| Hello Everyone, I figured since this is The Creative Corner ^^; then i should start a poetry Thread. Post Poems Here and Discuss. Come Now, Havent You ever heard the gods punish those faint of heart? :). Plus There isnt any interesting topics up atm. ^__^.anyways heres mine. Enjoy Yourself. What If I Die? I Might Escape This Lie. What If I Could Fly? I Could Leave This Life. What If I Could Escape This Lie? I Could Live This Life. Imagine This If You Will A Place Where There Is No Light A Place Filled With Fright And Your Darkest Desires Come To Life Now What Would You Have? The World? The Oceans? The Skys? For Me, It Would Be So Simple It Would Be Like A Riddle Im Ashamed To Have His Blood Ashamed To Be Called His Son If Only I Had This Dark World Of Fear. He Could Feel The Pain I Feel. Looking Into The Mirror And Seeing His Face I Notice Its Not His Face But My Own Face that i see What More Can I Say Seems This Is The Only Way These Feelings Will Be Gone The Good Is An Illusion,Little Fables Folks Tell Themseleves For They Can Get Through They're Days Without Screaming To Much... |
DimmuBorgirOct 1, 2007 11:12 PM
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| Interesting one, I got a few poems like this myself. Might be able to dig them out. And I think we already got a poem topic? Not sure. |
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| hmm. didnt see one. and if theyre was. it should be a sticky. >.>; eh . i got alot more where that came from. |
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| Looking forward to those. And I was wrong, there was no big Poem Topic before you created this. |
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| Umm... okay... DimmuBorgir, your piece was kinda random and it contradicted itself alot. The first six lines were amazing but the rest seemed really out of place. If you are going for dazed and unstructured, then why capitalize (which makes it proper and formal looking) everything? *skies So... um... ya... Well here's my terribly long piece, titled "Itch" my John Hancock, mutated and misspelled as I squeeze the ink from my Brain. BIC made-in-China flies on the paper “scritch-scratch” the letters appear-disappear-reappear before my very dotted eyes and crossed t’s nimbly fingers too quick to scribble down, scribble out, follow with drippy white out Lego-ly the words build up (right left) and down the page Properly sentenced to follow Line By Line “scritch-scratch” An uncanny sort of rhyme Or office-ness or note or… novel idea, isn’t it? That there’s music to my incomplete THESI_ (but hey, it’s only my first draft) |
NonSequitur904Oct 1, 2007 8:50 PM
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| thanks non non. :). i actually jus felt like capitalize every word of every sentence. solely for the fact that it is how i write. for sum reason i cant stand to see uncapitalize words in my poems. it irritates me :(. so yah im jus weird. and the poem in itself. talks about my father,and it also presents a question, then after that it explains the rest itself. and btw i like yours. kinda reminded me of system of a down for sum reason. cyruz said: Looking forward to those. And I was wrong, there was no big Poem Topic before you created this. hmm. isnt that peachy? :). |
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