| Hey guys... It's been awhile now. I'm known as EmiyaNanaya before. Right now I'm thinking of making a MAL-fic for the first time. I'll be making a prologue in a week or two, but I'll need a help with the characters. The first 10 that meets my criteria will be featured in the story. The title will be made after the prologues finished. For the characters, anything goes with 2 main points needed. 1. The characters will be using weapons, anything from swords, daggers, even MA's, though guns, bows and such are OK, but will be used in a later chapters. 2. You need to choose a colour from the six: Red, Blue, Green, Yellow, White and Black. If you feeling lucky, you can also choose two. Bear in mind that I'll change a bit of the characters and characteristics to accomodate the story. Hope I can get a bit of support for this. Character's (In order of appearance) 1-Imphie: Elena Runeblade 2-YorozuyaGinSan: Yore O. Goldust 3-eshwar007: Pythius 4-SleepingBear: Craighton Greybear 5-Esutta: 'Vie' 6-MeteorBear: Osanna Guiscard 7-Astros: Nicholas Astral Mentioned 1-KamSung: -No name yet- (Acting leader of Shadow Corp.) Still to appear 1-KamSung: -No name yet- 2-jake426: Umbra |
I-9029Jun 23, 2015 11:20 PM
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| Maybe you'd have more luck with the sign ups if you included some more details. Right now there's very little info as to what kind of story it'll be. |
| "Therefore do not worry about tomorrow, for tomorrow will worry about itself. Each day has enough trouble of its own." Matthew 6:34 |
| Hmm... I guess you're right... I'm so bad at leaving details... Basic outline: The world was on a verge of annihilation when 6 shadows emerged and began their carnage as they pleased. A group of attribute users were able to seal them but at a price of all of them except for one. And now, two years have passed and the shadows are beginning to reappear, causing the last survivor try to get help from one of the most unexpected place. The setting is modern day world with some mediavel settings being the knightage and uses of swords are popular and famous. There are countries being protected by a knights known as Dragoons, which is the elites of the attribute users. Hope that helped. |
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| Guess I'll bite. Have him use a broadaxe, colour pick is Yellow. I'll try to think up some more details while you wait for more people. |
| "Therefore do not worry about tomorrow, for tomorrow will worry about itself. Each day has enough trouble of its own." Matthew 6:34 |
| XD I will choose blue and have her(female) use an urumi as a weapon. |
| What if i said i want to take part. xD. Maybe i ll choose Red and a Scythe ( A Long badass one) If possible . |
| 30 yo female using a crossbow.(gotta look young though) Black and white. 😎 |
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KamSung said: 30 yo female using a crossbow.(gotta look young though) Black and white. 😎 Nice colour combo... I guess there's 6 more slots left. I'll post the prologue in another day or two... |
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I-9029 said: KamSung said: 30 yo female using a crossbow.(gotta look young though) Black and white. 😎 Nice colour combo... I guess there's 6 more slots left. I'll post the prologue in another day or two... lookin forward to dat bro |
| BTW, I forgot to mention that you can give your character a name or nicknames and their personality that fits your liking. Will be posting the prologue tomorrow. |
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| New Character's: OC's, Imphie [u]Prologue[/u] |
I-9029Jun 23, 2015 8:36 AM
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| Do I get to name my character? If yes, I'll name the character as 'Vie'. Name: Vie Gender: Unknown Appearance: Medium black hair, wears weird clothes. Personality: Multiple personality and massive attitude problem. lol. There's 5 or more alter egos this character got. Weapon: Needles and Alter egos. Actually when the character changes personality, the weapon also changes.. xD Color: Red. |
EsuttaJun 3, 2015 9:49 PM
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Esutta said: Do I get to name my character? If yes, I'll name the character as 'Vie'. Name: Vie Gender: Unknown Appearance: Medium black hair, wears weird clothes. Personality: Multiple personality and massive attitude problem. lol. There's 5 or more alter egos this character got. Weapon: Needles and Alter egos. Actually when the character changes personality, the weapon also changes.. xD Color: Red. Got it... I think I can work with that, and much more. 5 more slots left... |
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| Name: Nicholas Gender: Male Appearance: Peasantry clothing, average appearance, neither ugly nor exceptionally handsome. Personality: A pacifist by heart, he's optimistic and friendly. However indifferent dealing with murder to the point of being whimsical. Weapon: Sickle Color: Green |
AstrosJun 4, 2015 12:30 AM
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| Well, here's my character again, with a few additional details. Name: Craighton Gender: Male Appearance: A bulky man, about 30 years in age. Messy brown hair and beard. Personality: Cheerful to the point of annoyance, he always finds a reason to laugh in any given situation. Weapon: A large, two-handed axe Color: Yellow |
| "Therefore do not worry about tomorrow, for tomorrow will worry about itself. Each day has enough trouble of its own." Matthew 6:34 |
| I am glad to see my character accepted(blue). I like the idea that she is a knight who is quick on her feet after all the urumi(sword whip) requires a lot of agility. I actually got the idea after looking up on google the weirdest weapons people use. |
| Name: Yore O. Goldust Color: Yellow Male Personality: Maritime salesman, traveling the high seas with a galley full of wares. Interested in charting the hinterlands and uncovering new experiences. Total philistine, has a distaste for any medium of art or culture and especially hates people who waste their lives reminiscing about the past. Though he should be able to put on an adequate pretense to close deals even with customers he can't stand. He should have a recognizable face for gaining the attention of the media at one point or another, but he is very blase towards customers incessantly mentioning how or where they might recognize him from. Throughout his travels he should have found a set of roman armor and a spear polearm for combat which he would keep stored aboard his boat just in case. Appearance: Generally wearing some sort of casual looking sailor attire, he should have short and curly sand brown hair and striking yellow eyes. For the hair I'm thinking something to this effect http://www.civilization.org.uk/wp-content/uploads/2012/08/Augustus-Boston-MFA.jpg http://www.theworldofchinese.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/05/dragon-vs-eagle-insert1.gif |
OchimushaJun 4, 2015 5:01 PM
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Imphie said: I am glad to see my character accepted(blue). I like the idea that she is a knight who is quick on her feet after all the urumi(sword whip) requires a lot of agility. I actually got the idea after looking up on google the weirdest weapons people use. At first I was thinking of making a new character, but your character does fit the bill. Anyway, does your character got a name, or do you want to use your forum name? YorozuyaGinSan said: Name: Yore O. Goldust Color: Yellow Male Personality: Maritime salesman, traveling the high seas with a galley full of wares. Interested in charting the hinterlands and uncovering new experiences. Total philistine, has a distaste for any medium of art or culture and especially hates people who waste their lives reminiscing about the past. Though he should be able to put on an adequate pretense to close deals even with customers he can't stand. He should have a recognizable face for gaining the attention of the media at one point or another, but he is very blase towards customers incessantly mentioning how or where they might recognize him from. Throughout his travels he should have found a set of roman armor and a spear polearm for combat which he would keep stored aboard his boat just in case. Appearance: Generally wearing some sort of casual looking sailor attire, he should have short and curly sand brown hair and striking yellow eyes. For the hair I'm thinking something to this effect http://www.civilization.org.uk/wp-content/uploads/2012/08/Augustus-Boston-MFA.jpg http://www.theworldofchinese.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/05/dragon-vs-eagle-insert1.gif Quite interesting. Duly noted. |
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| That was one badass prologue =O eshwar007 said: What if i said i want to take part. xD. Maybe i ll choose Red and a Scythe ( A Long badass one) If possible . I would like him to be named 'Pythius' If possible. no need for a second name but i don't mind any changes . |
| Its your story so I will let you decide. |
| I'm currently writing Chapter 1, will be updating it in a few days. And will introduce at least 2-3 characters. |
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| New Characters: SleepingBear, YoruzuyaGinSan, eshwar007 Recurring Character's: Imphie, OC Chapter 1 (Part 1): The Bounty Hunter X Knight’s Prowess |
I-9029Jun 24, 2015 12:34 AM
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| woo i made an entry ? :D . That was one hell of an introduction. A sleeveless long coated badass with a scythe made of basilisk bones? lol wat more cud i expect. u read my mind when u put in that personality for him. Especially the red powers attributed with heat manipulation (exactly wat i had in mind). cant wait to read more. And hell , with ur descriptions , i can make a clear sketch of all those characters already :). Keep it up. |
| This looks pretty interesting, is it too late to make a character? |
eshwar007 said: woo i made an entry ? :D . That was one hell of an introduction. A sleeveless long coated badass with a scythe made of basilisk bones? lol wat more cud i expect. u read my mind when u put in that personality for him. Especially the red powers attributed with heat manipulation (exactly wat i had in mind). cant wait to read more. And hell , with ur descriptions , i can make a clear sketch of all those characters already :). Keep it up. Are you by chance like to draw characters? If so, I would love to see how you intrepet them all. jake426 said: This looks pretty interesting, is it too late to make a character? Not yet... You can give me a character or two if you want. I would appreciate the support. |
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| Name: Umbra Appearance: Disheveled black hair. wears a cloak that is white on outside black on inside. Has a white cloth/bandanna covering the face from the nose down. light armor covering critical points, chest/shoulders ect.. Personality: stoic and quiet assassin type. He only speaks if he absolutely must. I was thinking maybe there would be one other character in the story who is the only person he actually talks to. If he is going to be taking orders then he is the type to carry out his task extremely efficiently and without mistakes, but if he is more independent then he could be more like a top tier assassin for hire. Weapon: two curved daggers long enough to almost be short sword. Color: Black (dont care too much about his color so if he fits better with a different one feel free to change it) pictures of his weapons and what he is suppose to look like- |
Lil_GumbiJun 10, 2015 11:41 AM
jake426 said: Name: Umbra Appearance: Disheveled black hair. wears a cloak that is white on outside black on inside. Has a white cloth/bandanna covering the face from the nose down. light armor covering critical points, chest/shoulders ect.. Personality: stoic and quiet assassin type. He only speaks if he absolutely must. I was thinking maybe there would be one other character in the story who is the only person he actually talks to. If he is going to be taking orders then he is the type to carry out his task extremely efficiently and without mistakes, but if he is more independent then he could be more like a top tier assassin for hire. Weapon: two curved daggers long enough to almost be short sword. Color: Black (dont care too much about his color so if he fits better with a different one feel free to change it) pictures of his weapons and what he is suppose to look like- Very interesting character you got there. I think I have an inkling of what to make use of him. |
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I-9029 said: Very interesting character you got there. I think I have an inkling of what to make use of him. Sweet looking forward to it |
| I just read Chap1 out loud like a crazy person with different accents lol Can't wait for more! xD |
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I-9029 said: eshwar007 said: woo i made an entry ? :D . That was one hell of an introduction. A sleeveless long coated badass with a scythe made of basilisk bones? lol wat more cud i expect. u read my mind when u put in that personality for him. Especially the red powers attributed with heat manipulation (exactly wat i had in mind). cant wait to read more. And hell , with ur descriptions , i can make a clear sketch of all those characters already :). Keep it up. Are you by chance like to draw characters? If so, I would love to see how you intrepet them all. Uhh yeah , i am a decent artist but its gonna take plenty of time to make something up for this because i m too busy right now xD. but yeah , i already have a good image for all these characters since u described them plenty good. ya'know , elena be like a saber lookalike maybe but with replace the bottom part with tights and my character be like a lean built (probably pale skin color) but with a long coat like dante (but sleeveless) and yeah the scythe probably matches his pale color as it is from basilisk bone (i guess its true?) and its crooked here and there to look bony. probably twice his size. |
eshwar007 said: I-9029 said: Are you by chance like to draw characters? If so, I would love to see how you intrepet them all. Uhh yeah , i am a decent artist but its gonna take plenty of time to make something up for this because i m too busy right now xD. but yeah , i already have a good image for all these characters since u described them plenty good. ya'know , elena be like a saber lookalike maybe but with replace the bottom part with tights and my character be like a lean built (probably pale skin color) but with a long coat like dante (but sleeveless) and yeah the scythe probably matches his pale color as it is from basilisk bone (i guess its true?) and its crooked here and there to look bony. probably twice his size. I guess you just read my mind then too... I was thinking it will be like that for your character, but I have to say, Elena won't be having much armor as Saber though, only the breastplate for mobility. |
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| Interesting first chapter, besides the typo's and mistakes with word tenses it was good. A few times some descriptions lacked which was made obvious by others which were very detailed but overall interesting read. I look forward to future chapters. |
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I-9029 said: eshwar007 said: Uhh yeah , i am a decent artist but its gonna take plenty of time to make something up for this because i m too busy right now xD. but yeah , i already have a good image for all these characters since u described them plenty good. ya'know , elena be like a saber lookalike maybe but with replace the bottom part with tights and my character be like a lean built (probably pale skin color) but with a long coat like dante (but sleeveless) and yeah the scythe probably matches his pale color as it is from basilisk bone (i guess its true?) and its crooked here and there to look bony. probably twice his size. I guess you just read my mind then too... I was thinking it will be like that for your character, but I have to say, Elena won't be having much armor as Saber though, only the breastplate for mobility. oh yep its great that way but hearin on blue dress + silver plate , i cud not help but relate to saber . x/ |
eshwar007 said: I-9029 said: I guess you just read my mind then too... I was thinking it will be like that for your character, but I have to say, Elena won't be having much armor as Saber though, only the breastplate for mobility. oh yep its great that way but hearin on blue dress + silver plate , i cud not help but relate to saber . x/ Well, the only silver or mythril is the urumi. Her armor is basically steel, so is Darius' platings. |
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I-9029 said: 'eshwar007 said: oh yep its great that way but hearin on blue dress + silver plate , i cud not help but relate to saber . x/ Well, the only silver or mythril is the urumi. Her armor is basically steel, so is Darius' platings. i get it .. i rlly cant w8 for the next chapter yaknow :P. why are u here , go write XD. lol. |
| New Character: Esutta Reoccurring Characters: OC, Imphie, YorozuyaGinSan, SleepingBear, eshwar007 Mentioned Character: KamSung [u]Chapter 1 (Part 2): The Hunter’s Prey X The Dragoon’s Predicament[/u] |
I-9029Jun 23, 2015 11:22 AM
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| Not sure if you'll stick with it but I would exclude the (she) after each mention of Vie, it gets extremely distracting and difficult to read. Instead you could just make it clear Vie's appearance is very gender neutral but have the characters decide to refer to Vie as a he, or she even though they may lack true knowledge of Vie's gender. You also may want to fix up some of the typos and word tense errors like astros said, seems like there were more this update. Don't get me wrong I still enjoyed reading this though , keep it coming. |
jake426 said: Not sure if you'll stick with it but I would exclude the (she) after each mention of Vie, it gets extremely distracting and difficult to read. Instead you could just make it clear Vie's appearance is very gender neutral but have the characters decide to refer to Vie as a he, or she even though they may lack true knowledge of Vie's gender. You also may want to fix up some of the typos and word tense errors like astros said, seems like there were more this update. Don't get me wrong I still enjoyed reading this though , keep it coming. Oh, my bad. I'll reread it again after this before writing the next chapter. I've been a bit busy with work this few days. |
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MeteorBear said: I was thinking of a character and weapon, but I have a question, what power is the green color? Green attribute comprised of wind and nature manipulation, in contrast to yellow, which manipulates earth and lightning. |
I-9029Jun 18, 2015 3:42 AM
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| loved this chapter too.. great exposition *_* |
MeteorBear said: Name: Osanna Guiscard Gender: Female Appearance: mid 20s, green hair, purple and maroon outfit Personality: A little good, a little evil, like nature. Or whatever you want. Weapon: A whip, she often uses here power through the whip in different ways. Color: Green Got it... Another mid-range user to be added. |
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| i just wanted to let u know that u are doin a great job .. i love how u are foreshadowing things. such as the sword of darius and the 6 flames and the mysterious 2 guys from the prologue. I can already see that ur story has got a good scope, keep it up. The only feedback that i can give u at this point is that u should check ur works for grammar flaws here and there. it happens when u are typing a whole story out but look out for those little tense errors. they are the only flaws that i can find in ur story as of now :D. Keep it coming, i wanna read more :P |
eshwar007 said: i just wanted to let u know that u are doin a great job .. i love how u are foreshadowing things. such as the sword of darius and the 6 flames and the mysterious 2 guys from the prologue. I can already see that ur story has got a good scope, keep it up. The only feedback that i can give u at this point is that u should check ur works for grammar flaws here and there. it happens when u are typing a whole story out but look out for those little tense errors. they are the only flaws that i can find in ur story as of now :D. Keep it coming, i wanna read more :P Thanks for the feedback, man. Yeah, I've got a good grasp of the story outline since the beginning. The very idea has been in my head for a while. Even though it is a bit different from the prototype, overall story is still the same. And yeah, it is a shame that I've got some grammatical errors here and there. English isn't my primary language, but had been taught from a vey young age. Pretty much my grammar is almost as good as someone who uses English as their primary language. Well, I'll post new chapters weekly, if I can as I've been busy with work for a while. |
I-9029Jun 24, 2015 12:31 AM
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| It's been a while since I checked this thread. I'm liking where this is going so far. The last name "Greybear" was a nice addition for Craighton. Didn't think of him as a noble, but it doesn't bother me and you're free to do with him as you please. His attitude was pretty spot on for what I'd hoped ^^ |
| "Therefore do not worry about tomorrow, for tomorrow will worry about itself. Each day has enough trouble of its own." Matthew 6:34 |
SleepingBear said: It's been a while since I checked this thread. I'm liking where this is going so far. The last name "Greybear" was a nice addition for Craighton. Didn't think of him as a noble, but it doesn't bother me and you're free to do with him as you please. His attitude was pretty spot on for what I'd hoped ^^ Heyo , my nemesis. It seems u are quite knowledgeable about me :D. |
eshwar007 said: SleepingBear said: It's been a while since I checked this thread. I'm liking where this is going so far. The last name "Greybear" was a nice addition for Craighton. Didn't think of him as a noble, but it doesn't bother me and you're free to do with him as you please. His attitude was pretty spot on for what I'd hoped ^^ Heyo , my nemesis. It seems u are quite knowledgeable about me :D. Anyone crazy enough to use a scythe in a fight is worth looking into. |
| "Therefore do not worry about tomorrow, for tomorrow will worry about itself. Each day has enough trouble of its own." Matthew 6:34 |
SleepingBear said: eshwar007 said: Heyo , my nemesis. It seems u are quite knowledgeable about me :D. Anyone crazy enough to use a scythe in a fight is worth looking into. Well, you guys won't be in any action for a while, licking your own wounds for the moment. |
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| New Characters: Astros, MeteorBear Reoccuring Characters: OC, Imphie, YorozuyaGinSan, eshwar007, SleepingBear, Esutta Mentioned Character: KamSung Chapter 2 (Part 1) – Enemy’s Identity X Hunter’s Past I |
I-9029Jun 23, 2015 2:26 PM
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