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Fatal1078May 10, 2009 4:07 AM
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| Ok, first of the poems I post on here: Death be no Stranger Death thou art no stranger to me I know thee well through thy signs, Often have I wondered whether I should invite you to my home Always I conclude that I should wait There are several reasons I've used as justification I can't support the idea I have too much to live for The pain won't stop even if you come Today though I arrived at a different conclusion I realized that I can no longer live without you and I shall speed your coming for I am anxious to meet you. I wish to have your kiss and cold, comforting embrace... Come quickly, and quietly, O Death, in the night. -J |
| MINE: one of the only things that has ever made me cry: What I believe in: |
| Invisible He passed by me A coldness brushed my face I stood there staring after him He did not say hi He did not say bye Why would he say those words? I was not even there Maybe he is not aware My presence is not physical What am I to him? Other than invisible Words When you said it And I heard it It makes my heart beats faster All your feelings You have admitted to But those are the words I have longed to hear from you |
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| A poem I submitted to our school's literary journal (yes, I chose the Red Death as my pseudonym): Blood Moon Night Silent woods Quiet hills a calm pond a sleeping brook A reflection in a pool An image of the moon a billion stars yet no light. The moon is red dawn shall not come A fair maiden Leaning against a tree she looks so peaceful for she sleeps...eternally. -the Red Death |
| MINE: one of the only things that has ever made me cry: What I believe in: |
| A poem, also submitted to our literary journal, and inspired by a quote from the Illusionist: Forever What is eternity? Is it a concept? Is it the elusive moment? Is it never? Is it the end? I don't know the answer, but I do know is that if eternity equals forever, then I'm ready to take my eternal rest with joy, for I have found someone with whom I can laugh, with whom, I can cry with whom, I can be myself with whom I can be honest with whom, I feel ALIVE As long as we can be together in the next life, I fear nothing. for I have nothing to fear, Death cannot harm us, We are together We Are... one ! -the Red Death |
| MINE: one of the only things that has ever made me cry: What I believe in: |
| Forgiveness Even if the world is cold and unforgiving I forgive you Even if you are cold and unforgiving I forgive you Even if the world is dark and full of sin I forgive you Even if you are dark and full of sin I forgive you Even if the world will not forgive you I forgive you Even if you will not forgive the world I forgive you Even if you will not forgive me I forgive you so why is it that: I can't forgive myself. -the Red Death |
| MINE: one of the only things that has ever made me cry: What I believe in: |
| Cheese and crackers. Cream and cake too red and yellow and maybe blue secrets and hint and lots of clues I'm in love. What about you? ```````````````````````````````` |
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| The Darkest Night shadows come with fingers trailing, casting everything in a cold dark. night approaches, the darkness growing, daylight is gone, not even a spark. loneliness threatens to overwhelm, the daylight always brings new hope. wishing i was in another realm, with this pain coud i ever learn to cope? the moon escapes behind a lightless cloud, and darkness grips my heart ever tighter. the voices screaming in my head are so loud, sometimes i wish i could make the nighttime brighter. but in the night not everything is lost, as the moon retreats the light renews. my heart rejoices as warmth melts the frost, and my heart knows its the light i will always choose. http://jerseyse410.deviantart.com/art/The-Darkest-Night-122081820 |
| Misery I am shattered... and now I have lost myself in confusion, distrust, and abhor… The road I'm heading is block by two Pieces of flesh, My Heart… My heart is split in two, one bigger than the other one, The bigger one is my sadness, my shame, my anger, and my hate… While the smaller one is composed of my kindness... I have discarded the smaller other piece of my Heart, and I embark on the road of solitude and depression... I have come to the conclusion that I only love myself and only myself... |
| this is something i wrote a few minutes ago for jersey's poem shop for a friend that loves fall out 3 The World Destroyed  the world dying around me, my faithful companion ever near. death and destruction is what i see, he's my only source of daily cheer. the ground hard and broken, i have nowhere to rest my head. my fear always unspoken, i just want a soft warm bed. houses dilapidated as far as i can see, my companion barks and wiggles his nose. there are monsters on a killing spree, if im not careful i could be in my death throes. nuclear fallout all around me it seems, is the air i inhale even safe to breathe? this is not the world i saw in my dreams, i will fight on and my sword i shall unsheathe. this life is mine and i will survive, life will go on and humanity will prevail. we created this hell but we can thrive, i still remember the mothers weep and wail |
jerseyse410 said: this is something i wrote a few minutes ago for jersey's poem shop for a friend that loves fall out 3 The World Destroyed the world dying around me, my faithful companion ever near. death and destruction is what i see, he's my only source of daily cheer. the ground hard and broken, i have nowhere to rest my head. my fear always unspoken, i just want a soft warm bed. houses dilapidated as far as i can see, my companion barks and wiggles his nose. there are monsters on a killing spree, if im not careful i could be in my death throes. nuclear fallout all around me it seems, is the air i inhale even safe to breathe? this is not the world i saw in my dreams, i will fight on and my sword i shall unsheathe. this life is mine and i will survive, life will go on and humanity will prevail. we created this hell but we can thrive, i still remember the mothers weep and wail 1:The poem is nice :D 2:You forgot to write about the Gouls and Fawks ^_^ 3:In the game you don`t survive -_- |
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| ive never played the game(s)...he just gave me an image and said write a poem! so i did. oh and the link for that poem is.... http://jerseyse410.deviantart.com/art/The-World-Destroyed-122151603 |
| Nothing Left You left me With broken pieces Of my heart You left me With shattered pieces Of my mind You left me With torn pieces Of my soul And now I’m all alone With no help With no love With no life And I am Stuck down here For all time I feel numb, No, wait, no I don’t feel Nothing at all It’s so scary I want out But, no, impossible There’s nothing left To be saved |
hikari-chanMay 11, 2009 10:23 PM
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| Hidden I am so happy I am so cheerful But only on the outside I am crying, so much I am broken, too much But only on the inside Someone help me See my true self Pull me out of here, please Leave me alone See only my mask Let me stay here, always Is that me? Is this me? I’m in total chaos I’m happy outside I’m crying inside But only I will know Only me And me alone Now and forever |
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| Gone I have lost my soul and am without a goal My heart has broken and I have not spoken My mind has shattered and nothing mattered And so I fell and went down to hell It was too great a cost and everything, I have lost I still hide all the tears I’ve cried Because I fear that I’m stuck down here But I don’t care anymore and have nothing to live for I have been torn and wish I was never born I’m in a million pieces but only my forehead creases Because no one can see the real me No one can see through my mask and no on dares to ask I’m left alone but cannot atone The fight is done and the dark has won I’ve been torn apart and left with a broken heart |
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| Blind A black world, a sightless one, A place where I'm pity. Where the only thing I can do With these things on my face Is to cry. |
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| Death is Peaceful, Life is not as kind I once heard that life is great. But that person was wrong. Life is not a good as death. And even though i've never been there, It has to be better than this. Heartbroken You left me in the street, and you left me with nothing I couldn't move my feet, my heart had stopped beating. My life was over. I'm dead. So why do you come back for me, after all you've done to me? I'll never forgive you. leave me to die. Alone Moving. You feel all alone. You have no friends. You want to go home. But you are home, a new home. You take 5 buses, and end up at your old house. You enter your abandoned home, and cry. I'm alone. ~~~~~~~~~ Yeah, they're pretty sad. Not finished with them, I guess. |
| Name is The one i love most For me, if the one i love most is happy, then so am i |
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| Love Again We were in love. We were happy. You moved away. We were sad. You moved back. Happiness again. Will you promise me you will never leave? We share our love. We share our feelings. We share everything. I love you. Crush and Love she has a crush. he has a crush. everyone is in love. I am in love with you. You are in love with me. We are meant to be. ---------- Those are kinda strange... |
| Name is Can You Lead me can i be dreaming once again i'm reaching helpless i descend you can lead me once again |
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Bittersweet the words which is i longed to hear has now become a pleasant glee you held my hand and touched me dear and said,"yes, its true.. we fit, me and you" the days we spent were smiles and fun laughter filled all that's done your sparkling eyes that gave me strenght and words that seem to never bend my nights alone were dark and cold i dream of you and i take hold the bittersweet meaning of being with you means an ugly world of sudden truth then one day i walked around while seeing the things that me surround my eyes grew big, my heart just stopped when i saw you in another man's plot the smile you gave was radiant than before it was not fake nor show no bore now i get it, now i see.. for you, i'm just a plain ol' me i know in truth i cant compete so i sat down and said defeat the bittersweet meaning of loving you means being hurt and being blue now my days have grown to weeks of only thinking of memories the bittersweet meaning of loving you may be is that i cant fall OUT OF LOVE WITH YOU ~what do you guys think??? ^_^ |
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| that was good yukari-chan! great job! *round of applause* -claps- xD |
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| The Sea The sea is a marevelous place, have you ever been there? If you haven't, you must. There are dolphins, sea turtles, and sea otters. And the ocean is the most beautiful sight anyone would ever sea. So, if you don't mind, would you like to accompany me there? what do you guys think? |
| I like 5/5 and it was cool... |
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| thanks! here is another one. Icecream Icecream is good. Icecream is tasty. Want to buy me some? that is kinda random but icecream is good. |
| cool i give it 5/5 |
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| @KonataIs MyLeader i like your heartbroken poem ^_^ |
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| thanks. both of you. I try hard on my poems, to put my feelings into them, but ones like those just come to me. Why Why did you have to leave me on my own? Why did you have to tell me you hated me? Because I know, one thing, for sure, and it is that you love me. So tell me, WHY? |
| Suidice Cutting Tomatos, I look at the knife. I lay it on my wrist and felt the cold of the metal transfer into my wrist. Envious of the others, I wondered how it feels. "Mom?" Kate says. "Yes, dear." I reply and remebered that pain and torture is always better then the cold silenced. I finish cutting the tomatos. |
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| Pet The little aliens watches a giant screen. They just sit there all day and do nothing. I lay there and watch them. They only leave to go to either the wet room or to eat. They touch a metal bone to change the color of the screen. I wag my tail and they give me food. Satisfied, I eat and go to sleep. |
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| Dreams I had a weird dream last night, y'know? Anime characters were chasing me and I didn't know why I ran. Certainly, Johan is scary, or maybe Lelouch looked like a leech. L was being emo, first impressions always leave A mark. Too bad I'm stuck here, against all my wishes Without these people to entertain and fill my head with dreams. |
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| Kawaii When I see something cute I yell "KAWAII!!!!" and attack it. What would happen if I thought YOU were cute, and I attacked YOU? I think you'd mistake it for "something else" |
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| For who's? ^^ Btw, you'll only get this if you've read the Ender's Game series. XD Ender, too soon Three throusand years old and still thirty six Endured military mind rape (for the good for mankind, they say, what they all say) Endured murder, by him and for him (he said it was self defense, it was, maybe, YES) Endured annihilation of an alien race (they're just like us, they have to die, humans are not alien) Endured seeing his brother change (From childhood sadist to the Hegemon, power of a teenager) Endured the things which crippled other people (Where had all that childlike apathy gone? he'd wonder) Ender, the Xenocide. Is the Act evil, or simply the Actor? .. and from love he found forgiveness and life to give and to love. |
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| EXCELLENT!!! I LOVE THE ENDER SERIES (Though I like the shadow series a bit more, it still rox all!) |
| MINE: one of the only things that has ever made me cry: What I believe in: |
| Why do I love you? I wonder why I'm here. I wonder why you're there. I wonder why we were placed together. I wonder why... I love you. |
| Name Is Sinner Hater The Sin But Love The Sinner!... |
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| ~under construction~ |
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| A little spoiler of the story I'm writing^^ Sylvia's Song The moonlight glows, In the peaceful night. Where I can fly With the glowing light, Like the clouds, In the empty sky. Snow shines with the moon, While I sleep in the dark. Dreaming flowers being sewn, From angels in the park. Listening to the magical tune, In a flying white ark. |
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| Summer This is the time for love This is the time for joy This is summer time, But why am I alone? This is the time for friends This is the time for beach parties This is the summer time, But why am I not invited? This is the time to sleep in This is the time to stay up late This is the summer time, But why am I on my school schedule? This is the time I love you This is the time I admire you This is the summer time, but why do you reject me? |
| Gone If anymore there exists a light in this world, Please remain silent no longer, And say it hasn’t gone out, Open your reassuring eyes, Tell me that everything is alright, But you do not utter a word. You remain cold, With only your memories to grant us. You told us to smile, But in this darkness, Is such even feasible? |
| sweetest sin Love the myth Loves a gift Loves the one who brought you down Loves the one who built this town Love is secret Love is fair Love will follow you anywhere across the earth or just next door love always has a surprise in store loves a game yuo can not win loving you the sweetest sin the boy next door but so much more people judge and people hate but baby thsoe people are jsut o late cause i love you but you lust her how fair can that be sweet sins are still sins people lose in games that never win the surprise is pain loves a stalker that never goes away loves not fair true or false none of the above so ill pop another diet pill and say i won say im pretty and i'll paint my face until my eyes are black my lips snow white red and my cheeks a rosy pink and boy when i'm around you i'll act like i dont think when in my mind are conversations THE PRESIDENT wouldn't debate in this time Baby u cant even decide if i'm yours and ur mine So go with that girl and say that you're fine when you know in the night time you cry dont really know how those came out tell what u think |
| Phase 6 fast as blooming cherry blossoms the new flu spreads like wild fire life ends quicker than birth Growlanser world peace is most desired yet it is but a selfish ideal of one known as growlanser |
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| The Night wish The night so deep full of enchantments to keep, as my soul rests in peace my life must now bend with ease; for this is the night I long to reap. peace yo! \m/ |
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| Blood I drink for thee blood my thirst for thee had engulfed; I lost my life indeed, but I stayed here in my reed; must I say die for thee? |
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| “The World without felicity” A broken chord from above And from underneath the soil A blunt smile of love And a piece of joy in toil A cup of laughter with a dainty wink A slice of life from an everyday bleak A little hope from despair And a tiny bit of solitude from the cold air My eyes set for another goal But never did I know I was at the brink of a black hole Only to feel the loneliness of tomorrow Another chapter in my story has ended When will I ever get to the next one? When all is lost and gone Be my message in a bottle as a wish granted My ears blocked by intrication As I falter in my darkest hours Never did I felt this before imputation In this world I thought I could call ours A riot in my heart A disclosure of emotions from an undying obstruction A love set aside in an attempted murder in my heart A gate opened for a massive destruction A weak decision made in sorrow And a feeble thought of the uncertain tomorrow A face covered with mask And a hand of blood in an unfinished task Somehow a new world has begun But it’s still being manipulated by only one Even in the last seconds of your life I know here in my heart I’m always aiming to have a better life Now, another chapter in my life has just ended Is there still going to be a next one? Everything is lost and nothing’s left This is indeed the world without felicity |
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| "Are We Not One?" There are things in this world that’s hard to accept In the verge of friendship, Everything will be often disappointing The world doesn’t exist without being hurt The actual visualization of life is through obstacles That we face in our everyday lives But what is “bond”? if we are not united? Must we face reality with disappointment? Are we not one? Are we not there to listen with your woes? Are we not there to cheer you up in times of trouble? What do you think of us? Are we just buffoons? This time we won’t be the same But we want to be accepted by everyone All this time you weren’t there for us But we’re always there for you, but you inversely betrayed us We are dying because we are broken We are isolated in this society We are being secluded from the community Are we not one? No, we aren’t…. |
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| this is a poem I made in our math project :D “Math is like a ____ “ Shattered dream waiting to be set aside, Wondering through the times and equate in different sides Although miscalculations doesn’t fit The uncertainty of tomorrow will surely shrink River, flowing freely without worries, No matter how difficult the problems may be It doesn’t need to be equaled to the degree Of pursuing our lives full of insecurities Lifeless bird on a candid night Without diminishing the existence of square root An equation like a 1 + 1 = 3 is lost in sight But the lines that connected us had uproot Light wind that comes from different directions, You never expect when it will be perpendicular To the things that might lead you to odd situations But in time you’ll find that our world is not circular Jewel in the sea, sparkling its way through its beauty As we are engaged in tough problems Any number divided by 0 will be cancelled in solidity A splendid answer to every mathematician endearingly |
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