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Nov 23, 2012 5:48 PM

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Negative-Travis said:
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Possibly the second best fic I have read ever.


10/10 deep meaning within the text deserves recognition.

You know she'll take that seriously, right?


Why, of course! Something so beautiful should be taken seriously.

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Nov 23, 2012 6:08 PM

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Noinochi said:
Possibly the second best fic I have read ever.


10/10 deep meaning within the text deserves recognition.


DEEP meaning. I get what you mean. So deep that blood has to be used as a lubricant.
As a child, I was told that society is a melting pot of talents; knowledge and experience combined to form important alloys that will contribute to mankind. When I got to highschool, however, I thought that it's more like a river in which the water represents our peers while we ourselves are the stones in the river. Constant erosion by mindless majority sheeping has made us lose our unique edge. After I hit the age of 18, I realized that I've been wrong all along. Society is no melting pot. Society is no river. Society is a person, a very skilled rapist, and he has fucked us all.
Nov 23, 2012 6:11 PM

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JustALEX said:
LOLOLOL, the comments on here are much more amusing than the OP's story.
I second that XD
HAHAHA, I can't even...

Don't worry Kyandai, we completely forgive you for being on a hiatus. In fact, go on a longer hiatus. We'll still forgive you when you return.
Nov 23, 2012 6:16 PM

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BloodRequiem said:
Noinochi said:
Possibly the second best fic I have read ever.


10/10 deep meaning within the text deserves recognition.


DEEP meaning. I get what you mean. So deep that blood has to be used as a lubricant.

What chapter is that? I need to read for myself how psychotic this literature is from a 14 year old.

Edit: Never mind, I get what you're implying.
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Nov 23, 2012 6:54 PM

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Noinochi said:
Negative-Travis said:
Noinochi said:
Possibly the second best fic I have read ever.


10/10 deep meaning within the text deserves recognition.

You know she'll take that seriously, right?


Why, of course! Something so beautiful should be taken seriously.

btwnotsureifOPistrollingornot


okay that is just rude. what is the first best fanfic you have read
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Nov 23, 2012 7:44 PM

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well this is the best fan fic i've ever read. then again, it's also the only one :p

...never mind, just read the sentence, "and then Naruto sat down" and it topped it.
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Nov 23, 2012 9:18 PM

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Negative-Travis said:
Noinochi said:
Possibly the second best fic I have read ever.


10/10 deep meaning within the text deserves recognition.

You know she'll take that seriously, right?


off topic, but, this has been bothering me for awhile. what anime is your profile picture from??
"Reality can really bum you out" - Ash Ketchum
Nov 23, 2012 9:24 PM

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w7y7a7t7t said:
Negative-Travis said:
Noinochi said:
Possibly the second best fic I have read ever.


10/10 deep meaning within the text deserves recognition.

You know she'll take that seriously, right?


off topic, but, this has been bothering me for awhile. what anime is your profile picture from??

Chuu2

As a child, I was told that society is a melting pot of talents; knowledge and experience combined to form important alloys that will contribute to mankind. When I got to highschool, however, I thought that it's more like a river in which the water represents our peers while we ourselves are the stones in the river. Constant erosion by mindless majority sheeping has made us lose our unique edge. After I hit the age of 18, I realized that I've been wrong all along. Society is no melting pot. Society is no river. Society is a person, a very skilled rapist, and he has fucked us all.
Nov 23, 2012 9:33 PM

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w7y7a7t7t said:
Negative-Travis said:
Noinochi said:
Possibly the second best fic I have read ever.


10/10 deep meaning within the text deserves recognition.

You know she'll take that seriously, right?


off topic, but, this has been bothering me for awhile. what anime is your profile picture from??

Mine?
Chuunibyou something something blah words.
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Nov 23, 2012 10:48 PM

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Negative-Travis said:

Mine?
Chuunibyou something something blah words.


thanks!
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Nov 24, 2012 1:06 AM

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I think people here should just relax lol XD
Nov 24, 2012 1:08 AM

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akutasame94 said:
I think people here should just relax lol XD

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Nov 24, 2012 1:17 AM

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Negative-Travis said:
akutasame94 said:
I think people here should just relax lol XD



You know I was joking xD It's fun reading all these comments XD
Nov 24, 2012 1:24 AM

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Did I just read that kyandikun is 14 year old girl? How come I didn't notice earlier?

Ah well, you guys should be honest, it is not bad, her (if she is not psychotic guy) writing skills are good. But Kyandi one little suggestion... You better put up these erotiporn stories to Kristen's Board xD This forum is visited by young people and not everyone has twisted mind as you do.
Nov 24, 2012 1:26 AM

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akutasame94 said:
her writing skills are good.

What?
You don't read much, do you?
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Nov 24, 2012 1:36 AM

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Negative-Travis said:
akutasame94 said:
her writing skills are good.

What?
You don't read much, do you?

Shh, I want next chapter. Can't wait till one of them gets pregnant (this is the only way to save your fanfic Kyandi, plus it's a plot twist!).
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Nov 24, 2012 1:42 AM

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Negative-Travis said:
akutasame94 said:
her writing skills are good.

What?
You don't read much, do you?


If she is a 14 year old girl for real... What do you expect, Tolkien style?
Nov 24, 2012 1:43 AM

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akutasame94 said:
Negative-Travis said:
akutasame94 said:
her writing skills are good.

What?
You don't read much, do you?


If she is a 14 year old girl for real... What do you expect, Tolkien style?

I expect her to be at least as good as I was at 14.
I.E. spelling words correctly, using proper grammar and punctuation, not using emoticons.
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Nov 24, 2012 1:54 AM

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Negative-Travis said:
akutasame94 said:
Negative-Travis said:
akutasame94 said:
her writing skills are good.

What?
You don't read much, do you?


If she is a 14 year old girl for real... What do you expect, Tolkien style?

I expect her to be at least as good as I was at 14.
I.E. spelling words correctly, using proper grammar and punctuation, not using emoticons.



I agree there but this is also fanfic, one where many people do what she did. You won't believe what I've seen and what people liked xD Anyway I prefer this approach xD I wrote this long time ago for a friend and decided now to put it as a fanfic.



The only problem is English is not my native so I tend to make some small mistakes which I notice later but on fanfic they can't be changed, instead I have to delete the whole story and do it again, and I never seem to correct all mistakes.
Nov 24, 2012 1:57 AM

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akutasame94 said:
I agree there but this is also fanfic, one where many people do what she did. You won't believe what I've seen and what people liked xD Anyway I prefer this approach xD I wrote this long time ago for a friend and decided now to put it as a fanfic.



The only problem is English is not my native so I tend to make some small mistakes which I notice later but on fanfic they can't be changed, instead I have to delete the whole story and do it again, and I never seem to correct all mistakes.


Here's a hint:


How do people not think of that?
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Nov 24, 2012 2:03 AM

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Negative-Travis said:
akutasame94 said:
I agree there but this is also fanfic, one where many people do what she did. You won't believe what I've seen and what people liked xD Anyway I prefer this approach xD I wrote this long time ago for a friend and decided now to put it as a fanfic.



The only problem is English is not my native so I tend to make some small mistakes which I notice later but on fanfic they can't be changed, instead I have to delete the whole story and do it again, and I never seem to correct all mistakes.


Here's a hint:


How do people not think of that?


Oh I do write in Word and I have automatic check turned on (you know if you make a mistake it is underlined)... Is there the other way?
Nov 24, 2012 2:08 AM

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akutasame94 said:
Negative-Travis said:
akutasame94 said:
I agree there but this is also fanfic, one where many people do what she did. You won't believe what I've seen and what people liked xD Anyway I prefer this approach xD I wrote this long time ago for a friend and decided now to put it as a fanfic.



The only problem is English is not my native so I tend to make some small mistakes which I notice later but on fanfic they can't be changed, instead I have to delete the whole story and do it again, and I never seem to correct all mistakes.


Here's a hint:


How do people not think of that?


Oh I do write in Word and I have automatic check turned on (you know if you make a mistake it is underlined)... Is there the other way?

That's all I got.
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Nov 24, 2012 2:09 AM

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Negative-Travis said:
akutasame94 said:
Negative-Travis said:
akutasame94 said:
I agree there but this is also fanfic, one where many people do what she did. You won't believe what I've seen and what people liked xD Anyway I prefer this approach xD I wrote this long time ago for a friend and decided now to put it as a fanfic.



The only problem is English is not my native so I tend to make some small mistakes which I notice later but on fanfic they can't be changed, instead I have to delete the whole story and do it again, and I never seem to correct all mistakes.


Here's a hint:


How do people not think of that?


Oh I do write in Word and I have automatic check turned on (you know if you make a mistake it is underlined)... Is there the other way?

That's all I got.


LoL xD Then you might help me out a little. When something is misspelled it is underlined in red, but when it is underlined in green what does it mean?

P.S. I wrote ed instead of red which is the mistake checker doesn't recognize and those are mistakes I make a lot XD
Nov 24, 2012 2:12 AM

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akutasame94 said:


LoL xD Then you might help me out a little. When something is misspelled it is underlined in red, but when it is underlined in green what does it mean?

P.S. I wrote ed instead of red which is the mistake checker doesn't recognize and those are mistakes I make a lot XD

Green indicates a grammatical error.
There's also blue, but I have no idea what that means.
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Negative-Travis said:
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LoL xD Then you might help me out a little. When something is misspelled it is underlined in red, but when it is underlined in green what does it mean?

P.S. I wrote ed instead of red which is the mistake checker doesn't recognize and those are mistakes I make a lot XD

Green indicates a grammatical error.
There's also blue, but I have no idea what that means.


Phew it is good then I rarely get green one xD As for the blue noticed it only few times xD I forgot about it :P
Nov 24, 2012 5:23 AM

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akutasame94 said:
Negative-Travis said:
akutasame94 said:


LoL xD Then you might help me out a little. When something is misspelled it is underlined in red, but when it is underlined in green what does it mean?

P.S. I wrote ed instead of red which is the mistake checker doesn't recognize and those are mistakes I make a lot XD

Green indicates a grammatical error.
There's also blue, but I have no idea what that means.


Phew it is good then I rarely get green one xD As for the blue noticed it only few times xD I forgot about it :P


blue means brain error, i think.
Nov 24, 2012 8:24 AM

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smoothly said:
akutasame94 said:
Negative-Travis said:
akutasame94 said:


LoL xD Then you might help me out a little. When something is misspelled it is underlined in red, but when it is underlined in green what does it mean?

P.S. I wrote ed instead of red which is the mistake checker doesn't recognize and those are mistakes I make a lot XD

Green indicates a grammatical error.
There's also blue, but I have no idea what that means.


Phew it is good then I rarely get green one xD As for the blue noticed it only few times xD I forgot about it :P


blue means brain error, i think.

*ahem*

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Nov 24, 2012 8:50 AM

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Eh?
Nov 24, 2012 9:24 AM

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Wow he is back, did not think I would experience some of his Threads.
Could someone please post his previous posts? I'd like to show some of his wonderfully done fanfic to my friends :D
Nov 24, 2012 9:28 AM

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Kosameron said:
Wow he is back, did not think I would experience some of his Threads.
Could someone please post his previous posts? I'd like to show some of his wonderfully done fanfic to my friends :D


1. She is back
2. Did you not see the first post of this thread? The link in the spoiler links to the 5 chapters.

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Kosameron said:
Wow he is back, did not think I would experience some of his Threads.
Could someone please post his previous posts? I'd like to show some of his wonderfully done fanfic to my friends :D


What do you mean? The other chapters Kyandi has written?


Nov 24, 2012 9:32 AM

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Tavor said:
Kosameron said:
Wow he is back, did not think I would experience some of his Threads.
Could someone please post his previous posts? I'd like to show some of his wonderfully done fanfic to my friends :D


1. She is back
2. Did you not see the first post of this thread? The link in the spoiler links to the 5 chapters.


Yeah sorry but I still am not sure wether to believe in her Gender or not, but for the sake of argument I'll just believe that OP is a she.
The thing I meant are not the Chapters but the Threads that he posted his Chapters in

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NVM I didn't know you could view the posts she posted in on her Profile, ignore the post :p
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KyandiKun said:
what does that face mean

That's the face of a fujoshi while reading/writing some rotten stuff. You can imply it on a policeman as well if you can just accept THAT Kyundi-kun is your profile.
Nov 24, 2012 10:45 AM
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seriously?
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This is what my face looks like everytime I am reading one of your fanfics
Nov 24, 2012 10:58 AM

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This troll is well fed it seems.
Nov 24, 2012 11:22 AM

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Han-yuu said:
KyandiKun said:
what does that face mean

That's the face of a fujoshi while reading/writing some rotten stuff. You can imply it on a policeman as well if you can just accept THAT Kyundi-kun is your profile.


I am not a cop trying to catch pedobears ssrly you don't even makse a dime or sense

honestly go back to watching some anime if my fanfic pizzes you off that much if you dont like it dont read it i can take what people say about me if they read the story and i dont think you have read so stfu
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Kosameron said:
Wow he is back, did not think I would experience some of his Threads.
Could someone please post his previous posts? I'd like to show some of his wonderfully done fanfic to my friends :D


I am a girl isn't it obvious geeeezzz
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KyandiKun said:
Han-yuu said:
KyandiKun said:
what does that face mean

That's the face of a fujoshi while reading/writing some rotten stuff. You can imply it on a policeman as well if you can just accept THAT Kyundi-kun is your profile.


I am not a cop trying to catch pedobears ssrly you don't even makse a dime or sense

honestly go back to watching some anime if my fanfic pizzes you off that much if you dont like it dont read it i can take what people say about me if they read the story and i dont think you have read so stfu


I love how you ignore the constructive criticism.

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Tavor said:
KyandiKun said:
Han-yuu said:
KyandiKun said:
what does that face mean

That's the face of a fujoshi while reading/writing some rotten stuff. You can imply it on a policeman as well if you can just accept THAT Kyundi-kun is your profile.


I am not a cop trying to catch pedobears ssrly you don't even makse a dime or sense

honestly go back to watching some anime if my fanfic pizzes you off that much if you dont like it dont read it i can take what people say about me if they read the story and i dont think you have read so stfu


I love how you ignore the constructive criticism.


No i do read it, i take it into consideration especially if you read my story and i know u are being honest and trying to help. i'm not a cop though and this takes away from me getting reviews on my stories :(
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Nov 24, 2012 11:37 AM

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KyandiKun said:
i'm not a cop




Only undercover cops feel compelled to defend themselves against accusations of being a cop.
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Christians and Satanists are technically the same thing
Nov 24, 2012 11:42 AM

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Goryo said:
KyandiKun said:
i'm not a cop




Only undercover cops feel compelled to defend themselves against accusations of being a cop.


Uh well if i ignored the accusations then you be memeing me with stuff saying i'm still a cop plus i know i'm not i have pics of myself to prove it
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KyandiKun said:
i have pics of myself to prove it


If you would be so kind as to post those pics, I think we could clear up all of these "misconceptions" about you being a cop. This is assuming that the pics actually prove that you aren't a cop of course.
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Christians and Satanists are technically the same thing
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Goryo said:
KyandiKun said:
i have pics of myself to prove it


If you would be so kind as to post those pics, I think we could clear up all of these "misconceptions" about you being a cop. This is assuming that the pics actually prove that you aren't a cop of course.


okay i will you will see that i am a 14 year old girl and not a cop
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Nov 24, 2012 12:03 PM

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okay i'm only going to post one and ill take one of what i look like today
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I think the trolling is a bit far now. Pressuring a young girl to post an image online?
Not cool.
Even so, she could easily find a fake one online.

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really you need 10 minutes to upload your picture ????/

this tells you are cop
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Tavor said:
I think the trolling is a bit far now. Pressuring a young girl to post an image online?
Not cool.
Even so, she could easily find a fake one online.


Tavor, she proposed the idea. I do not see any pressure involved. She(?) is free to stop at any time.




Singateru said:
really you need 10 minutes to upload your picture ????/

this tells you are cop


Be patient. Duckfaces are an artform.
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Christians and Satanists are technically the same thing
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and cop goes offline , finding little girl pic on google images -failed -
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Goryo said:
Tavor said:
I think the trolling is a bit far now. Pressuring a young girl to post an image online?
Not cool.
Even so, she could easily find a fake one online.


Tavor, she proposed the idea. I do not see any pressure involved. She(?) is free to stop at any time.




Singateru said:
really you need 10 minutes to upload your picture ????/

this tells you are cop


Be patient. Duckfaces are an artform.


Eh, while she proposed the idea I think you encouraged it to some degree. No, I'm not holding you accountable 100%, but I do wonder why you would go so far as to further encourage that she(?) does it
Even if she(?) was a cop(?), so....what? This isn't some shady site where cops are going to crack down on us for discussing anime.
Meh, I'm just paranoid of the shit that happens to younger kids going online these days. In my opinion KyandiKun, you're not in the right mind to be using the internet, much less this forum. Harsh, but it's true, considering you care that much to prove oneself to anonymous users. Not that you'll take my word for it, but oh well.

Can't lie though, "Be patient. Duckfaces are an artform.", I did laugh there x3

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