep sleep while her body is regenerating External Mutations:nothing visible History: she was home school by her rich family when they find out that she had mutants Ability they hide her away from the public and the MCSA. when she turn 5 years old her parents give her a bodyguard name Levi law he train her in martial art and he is very close to her |
mymarieSep 23, 2015 4:59 PM
I've learn so much from the people who don't exist. |
Sep 23, 2015 2:11 PM
#24
Umm..is this finished or a WiP? |
Sep 23, 2015 3:11 PM
#25
Umm what do you think of it do i need to add more to it? |
I've learn so much from the people who don't exist. |
Sep 23, 2015 3:27 PM
#26
Ehh its bare basics, I see no problems with it, but its lacking. Generally any changes to a bio have to be approved as if it were a new bio, also your body guard, you may want to make an edit to name him and explain his situation and powers. |
Sep 23, 2015 3:36 PM
#27
okay i'll edit it |
I've learn so much from the people who don't exist. |
Sep 23, 2015 5:03 PM
#28
alright i'm done what do you think of it? |
I've learn so much from the people who don't exist. |
Sep 23, 2015 5:13 PM
#29
Its approved I guess. |
Sep 24, 2015 5:31 PM
#30
AGENT Appearance: Name: "Jen" Jenlyr Vior Age: 22 Gender: Female Height: 4'11 Weight: 111 lbs Personality: Socially awkward, prefers being quiet and focused on her job. Doesn't show it but she's very kind. Specialty: Marksmanship Equipment: Grenades, Riffles, Sniper Riffles, Tactical combat vest, Reinforced clothing, and Ballistic masks. History: {Will create one shortly}. |
RedArmyShogunSep 24, 2015 6:39 PM
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